Immortal Immortal

I've just seen Chapter 63, and it's really good. There's nothing wrong with the writing, structure, and logic. The early plot is also relaxed and relaxed. The most rare thing is that it doesn't have the excessive wordiness and cumbersome writing of common weird writings. Overall it is very refreshing, and there is no obstacle to reading smoothly A relatively mature article, I like it very much Recommended to everyone It is really a level above some weird articles, and it is much more refreshing to read It is worth reading the original version later, vote monthly

After reading the beginning, the world view is interesting. It's just that the plot is a bit boring

The writing is really good, it's as fun as playing a game, but there are some things that leave less aftertaste. The content is full of ghosts and bizarre atmosphere. The protagonist is crawling around in it (which is more exciting) and deciphering the secrets step by step as he progresses in practice. You will be attracted by just reading the first five or six chapters. This book is classified as classical fairy tales, so the conflict is strong. Those who like classical fairy tales should I can't move, but it doesn't fit well with the classification of immortals. The yin pole generates yang, and the yang pole generates yin. The fairy spirit and chivalry are righteous. If it is reflected in the protagonist, it should be more in line with the theme and less fragmented. While it is mellow, it can also have some sublimation. Pure horror films from Europe, America, and Thailand often end after one viewing, but I can watch Mr. Zombie and Uncle Zombie again every few years, and I always feel incomprehensible happiness, and feel a sense of security amidst fear. Isn't it strange? I hope that while being an eunuch, I can also cultivate truth and immortality. Finally I voted for you.

This book is so good. Come on, author, this book is my third favorite book so far. The previous one you wrote is also super good. I read it and became addicted to it. Please don't have a female protagonist and a warm partner (the kind that kisses me and me).                      I have read books with weak male protagonists before. I am speechless. I have no hands or feet. The female protagonists are more popular than this male protagonist. Who is the protagonist? They are all gods and they still want to mate. It is the same as the current brainless fairy TV series. I love you. You love me, but I am going to die without you. I want to inherit your regrets and live on, and then find the next heroine to fight and fight monsters with me. What a soft-boiled guy, I might as well watch a palace fight. The emperor is the hero, and the concubines in the harem are the heroines. There are also TV series and history books. Some writers talk about not having a heroine, but they still play word games, and while they are doing their business, they focus on some little lolita who has no father or mother as a child bride, and write that the little lolita loves herself, vomit, and then, uh, I was traumatized to death. I pity my young heart, so sad. I don't like the Virgin-type male protagonist either. He only has one life and only one life. It's enough to be yourself. You don't want to be a villain or a gentleman. Everyone else is just a passerby. I love it so much that there is a great road in this book. Li Mo, the male protagonist, just moves forward, acts cautiously, and does not care about other things. When he does business, he will not care about other things, and he will distinguish priorities. He is not a simple-minded, emotional person. Under the great road, everything else is false, as unimportant as passing rain and clouds. Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I really like the author's creative direction and works. But it can be written better

How should I put it, it feels like the beginning and the end are not the same, but it is indeed a good reading experience, and it can be regarded as an explanation.

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I saw the chapter about subscribing soon, but I had no desire to subscribe. The reason is that this novel is not trivial but disgusting. The background is very dark, with deformities, painted skin, severed hands and feet, everything. It was uncomfortable to read, so I gave up on it.

It's so well written 😍😍😍 I like it, I like it, I'll give you all the votes

It's still the same problem. At the end of the writing, the author didn't want to write anymore. In order to start a new book, he directly ruined the plot. It felt like it was not written by the same person in the end. It was like finding a gunman. It was too perfunctory. In the last plot, no AI could have written it better than him.

Keywords: strange changes, immortal illness, magical powers Story line: The male protagonist travels through the world of immortal immortality, but unexpectedly the immortality is poisonous. The longer he lives, the more he is attacked by the disease. In order to avoid the price of death and immortality, the male protagonist has no choice but to enter a small town and embark on a journey of death and immortality. The originally serious immortal cultivation technique has now become weird, but for the sake of my own life, I'd better add a layer of skin to myself... This world is too dangerous, and unscrupulous doctors are also doing things to my body. I have no choice but to cheat, woo woo. A masterpiece of imaginative thinking. The author has a great imagination, created his own skills, and created his own realm. What will attract you is not only the writing style, but also the unconstrained creativity.

