The Silent Witch of Hogwarts

It's okay, but the heroine is too soft. Whenever she is mentioned, she panics.

I recently read the movie "Harry Pitt" and found that Durmstrang seems to be an all-boys school. Why did Loba go there?

I can only say that I am worthy of being a liberal arts student. The writing style is smooth and not bloated, and the writing style is a bit like reading... That kind of literary novel, without being so fussy. Personally, I feel that the progress of some chapters is too fast, which makes me a little confused when I read the next chapter, but... Em... When I review it later, I feel that if I write too much, it will become bloated... In short, this is a contradictory point for me. All in all, the writing is clean and neat, there is no pretentiousness or preoccupation, and the plot is neither procrastinating nor watery, which is great. Similarly, the plot is not a formulaic novel at first glance, and it does not mean that I will not be interested in the subsequent plot after reading it. Finally, I hope that the author's subsequent novels can have the same level.

The writing is very good. You can tell that someone has been a witch before. The writing is very real and matches my experience of being a witch. Come on!

Look, the cowardly loli witch is not bad😋 She has to be this kind of soft, submissive, a little afraid of others, devoted to her hobbies, and abducted step by step by the hateful Dumbledore, it's fun to watch🥰

Book Review Are there really human beings? Is it a good plot where the protagonist is being fooled around by a notebook? Renren Shennong?

It's not that you should be on a female channel if you are a female author. If you are a female author, you should be on a female channel. If I don't like lesbians, you should be on a female channel. If the reader is a female, you should be on a female channel.

Why do you want the main character to be a loli even if you set it to be a Veela? How committed are you to loli? In the original book, Fleur develops quickly and well because of her Veela blood. What are you trying to do by making the main character a loli? You might as well say she has goblin blood.

I suddenly remembered what a great master said about writing a book, but I forgot the specific one. The general meaning is that the protagonist's appearance and cultivation ability can grow. The character of the protagonist should not be written in terms of growth, but should be determined at the beginning. Otherwise readers will be impatient. To sum up, an incomplete character in the early stage will really dissuade many people. Although very cute

Tmd The main character is just super social, maybe not stupid 😅 This plot feels like it would be more appropriate to add a congenital intellectual disability to the main character, and I don't think the main character was quite happy when he was a child. Even if his mind stopped developing after his parents died, he wouldn't be so stupid.

It's nice to watch, but the author always puts a bunch of men around the protagonist. Every time he describes Harry, he looks like he's in love with his youth. The character creation is quite good, and there's a certain sense of distance, so I don't resist it much. When I saw the chapter about the unicorn recognizing its master, it actually clearly stated that the unicorn is a male. I have ridden before, hugged and hugged. This book is selling lilies, right? Now that I have finished this book, He Yiwei has done this kind of interaction between the left and right brains more than once. I just said in my introduction that it is an easy daily life, and there is no bitterness or hatred. The first chapter after it was released is the memory of being bullied. The people in that family are mysterious. They seem to be good to the protagonist, but in fact they are always making small moves. If the problem is not resolved, they feel very depressed. I don't know how to relax.

Cute Loila

The most important thing and the most intolerable thing about male videos is the poor subjective mobility of the protagonist. To put it simply, the protagonist cannot be stupider than the reader. This has little to do with the reader's God's perspective. The main thing is that when the reader feels that the protagonist should be involved, then the protagonist will be involved. Synchronization of thinking is very important. If you have a grudge, don't hold it back and report it overnight. It can't be done. At this point, don't blame the readers for being dissatisfied with the protagonist, or don't put pressure on the protagonist Then the female protagonist in the male novel can also be the reader's wife from a certain point of view, so since you want to write about Lily, don't do something about so-and-so and which male likes the protagonist Then I think the author and I have a relationship with ease. There may be some misunderstandings about everyday words. If it's really easy and daily, write more about daily life. By the way, let the villain be killed by the protagonist before he can achieve his evil purpose. Don't make any big conspiracy. Maybe a qualified villain will make people unable to help but feel angry, but this kind of role is not suitable for appearing in light-hearted daily novels. It's not suitable to guide an immature protagonist throughout the whole process. I couldn't stand the second chapter and skipped to the end. Finally, I hope the author will take a good look at what he wrote in the introduction and think about it seriously. Is it really right? Who is a good person who just said one sentence not to write about the bitterness and hatred and then kept writing about the protagonist's painful memories in a long series? ps: Two votes support

Posted by a group of friends, it feels good, thanks to the original author and Doubao ( Loila and some kind of white magical animal (

To celebrate Xiao Luo's awakening, he started to work quickly. He only drew a little bit every day. Then he woke up in the morning and found that it was too weird, so he made drastic changes. Finally, I finished rubbing it quickly and slowly. I stopped painting for a short period of time. The more I painted, the better I became.

Although Lockhart from the front is disgusting in his own right, his pursuit of the protagonist in The Young Wizards after getting the notebook deepens this feeling. Next up is this cousin of the same race, who also makes people feel disgusting in various places. Forget it, I really can't stand it any more. Say goodbye.

You can post your own characters in it, and the author will try his best to include them.

The book is indeed beautiful, the writing is good, and the plot is smooth. It's just that the protagonist's personality is a little bit... It's okay to be bullied when you are capable enough, but you don't even dare to scold your mother when rumors are made about her...

I can't stand it... The protagonist lives too cautiously... Can this be called cute? With such a character, I can say that it's okay to abuse the master, right?

Can you please stop making the main character so... Stupid You can just do this when posting with girls. If you meet the idiots from the Ministry of Magic, I will trouble you to turn into a silent witch and kill the Ministry of Magic until the blood flows into a river, okay?

Cute Loila pinch, thanks to chatGPT

After exporting, the color tone has changed I don't care, I posted it anyway

I understand. The main character is a pure fool.

How come there is a female channel in the free-limited article 😅

I don't see how the main character is cute, I can only say that she is my favorite in private homes, and even female videos don't write it like that.

After the chase, I feel like the wrinkles in my brain have been smoothed out, and various past experiences have emerged before my eyes😇 I hope Hero will work hard to research magic to cure the protagonist's brain that was damaged by time travel, and by the way, he will also study animal taming magic so that he won't be bitten by hounds, ah ah ah ah

In a lily novel, the two heroines appeared so late, and all the early character creation was given to Lupine. He is the first person to help the protagonist when she wakes up, and is the first friend of the protagonist. He is also the Shafure werewolf, melancholy but gentle, and has a past of being bullied. All I can say is that the heroine will be killed, but unfortunately she is a man, so I almost thought it was a marriage change story.

It's a very rare way of writing (I haven't read many novels where the main character is afraid of society)

Have you, the author, ever been a woman? ! Something scrawled! Take it for granted!

I remember Durmstrang only recruits purebloods.