All My Projections Have Sacred Spirit Roots

Your thinking was still ten years ago 🙂, and there is no big ship that can carry you in the new era.

Let me talk about my feelings after seeing it now: First, the protagonist has no talent, no strength, no character, and relies solely on Goldfinger. Apart from the monthly subsistence allowance (given by Goldfinger), he does not work hard (after inheriting the talent of the clone), and he only abuses the puppets (there is no risk, if you don't beat someone who is stronger than yourself, you will give up) Second, Goldfinger is a brainless subsistence allowance, which does not give the protagonist insights, but only realm. Without Goldfinger, the protagonist is really nothing. Third, the plot has no scalability. Except for the golden finger once a month, there seems to be no middle plot. It skips directly to the next month and continues to receive the subsistence allowance. It is not interesting

As expected of a ten-year veteran author of online articles👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻The books he wrote still have the flavor of those days. After reading a few chapters, I feel ten years younger 🙂

It was pretty good at first, but then I saw that the main character had several projections, and his cultivation was not as good as that of his high school classmates. I was quite speechless. Why don't you just change the main character?

This protagonist is childish and mentally retarded. With so many projections, his level is still no better than that of his classmates. On the contrary, his classmate is more like the protagonist, resourceful and considerate of the protagonist and another classmate. The white crane in the sky! How can this great god write such a retarded novel, even the dialogue in it is retarded

How did this author reach level 5? Eighty percent of the new authors who started out could beat him eight times.

Recommended by the editor, what editor, killed it. . .

To summarize the plot of the first ten chapters: What, man and sword become one? I was trembling innately, and passers-by were shocked. 🤔Is this the standard a veteran author should have?

After reading Chapter 16, I don't really believe that this book will become a hit. A bit mentally retarded writing style

1. The protagonist is really naive. He is obviously an ordinary person and doesn't understand anything. He has a golden finger and can change his destiny. However, his character is not enough and his high-profile is not restrained. He is really like a nouveau riche. In other books, he is a standard supporting villain, but he is hacked to death by the protagonist. ! 3. Growth path, different worlds or conflicts between various sects, we should cherish ourselves. The real world is already an interstellar federation, and various martial arts are blended together. How can there be a different world with a hundred swords ringing that is not available in the real world? What, is there someone in another world with extraordinary talents? The proportion of geniuses based on population base is also higher in the real world. A higher world level? It can't be involved at such a low level, right? Only by refining Qi without any damage can one make a hundred bangs into a gang... It's really a stretch, I can't complain. It takes decades to refine Qi. It's better not to practice if a hundred bangs turn into a gang. 4. High school teachers have acquired peak talents, and principals have innate talents. Are they qualified to teach people? This kind of interstellar federation has been around for hundreds of years, and the founding of the People's Republic of China has only been less than a century old. Rural teachers all started with bachelor's degrees. In your interstellar federation, if you have any education, it is taught by immortal cultivators, right? How can you play an empire without this little background? Would you dare to call the teacher the day after tomorrow? Misleading people. 5. Is it not difficult for children of high-level people in society, not to mention very high-level people, rich people in small cities, not to mention millions of education funds a year for their children? There are only about ten innates in one middle school... Can the pattern be enlarged? 6. The writing is not excellent, a bit white. It is completely unnecessary to write about sisters, cousins, aunts, classmates, etc. Keep it simple, it will look disgusting if it is written too much, and the routine is too old. I vomited after eating too much watermelon