Soul Trigger

The plot of the three golden chapters was dragged out for 20 chapters. It seemed that a lot of settings were thrown away, but in fact it was of no use. To sum up, the first twenty chapters are the story of a veteran from another world, reborn into a supernatural version (or a counter-type?) Earth, a different world, having a fight after awakening, passing out and waking up to receive novice equipment, such a story. The characters are quite rich, but the specific plot is a bit broken. In order to focus on one character and forget about the other, it's like a genius. The world view is also the same. The cyberpunk and supernatural parts seem to be written the same, they just changed the terms. Use the cyberpunk setting to trick people into watching the supernatural feeling. Cyberpunk style should be epistemic and constructivist. It has a cognitive system. Even the most mysterious things have explanations and are integrated into the system. As a result, as soon as you entered the Ascension Agreement, you put it directly in the ectoplasmic well? Then the ectoplasm well is unknown where it is. As soon as the protagonist appears, he directly asks, what do I want to do with the Ascension Agreement ? Do you do metaphysics? Then why do you add cyberpunk stuff? Just talk to the system panel. The protagonist's 299-year experience seems to be nothing more than a dream before his death as a sacrifice. When he wakes up, his cognition has changed, and the thing summoned becomes powerful because of this. Then self-deception produced the system panel. The cyberpunk angle looks really weird The Mechawen angle looks even more wrong It makes sense to look at it from the weird angle

What a fine book, in every aspect 😍😍😍

I just missed the limited exemption, so it's good to read the free chapters so far. I think the poisonous points everyone mentioned are okay. Even when I saw the chapter about book friends, it may be related to the author's previous book, which is not a big problem. Good grass