This book is completely unreasonable... You will lose your fertility before the age of 20 and become a living dead. If you consider that an adult male will marry and have children at the age of 16, he will have a second child. And then factoring in natural disasters and man-made disasters, it is impossible for many people to live in this world... The setting is simply a no-brainer... Why don't you say that there are no women in the world and you can have babies by drinking well water?

Blank pages: 9 pages added to the creation book, 5 pages added to the foundation building, 1.5 Pages added to the fake elixir, and 8 pages added to the pill formation (it is speculated that half of the page of the fake elixir is included) Spell page: Brand the five internal organs, add 1 spell page, brand the Hunyuan Taoist body; brand the three Dantian, add 1 spell page, brand Qingyi Human tool page: absorb some breath from the bottom of the abyss, add 1 human tool page, brand the big cancer Blank page Brand organ: 1. Brain photographic memory. 2. Middle Dantian is a multi-layered Dantian. 3. Skin is a leak-free body. 4. The skin has no new magical powers. 5. Heart: Buxue Danxin. 6. The liver contains toxin. 7. External organs, Tao seeds, original Tao seeds. 8. Kidneys strengthen the foundation and nourish the vitality. 9. Lungs originate from fetal breath. 10. The spleen transports, transforms and promotes clearness. 11. Upper Dantian, Niwan Palace, brain and mind are not clear. 12. The one who gets the grain will prosper. 13. The second soul swallows the thief soul and the giant swallows the evil spirit. 14. Three souls and five souls. 15. The lower Dantian holds the yuan and returns to unity. 16. The Dharma Eye of the Cave God is yin in the day and yang in the night. 17. Eyes: Taiyin and Sun. 18. The Four Souls Remove the Stain Soul and the Hammer and Anvil. 19. The golden elixir of ashes has never been planted. The pages of the five internal organs are combined into one page. The roe owl swallows the body The three Dantian pages are combined into one page. The towering man The innate Taoist body: the body without leaks, the Hunyuan Taoist body, the ancient Taoist body, the roe owl swallows the body, and the towering man

