The Path of Light

Do humans kill elves casually in the elves? The elves are still slow. Even the Dark Moon elves are slapped in the face. This country is really weak. It seems that humans are going to start a war.

Hopefully there will be an attractive male character or two. I found that in many Western fantasy movies, the male characters around the protagonist are either very few or stupid, and in the end they are almost all women, which feels very childish. In this kind of Chinese martial arts world, women are originally relatively weak, and there are very few women among the strong (novel will admit that "strong women are very rare"), but what is the result? The strong people around the protagonist are almost all women. I feel that this kind of male protagonist has no real charm and ideals, and cannot even attract a normal strong male. There are so many strong men, and the protagonist is so awesome, but he can't attract any of them. It can only be said that those strong women are here to fall in love with the protagonist, not because the protagonist has any "domineering spirit" at all. For example, Jijia's helpers are almost all women. Most of Surdak's helpers are women. Among these women, two noble women simply wanted to marry men, so they chose to help the male protagonist's husband. The dark woman takes the initiative to seduce the male protagonist in order to get out of her own predicament, for the purpose of preaching, and to find a man. The female shooter was a little desperate, and because she liked the male protagonist, she followed him. At least half of the female gunmen follow the male protagonist because they want to find a strong man. The last indigenous woman will marry the male protagonist directly (the prototype may be Princess Mononoke). Only Miss Mermaid currently has nothing to do with the male protagonist. Their relationship with the male protagonist is a partnership based on the relationship between men and women, rather than a true partnership. In contrast, Luffy in One Piece has only two female partners, and although they are both beauties, they have a pure partnership with Luffy, and they are not Luffy's partners because of a male-female relationship at all. Luffy is able to attract many truly strong, individual men to join his team. This is a relatively normal situation.

Just like this style, those who like fast food should look elsewhere.

It's rubbish among rubbish, the plot is dragging, a Benjamin can never be caught, he runs away when he touches it, he runs away when he encounters it, there is a Ship of Light on the introduction, and it has already written 260 chapters, but the protagonist still doesn't have his own crew. I don't even know what the author's purpose is. I'm really convinced. I feel like everyone around the author is trash. He keeps letting enemies run away. When he encounters someone, he's either asking for help or asking for help. I really don't know what he's thinking. It's really disgusting to me. I'm convinced. It's rubbish. The plot is too slow. This is not a slow pace, it's a rubbish pace. I'm convinced. It's so disgusting.

Both My Age of Magic and Lord Helansa are harems, which is pretty good, and the author will keep up the good work. I have two suggestions: Firstly, I hope that all the heroines are not vases, and at least they can help the protagonist in some way. This is okay in the Age of Magic, but in Lord of Helansa, there are really many vases Secondly, I really can't have too many heroines. I think I can write up to five at most. If there are more, each heroine will have very few roles, especially in the later stages, where it will be difficult to unfold and the heroines can only be selectively invisible.

The writing is very good, the plot is crappy, the logic is confusing, and the protagonist is like shit. I wanted to give up many times in the middle, but around chapter 189 I couldn't help it anymore. In the first chapter, it is said that magicians are just special. The protagonist has seen magicians walking through the lower city many times. As a result, during the port battle, a group of nobles and guards could only draw A. The defense power of the port city is as thin as paper. Too many people say it and don't talk about it. The same goes for knowing the identity of the princess. The protagonist is completely mentally retarded and has no sense of crisis. He knew the clues before but did not tell the friendly boss; he knew that he was weak but always wanted to catch up alone; the other party had killed his friends and was wanted. The only thing missing was the key you had. You didn't expect the other party to attack you so quickly. There is also the part where the basic settings are repeated in the early stage, which really looks like it was written by AI.

Chapter 1 made me laugh to death. I have traveled through time for more than a year and still think I am dreaming? Still want to jump into the sea to wake up? How retarded is this? Is this going to be a big adventure for a mentally retarded child?

I love this kind of tone. It's very reassuring to watch it slowly.

What a crappy plot, what kind of intellectual protagonist, I really can't stand it, the writing is very good, why do the characters in the plot keep feeding me so much? The author really can't listen to so many people's feedback 😰😰😰

The leisurely life of the elves has been written, but in the eyes of the author, struggle is a treat. Whether it is the struggle between the Moon Goddess and the Temple of Freedom, or the battle between the mixed blood and the Silver Moon, or even the battle between the common people and the nobles, a normal adult involved will realize that he is in the center of the storm, but the protagonist, a time traveler, behaves like a child. Whether he does not confess the soul of the earl to Ellington, or discusses the princess in a densely populated place like the academy, it all shows the immaturity of the author's plot arrangement. Childish, when it comes to the trial of Theodore, it has nothing to do with him, he doesn't care about the struggle behind it, and he doesn't care about the game behind it. However, the protagonist has to personally take the risk to track Theodore, and he has to publicly ask who killed Peleus in the court. It is no longer just a matter of multiple people co-writing a novel. The writing style of multiple people co-writing will not be so consistent.