Immortal Father

After the day's practice, Li Changshou stretched out and walked out of his residence, taking advantage of the leisurely time he had just entered to relax. Cultivation as an immortal requires a balance between work and rest. Although he only practiced for less than an hour today, he fell asleep. Finding an excellent viewing location among the many peaks in the back mountain of Wanyun Temple, Li Pingan lay on a boulder, looked up at the sky, and quietly thought about life. I always feel like this experience is like a dream. I thought he was traveling through the world of immortality, but the protagonist's aura was close to him. When he entered the immortal sect, he accidentally discovered a peerless talent. He alerted the bosses of all parties and was rushed to accept him as a disciple. But the reality is cruel. The elders of the sect responsible for testing his qualifications told Li Ping'an that he was not qualified for spiritual practice, and that he had practiced too late and had lost his Yuan Yang, making it difficult for him to achieve success in practice. Although he was a little disappointed, with the encouragement of his father Li Dazhi, Li Pingan finally decided to cultivate immortality and realize his long-held wish. In order to encourage his son, Li Dazhi, who signed up with Li Ping'an, was also forced to take a talent test by Wan Yun Sect, and then tested out the unique talent in the world of immortality - the talent of the Golden Immortal. On that day, countless powerful people of Wan Yun Sect were alarmed. The leader and several reclusive elders, and even the founder of Wan Yun Sect who was half buried in the earth, came out for the first time, and they all rushed to accept Li Dazhi as their disciple. In the end, Li Dazhi became a disciple of Kongming Taoist, the founder of Wanyun Sect. As the saying goes, if one person achieves enlightenment, chickens and dogs ascend to heaven, Li Ping'an also got the glory of his father Li Dazhi's ambition. Not only did his master spend a hundred years cultivating, but he also opened the magical power of father-son connection for Li Dazhi. With his father's golden immortal talent, Li Ping'an's cultivation will continue to rise in the future even if he is lying flat. This is an unexpected surprise! In addition, Li Ping'an, who had just started, also became the acting deacon of Liuyunguan, responsible for managing all new disciples, and he had his own role in Wanyunmen. "I didn't expect that on earth, I have never enjoyed the taste of the second generation of officials and the second generation of rich people, but in the world of immortality, I have experienced the life of the second generation of immortals." Li Ping'an was extremely emotional: "This life is really nourishing, and I don't have to worry about food. Even if you are worried, you don't need to practice. Every day you lie down, your cultivation level will increase. You can also enjoy the convenience brought by your father, Li Dazhi, who is the founder of Wanyun Sect." The night sky in the world of immortality is much more beautiful than that on earth. The sky is full of bright stars and the pure white moon is a peerless beauty that Li Ping'an has never seen since he was born. The bright moonlight falls on the peaks like falling rain. The breeze in the mountains blows gently, clearing all thoughts in people's minds. The beautiful scene in front of you is probably no less impressive than the legendary fairyland. The comfortable environment also made Li Pingan feel sleepy, but he had no plans to go back and decided to sleep with the breeze tonight and the stars. It was slightly cool in the mountains in the early morning, and Li Ping'an was woken up by the cold, which brought an imperfect ending to last night's dream talk. Although Li Ping'an was not good at cultivation and had not yet reached the point where his energy could withstand the cold, it was a blessing in disguise and he got a chance to appreciate the sunrise. But his stomach started to growl midway, so Li Pingan walked down the mountain towards Liuyun Temple. The cafeteria of Liuyunguan also passes by the Purple Qi Land specially opened by the sect for new disciples. At this time, many disciples have already started practicing. Li Ping'an walked over with a calm face, feeling very happy when he heard "Senior Brother Li, good morning". If he hadn't been unable to get up, he would have had to walk here every day. When he first traveled through time, Li Ping'an still missed the convenient life in his hometown, but after experiencing it for a period of time at Wanyun Gate, what kind of earth was it? So unfamiliar!

After publishing the book, readers reminded me that in order to avoid embarrassment, I would like to share the time when the idea came into being Guigui conceived the prototype and started writing in early January. In late the same month, he reported it to the editor and took a screenshot. The file name in the screenshot was "I traveled through time." "My dad is the same", put forward the general character image, confirm the beginning content and individual fragmented ideas~ The burst of inspiration is a great thing for the creator, as is the collision of writing. Thank you for the reminder, but I didn't copy it, I really didn't copy it! Happy reading~

How can a good work not include idioms? I'll go first, let's get down to business

The previous post was deleted, but it doesn't matter anymore. I'll come back and check it out after a while just to confirm my judgment. There is indeed something wrong with the writing of this book, otherwise no matter how hard it is, it wouldn't be ranked as it is now I have actually only read Brother, and I started with anticipation and then half of it. Dao Li has been paying attention to Gui Gui probably because of his charisma (乐), but this book really has no market, no market, no depth, and it is not very deep. You said it's a fairy tale light comedy. I really can't see why I like it. Is it just that the father and son are urging each other to get married, and the male protagonist is surrounded by women one after another? After reading Inner Heaven's Run, I don't know about the female tyrants in the back, but the title is not much better. The conclusion is that this book now only reminds me of the harem How to put it, I still hope that Guigui's works will be popular, but there is really a big gap. At least this book is really unreadable. I can only say I wish Guigui good luck in his career.