From the last book. Let's talk about some strange spells created during the process of chasing books. The setting is slightly different from the trick. Spiritual Eye Technique Created by Zhuotian, he dug out his own eyes during the day and then used thunder to beat him for seventy-seven and forty-nine days. He ate an eyeball of a different race every seven days, and it could only be completed when the eyes grew out on the night of the fiftieth day. Those who see things differently: see things outside Can see afterimages that are invisible to ordinary people, perceive changes in breath, observe the movement of the world, and can see "outside the world" Those who know the fool: know that others are fools Wisdom increases, learning ability is greatly enhanced, adaptability in all aspects improves, and the ability to modify cognition Those who see things: see the truth of things You can know the specific information and authenticity of items just by seeing them. Evil Eyes Outside Fang: Many tricks Can enter Fangwai, interfere with changes in aura, affect the operation of the world, and design various terrifying tricks, and most methods cannot detect its existence (similar to the Death in "The Coming of Death") Fool's Eye: Great Wisdom Ruo Fool Wisdom has mutated, and it can improve its own wisdom by devouring other people's wisdom, and can modify cognition on a large scale, making it extremely capable of disguise. Observing Objects: Turning Humans into Objects Has the ability to read minds, create ghosts in the mind, and turn others into anything they know, but there is a time limit Fortune Telling Semi-immortal: A glimmer of life With one step, death can be avoided, with a single stroke, natural disasters can be eliminated, with one glance, one can change one's fate, and cut off a glimmer of life. Ya Spirit Eyes: Cocoon of Cognition The world is a cocoon, and thousands of creatures are trapped in it. Therefore, only by breaking out of the cocoon and becoming a butterfly can one leap between this world and become close to God. Evil Eye Ghost Kingdom: Creator Heavenly Ghost The extremely evil body is neither life nor death, and thousands of soul ghosts have joined the body. The creator god covers the sky with one hand, and his eyes mark a boundary as a feudal kingdom. Dragon Heads Up Created from the Food Sky, cut off the limbs, go without food or drink for fifteen days, then dig out the heart and lungs, drink the dragon's blood wine, and be struck by thunder from the sky, the limbs will grow. After swallowing gold and iron, the heart and lungs can be cultivated. Dragon Veined Person: The right time and place Their own aura transforms into dragon veins and matches the surroundings. They have excellent luck, have the ability to predict the unknown, and can obtain the right time and place when doing things Scaled Armored Person: Dragon Scale Iron Armor Covered with dragon scales, they are invulnerable to weapons, water and fire, and gain a lot High fighting instinct Fish-Snake: Fish-like eyes The body has been transformed into a fish-snake, with the ability to resemble fish-eyes like beads, and is good at illusions Dragon Vein Omen: Hide and appear sometimes The dragon veins are connected with nature, and have the ability of invisibility, which can bring bad omens, ranging from killing people to destroying families. Dragon Blood Soldiers: Elites of Hundred Battles Dragon blood flows all over the body, and the flesh and blood becomes a war machine. The survivability and learning ability are greatly improved, and the adaptability is extremely terrifying. (Similar to the adaptability of the Zerg) River-turning Jiao Demon: Call for Wind and Rain The fish and snake turn into dragons and become demons, greatly increasing their combat power and making it extremely easy to create chaos. They can also use spells to call for wind and rain, and they can move out of the rivers and seas in a few days. Earth Dragon Transformation: Being Destined My own dragon veins transformed into an Earth Dragon, traveling under the earth, burying an entire country in a fit of anger. If fate shines through, countless species will become extinct. Dragon-Blooded Behemoth: Commanding the Three Armies Undefeated in thousands of battles, its scales are indestructible, its body is nearly immortal, its claws have the power to swallow up mountains and seas, and it has countless soldiers. It can be called a giant beast! Evil Dragon in the Sea: Wanli Zeguo The King of Water, the Longest Scale Insect, can be joined by all the seas, never close to his body when he dies, the water can cover thousands of miles under one claw, and the angles of a ruler and a tree can change in ever-changing ways. Wanshou Book It was created by Wanshou Taoist. He scraped off the flesh and blood of the whole body, broke the bones of the whole body, put on a shroud and buried it in a grave. He asked people to burn paper money day and night for a hundred days. After silently reciting three tones of the corpse and becoming an immortal, it broke out of the grave and restored the flesh, flesh and bones before it could be completed. The corpse in the grave: dead but not stiff The grave soil is the home, and the strength is infinite. It is not easy to detect when walking, and it is in a state of half life and half death. Shroud Bearer: Shou Yuan is the Clothing It can sense its own end, has extremely strong recovery ability, and is extremely difficult to kill. It can recover fatal injuries by consuming a large amount of its own life span. Reborn: Resurrection from the dead Physical quality is greatly improved, and you can be resurrected once after death without any conditions or side effects. Ominous star born: Flying to escape from the earth Growing fleshy wings, it can control the celestial phenomena within a certain range, and perform the art of earth escape, which can penetrate thousands of feet in a few breaths, and can bring a lot of natural disasters. Life-Extending Shroud: Defying the Heavenly Limit It can deprive others of their life span to extend their own life span. When they have no lifespan, they can use the Life-Extending Lamp to extend their lifespan, and they have a strong ability to escape. Medicine Stone Resurrection: Save Human Lives Every other year, there is an additional chance of resurrection. Great medicine can be refined to revive human life, but the person being resurrected will suffer terrible distortions. Buried Immortal in the Grave: Loophole in Reincarnation My own power can penetrate the starry sky, disrupt the secrets of heaven, reverse fate, and make the world around me become a graveyard. Borrowing life and not growing old: Diseases caused by the way of heaven Borrowing life from heaven, the physical body will not age, leaving life and death, the disease of heaven can cross thousands of mountains and rivers in one breath, and has the ability to strike across boundaries. Reincarnation Aura: Restarting the Six Paths With a touch of aura of body and soul, the six paths can travel freely. You can follow other paths without destroying your own path. By accumulating all dharma into one body, you can enjoy the fruits of eternal life. Disaster-Resisting Method Created by the Disaster-Resisting Emperor, he cut off his mouth and tongue, cut off his five senses, drank medicinal wine brewed from the blood of pig demons, sheep demons, and bull demons, and then allowed himself to withstand the blows of the evil wind for a hundred days, and then the tongue and mouth grew, and his five senses were restored. Rumourer: Confuses the public with evil words Has a strong ability to confuse people. What he says makes people believe unconditionally, and what he does makes people blindly follow him unconditionally. Those who talk to themselves: Transformation of the five senses The five senses are beyond common sense, the perception ability is extremely powerful, and they can detect "abnormalities" The one who keeps silent: disappears The gratitude for existence is greatly reduced. If you keep silent, you can disappear without a trace, making it impossible for ordinary people to find their whereabouts. Fire-making Witchcraft: Bloody Human Sacrifice Sacrifice humans, animals, plants, and microorganisms to yourself to create blood and fire, use the blood and fire to perform witchcraft, and summon strange and imaginary gods. Morphing Origin Insect: The Source of Mutation Becoming an "abnormality" itself, it is extremely difficult to be harmed. In a single thought, it can become the source of distortion of common sense, causing a catastrophic disaster. Whispering Cutoff: A hundred poisons are not harmful The defense ability is greatly improved, but the physiological activities of itself and within a certain range are stopped, reaching the point where most external forces are difficult to hurt it. (Note that when physiological activity stops, you will not die, but others may not die) The Ancient King: The General Trend of History The ancient king, with the general trend of history, one person can fight against millions of aliens. His name is recorded in history, unchanged for eternity, and he can return at any time. Disaster Immortal: Doomsday Transformation Rise to the top of a world, establish "abnormal" laws, and become a constantly changing doomsday. A single word can cause natural disasters to occur and collapse the common sense of a world. Deep Sea Taboo: Everything is Silent All realms are one deep sea, so the body and soul sleep like fish in the deep sea. Wherever they reach, they enjoy the forbidden happiness of eternal peace, and all existence is silent.