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PS: It took eight hours. I couldn't hold it anymore. I'll change it again when I have the energy. I went to sleep 💤(¦3[▓▓] PS: The power system is based on psychology. Because of this characteristic, the mental state of the enemies on the scene is very extreme, extremely bad, and extremely self-centered. The mind is almost all mentally ill, so you often see enemies talking to themselves about nonsense Realm The ecological pyramid of the awakened is divided into three major levels and nine smaller levels . Self-nature ↑ Eight Types ↑ [Projection], from low to high, consists of three small levels From the psychology of the soul, the scientific name of the most primitive level of awakened people With the advancement of the times and the decentralization of knowledge, as well as the increase in awakened people, academics. The name was replaced by a relatively easy-to-understand nickname. The nickname has been academically recognized in the field of modern soul psychology, and has the following titles from lowest to highest: Immortal Self ↑Level 6 Eight Type Dominator ↑Third level Projection of Extraordinary In the common name, the scientific name will be omitted, so it is: Extraordinary, Dominatorand Immortal  Subdivided into small layers. Levels, according to different types of awakened people, will have different names and branch derivation The general name is mainly divided by the simplest numbers-the scientific name of soul psychology is already complicated enough. R>After the sixth level, the master advances to immortality, which is the next stage of life and soul form. In soul psychology, there are multiple scientific names to name this transitional stage: The more exaggerated "half" was used in ancient times. "God", "half-dead" is used in the theory of soul decline, and "integrated spirit" is used in the modern mainstream theory of soul and body. The more mainstream scientific name is "spiritual splitting period". No matter what the scientific name is, the corresponding They are all "peak masters" in popular terms. The first to sixth levels are the process of continuously accumulating spiritual essence. The sixth level is the limit of this process. "Eight Types" is the time when the soul and body stages are evolved. (For the specific content of the Eight Types, please see Chapters 196 to 197. There is a supplement in Chapter 283, which includes more information about soul screams and limit breakers) Pure accumulation of spiritual essence is no longer enough to promote this process. A more special way is needed to expand the Trinity, thereby qualitatively transforming the spiritual body, promoting the evolution of the spiritual body's "self-nature", entering the "personality corridor", and transforming the self into a life-long wandering. The lower personality abandons distracting thoughts, confirms the value of one's own existence, establishes a perfect future path, completes and integrates the entire personality, and finally extracts the true nature from these memories and becomes immortal The Blade of the Heart . Also known as the "Sword of the Heart", the unique system of the awakened person begins with the entry into the domination stage. "The Sword of the Self" is the starting point of the extraordinary third level. It is transformed into the aura of awakening and the source of power. "The Sword of the Self" is completed and masters the soul. "Super-Ego Sword", the pinnacle master, indicates that the "Heart Sword" system is complete and is approaching the "Eight Types"                                                                                                                                                                                           Sixth level. ↑Third level Extraordinary projection (Please see Chapter 220 Similarity for supplementary text) Ectoplasm Circuit A functional magic pattern imprinted with ectoplasm and special materials is a special technique that requires a long period of learning. When engraved on the human body, it can be driven by the host's ectoplasm to enhance the host's own abilities, or add a limited additional ability. Such as enhancing physical fitness, strengthening agility, and enhancing the lethality of the ectoplasm. Artificial psychic props are also realized based on this process. For details about "Magic Pattern", please see Chapter 87. School content There are many schools, and the extended professions are also differentiated, such as burners, craftsmen, etc. Loop text, please see Chapter 379 for details Essence The term soul psychology is the fusion of the id, superego and ego of human thinking, and is the deep structure of the trinity theory of the soul. In practical application, the spirit of different people can be embodied in different shapes, and the evil spirit is a form that shows part of the essence. The essence of the human spirit is lost or lost. If destroyed, it will become a walking zombie. To put it bluntly, the "essence" is the vitality of the "soul". Ectoplasm The emotions, cognition, thinking and desires of living beings are all powerful, and are transformed into "ectoplasm" under supernatural rules Ectoplasm exists in the well of everyone's soul, whether they are awakened or not, there is a well of soul and ectoplasm. Br> In the competition, players perform abnormally because they are in a poor mental state under huge pressure, which leads to a decrease in spiritual quality and ability, and thus they lose. On the contrary, extraordinary performance is due to various factors in the competition. The mental state is far beyond normal, and the spiritual quality is increased, so that the ability is increased unconsciously. An extreme example is to save a child under the car. The mother of the car; the little girl who was buried in the ruins of the earthquake for several months but still survived; the courageous volunteer who was alive and kicking after being stabbed dozens of times after simple treatment... Are all manifestations of the ectoplasmic power of the mother. The ectoplasm power of the mother is born from maternal love and protection, and the ectoplasmic power of the little girl is born from the will to survive. What supports the brave person may be the approval of others and his own courage and justice. The emotion at the moment when the ectoplasm is born is called the awakening aura, Thoughts, beliefs, hearts, minds, ideas, wills, desires, whichever word feels more appropriate, will become the source of the awakened person's power The ectoplasm is highly related to the spirit, thoughts and desires, and the fulfillment of all wishes is its essence. The generation of ectoplasm is very difficult. It requires an extremely strong will, a very good mentality, or talents that are beyond ordinary people, or is extremely powerfully inspired. Awakened people The ectoplasm grows explosively in certain emotions or thoughts and desires, and positive thoughts and emotions explode to the extreme, activating the "soul trigger" and giving birth to their own spiritual core; The well of soul is the root and source of ectoplasm. The stronger the well of soul, the more ectoplasm it can hold; The older the soul, the stronger the well of soul. Soul trigger is the medium through which the ectoplasm of the awakened person communicates with the world; intuition, spiritual perception, detection, and sixth sense can all be regarded as the embodiment of soul trigger. The spiritual core is the source of the awakened person's power, the embodiment of the soul, the ability to survive, and the reliance on struggle. It is closely related to the awakened aura. Each awakened person is different. Different awakened auras will give birth to different abilities. Soul Well, Soul Trigger, Soul Core, the Holy Trinity The power of positive ectoplasm has been awakened. Most of the awakened ones want to become stronger. In addition to the training of external objects and life-and-death battles, they also need to study the awakened aura. By adapting to their own awakened aura, they can expand the well of the soul, purify the ectoplasm, and continuously become stronger. There is an exclusive term in soul psychology to describe this method: the law of desire Different awakening auras determine different paths for the awakened to strengthen themselves Backlighter A rather special kind of awakener. Awakening, the accumulation and explosion of positive emotions. Corruption, the accumulation and explosion of negative emotions. The awakening of "backlighters" does not rely on positive emotions, but on negative emotions. Negative emotions and negative emotions are not equivalent. The most intuitive example is that a murderous madman may feel very happy about killing people. But when he does not kill, he will