A Mini-Game in the World of Immortals and Martial Arts
人在仙武，有小游戏
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- Completed
- Length
- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
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If the protagonist didn't have any special abilities, this book would be exceptionally well-written. Unfortunately, the protagonist does have special abilities, which leads to some of his decisions not meeting the expectations of a significant number of readers.
The main character is a poison point
The protagonist's personality is a complete Frankenstein's monster. One minute the author wants to portray the protagonist as loyal and righteous, the next as cold-blooded and ruthless, then as resourceful and cunning, and then as reckless and brute force. It's like the author is meticulously planning every single action the protagonist takes, just like in Squid's new book.
This is too toxic; only Shennong (a legendary Chinese immortal) could watch it.
Having read up to chapter sixteen, I felt the protagonist was a complete clown, utterly stupid. The plot was already somewhat toxic, but the poor writing made it even worse. He tried to win people over, but failed miserably. He lacked any domineering presence, only exuding an air of arrogance.
The writing is indeed quite good, but the author's self-indulgent protagonist characterization made it unbearable to read. Reading requires immersion; how can I possibly empathize with a rapist while reading a martial arts novel? You could say the protagonist is a scapegoat, but this identity and grudges are crucial elements of the early plot.
He said he didn't want to be a dog, but he truly wrote a good dog story.
I don't understand this lately. A sixth-rank official provokes a fifth-rank official; all I see is impotent rage, gambling his life on someone else's? Won't that person kill or torture him? If he weren't the protagonist, he would have died long ago.
The plot device is great, but the author's skill is lacking. They have a developmental system, yet they insist on playing out incredibly awkward and action-packed games. They could simply acquire the martial arts and medicine, then settle down in a remote mountain village for a few months, but instead, they choose to mess around.
Did the author previously write dark fantasy novels? The protagonist's character is truly indescribable! This protagonist is incredibly neurotic; once he gains some power, he becomes arrogant and utterly wicked, unable to distinguish right from wrong! Just because Duanmu Qing didn't tell you who the mastermind was, he immediately started cursing—extremely vicious! Is this how you treat someone who saved you three times? I'm speechless! I've never seen such a shameless protagonist.
In general, your biggest problem, author, is the conflict between your writing style and your pretentious, artsy attitude; your writing skills are lacking. Many opening lines, casually changed to a few lines of poetry or song lyrics, feel awkward, even if you think it helps to establish the characters.
To be honest, the protagonist's gambling addiction and the author's occasional pretentious writing style made me have a particularly bad impression of this book. I'm currently feeling like I'm stuck in a limbo – neither good nor bad, like a chicken bone.