The First Sword of Earth

Come on, author Don't tire yourself too much and take good rest. Dijian is always chasing you, and so is your senior brother, but please try to move faster. It's too fast to wait like this, but I will always support you. Both books are double-booked. I hope that while senior brother will gain fame and wealth, he will not let Dijian finish, but I am looking forward to a good ending! 😃😃😃🌹

They say the ending is poisonous, and the early and middle stages of the game are filled with fairy grass. I thought I would just focus on the early and middle stages, but in the end the poison wore off. The first thirty or forty chapters are not very good either. They can only be said to be average. As a result, the protagonist becomes exposed to the poisonous points of society one after another. In those battles, the author deliberately didn't stun the villain and then almost kill him, deliberately didn't let the protagonist use a sword to weaken the combat effectiveness, and deliberately let the senior sister be merciful and let the villain go. Anyway, the explanation can be explained, but it is too blunt. Let's not talk about these for now. The appearance of my junior sister really made me give up. This organization is both a pyramid scheme and a gangster. As a middle-level and high-level employee, the junior sister will definitely go to jail even if she is not aware of it for a moment. What's more, I don't believe she doesn't know? Let's just say that she knew there were unspoken rules, but the people at the bottom of the organization would resort to swindling and even borrowing loan sharks in order to pay expensive membership fees. How could she not know that? But she was so cold-blooded for her own sake. This cannot be explained by being deceived at a young age or being too tempted by cultivation. Which temptation in modern society is not great? She is simply stupid, bad, and morally questionable. Also, the description of the mistress is really awkward. Either you portray her as a loving mother or as a selfless public servant. As a result, on the one hand, the protagonist used the words of the protagonist to complain that she thinks publicity is more important than selfishness. On the other hand, the behavior of the master's wife is actually to protect her daughter. She is neither impartial enough nor private enough. Congratulations to the author for successfully portraying a selfish and powerful figure - the master's wife. And such a character actually appeared as a national representative in the early stages of the book. Are you in a black country? And the junior sister's organization also turned a blind eye to the facts of the junior sister's crime. Not only did they not follow the rule that public officials cannot contact cases related to immediate relatives, but they also defended it one by one. Are you sure this is not satirical literature? Finally, the main character was really hard for me to understand. The little junior sister is your master's daughter. You should indeed protect her, but only if it is allowed by the law. There are a lot of righteous people in the front, saying that they must abide by the law. For this reason, they spared the villain several times and almost got killed. What happened? Can relatives flout the law when it is their turn? Although the protagonist does not have any obvious actions, if you look at the protagonist's psychological activities, it is simply the best embodiment of the relationship between relatives and "cultivating immortality is to protect your relatives and take care of your laws". It's not that you can't have this kind of thinking, but at least it's consistent. You have one thing in front of you and another in the back. It's simply a disconnect. And what I don't understand the most is why the protagonist feels sorry for his junior sister. How many hours have you been staying with her? You protect him because of your teacher's kindness, so if you feel sorry for her, do you still love her? According to this logic, shouldn't you feel more sorry for your wife? Anyway, neither of them are good people, and the junior sister committed a crime. You, Aiwu and Wu, can empathize with a prisoner who has been there for less than a few hours, and you are also drunk.

I'm a troll. I'm here to criticize the author. Bah, you little Peppa Pig, you didn't pay attention to the movie and secretly coded, that's too much. I don't even have time to watch it. Remember to tell me if Thanos is dead after watching it, otherwise I will still blame you. Bah, spit.

If you want to play a small role, you can reply on this page. I will check it regularly and use it when there are more small roles in the book~ Two notes: First, each supporting character in this building can only occupy one floor. Those who occupy consecutive floors will be deleted~ Secondly, the character design does not need to be too detailed. It can only be described in a few hundred words. The author should be given a little room to play and integrate into the story~ Thank you for your continued support. I hope you all have a good reading experience with this book~

This book is poisonous. I will reward you with a reward of 10,000 yuan for detoxification 😭😭

If you get Liangyi, it is recommended to consider converting it into the lunar sun, combining the starting and ending of the seven stars, and becoming Ziwei itself, taking the route of regenerating the surrounding sky and being protected by Xuanji, or converting it into the image of the Huntian, with seven stars moving in the sky, mountains and rivers, and holding the body like a chicken.

I present five of them, and I hope the author will maintain his integrity and write better and better.

First of all, when these people proposed this idea, they had no experience of thinking. Even if they did, they were very few. Why do you say that? Because if you think about it a little carefully you can understand why the protagonist (the author) does what he does. First point, the lethality of early monks is roughly equivalent to more than controlled knives and less than firearms. Whether it is controlling knives or firearms, the state must strictly control them, and the same goes for Taoism. As for why supervision is necessary, normal people know it, so I won't elaborate on it here. (If you really don't understand, please consult the state) As for why the protagonist can practice Taoism, let's continue the first point. Soon after the spiritual energy was revived, the monastic community contacted the country and established the legal monastic status of the monastic community through negotiations. In layman's terms, the protagonist obtains a monastic license. The second point, which is also an issue that many people struggle with, is fairness. Many people think that it is selfish for the protagonist to practice Taoism by himself but not to let ordinary people practice. This idea shows that the way these people think about problems is quite immature - just like those extreme political organizations (such as extreme environmentalists, extreme feminism, extreme people of color rights protection associations, etc.), They only look at the appearance of one thing. What we should pay attention to is, where do these Taoist practices come from? In the final analysis, they were inherited by all the disciples after the spiritual energy was cut off, and they were passed down through countless hardships. And have ordinary people contributed to the inheritance of these exercises? Of course not. Then, when the spiritual energy comes to be revived, as ordinary people who have not made any contribution to the inheritance of Taoism, what qualifications do they have to practice Taoism? Similarly, the so-called "Holy Fire One" stole the Daozang of his master to allow ordinary people to practice Taoism. I dare to ask him if he has ever thought that no matter how hard you work, you will get something in return. Only those who pay will be rewarded. People in the Taoist sect have worked hard for thousands of years in exchange for spiritual energy to revive the world. How can ordinary people who have made no contribution enjoy the same treatment? Dare I ask, is this fair? The third point that needs to be corrected is that the country did not completely prohibit ordinary people from practicing. Later, it also promoted universal exercises for all people to practice. Therefore, the protagonist's approach is more like a kind of protection to prevent ordinary people from practicing the exercises indiscriminately due to lack of knowledge and going crazy and causing social instability. The fourth point,... The administrator can add some skills 😁

"Post on the book review activity of stepping on the building", this is a post on the building stepping on the building, come here to step on the building

Wow! There is actually a recommendation. I am one of the people who came to read this book very early. I came here to support it. Please do your best! Congratulations on your first order! ! ! 🌹