be very painful. Complex, is it negative or positive? The accumulation of negative emotions can give birth to special "backlighters". Their laws of desire revolve around their own negative emotions, so the awakening of the aura will be very strange The Mourner After actively or passively integrating the personality relic and awakening, its spirit will continue to be eroded by the evil will left in the personality relic. As a price, the human spirit can deeply borrow the evil power. It can maximize the power, ability strength and ability promotion of the personality relic. It is highly related to the fused personality relic. The awakened aura is affected by the thoughts and desires in the personality relic. Split Maker [Split Messenger], referred to as "Split Messenger". Split Messenger, the most special awakened person, has the special ability to [personality entity covering] and "death transformation" (evil spirit transformation) after awakening. This is not the unique ability of the Split Messenger. When the awakened person grows to a certain level - "Domination", You can temporarily change your life form through "Necromorphization (Evil Spirit Transformation)", and have lethality and survivability comparable to evil spirits. For other awakened people, Necromorphosis (Evil Spirit Transformation) is a special and decisive ability that requires a certain level of spiritual energy to be used. In the past, the Lord could only rely on special means to achieve incomplete transformation For the Splinter, the Necromorph is a ready-to-use permanent skill, which establishes the special nature of the Splinter. And the Split user. The ectoplasm is different from other awakened beings. The awakened characteristics are closer to the ectoplasm of the devil, which is the ectoplasm of the evil being itself. Therefore, the splitting agent is inherently lethal and corrosive to other ectoplasms. The ectoplasm of the devil. Make a deal with a powerful evil, dedicate something of your own, and reach a contract with the evil lord in exchange for awakening. The power "borrowed" through the contract quickly becomes stronger. This power cannot be grown through exercise and has unstable characteristics. The power can only be exchanged and grown by serving the lord behind it; Because power and ectoplasm originate from evil, without awakening aura, one will directly bear the negative emotions from the master, and people will be immersed in negative emotions all the time, resulting in mental state that is as unstable as the power. Emotions can easily go to extremes, irritable, crazy, and crazy. It is easy to lose control and become evil. In exchange, the ectoplasm is extremely aggressive and aggressive. Awakened people can also become demons, but after becoming awakened, their spiritual light will be contaminated Predator A special branch among the awakened ones, The way the Predator is born - first corrupting an awakened person, and then destroying and tampering with it, then separating part of his own essence to form a "nest seed" and planting it into his human soul, and developing it into his own 'downline'. The King of Predators (self-proclaimed) has no Depending on the above conditions, the principle of directly transforming people into predators is unknown; This method is called a 'nest colony', and the developed 'offline' will basically obey the orders of the 'upline', with a strict hierarchy like ants and bees. In such a spider web-like structure, the 'Predator King' serves as the core of the nest, the center of the spider web, and the highest superior, so he calls himself the 'King'. The Predator is normally very weak. If the Splinter is the most offensive branch of the Awakened at the same level, then the Predator can. It is said to be the worst at the same level. But like the Splinter, the Predator can do something that the awakened can only do when they reach a higher level - open a "lair". The Predator has a Limbo in its soul that cannot exist for a long time. . By pulling other human spirits into this "lair" and killing and devouring them, you can accumulate promotions. When you are in your own lair, the power of the predator will increase exponentially, surpassing that of ordinary awakened people of the same level. This is an extremely simple and crude, but also very dangerous promotion. This method has made the "Predator" the number one blacklist of various organizations - Hidden in the crowd, it needs to eat people to evolve. It is almost the same as the evil aliens. In the eyes of the evil aliens, they are almost the same kind, and they have little interest in them. Compared with human spirits, they are better said to be evil aliens wearing human skin Destruction and tampering A special, malicious way to destroy the awakening aura of the awakened person and then re-awaken it. The awakening aura is highly related to the human will and even the soul. The destruction of the awakening aura is equivalent to the destruction of the self. The human spirit will become evil and corrupt. In this instant, it will be re-awakened. , Can achieve "destruction and tampering", resulting in a drastic change in temperament and personality, which will affect the image of the evil spirit. This will retain the original well of soul, but the spiritual core, ability, and awakening aura will undergo earth-shaking changes due to the corruption awakening. This kind of artificial reversal of unnatural tampering has flaws. The past personality remains in the mind of the person who has been tampered with, and the mood is unstable and will react violently under the influence of the personality fragment correction device. In the past, before the cause was fully understood, it was called "fragmentation syndrome" in soul psychology, so it was also called "fragmentation syndrome". In the early stages of schizophrenia patients, people around them will only feel that their behavior and way of speaking are different from before. As time goes by, this difference will be magnified, and gradually they will be noticed. This state is completely opposite to the original personality - calm and peaceful people become irritable and careless people suddenly become micromanaged, and their emotions are exposed to a certain degree of paranoia after being exposed to external stimulation. Evil spirits are evil spirits, and their name comes from "malice." Abnormal creatures full of malice are called "evil spirits." The world in this world is the opposite of the real world, a collection of negative emotions. The birth of evil comes from the explosion of negative emotions - "corruption" Whether it is selfish, evil, self-defeating, crazy, or loyal, kind, selfless dedication, and having great love, it has no direct relationship with whether it can be corrupted. The key lies in the accumulation of negative emotions. People with high moral character are corrupted because of their high morals, and their emotions after being corrupted. There will be more spiritual matter that breaks out, and under the cycle of extreme emotions such as "self-loathing" and "self-destruction" caused by repeatedly trampling on the bottom line, the intensity of the evil will be higher, and the lethality will be even more terrifying. The mental world of mental patients is extremely unstable and abnormal, and their mood swings are relatively huge, so most mental patients are dangerous potential corruptors. Materials in this world that are shrouded in abnormal spiritual matter for a long time will gradually be contaminated and turn into evil derivatives. Abnormal spiritual matter comes from evil spirits. If the pollution is serious, the items will become part of the evil spirits. There may not be a physical link, but there is a spiritual connection. Through this connection, the evil spirits can achieve something that the original body cannot do, or expand their abilities. When the negative emotion reaches the threshold, it will directly enter the corruption process The unit of measurement of evil intensity [red pressure] The red pressure value of a human who has just entered the corrupted state is in the range of 50-200. The red pressure value of ordinary evil is in the range of 200-300. And the corpse soul's red pressure value is in the range of 200-300. The red pressure value is generally 200-400 (later it becomes a miscellaneous fish) Types and levels of evil Dead Apostle Single mark, double mark, complete body Lord ? Runner ? Three dimensions [Real world] ↕Reflection World Inside WorldAbyss The above system of awakened persons is constructed based on the "theory of evil nature of human nature". Due to strong side effects, unstable power and easy loss of control, in Shulong, it is collectively called evil law. After returning to Shulong, it is decomposed, reorganized, and rebuilt.

