Starting as Lord of a Viscounty

As far as the current fifty chapters are concerned, the IQ is online and the killing is decisive. At least the lord is not secretly carrying out assassinations at night. This is very good. He knows how to train his subordinates, knows how to employ people, and pays equal attention to his subordinates. Although there are other small flaws that need to be improved, they are innocuous. The biggest problem is that the economic system in the book is not grasped well. It will collapse later. It needs to be changed. Come on.

I'm so hungry. I should have known better than to write a novel.

One thing is very poisonous. The protagonist spent 5 million and went through many twists and turns to buy the life potion and the people in the world of cultivating immortals switched to the method of cultivating immortals. Although the world is different, it was converted into a method of cultivating magic power. But even so, things worth 5 million gold coins and the cultivators have died, it is difficult to return I didn't check the skills I changed when I got them, and then gave them to a person I saved casually. Although the other person did repay the favor, is it too ridiculous to give the magic-modified skills in the world of immortality worth 5 million yuan, which is worth half of the family fortune, to a person who has only met twice?

So far, it's okay. I hope the author will be careful about the subsequent plot and not be too abrupt. Many farming novels start to forcefully push the plot at this point, and there is no farming at all. Farming novels are difficult to write and feel like they test one's writing skills. In addition, it's good that Goldfinger's presence is not high. At this stage, it's all about building walls and hoarding money.

After reading Chapter 50, I set some more important points under the complaint. After I finished the comment, I continued reading. 1. Nafu City is a resource-exhausted city. A resource-based city must have relatively reliable transportation routes to transport resources out. And from an economic point of view, it does not seem to have a commercial port. It is inferred that it should have had relatively strong land transportation capabilities. It is set that the mineral veins have dried up in the protagonist's father's generation. Considering the protagonist's age, even if his father is old and has a son (the protagonist's father cannot be a high-level professional according to the setting), it will only be a few decades before the Nafucheng mineral veins dry up. But the protagonist said that transportation in Naf City is inconvenient It may be that Nurgle City suffered a natural disaster 2. Since the exhausted mineral veins are the only pillar industry in Naf City, there should be no salt mines or saltwater lakes in Naf City. Although I don't know why, transportation in Naf City is inconvenient, and there will be no plantations or sugar mills here. But there is a magical amount of salt, sugar, etc., And even spices that can be used freely in the kitchen. Maybe these things can be seen everywhere in the world where Nurgle City is located, and spices grow everywhere like weeds. (Updated: Chapter 52 mentions the seaside of Nafu City, but does not mention salt production and commercial ports. I will continue reading) 3. The citizens and farmers of Nafu City who were originally hungry can already claim to be idle in winter, and sacrifice their time and energy to attend adult school for a job that may not necessarily be available. Perhaps thanks to the protagonist's tax exemption, the citizens of Nurgle City became rich instantly 4. The protagonist promoted public health to the citizens of Nurgle City without any foundation, and the citizens of Nurgle City accepted the suggestion to boil water before drinking it without any hindrance. It shows that Nurgle City may have mastered extremely low-cost energy technologies such as nuclear furnaces and geothermal power 5. In the presence of divine magic, subjectively deny or ignore the possibility of the existence of gods. Maybe the protagonist is Nurgle It's so scary. Keep reading.

The author's writing style is okay. I have only read about 10 chapters and the portrayal of the protagonist is better than most people. Keep at it. This book may not be popular, but it can attract fans No other author can be an amazing and diving squid who also grows up step by step. Keep at it.     ,, 666 Write a few distinctive supporting characters to make the content richer. A word of persistence can make everything difficult at the beginning.

The author is really sloppy, the protagonist is obviously a shrewd character, but every time he encounters a problem and needs to face a big shot, he shows a complete ignorance of the famous figures in the kingdom and the powerful nobles. He obviously had a conflict with the chief judge, but in the end he didn't even know what the chief judge was called These situations can be said to be superfluous and the meaning is unclear.

The author was still too hasty when writing. The protagonist actually didn't even look at the immortal cultivation techniques he got. He looked down upon it and spent a lot of money to get it. Moreover, he was just a weakling and a little shrimp. Where did he have the confidence?

Why do I feel that the quality has been so bad since it was put on the shelves? . .

The biggest problem with this book is that it's poorly finished. In addition, if you read Xiuxian, it's fantasy.