Absolute Destiny Game

The name hits the street. Looking at these two old and cliche films, there are many good beginnings of the same genre that can be copied. Old authors make stupid mistakes.

I have just read Chapter 81. The subject matter and the world view in the game are very good. However, sometimes the psychological descriptions and dialogues of the protagonist and teammates are like children. It is very boring. The previous subject matter attracted me, but when it comes to the later chapters, it becomes more and more uncomfortable to read and it is boring to read.

The front is okay, because it is free before it is put on the shelves. I think water is not a big deal at all. But the plot is inexplicable after it is released. I don't need you to ask for any unimportant supporting characters. As long as the plot is smooth and consistent with the development of the plot, it will be fine. Now this book feels like it has no outline and the plot structure is unprofessional, just... Watery. I feel like I wrote it casually. I thought the data was pretty good so I put it on the shelf. But what can I say? Now that the quality is free, I'll take a look. If you want to charge... There are so many good books waiting for me to read... If you want to charge, can you get some snacks? The plot has been so bad lately. I can't stand it. I spent a long time making mistakes and the protagonist is like a fool.

I'm a little disappointed, it feels not as good as an absolute death game The protagonist was negligent several times and almost died. While emphasizing the need to be cautious, he was running around recklessly. I couldn't tell that he was playing a death game The early plot was also written more deliberately.

The author's settings and ideas are very good. The career paths of both the protagonist and the supporting characters are quite innovative. The mission design is also wonderful, and the overall story progresses smoothly. But in some places, the author will over-pursue details, such as Taoist thoughts, the protagonist's management of his subordinates, guild cooperation, etc., Making the protagonist appear extra cautious, calculating, and even a bit calculating and philistine. Although logically sound, this style contrasts too much with the overall narrative. The previous plot was smooth, and the protagonist advanced the mission neatly, but in these details, the narrative suddenly became rigid, realistic, and even paranoid, as if it had changed its style. I am used to a smooth rhythm, but suddenly encounter extremely realistic descriptions, which sometimes reduces the sense of immersion.

I hope to update more, but the progress is a bit slow...

Game studio, as a professional player, if someone sends you an invitation code, you will finish it without any investigation, and you will be a friend. The most important thing is to write the official part. It really conforms to the logic of the novel, which represents the author's IQ. If this happens in reality, the country will definitely publicize it, and you will die after it is over, and then you can decide whether to play or not.

I heard it was by an old author and I had read it. But can it really go back to the original themes and writing methods of more than ten years ago? The author's three views are completely stuck in the 2000s, so his understanding of games, players, country, society, life and death are all inconsistent with the understanding of today's mainstream readers. What is reflected is the flaw in logic.

The dead person embodies cruelty, and there is no problem in giving the protagonist a motivation to become an immortal, but the premise is that the process must be reasonable. There are too many witty plot points in this plot, including useless life-saving props (at least explain that the life-saving device is invalidated, so as to show the strength of Hongchen), the portal does not open when retreating, the stop and stop spells that are reluctant to be handed over at the bottom of the box, the dragon that has been laid out for two hundred chapters but is a mess in the first appearance, and the teammates who have a passionate brotherhood for no reason. The cruelty should be shaped like this: everyone tried their best but was easily resolved by the world of mortals, a slap in the face and no life-saving props were useless, the protagonist tried his best to wait until the end of time, and was finally told that he could not become an immortal. Instead of relying on intelligence to forcibly highlight it. It is recommended that the plot be changed to: Discuss Hongchen's qi healing technique in advance Test Hongchen's ability Force qi healing technique Double-time stop for forced killing Hongchen relies on the secret technique of qi training to lock blood and save his life Chasing with dragon transformation The mortal world is singled out and suppressed by the protagonist who transforms into a dragon. He can barely hold on until the end of time and then runs away The protagonist group decides to retreat and opens the portal The mortal world transforms into immortals, chasing thousands of miles in an instant, and there are a large number of miscellaneous fish as soon as they land The protagonist makes a decisive decision and directly engages Immortal Talisman Some of the protagonist's teammates ran away and some stayed behind to fight Hongchen said that anyone who could not run would die The protagonist group was killed one by one, and the life-saving props were invalidated Only the protagonist, Lao Monkey, Ye Luo, and Wentian were left Ye Luo and Wentianjiao's big moves delay time Old Monkey and the protagonist Shuang Liaoyi cut down the immortal time of Hongchen In the end, Hongchen's skill failed and broke the defense, and told the protagonist that he could not become an immortal by practicing demon energy The protagonist vowed to become an immortal and resurrect his teammates