How can I put it this way, the author's writing style and the plot are actually good, there are no problems, they are all excellent. If I give points separately, out of 100 points, there will definitely be 80 or 90 points. But I just feel uncomfortable recently, so I thought about it. There are two settings for the male protagonist, one is an old monster who lives for 400 years, and the other is an ascensioner, but his ascension failed. Then the author dealt with these two plug-ins like this. The 400-year-old monster gave him a super soul quality, but many bosses would mistake it for someone more advanced than themselves, or a similar person, and give him better treatment. There is nothing much to say about Ascension, except that he simply gave him an Ascension Agreement to ensure that the male protagonist's artificial combat effectiveness is online. Invincible at the same level, and can even counter-attack at higher levels. The 400-year-old monster gave him a high affinity. That is, it is easier to trigger some advanced plots and unlock some hidden things. For example, in the one in Mensa, he was given a horse, although I didn't see the use of this code. There is also the big spider spirit, which he turned into a gun buddy, a logistics base or something. Then it disappeared There are several reasons for this First, the male protagonist's combat power level is very confusing. You know he is strong, but you don't know where he is in the world. What I want to know is based on the hero's current abilities, is his position reasonable or unreasonable? Based on the male protagonist's growth rate, he will soon become the director. Judging from the latest plot settings, the sixth-level master is close to the level of a big leader under normal circumstances. The male protagonist is still just a deputy, and the direct boss above him can't even maintain normalcy, let alone explode. That female character actually means nothing to him. To put it bluntly, it is a hindrance. The big spider spirit can be used as a backup base, and the rabbit can save his life. The Big Spider Spirit is indeed useful in my opinion, but only so much. Rabbit is actually very embarrassed now, because all his love for the hero is based on wishful thinking. In fact, the male protagonist can solve these problems. He thinks he will be in danger, so he solves them. The character creation is not good and very conflicting. To put it bluntly, the progress is overdue. Let me be more serious. You only wrote 2 million words in the last two books. You wrote 4,000 words per book, and you updated two chapters a day, which is 8,000 words. In other words, the actual limit of your ability is to write five or six hundred chapters. This is almost 200 chapters. The male protagonist is still wandering around the novice base. I really can't say. The second one is the evolutionary route, which is actually modeled after the design of a cheap web game. It's okay to open more routes and improve the panel. There's not much to say about the design of the male protagonist's suit. It's really handsome and suits my taste. But it is actually a bit boring. You will obviously find that the male protagonist relies too much on the ascension system. The ascension system is separated from itself, two main bodies. The plot setting at the beginning is that the male protagonist is an ascendant, and the ascension system is integrated into his body. I don't see this integrated relationship, I only see separation. The third one is the battle. The description is OK, but the male protagonist and employee cannot show how strong he is. You feel as if he can follow 50-50 and win the battle, but he can't suppress it. In terms of actual performance, he can fight any kind of miscellaneous character for a while, and the author will write how to fight such miscellaneous characters. Such a description is very procrastinating, will only reduce everyone's sense of enjoyment and involvement, and is also harmful to the image of the male protagonist. About three. Basically, I can't see the big problems. The most important question is the first question Let's divide it according to the proportion. This first question is at least 50% upward, and the remaining few are scattered to form a group. I am not talking about the author here</ b>, But I think these problems can be solved by current authors . I summarize these problems in one sentence, that is, the author,He does not know how to spend line hydrology. And the branch plot he has opened now actually has little to do with the main plot. Are female police officers important? Not important, is the spider spirit important? Not important. Is rabbit spirit important? Actually it's not important either. Because the male protagonist is set very high at the beginning,You can introduce other characters, If it is not handled well, conflicts will inevitably arise. Write wherever you think of it, that's all.

