I Become a Big Shot in Uncle Jiu's World

The author continues to maintain, come on, don't let my personal opinions affect your thinking. I will just talk about some of my current thoughts: I feel that these plots are a bit weak. Ayao's strength is the first in the dungeon, even far surpassing the original protagonist, Master Mao, so what's the solution? The problem seems to be a matter of course, and even some small episodes become boring and even troublesome; emotionally, because Master Mao is not Master Ninth Uncle, the two people lack the kind of playful master-disciple intimacy and interaction, and A Yao is more utilitarian when showing kindness to Master Mao. Yao's forbearance when helping in the early stage, but later the villagers regretted it and made a hasty move. He saved the villagers here and had just detoxified them. Later, when the blood demon came out, the villagers immediately turned against Fu Xitang and distrusted Fu Xitang. It felt a bit like cannon fodder NPC, which made people feel sick, but to put it bluntly, at that time, it was uncomfortable The ignorant thoughts and confused beliefs of the people of the Dai country were the epitome of that time. However, after the protagonist came, they should not only be ignorant. At least their next generation will be the backbone of a new era... That is the truly meritorious thing. However, the protagonist brushed the filial piety value. Forget it, those things were too sensitive to write. Actually, I still feel that I am missing a decent opponent, and the invincible novel will probably be a little weak in the middle and later stages...

The writing is pretty good and quite palatable.

Elf Girl .

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I don't know if the person who supported you in your comment in 2022 is still there. Now in 2023, I have been following your book for more than half a year. Basically, I gave you my monthly ticket every time. During this period, sometimes I still complain when I see the bad points, but I still hope that you can do more and keep going until you complete it. Don't be a eunuch!

How can the heroine not have a cover?

Zhuzhu looks like this.

After watching it for the third time, I suddenly found a few unreasonable things. First, Mao Shanming, in the movie, Uncle Jiu calls him Taoist brother, so he is not a senior fellow apprentice, (Taoist brother: fellow Taoists call brother Taoist brother, an honorific title) Secondly, Tingting is not that capable. You are forcing illogicality for the sake of the plot, which is unethical. Third, Yihongyuan cannot be a fox den. Dear, in the end of the Dharma era, Simu met one in the deep mountains and old forests. He stole the corpse in order to practice, which shows how difficult the world is. (It should be for this reason. Is it possible that it becomes a hmm?) Fourthly, you can still communicate with God. I'm afraid you are not stupid, but it is not inviting God, it is possession. The Art of Inviting God The book is pretty good, but it has many shortcomings that affect the senses.

Show~ I've never seen Uncle Jiu's wool, this time it's a real win-win. Filial piety system! If the male protagonist's final achievement is 9, then in order to get enough wool, he must push Uncle Jiu to at least 8...

The updates are not enough, Xiaozhuo hasn't been out for a long time,

In fact, Zhou Huimin and Zhang Min in "The Way of the Demon" are also good! 🙂🙂🙂🙂

It was okay in the early stage, but it was basically an unlimited streaming mode in the later stage, and those movies were relatively niche movies, and they didn't say what the movie was. It was just that a few protagonists suddenly appeared and they needed the support of the protagonist. At the same time, the later system is of no use, and there seems to be no difference in cultivation. I have to say that I looked a little confused.

It's too procrastinating. It takes more than 200 chapters to exchange a golden finger for a skill that can only be entered by martial arts and a pistol with unlimited ammunition. It's not that exciting. If you don't know the plot, the other supporting characters know it. If you know it, some plots can't show the excitement of the prophet. In short, the story is very bland.

Seriously, author, don't forget those supporting characters in the early stages. These are important characters in the main world. People like Ren Tingting and Yizhuang can write well. It's not like writing a world and forgetting some people. It feels like a water plot. If you want to transfer from Maoshan to the heavens, really, you can refer to Zhang Dashuai of Laolong.

Before Chapter 73: The relationship between my son and daughter is not what I want After Chapter 73: Anyone who meets a girl will not refuse her (even if she is underage...) It is reasonable to suspect that the author has changed...

I'm such a good boy, am I so ruthless in management? Are there only 300 stickers left?

To be honest, author, the more you write, the less I can stand it. The more you write, the less interesting it becomes.

In the later period, it became less and less interesting. I felt that there were just various copies, monsters and upgrades, which were not interesting. The main story line felt distorted. I only saw Jieyou Shop and No. 8 Pawn Shop. To be honest, when No. 8 Pawn Shop came out, the sense of fragmentation was too heavy and I couldn't follow it at all. Good. I don't write about the Netherworld. I'm writing this. I saw the god in the pawn shop. It's so slow. I originally wanted to watch the protagonist step by step to become the master of the Netherworld. I didn't expect that it became increasingly difficult to watch in the later stages 😅😅😅

The Yihongyuan written at the beginning has a vixen in it, which is unreasonable. I remember that the vixen only appeared in Uncle Zombie. He was killed by Four Eyes in order to steal a corpse. The purpose of stealing a corpse should be to practice and increase his strength. It shows how difficult the world is. How could he open a brothel in a small town with such arrogance? Just like in another Qiu Sheng novel, he released hundreds of ghosts and invited his fellow disciples, but did not report them to the disciples.

Xiao Wenjun

Sister Xiaozhuo.

Evaluation of the protagonist: Diaosi, double standards, hypocrisy, selfishness, ugly appearance

I would like to ask, for those who say they don't watch many female protagonists, is it because there are more men? Or is it because female readers go to male channels to tell the truth? Because when I look at the homepage, I can't tell whether it's a boy or a girl.

😃 Additional refinement

Good looking

How many holes have you dug? (The only ones I remember are Six Brothers, A Quiet Place, and Ghost Hunting Company) I haven't read the rest yet. I guess I'm stuck with the endless dungeons and infinite streaming 🤔

Why are you still updating? It's been so long.

A very nice book, fully nailed, even faster

I remember you were called Sister Baitikedeqi.