If you don't want to read it, let me share my opinion. After reading about two hundred chapters, I summarized the biggest features, which is to suppress... Think of ways to suppress the protagonist and prevent him from being too outstanding. No matter how good the opportunity is given to the protagonist, there must be no big gap between the protagonist and others. The whole follow-up article is about teamwork. It seems that the protagonist has obtained a lot of treasures, but in fact what I see is: level improvement speed ↓, experience acquisition efficiency ↓, useless entertainment++, and boring plot++. It's too overwhelming and not interesting anymore. For an ancient Qi Refiner profession, it is too outrageous to be written as a soft-footed shrimp. There is no explanation for this. Anyone with a discerning eye, even the author himself, will understand that it is just for suppression. Fuck it, delete the post as you please, the complaint is over.

Reality is the same as history. This monthly ticket is paid for, right?

It's a pretty ordinary novel, with no major flaws but constant minor flaws. The setting is that he is a studio owner and a professional gamer. I don't know what his profession is. Let's put it this way, he is just an ordinary otaku who loves to play games. In terms of game ideas, he is just an ordinary person. He is not even as experienced as a senior player. In a game where people can die, I entered the game without studying it carefully. I missed a function, and then a new function popped up. The physical strength and satiety levels even surprised the protagonist for a long time. How can this be a professional player?

