A Mini-Game in the World of Immortals and Martial Arts

If the protagonist had no cheats, then this book would be extremely well written. Unfortunately, the protagonist has cheats, which results in some of the protagonist's decisions obviously not meeting the expectations of quite a few people. To put it bluntly, the author's writing is really good, so he wanted to write a protagonist who is brave, resourceful and courageous. So I still can't understand why the protagonist needs to have a plug-in in hand, and he can be promoted to level 8 in ten days at most. When he reaches level 7 or level 6 in a short period of time, he has to go to the mountain temple alone at level 9 (the mountain temple is the location of the plot), kill two waves of people from Tianzitang and Dizitang (how can the protagonist be sure how many people will come to join them?), And kill an 8th level person in the third wave. The protagonist in the first two waves was already injured, so why did the protagonist in the third wave defeat the 8-level character who was in good condition? What is the advantage of the protagonist? Just because the protagonist is willing to die? (In fact, I don't understand why the protagonist is fighting so hard? He obviously has the plug-in, and the future is promising) In fact, the author did not explain how the protagonist won in the end. He blurred the fighting process and used the word "ruthless" to summarize it. . (The protagonist has just traveled through time a few days ago) Finally comment on this battle: The protagonist is at level 9. He fought two waves of level 9, with two people on each side. In the second wave, he was injured. Play another wave of 8-level players who are in good condition (the protagonist is injured and has no other advantages) (the protagonist has traveled through time for at most ten days so far). From my perspective, the protagonist has no way to survive. The protagonist has a plug-in, and it is visually estimated that he will be able to level up to level 8 in a few days, and his future is even brighter. To sum up, everyone here should ask yourself, will you go to participate in this battle (the protagonist has only traveled through time for ten days and there is no reason to go). It is obvious that he will be able to come back and control thunder and lightning in a month after escaping, but you are going to participate in a battle that the author has not been able to come back from. (And the author hasn't figured it out yet. Even if the protagonist uses dirty tricks to create a slight advantage for himself, I can accept it. However, the author writes with the kind of momentum of life and death. The protagonist starts to prepare to die when he knows the intelligence of this meeting 😰😅). . Finally, I would like to give an evaluation. In this battle, no one will participate in this battle except the author who stands from the author's perspective and knows that the protagonist will not die. To be honest, I personally think that if the protagonist in a novel has cheats and the logic is normal, the novel will not be ugly. Coupled with the author's whimsical ideas, the protagonist's personality orientation, etc., The novel will have a different direction. If the author's three views are roughly consistent with the reader's, you will find that every choice made by the protagonist is deeply in line with your wishes. If the author designs a little more plot, then the satisfaction will be reflected. I have to mention that when I read novels now, I first look at the logic (that is, whether the author can come back to justice), and secondly, the three views (mainly because if the values ​​are different, many decisions will naturally be different). As for that battle, if the protagonist made some extra efforts (such as traps, lime, etc.) In order to win, then I can think that the protagonist was at least prepared for this battle (although it is still better not to go), but the protagonist left empty-handed. I can understand that this wave is completely controlled by the author, and it is a sudden battle. . To sum up, I am unhappy if I don't vomit

The character of the protagonist is simply a seam monster. One moment, the author wants to write that the protagonist is affectionate and righteous, the next moment, he wants to write him as cold and ruthless, the next moment, he wants to write that he is resourceful, and the next moment, he wants to write that recklessness is king. However, the author has calculated every move for the protagonist in his mind. It is the same virtue as in the new squid book, and the author has to personally explain why he does it. The author needs to be clear about it, Kuai Nasuhuan has turned away half of the old readers. Your plot writing is not as good as Kuai. What are you doing with so many mental activities? If you learn from Kuai and describe the plot more, your grades will be improved. I have been a bookworm for more than 20 years. The main character is too poisonous and I really can't stand it anymore. The money I booked earlier will be used as the cost of this paragraph.

After reading Chapter 16, I felt that the main character was a pure stupid clown and the plot was a bit toxic, but the poor writing skills made the plot even more toxic. If you want to win people's hearts, you can't. He has no overlord spirit at all, and is full of bastard spirit. A plot that was obviously ridiculed by a passerby should be scrapped on the spot, and then a domineering and domineering speech shocked people's hearts. Only in this way can the people in the gang be frightened. They are all gangsters and bloodthirsties. This paragraph of explanation and apology, in reality, who cares about you, a notorious A Dou who can't be supported by his dead father. The only way to survive here is to shock people with your domineering and domineering speeches and make ordinary gang members think that you have changed and can be trusted. Explaining and apologizing will only make people think you are still a piece of shit. It feels like playing house.

The writing is really good, but the author's self-created character design of the protagonist really made me unable to stand it. Reading a book requires a sense of immersion. How can I bring into the perspective of a rapist when reading a martial arts novel? It can be said that the protagonist takes the blame, but this identity and grudges are directly important parts of the early plot. Every identity-related plot reminded me that half of the protagonist was a rapist, and I felt sick all over. And from the beginning to the end, I didn't see the plot of raping his own sister, what significance it has to the whole. I can only understand that it is for self-pleasure, or the author is screening readers

I said I didn't want to be a dog, but I actually wrote a good dog

I can't understand it recently. When a sixth-grade person goes to annoy a fifth-grade person, all he sees is incompetence, arrogance, and risking one's life on others? Others won't kill you or torture you? If it weren't for pig's feet, he would have died long ago

Goldfinger is good, but the author is not good. You have a developmental system, but you have to play a very awkward game. Obviously as long as you get the martial arts and medicine, you can immediately find a ravine and squat for a few months, but you have to mess around.

Has the author written about dark genres before? The character of the protagonist is really hard to describe! This protagonist is extremely neurotic. He will drink as much as he can when he has some strength. He is extremely evil and does not distinguish between right and wrong! Just because Duanmu Qing didn't tell you the man behind the scenes, he just started scolding you. It's extremely vicious! Is this how you treat the person who saved you three times? I'm really drunk! I've never seen such a shameless protagonist

Generally speaking, the biggest problem for you, the author, is that your writing style conflicts with your literary youth, and your writing power is not enough. Changing a few lines of poetry or lyrics from many of the setting sentences will make it look awkward. Maybe you think you can better establish the characters. In fact, the plot is almost complete, and those added later will affect the reader's immersion in the characters. Personal opinion, for reference only. Except for the discussion on this point, you are right.

How can I put it, the protagonist's dog-betting characterization and the author's occasionally literary-yet-like writing style made me have a particularly bad impression of this book. Currently, I feel like I am eating something that is tasteless and a pity to throw away.