I was wondering if there is any counter-routine when writing about the revival of spiritual energy. The spiritual energy gradually declines, the protagonist struggles to survive, and the order gradually collapses from top to bottom. 🙂

Damn it, he actually became a deacon in the original novel, for the first time (a fly rubs his hands)

The author has a lot of bad words, and some words are not readable. In addition, some words are repeated several times, and they are not good enough. It feels like the writing level of Chinese language is not up to standard, but the words have to be on the qualified line. It is a bit difficult, but the ideas are quite interesting. You can also read it if you are bored.

(Spoiler warning) At the end, I felt that there were three holes that were not filled in. 1. It seems that the five declining souls only gave three golden elixirs, and there were still two souls that were not given 2. Why do mortals follow their words? Is it just because the Lord of Time wants to swallow up the timeline? There is no connection between them 3. The cause of the fatal disease is that Chunyangzi wants to eliminate mortals and make everyone non-mortal, and is the Lord of Time adding fuel to the fire? It feels like this is a bit far-fetched

It's just that I'm shallow. I didn't understand it when I saw Chapter 24, so I quit. I'll study it before coming back.

The weirdness is well described, and the upgrade system also has its highlights, but the logic collapses more and more obviously towards the end, with the protagonist's IQ rising and falling. From the ending of Wusheng Old Mother, I couldn't watch it with my mind at all.

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The author wrote it so well that I felt so happy without a heroine. I love you author😭😭😭

I have only read more than fifty chapters. The setting is good. The plot is not great but it is really dull. It is a strange world with no atmosphere and excitement. I don't know if it's because I have a high psychological threshold or if it's really not interesting. Come on, author. Goodbye.

It's inexplicable, I can't understand it, I still need to learn more, the plot and the world are other things, don't make it so convoluted, the setting should be simple and better, I don't want to waste my brain, I just read the novel and it's refreshing, simple and clear, I got a golden elixir and then connected three or four golden elixirs, and I instantly lost the desire to read it.

Although I watched it a long time ago, I had completely forgotten about it. But this book obviously doesn't have as many tricks as that one, and it's more limited to this traditional cultivation model. Most of the weird aspects have been replaced by simple splicing of flesh.

By the way, the monthly ticket should be doubled at the end of the month. Does the author need it?

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