The following are the professions currently appearing in the work, as well as core skills. Welcome to add. I also added a little bit of my own thoughts to it. Swordsman (core skill Sword Heart) - 1 Swordsman/Swordsman - Sword Master, 2 Taoist priest - Sword Master Swordsman (core skill Killing Intent) Gunslinger - Military General (Core Skill Military Merit Map) - Unparalleled Fighter (Core Skill - None Dual combat skills, one glance at the Three Kingdoms Unparalleled) Ranger (core skill Jianghu Craftsmanship) Bandit (one of the three basic professions of Xianyu, the original work mentioned that Xianyu worked as a bandit part-time) Archer/Strong Archer (charged shooting) /Guerrilla Shooter (Mobile Shooting)/Archer-1 Marksman Assassin-1 Master Assassin-Assassin Grandmaster, 2 Ghost Cursor-Ghost Assassin (can turn into ghost form and become invisible, must be visible to attack, but ghost form can be used Ghost Curse), 3 Taoist Priests - Five Elements Escape Magician Rogue - 1 Flying Thief - Thief Saint, 2 Taoist Priests - Five Elements Escape Magician Monk - Monk Master Axe Fighter Iron Guard (Core Skill Tenacity) -? -Xuantiewei Hercules (core skill Fury) -Yellow Turban Hercules (core skill Magic Reduction) -Djinn Warrior (core skill South Fist and North Leg) -1 Martial Master - Martial Saint Beast Tamer (core skill Beast Taming) -1 Beast Tamer Master, 2 Shaman - Magician (Shapeshifting), 3 Taoist - Magician ( Magic) Qigong Master-1 Qigong Master-Qizong General-1Xiaoqi Xiaowei-Xiaoqi General 2 God Prayer-Shenjiang (Tiangang War Qi, Dharma Golden Body, Gods descending to earth, three consecutive qualities.), 3 Ghost Curse User-Ghost Ghost General, 4 Psychic Master-Netherworld Ghost General (there are both soul ghost generals and ghost ghost generals that appeared in the original work, I don't know) What is the difference between Tao and Dao? It seems to be a profession.) Ordinary physics profession + ordinary physics profession - Hero - 1 hidden master/master (originally it was said to be swordsman + swordsman, but I think it is a bit too limited.) Mechanism master - mechanism master - mechanism puppet master Fu Lu master Night Walker - 1 Impermanence Walker - 1 Underworld Envoy 2 Impermanence Master 3 Hades Deacon Taoist Priest (Core Skill - Introduction to Taoism.) - 1 Real Person - Immortal Magician, 2 Thunder Mage - Thunder Master (previously, the core skills seemed to be able to legislate the altar, but later the Immortal Magician also legislated the altar), 3 Illusionist - Demon Dao, 4 Formation Mage - Qimen Tianshi, 5? -Exorcist Celestial Master (the protagonist swallows demon pills, entangles demon souls, and invites the exorcist Celestial Master), 6 Swordsman - Sword Master, 7 Assassin/thief - Five Elements Escape Master, 8 Psychic Master - Celestial Master, 8 Five Elements Warlock (the one from Deidara, I don't know if it is a Taoist priest advancement.) God Prayer-? -Spellcaster (Core skill-Spellcasting, consumes three to five years of life, you can ask a god to possess you if you meet the conditions, and you will also gain the characteristics of a fairy) Ghostcaster (Core skill-Getting started with ghosts)-1 Ghostcaster, 2 Assassin-Ghost Shadow Assassin, 3 generals-Ghost Ghost General Psychic Master Soul Refiner Onmyoji Shaman (I feel very similar to God Prayer, shaman looks like You can ask gods for help from the beginning, and if you ask gods to help fight, you need to give something. Haoyue Xinghe is this profession, but Hongfu Qitian is also like this, but for more advanced levels, you can ask gods to take over) Ancient Qi Refiner (core skill-Qi Watching Technique) Demon Refiner (core skill-Demon Refining Technique) Dragon Slayer The following are some professions that I speculated and created. Welcome to add. Begging Disciple-1 Beggar Gang Elder-Beggars Leader, 2 Beast Tamer-Monkey Tamer (written based on a comment in the comment area, if you are interested, you can check it out.) Nuo Opera Master-1 God Prayer-acting as the God Envoy (one person under the godhead mask), 2 Ghost Curse User-Ming Gui Envoy (playing the role of Hades) Ghosts and gods, such as black and white impermanence) Swordsman-Scholar-Taoist-Poetry Sword Immortal (original profession, similar to sword master, but with the addition of reciting poems, it can increase the damage of sword skills. For example, I have not tried to sharpen a double-edged sword for ten years. Increase the attack power. Ande Yitian Sword, cross the sea and kill the long whale. Increase the attack range.) Scholar (core skill: verbal confrontation, or verbal and written attack) - 1 Gentleman (core skill: Six Arts of the Gentleman) - Confucian (core skill: Haoran Zhengqi) - Confucian Sage (core skill Holy Word, similar to speaking the law), 2 Swordsman - Taoist priest - Poetry and Sword Fairy, 3 Assassin - Deadly Scholar (not in the original work) Appears, inspired by Confucianism) Yanzhe-1 Machine Master-Shenji Master-Tiangong Master (the prototype comes from Mohism.) Law Official-Law Order Master (similar to the Sheriff path in Lord of Mysteries, the method is currently I only think of a yoke with a lock, as a control skill. Sign and sign, or The black and white writing can be used as a contract.) Iron Guard-General-Heavy Armored Cavalry (The core skill-Cavalry Charge is to perform an enhanced charge, which is powerful and can knock people away, stun and cause internal injuries.) Swordsman-1 Sword Master-Sword Saint (the author always named it Means. ), 2 Crazy Sword - Crazy Slaughter (original based on the core skill of the swordsman) Warrior Monk - 1 Walker Monk - Arhat Monk / 2 Bronze Man - Angry Eyes King Kong - Fudo Ming King / 3 Wandering Monk - Cloud-Climbing Monk /, 2 Divine Prayer - Eminent Monk - Holy Monk (only one advancement is the Monk Master in the original work) Archer occupation - Talisman Master - Talisman Archer (There is almost no advancement in the Archer profession. This profession is inspired by the bat bow and arrow in The Magic Soldiers. The bows and arrows shot can explode and have the Talisman effect.) In addition, the author feels that level 30 of the physics profession is a bit too much. Early on, you can set the understanding to 40 points and 50 points to master it once, integrate all the insights, and create a martial arts that is perfectly suitable for you. Because it is a perfect adaptation, it cannot be taught or learned from others. 40 Points is a peerless magical skill, and 50 points is sublimated into a martial arts of gods and demons. Then the sword master can turn into a sword immortal. The gun type will directly turn into a gun god, and the warrior will turn into a land god. Of course, it can only be understood once. Only the hidden masters can master it twice because of their professional core skills. Of course, this is just my own idea. It's best if I can give the author some reference. It's okay if it doesn't work. Just write it according to your own ideas. There are few novels that fascinate me so much. Although I basically don't vote for monthly votes, it's mainly because I vote for one book, and the other people combined don't have as many votes as me. I'm afraid I'll be screwed if I don't vote for that book

After reading a few chapters, I used the mouse and keyboard to tell me about the realism. Game skills can be brought into reality, what about the cannon fodder of 60 or 70 people who haven't discovered this after playing for a year? The skills that the protagonist gets as soon as he enters the game are immediately used subconsciously! Liu Qiang committed murder maliciously, and the authorities basically let it go and said there was no evidence. Activation codes are distributed randomly, but a large number of cannon fodder are recruited over there to play. Is this random? The official should know this and ignore it There are so many loopholes that it becomes unbearable after just reading a few chapters.