Were you such a eunuch in this Binary Train of the Dead? I hope you can finish this article well and don't do things that damage credibility.

You give me back the phantom limb, the demon weapon, the world tree, and the evil cage master

What do you say? The protagonist is a technology tycoon. After changing the map, he should not be out of danger and test the physical rules of the two worlds. Are they different? Do you want to make your own life-saving high-tech equipment first? With bare hands, at least rub the artificial intelligence with your hands and collect world information. It should be no problem.

The protagonist is a technology boss (???) But in the plot, technology cannot be said to be irrelevant, it can only be said to have nothing to do with it. If you want to see technology defeat fantasy, you can run

It's a pretty good novel, and it's enjoyable, but not mindless. Sometimes I see dramas in the Ascension Protocol. The strength of the ability system is relatively awkward, and too many ambiguous women can easily interrupt the rhythm of the story, but the flaws are not hidden. As long as this level is maintained until the end, it will definitely become a good article.

Wouldn't it be better to replace the setting of the male protagonist with a dead college student with a hook? Wouldn't it be more consistent with the actual performance than the forced setting of a cyber oligarch?

I really don't understand why I have to write so many unnecessary women. It's like I can't write a book without adding some color.

I'm finally alive. I haven't heard anything for several years and I thought you were dead.

I read this novel because I was bored, so I endured it and read the first 15 chapters (it's not that it didn't read, I just felt confused), and the more I read, the better it became. Nowadays, there is a lot of pressure in society and we are already very tired from struggling. Not many people can calm down and read novels (the author should understand this when he is also working). They are all novels for entertainment. It's not necessarily that the work is actually tiring, but that there is just a lack of energy. The beginning is relatively bright and clear, which makes it easier to attract people. I have been reading novels for many years and have played many games with similar settings. The first few chapters are still confusing. On the one hand, the setting is relatively new and complex. The key point may be that the way to understand the "information" is like watching a movie. I am used to reading novels from a God's perspective, but I am really not used to seeing a movie style all of a sudden. (But the advantage is that the tension of the text is so strong, it is easy to form pictures with rich imagination) I haven't seen the chapters on the shelves yet, so I only have one monthly ticket left to support!

This book is very interesting, the setting is interesting, the "Soul Trigger" ability is interesting, the female bunny character is interesting, and the constant gossiping is also fun. It's just that the opening chapters are too complicated. For performance reasons, the golden three-chapter rule still needs to be observed. I feel that it would be better to delete and streamline the first ten chapters where the male protagonist first enters this world and escapes through life and death. Both the male protagonist and the readers at the beginning of the book are confused about the world and settings, and then a lot of rendering and description will make people dazzled and confused. The biggest highlight of the first ten or so chapters is the part where the male protagonist turns into Odin Gossamer. Three dimensions, a bubble, and various new terms of its own system. At first glance, the confusing effect makes the opening ability to attract new readers quite low. Nowadays, many people read novels just to catch fish at work and to relax when they are tired. It is difficult for a large number of new people to read in depth with a new book that has no reading foundation. With more than 20 chapters, it is very well written, interesting and lightweight. Detailed descriptions are great and great, but they are not suitable for starting at the beginning. No movie starts with exciting music, surging emotions, and the climax of the story.

