Approaching Sainthood

After reading four chapters, to be honest, it's not great. I don't know what the author's plan is for the new book. As of now, it's a complete mess! Book friends who have read "Three Golden Chapters", did you get a preliminary understanding of the world in this book? It's not the kind of fragments with a hammer in one place and a mallet in the other. The content of the four chapters, the process of reading is "chaotic" in one word, it is too confusing. Structure, wording, information presentation, logic, etc., Etc., Do you think this is a book that has been prepared for a long time? People who believe will really be there in this life. This is the opening chapter. There are so many books in Qidian. Looking through it, which author with some qualifications writes the opening chapter like this? There are people praising the writing style in the comments section. I really want to know what is so good about the writing style of this four-chapter volume, which consists of ancient language, modern language, ancient and modern vocabulary, mixed use of chemical terms, and muddled logic. ? This would be a sure start for any new author or even a small or medium-sized author. I would not be surprised to say that it was written by a gunman wherever I dreamed. This month's monthly pass has not been given, because Chen Dong has been delaying the update and does not want to give it to him. I originally thought that selling newspapers and opening new books would be just a support, so I would give it to the newspaper sellers. Now I just feel that I really have to agree with the peers. There is nothing more to say, get out of my bookshelf, goodbye!

I've never commented on it before, I can't help it, it's really exaggerated, is this a book by a top master? I bit the bullet and read more than 20 chapters and really couldn't stand it anymore.

I seriously doubt that it was created by AI, and I can't understand the plot. I understand the author's idea of ​​changing the style, but it's really hard for the local readers to follow without thinking.

At present, the writing style and logic are really average, there is no inspiration, and the mediocre beginning is disappointing. It is no longer what it used to be.

To be honest, I'm a little disappointed. The updates are so impressive, both in terms of attitude and quality. I can't believe that after two years of hard work, the update attitude turned out to be like this after my comeback.

I came here for a great person, but at first glance it was not attractive at all, it was too strange.

After collecting the coins and pendants, goodbye

The opening chapter is seriously inconsistent with the ability to sell newspapers 🤔

Please please🙏🏻

I've read two chapters and it's a bit of a brainstorm. I want to keep reading and store my brain here.

Four pictures can also be refined. How should I arrange 24 pictures?

I'm really convinced. Why do you want to delete my comment when I say it's short? Please give me an explanation.

How come this introduction smells like a hero😓

The latest chapter is very well written, and it is getting better. Chapter 23 is so well written, and it is getting better.

How to say it? Inspiration ran out. The output of a novel is limited. The pressure on an author is indeed great.

It's so well written, and it deserves the name of a popular young man! 🙂

The novel is very good, with novel ideas, writing style, depth and logic. Looking forward to the follow-up and looking forward to it becoming a masterpiece.

Since Sun was a student, he would definitely have seen such a big movement when Xueyi came to see Gu. Even if he didn't know that spiritual birds could talk, he would still be able to think of sending messages. If Sun dies, it will be twice. Every time the protagonist gets the news, something goes wrong. If not all the people in the prosecutor's office are mentally retarded, the protagonist will probably be exposed. See how it works by selling newspapers, or just ignore all the book friends as if they are retarded.

Thirty is not ten thousand. Thirty words are still a welcome message. It's a chicken-feather book.

Got run over by the newspaper cart again

1. There is too little space on health care 2. Is it similar to the Tang Dynasty, but is water transport from the Qing Dynasty? 3. Is the owner of the mountain a woman? 4 A bird that can communicate, did the heart-warming grandfather appear? 5 Zoroastrianism, does it mean that the continent has entered the Lesser Cambrian, similar to the earth today. 6 Spirit Fruit, does it mean that you can cultivate immortality? 7 Linsheng, does it mean that there are saints on this continent. Or a saint comes out of Lin'an. Was the previous book also written in Lin'an, and was the author from Lin'an District? .

Could you please stop copying Da Feng and write it in front of the watchman? I'm speechless.

This building will record the number of days I have quit smoking.

After two years of silence, a new chapter begins. I have read it today, leaving traces as proof. Let's see who can come to the saint today.

Already helped the protagonist cultivate a ham

The protagonist is a suspect, who gets all the stolen goods, and then pretends to have amnesia. His ancestor is a clan, and then others let the protagonist go, and then he enters the secret service agency and starts investigating the case. Is this the platinum level? The beginning is too intellectual.

The following is the reference content. "I have been typing and saving manuscripts for the past two days without reading the comments. I just noticed this. Everyone stopped for a while. This is because the operation announcement was a bit ambiguous and was misunderstood by everyone. I have criticized and educated internally, and this time it was removed from operation. Let's just forget about it. Male and female readers who read my books are all my fans. I will treat every reader equally and will not give up any reader." After all, I am not a writer, so it may be inappropriate. Selling newspapers can change it 🌹

It's been a long time, so whether the management infiltrated the bad guys or found someone to blame and test everyone's attitude, the author came out to express his position? Isn't it that everyone is anxious that the author forgot about the harem in order to adapt it? If he comes out to say a sentence, is it possible that he still wants to eat both sides and wants to read the harem at the same time? With the support of readers and the desire to adapt movies and TV series, do you treat readers like leeks, or do you look down on Qidian's publicity and promotion, as well as your own writing power? Do you want to rely on the black and red traffic to get out of the circle and attract attention? People nowadays are not that stupid or patient. Don't steal the chicken but lose the rice. If you ask me, if you are still a man and have some sense of responsibility, don't be afraid of doing it. If you are afraid, don't do it. If you talk openly about your plans, you will definitely have followers.

Will come back when I see it

Originally, everyone's attention was focused here at first, first Heshou and Squid, and then Ji Yue and the Golden Alliance. Everyone was too lazy to look at you. Linsheng Meimei disappeared. To put it bluntly, this is a commonplace issue of male and female rights. Compared with the other two, it is not exciting enough. Bad news: There is no traffic, viewers, funders, and officials are too lazy to care about this place Good news: Escaped