You can use skills to place flags and poles, and call beggars to summon a few beggars. (As for what level you can get, it depends purely on luck and the development of the area. Master group fights. Skills, swarm up, there are several single-target skills according to individual differences), and can also be used to occupy the territory to collect protection fees (there are other beggars who come to challenge within a certain period of time), the Shenhou Hall is a wine beggar, the Spirit Snake Hall is a medicine beggar, the Caisheng Hall is a Zhe Xianren, and There are the Baixi Hall and the Law Enforcement Hall that have become extinct. The Baixi Hall is a magician who is proficient in all kinds of tricks and acrobatics, both real and fake. There are also illusions and hypnosis (mostly in the hands of the Caisheng Hall for them to pretend to be gods and ghosts), smoke making, flying knives, and fire. Ball Technique, Bone Shrinking Technique, Rat Gathering Technique, Belly Fire Technique, Smoke and Mist Breathing Technique, Belly Sword Breathing Technique, Fire Escape Technique, Earth Escape Technique, Bricks to Mud Technique, Dust and Sand Technique, Immortal Rope (basically just a trick to temporarily bind people, the real magic that can reach the sky has long been lost). It doesn't matter if you can't enter the city after the town's reputation is over. As long as you are ruthless enough, special event reputation will be opened. After gaining reputation in the world, hidden locations will be opened. There is the lowest Hanako's Nest, which can provide a hodgepodge like a pot and a safe place. There are also activities such as gambling, various gossip exchanges, manpower recruitment and other activities. A standard room-level business office is similar to a normal inn, where people of all kinds come and go, real information and items are exchanged, and tasks are released. The luxurious Jiefan Building and Shenxian Mansion offer top-notch accommodation conditions. There is also a one-stop shop for eating, drinking and having fun, Wuyou Cave and Ghost Fan Tower. A night boat that provides various secret transportation services, Xiaoyao Ma. There are ghost markets that provide services for selling and selling stolen goods, as well as the higher-end cities of Shanhai and Hai. There are auctions of rare treasures of unknown origin and various skilled craftsmen provide various customized services. After reaching a certain level, you can also practice spells. Ziwu The evil body worships the evil method of three deficiencies, a broken knife, half a piece of grain sour cake, and a mud bowl of muddy herbal soup. Before going into battle, give the enemy a triple curse, highlight one, cut my flesh, break your bones, I endure hardship, you suffer, I drink wine, you accompany me to drunkenness

The most wrong thing about this book is that it makes the players too weak. In reality, no one is causing trouble, and they are under official surveillance. Everything is calm. To be honest, if I were a player of this game. After reaching level 30, I would be stupid if I didn't go to others to get some money to spend. You are so awesome, do you still need to sell equipment in the game for money? Where are your martial arts skills and magic powers? Coupled with your improved physical fitness, you are equivalent to being invincible in a city. To be honest, if I want to be so awesome, I think it would be difficult to do so in rural areas or barren mountains. But in the city, except for a bunch of people aiming sniper rifles at a long distance without blind spots, or drones bombing you directly, there is nothing to be afraid of. With so many people in the city, you can detect any slight disturbance. If you can't fight, just run away. With this ability, there is no way you can survive. According to normal rules, it is impossible for someone to have the ability and still work hard to make money. What you said about the physics department is of no use in reality. Players are all under supervision, which directly kills the fun. Since it's useless to learn spells, why are you still playing this game!

I have read this author's previous books. He especially likes to use voting to delay the plot. When he can no longer continue writing, he deliberately uses several disgusting options and a normal option for readers to choose. Generally speaking, there are four options, and two of them choose the kind that directly destroys the plot. I appeal to everyone not to be fooled

I designed an almost invincible boss. This boss made an oath to the protagonist, telling him that he must come back to see him when he becomes an immortal. The protagonist prepares to surround and kill this boss. A large part of the plot revolves around how to prepare to fight this boss. Later, when a skill is exploded, he can directly The skill exempted from the oath, the protagonist used the skill directly in order to get some loot. This skill entered a one-year cooldown. The protagonist had no choice but to go back and fight the invincible boss. The protagonist defeated the boss, but all the characters who appeared in the early stage were killed. The plot was too abstract.

