A Wizard's Journey Begins with Occlumency

The protagonist is an attractor. He can find him in any trouble. He socializes when he has nothing to do. He attracts the hatred of the vice-president of a novice organization. When he works in the laboratory to make money, he can meet someone who steals the experimental results. The three-ring wizard targets the results that are obviously his own and wants to share 30% of the people who steal the results. If he rents the laboratory for half a year, he has to sell two lives to the wizard. The poisonous spots are densely packed.

The character of the protagonist is really awkward. Especially like the kind of boy who was pampered and grew up in a remote mountainous area and ran to the city. She always likes to be on the side, with that kind of reserved yet sensitive and fragile character. And there is also a very absurd sense of being a poor man trying to pretend to be 13. This is a hard thing to say, but other than this adjective, I really can't describe the protagonist's weird feeling of being a poor kid who wants to be decent. There is also a weird and rational description of the love story of a licking-dog academic. 😭You can't say this book is outdated, nor can you say how white it is, but it makes me feel uncomfortable just looking at it. It's like the children of Ethiopian middle school teachers who ran away to Europe. He is reckless but can't bear to lose face. He is obviously poor but has an arrogance that others cannot understand. When it comes to falling in love, you have to hold on to it if you want it, but if you say no, a lot of time, money, and energy will be spent on that golden retriever. It can only be said that this is a rhapsody for a fragile and sensitive person with low self-esteem.

I was quite speechless at the beginning. After traveling for so long, I didn't draw the chance to draw cards. Are you waiting to give birth to a baby? What's even more speechless is that you waited until the qualification test to take the draw, and you said you were cramming. I said before that you will pass the third class, and you will definitely pass the fourth class, so what else are you taking? If you smoke it in public, aren't you afraid that a colorful light will flash in your eyes, and then the wizard will put it on the experimental platform? The writing is not good, and I don't know how to avoid the poisonous points.

A few poisonous points in the early stage. 1. I was the first to be promoted to apprentice in the early stage. I kept pretending and didn't get rewards, especially when my krypton gold system needed such rewards. I don't know why I've been pretending to be a pig. 2. I had just planned to keep growing, but was spoiled by a woman and went to a party. Because the woman was threatened at the party, I was forced to use all my wealth to buy weapons for self-defense. 3. There is a female troublemaker around me who neither drives away nor makes friends with. There are no good things and a lot of bad things.

I thought it was a scientific research article about wizards, but it turns out that the scientific research component is less than that of traditional wizard articles. With all the intrigues between people and society all day long, I felt that the author might as well write about officialdom!

The setting is good, but the writing is not good. The setting of this woman is really stupid and bad. I don't understand the purpose of setting this woman up. Her only purpose now is to hold back the protagonist. It does not help the protagonist at all. Then many people peek at him through him. Every time it causes conflicts, the author may think that if the protagonist is a bitch, he will not promote the plot, so he has to write a woman to hinder the protagonist.

At first, the heroine Green Tea was scolded a lot. I thought it was okay to have such a character. I jumped to the back and subscribed to a chapter to help the author. Later, I deliberately pretended to be a pig and the classic villain fell in love with the heroine. The plot caused conflicts. Although it was cliche, I pinched my nose and endured it. In the end, the patent was plagiarized and the plagiarizer was given 30% of the profit. I felt that the chapter I subscribed to was fed to the dog. Read the next chapter There is self-defense at the end of the recording, and the blind guess is that the plagiarism is not good, but the plagiarism is all to cause trouble for the protagonist. Are you too lazy to read it? This kind of book that relies entirely on the whole world and the protagonist to advance the plot is already ten years ago.

The existence of female supporting characters is a huge flaw. The protagonist that everyone loves to read: has the perseverance to pursue power, is not addicted to women, is calm and composed, and has plans for the future. The protagonist of this book + female supporting role = Selan who says that she is actually a nanny. She wants to study but is always interrupted by others (or because of the female supporting role). She should be a strong person but becomes a timid idiot (pretending to be a pig to eat the pig in the tiger). The wizard's astronomical text becomes a campus love story.

The male protagonist has traveled through time and is not a brat. He clearly knows that the female protagonist is approaching him to take advantage of him, but he also realizes that he has gotten himself into trouble, and then he becomes frustrated. You have to say stay away, but actually stick to it fiercely. Was the male protagonist in need of women before time travel? The most important thing now is not to quickly improve your strength? Is it for women? It's better to be a little brat. There are many ways to create conflict between the protagonists, but you have to choose the most disgusting one. Otherwise, don't give the male protagonist a character like this. He is obviously this kind of rational and calm character, but he does all the hot-headed things. Everything is in one place, so it is inevitable to take care of it. The male protagonist traveled back in time and lived for only a year before coming to the Wizarding Continent. Why, the female protagonist also traveled through the earth? After analyzing the fact that the female protagonist paired up with the male protagonist was useless and did not cause trouble, it is interesting that the male protagonist resolutely jumped into this pit. This is a campus romance novel disguised as wizard literature. The male protagonist here has no backing, no background, and no strength, but, alas, he is just bullshit. Just dare to get into trouble for a girl. Just not afraid of death.

It's extremely poisonous. I'm giving you two coins for commenting. I won't talk about the little poisons before. Let's go directly to Chapter 37. The protagonist's research results were plagiarized, and the research income was 37%. What did the author say? It said that this was money earned by others (the plagiarists) based on their skills. What's wrong with it? I just laughed. To put it simply, the protagonist's achievements were plagiarized by a student who was nothing (not even a teacher). The author said there was nothing wrong with it. He earned it based on his ability. It is worthy of you. It is highly toxic. Be careful.