Fairyfather's first fan event - Li Dazhi's happy life (1) "Dad, I told you, I don't want to go on a blind date!" "How old are you, and you are not married yet, is that ridiculous? Your father, I am still waiting to have a grandson!" In the highway rest area, Li Dazhi and Li Pingan were far away, each holding a bowl of noodles and eating. Li Dazhi is very melancholy. He is already over fifty and half of his body is buried in the ground. His wife also died of illness a few years ago. The only thing he is thinking about now is the life-long event of his only son, Li Ping'an. So, Li Dazhi secretly arranged a blind date for his son a few days ago, but Li Ping'an found out about it somehow and had a quarrel with him on the road. The two have been in a cold war until now. After a while, it was Li Dazhi who finally relaxed and made his attitude clear before Li Pingan was willing to walk back to the off-road vehicle with him. "Dad..." Li Ping'an suddenly looked to the right, frowning, "Why didn't that truck coming over there slow down?" Li Dazhi followed his son's gaze and frowned. He was about to say something when his eyes suddenly caught a glimpse of a human figure. That's a little girl! Without a moment's hesitation, Li Dazhi ran to the little girl and pushed her away, but he could not leave. "Dad!" The last voice in Li Dazhi's mind was his son's urgent cry. The last image in Li Dazhi's mind was his son's illuminated face. I don't know how long it took, but when Li Dazhi woke up from the darkness, he and his son had traveled to a different world. A world with immortals and gods that is similar to the earth. Relying on the experience of starting a business in his hometown, Li Dazhi successfully became a wealthy businessman and a great master after two years of hard work. Now even in another world, we are safe and don't have to worry about money. Li Dazhi thought proudly, but the subsequent development quickly exceeded his expectations. During the selection of the Immortal Sect, he participated with his son. Unfortunately, Li Ping'an, who he had high hopes for, did not show much talent. Instead, he, the father-in-law, was said by the immortals to have "great luck" and the appearance of a golden immortal, so he was forcibly abducted to Wanyun Sect, and he ignorantly worshiped the founder and became the "great uncle". A few years later, his cultivation gradually improved, and he became an immortal and lived for more than ten thousand years. His position within the sect has gradually become more secure, and almost everyone regards him as the next leader. After becoming an immortal, his dead heart began to beat again. Under the arrangement of his son, he met a female nun named Zu. Xiao Yue. Li Dazhi is not stupid. He can understand his son's thoughts and feel Xiao Yue's affection for him. The son did not stop him, and even took the initiative to help him renew his string, and the woman was also moved. So, does he have feelings for Xiao Yue? Yes. When he learned that Elder Xiao was seriously injured, he realized that he was already filled with anger. It turns out that I have regarded her as a family member. "Xiaoyue, I already have children, and I probably won't have any more children in the future... Do you think it's unfair?" In front of the floor-to-ceiling window, Li Dazhi turned his back to Xiao Yue and did not dare to raise his head. Probably angry. Li Dazhi thought. After all, Ping An is not Xiao Yue's biological son. Li Dazhi uses himself to save others, and feels that it is inevitable for anyone to overthink it. He had to do this. Even in the previous life, disputes over the issue of heir inheritance have been throughout human history, let alone the current fairy society. In fact, if he hardened his heart and explained it directly to Xiao Yue, Xiao Yue would most likely not refuse. Immortals have few children, and they may not have children for thousands or even thousands of years, and there are many immortals who do not want to have children. But Li Dazhi couldn't pass the test in his heart, so he had to ask clearly. Just to feel better. A touch of warm jade quietly held the big hand. Xiao Yue hugged Li Dazhi from behind, put her head on her shoulders, and spoke in a gentle tone. "Why did Uncle Master ask such a question? Didn't we talk about this before?" "I didn't want to give birth to an heir. Uncle Master knows everything about how Ping An treats me, so why is it unfair to say it?" "Or... In Uncle Master's eyes, I know "I, Xiao Yue, am actually a villain who covets my uncle's property and status." "No, I have never, never thought of Yue'er so much!" Li Dazhi turned around hurriedly and wanted to defend, but he happened to meet Xiao Yue's pursed lips. "Woo..." Li Dazhi's eyes widened and he waved his arms in mid-air. After a long time, the lips separated. Xiao Yue pressed Li Dazhi on the bed with a little force, her eyes were blurred and her breath was like blue. Li Dazhi's face was flushed, and he felt that Xiao Yue's body was filled with endless strength, and he could not get away no matter how hard he used eighteen martial arts. "Yue'er, don't, don't..." "Uncle, hold back your words and kiss me!"