I was also convinced. The protagonist was a game master, but he behaved as if he had never played the game. He carefully chose a sewer profession. I also knew that this thing would be strong in the later stage, but this was from a God's perspective, but the protagonist was poor and had no power. After joining other people's forces, I still want to have sex for free. I chose a profession that requires a huge amount of resources. Once the resources are exhausted, the level will automatically drop. Even if I become an immortal, I still have to find a secret realm to live in. There are a lot of professional features and none of them increase combat effectiveness. Is this garbage profession something that normal people can choose? You said before that you should follow the version and not go against the designer, but the designer flushed this profession down the sewer, and you had to dig up the ground and jump into the cesspool to choose it. And you said you didn't play the summoner. When you chose it, you didn't choose 3, and you could choose a flying pet from multiple summoning slots for reconnaissance. But in the end, you chose one and ignored the mission. How dare you say that you have rich game experience?

Question, I just saw that the protagonist can use body skills at level one, so none of the advanced players in the beginning discovered that they can use the game's abilities?

The limitations of using devices such as keyboard, mouse and computer to write online game articles are too serious. Many of the same situations are normal when put into a holographic virtual device, but cannot be done on a computer, such as playing a complex combo in an instant. This game should be in the first person (because of the details such as the location of attacking monsters and the angle of chopping wood, it can be seen that this game should be a game in which the mouse controls the field of view and the left button interacts with the attack). The movement control should be WASD. Okay, so the current situation is that under this framework, the number of skills of the protagonist cannot be too many. In reality, there is a PC game dark and darker (hereinafter referred to as dad) with a low background of Dungeons and Dragons that meets both the above conditions. In this game, he can only release two active skills at the same time, occupying the Q and E of the keyboard. Then for more spells of the caster profession, you can select a spell by long pressing Q or E, then replace the current selection wheel, and then click the corresponding button to release. Of course, many other buttons can be bound, but this is not a long-term solution. Many buttons are not suitable for people's regular holding habits, because the left hand should be placed on the WASD, which controls the character's actions. In addition to the above problems, there are many other factors, such as a sudden power outage during a life-or-death duel... A certain key bearing on the keyboard suddenly failed, a broken mouse, and other equipment problems, and your opponent may really be able to pull the switch on your home appliance while you are not paying attention and kill you. . . The last book made me feel that it was a full-time master. I felt that even using the mouse on it was not enough. But since the book was written very early, there is nothing to criticize. But I read this book 24 years ago, so why do I still insist on the keyboard and mouse? Is there any foreshadowing that will be echoed later? (Tell me if you see the later part, don't be afraid of spoilers.)

My biggest regret is that the two books, Absolute Death Game and Arcade of Death, were so badly finished. The others were a little better. I hope this time the book will have a better story.

When I read Chapter 39, it didn't quite suit me. Let me share my thoughts after reading this. The introduction is really baffling and not very relevant. A good friend died at the beginning. This design is a bit weird, but I can still understand it. What makes me speechless is that the protagonist, as a professional player, got an activation code sent by an enemy, and opened it directly with a friend without doing any information research, and the friend gave it to him. Thai pants are hot! ! ! The performance in the game later did not reveal the level of a professional player. There are too many career settings. If there are too many settings, some basic rationality needs to be considered.

Playing games with 1060 and ultra-high resolution will seem too strange in 2024.

The logic doesn't make sense and the settings are full of bugs. How do you keep reading?

I subscribed to the eighth volume and then gave up. It happened that AI became popular and you started to use hydrology, right? You couldn't do it in the past, but suddenly it was updated steadily every day, but the content was all parallel imports, including the names and origins of the eight bosses, the generals under their command, and what skills each had; who was coming on the battlefield, and write down the war scenes (xx troops fired, xx troops charged, xx mage troops used skills). What do you mean, it's not like I don't have bean bags, I want to watch you write these 🙂🙂🙂

Forget it is a bad ending, let go of those who framed me in the past, the more you write, the more useless you become.

This book is a half-dharma for ordinary people to read online. It is a swordsman and a divine general.

Killing all your teammates and friends for no reason is just a bad move.

Such a great game can only be played while sitting in front of the computer. Isn't this setting a bit lame?