Wizard Bloodline

Every chapter has to describe the protagonist's face, hair, eyes, fingers, physique, and how others perceive him. Readers aren't from Nantong; why write so much?

The novel is such a classic: face-slapping, shock, secret realms, map changes. I've read hundreds of chapters, and it's always the same formula. It's as if I'm seeing myself back in the days of reading novels on a keypad phone more than a decade ago.

Useless, power levels are inconsistent. Up to chapter 225, this part of the plot is terrible, the ending is predictable. The protagonist's power level skyrockets from Tier 2 to Tier 3 top level, slaughtering everyone in his path. He can win anytime, so the protagonist is the only one to blame.

Chapter 12 only mentions that the male protagonist transmigrates with a character panel, and although he's the son of an earl, he's still penniless and needs to fend for himself... That's really filler!

Mr. Egg, I'm here! But I've turned over a new leaf! I can't save you now…

I suggest Qidian (the online literature platform) introduce a rule: authors must register with their real names, one ID card can only be used to open one account, authors should only receive 3/5 of the royalties before the book is completed, readers should be able to apply for a refund if the author abandons more than two books, and a blacklist function should be added so that authors who abandon three books can have a "Discontinued" sign next to their name.

Other wizards are at level three or five, so you're at level nine, which makes it easier to compare with the ninth level of the Qi Refining stage, right? Rune potions are even more straightforward; it's basically a secondary profession for talisman alchemy. Academy sects, independent cultivator markets... True wizarding stories should be written like fantasy novels.

Fantasy novels draped in wizard robes

While starting by suing piracy everywhere, shouldn't we also manage the unfinished works a bit? For example, could 40% of the royalties be paid out as an annual bonus or only after the book is completed?

I predict your next plot will involve you winning the upper ring competition, then moving on to the middle and lower rings to continue the competition. The wizards in your book will be like those powerful figures in fantasy novels—even on their deathbeds, they'll leave behind their teachings for future generations to learn.