How many girls have been included in the harem story, and the protagonists will soon become stallions 1. The author usually uses childhood sweethearts and junior sisters 2. The powerful female Queen Mother of the West It was okay up to this point, but later she started to stud. 3. The daughter of the Yellow Emperor, Nvba 4. Kong Xuan (in Brother's book, Kong Xuan belongs to the Taoist elder brother, but here he is given to the protagonist as a harem. It really disgusts me) A harem to be adopted 5. The protagonist's master Qing Su 6. Gui Lingling I suspect that the author doesn't know how to write about daily life if he doesn't write about a harem. I just know how to use the harem to write about daily life.

Can you write your articles well? Be more serious. Your writing style is getting worse and worse, and the content is getting less and less interesting. Don't always think about outputting your long comments. Internet articles are Internet articles. If you can't write novels like Beacon Fire, just focus on your own field. Don't you know what kind of shit Hun Xian is? Don't keep cheating your readers. The last few movies have those problems and comments. The theory is the same, involving adult pornographic jokes. You haven't written this kind of thing before, can you practice yourself? If you don't like it, you will fail, and you won't get the award. It's your turn to get the award, even if there is a shady story, it's your turn to get it. You are platinum, and your current level is hard to describe in one word. Look at how many more unfinished chapter reviews and discussions other people have than you. Try harder, don't be shot to death on the shore

After reading it for so long, you haven't gotten over Li Changshou yet. That's right, you are still writing about Li Changshou. Li Pingan? Just another Li Changshou.

Old Man Wanri has his own world, and was summoned to a new world by the will of a world that might die out. Moreover, both father and son traveled through time. The reason for traveling through time was that the world was in great danger, and a time traveler was needed to save the world. Two people came through time travel, and then one of them died directly? ? ? ? Inexplicably, since you want your son to die, why did you summon him? Isn't it good to just summon Li Dazhi? Wanri created the world and then created a fatal outcome, forcing the will of the world to summon the father and son to travel through each other. Since Wangri can already create and destroy the world and create the will of the world, he can't directly summon the time traveler? Furthermore, which world did Li Dazhi, Li Ping'an and his son come from this time? ? ? Are there many worlds with this father and son? ? If it doesn't succeed this time, will there be a third Li Dazhi and his son who will destroy the world another 400 times? ? Where did these father and son come from? ? ? Causality is shaped into a first-level rule? In other words, Li Ping'an in many worlds is bound to die? If not, wouldn't it be more reliable to go directly to find Youli Ping'an instead of waiting for the will of the world to call? ? The will of the world can sense the relationship between Li Ping'an and Wang Ri, thus determining that summoning Li Ping'an can increase the vitality of the world, and then summon Li Ping'an... Then why is it summoning Li Dazhi at the same time? For the sake of nausea? ? If the will of the world is ill and seeks medical treatment indiscriminately, and cannot sense the specialness of Li Ping'an, then the probability of being able to summon Li Ping'an four hundred times is too high, isn't it? ? Li Ping'an fought against Wangri for the great love and fairness in his heart. If he doubted the authenticity of the message Wangri conveyed, then there is nothing wrong with continuing to fight. Who knows whether what a world destroyer said is true or false, this is understandable. But if it is just for the ideal in your heart, a person who insists on seeking "if you want to die, you must die yourself" for all sentient beings, is it a bit far-fetched to fight against someone who clearly has the ability to destroy you easily, but gives up everything because you are his son, even if Li Dazhi, your biological father, is still here? ? Even in modern society, who can achieve detachment, freedom, and fairness? ? An ordinary person in modern times traveled through time and became the Emperor of Heaven, and suddenly became mentally enlightened and became a saint? ? The revealed mystery book had been anticipated in advance, but the entire setting was difficult to withstand scrutiny. The final ending or solution was just a forced explanation by adding more settings. The known conditions given in the book cannot form a closed loop.

The character has no personality, or his personality is extremely swinging. No growth potential. The plot is endless. Because the characters have no personality and no growth, the plot is basically forced by the author himself. The characters did not grow in the plot, and the plot had little relevance to the characters. Style, extremely screwy. I wanted to make a light comedy about Xianxia, ​​but because the plot was not comic and the characters were not comic, I could only use some vulgar words. Except for my senior brother, the above problems become more and more obvious in every book. This is also evidenced by the declining performance. I always thought that I wanted to transform myself, so I wanted to break through myself. But looking over the past few years, senior brother is basically at his peak.