Everything else is good, but the character of the protagonist is problematic. The protagonist does not look like a full-body cybernetic who has lived for 299 years and has gone from being a mercenary to becoming the third-in-command of the military of Murphy's giant company in the cyberpunk worldview. It is more like a happy college student from the 21st century who accidentally traveled through time. After obtaining a system called the Ascension Protocol, he killed everyone. I can only say that the author is really lacking in the character design of the protagonist. Removing the protagonist's cyberpunk experience, it doesn't feel out of place to look at it as an ordinary time traveler. I even have serious doubts about the protagonist's memory of mechanical transformation. Is it because the system has tampered with the protagonist's memory and attached a piece of stuff similar to a cyberpunk CG promotional video to mistakenly think that this is his own experience. Why do you say that? Because the protagonist is not capable enough. This is not to criticize the protagonist. If you look at the protagonist as an ordinary time traveler, and from the perspective of him starting to escape from Limbo and confronting hostile organizations, he is very good and has high combat effectiveness. But it really doesn't match the protagonist's self-proclaimed experience as a cyberpunk mechanical upgrader. Rather, it is a player who has played 3,000 hours of experience in a cyberpunk worldview game. If you ask him to talk about all kinds of super technologies, such as links and mechanical modifications, all kinds of unclear terms, and if you ask him to make the simplest thing, he won't know a thing about it. This means that the protagonist can only use high-tech weapons and armor, but does not understand the scientific and technological knowledge contained in them. This mechanical ascension knowledge has become a black box. But this is inconsistent with things like the system called [Ascension Protocol]. The Ascension Protocol in the book seems to guarantee the basic survival of mechanical ascenders in the ascended world. For example, you are an executive of a multinational high-tech company such as Atlas, Umbrella, or Wieland. You accidentally traveled back to Shanghai at night during the Republic of China. Your weapons, ammunition, firearms, mechanical exoskeleton equipment are all gone, but your personal portable AI is still there. At the same time, there are threats such as monsters and monsters in this world. Q: Will you choose a mature mechanical civilization path that relies on the development of technology to create an organization, and secretly use technical means to study supernatural creatures and develop weapons and equipment to fight monsters and monsters. Still wandering around like a fun-loving person, punching through the world with a pair of iron hands. So I say, get rid of the fancy cyberpunk background setting, this is the story of an ordinary time traveler who gets the system and kills everyone. The Odin v1 mecha, and the older the soul, the more powerful it is, just treat them as given by the system, without any sense of violation.

Have you ever traveled through time? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Have you lived for three hundred years? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The beginning is exciting, but the more you read, the more tired you get. As long as the enemy is not defeated by the protagonist in one move, no matter how strong or weak it is, it will always be a "50-50" fight with the protagonist. The worthless battle description is too complicated, and these "unsatisfactory" accumulation little by little will give people a sense of frustration. Can it be less watery?

The male protagonist is called Ji Li, and I thought the female protagonist would be named Tai Mei.

The pace is too fast. No matter where the protagonist goes, he will do whatever he does. Whenever he goes out, he will encounter something. I am more curious about how these cities persisted for so long before the protagonist appeared. They say it is spiritual power, but in fact it is still practice.

Why am I a eunuch again? The same is true in the previous book. The author is invincible 😰

The writing is very good and quite sophisticated. Most of the characters stand up. But there is a reason why this book is not popular. It's a bit cool but not cool enough. It's really not fun. All kinds of fish can fight with the protagonist back and forth. The descriptions are also messy. I think my understanding ability is quite strong, but there are some places that I still feel confused if I don't look carefully.

I declare this to be the best book I have seen recently on Qidian

As expected, we need another eunuch

Yes, the writing is good Compared with the previous book, the writing style has improved a lot. The portrayal of the male protagonist is also okay, and the 300 years of precipitation are indeed conveyed. Although Rabbit Girl has average combat power, she can be a good support. It's not annoying either. Although there is a lot of interaction between the girls, there is no in-depth romance, which is very comfortable.

The writing is very beautiful, the characters can be clearly drawn, and the plot continues like this and is innovative. As long as it is written to the middle stage, it will be a magical book. The only pity is that I read it too early. It would be great if I read it again in the middle of writing. Come on, author!

Holy shit! There are actually gods and beings who can be reborn and have the ability to cut off roots and be reborn!

There are a lot of settings in the first few pictures, and it is indeed a little messy, but the more you look at it, the better it looks, and the writing is very interesting. Come on, author, I have already voted for the month~