Starting as an Island Lord

As a Shennong, I feel I have an obligation to say a few words before I run away. First of all, I think the name should be "As a dragon king, I was reborn in another world and kept my name incognito for ten years. Then I suddenly started to pretend to be crooked. B+ I captured the princess inexplicably and then brought a group of younger brothers who suddenly appeared to recruit troops and go home to return to the throne and command the heroes to save the world." The key point should be to highlight the "sudden". The first poisonous point is that the starting setting is that the princess likes her directly, and then is assigned to the "Dragon King" next to her by the Duke's brother who has a strange overall view. It is really blunt. Then the plot progressed, and two younger brothers who grew up together as childhood sweethearts suddenly appeared. This was very poisonous to me. The pretense of finally escaping made me dig my toes into the ground. It's a bit of a foreshadowing for this kind of plot. Find a miserable old man on the side of the road to tell a tough plot, talk about the history of the two parties, and heighten the atmosphere. You can do this kind of plot again. Finally, I would like to commend this setting for paying to comment. It's amazing wisdom. Well, many people definitely want to comment and complain, but with this paid setting, sometimes forget it. And people like me, who have to complain, also contributed a wave of rice, which is really a win. However, it is recommended that the threshold be set higher. If you like the plot, you must be a full-booker. It doesn't matter the threshold. If you are poisoned, you will have to spend a lot of money to avoid lightning.

This book is really great because the title can be changed. If a toad wrote about the First Magical World War, then you can write about the Second Magical World War. If you change it, you will become popular. If you really become popular, just give me some starting coins. I don't have any other hobbies, it's just that the spiritual world is a bit empty.

The introduction seems interesting, but I don't know what the plot is like. Don't tell me about wizards and mages from the first to the ninth level. We are all good friends in the Knight Seed Breathing Technique I am quite interested in Western Fantasy, but most of them are basically re-skinned and immortalized. A bunch of exaggerated and incomprehensible words are renamed and it's another book.

I ordered more than 100 chapters directly, and now I have seen the VIP chapter. I would like to ask if you can stop adjusting the data. The kind of data you wrote makes me want to laugh. There are more than 60,000 people on the island. Directly recruit more than 20,000 full-time students? 400 Teachers? What a concept. There are more than 20,000 mage apprentices. Full time. I forgot how much the protagonist spent on training. I probably remember that I owed more than 2,000 Oggs. Calculated in 2000, ten years. An apprentice is worth 200 per year. 4 Million Oggs. Oh, elite education is different from civilian education. It's all about the attendance rate. Normally it only takes 2-3 years. To tell a joke, a certain university in China spent more than one billion to build a new branch. Construction started for a few years. Recruitment just started. Hope Primary School remembers that there was only one school in a hundred thousand. It's not full-time. Full-time means that a student must be at school except for eating, drinking, and defecating during holidays. This is an island blocked by sanctions. . . The lord's hall is made of stone, wood and rammed earth. A dock needs to be built at the same time. Building a navy requires factories. To build a mage school, keep everything simple. You will always need dormitories, school buildings, kitchens, and laboratories. I don't know how the more than 20,000 students can have textbooks for everyone for three months. How much industry does this require? Raw materials, building materials. But it's such a highly productive island. There are only over 60,000 people. It also includes the aborigines, with an annual financial income of 200 Og.

The protagonist retreated from the world for ten years, owed a large debt, and was treated as trash by others. Then the ten years were up, and he offended a duke and a powerful king in order to marry a princess? Please tell me what the protagonist's brain circuit is thinking?

See the previous one! Even a 50-year-old woman who has given birth to nine children will not let go 😰 666 I don't hate the harem, but this is too outrageous! There are so few farming activities! After only a few chapters, I started to brainlessly push around and get whatever I want 😅

A childhood sweetheart appears suddenly at the beginning, a ten-year apprentice or something. All are acceptable. Can you be more vague about getting rid of your territory construction. What is the concept of directly recruiting 22,000 full-time students? Can you say how many apprentices and even mages were trained in how many years? I subscribed to more than 100 chapters, but after reading chapter 96, I couldn't stand the rest of the chapters until chapter 166. I'm confused. Was Rome built in a day? Such a rush. Also build a navy. More than 100 ships are equipped with weapon systems, personnel, training, and logistics. How big is this and how many people can support it? This does not include the Army. This feels a bit like the richest man in the world supporting the whole country. And it is private property for the country to drive on. Are the national treasury and internal treasury the same concept? The goal is great. For the people at the bottom. Selfless dedication. There is no personal enjoyment at all. What about writing about saints? But this is an island with a fiscal surplus of only 200 yuan a year and a total population of more than 60,000. It is an island that only exports guano, and its coast is blocked by fishmen and blocked by the country. Oh, smuggling, give me a new route immediately. But for now, the main supplies delivered by big ships are food. How do you support so many unemployed people? There is no elderly and young population anymore? Well, the population structure is very healthy.

Judging from the title of this book, it should be Lord's Wen. I hope to return to the territory soon, see the various wonderful uses of magic in the territory, develop the territory well, and then compete for world domination. Don't write more than 100,000 words to cheat money and avoid danger outside. It's not like you'll never come out again after returning to your territory. You can write more later. Most readers who come in based on the title of the book want to see the development of the lords. Those who only want to see magic might as well read the previously written Mage Tongtian. The setting of this book is also very good. The mage is not as omnipotent as the previous book, so the focus should be on the various innovations of the protagonist's spells in the development of the territory. You can imitate the release of the witch and the Sword of Dawn. The combination of magic in the production of equipment and war weapons can widen the gap between your own territory and others' territories, and then you will have the strength to dominate the world.

Did the author eat concrete this morning? 50 meters long, 8 meters wide, waterline → deck (not counting draft) 10 meters high? Full load displacement 2800 tons? I slapped my butt and it felt like diarrhea. What data did you pull out? To put it simply, this design has two fatal problems: The proportions are seriously imbalanced: the ship is only 8 meters wide, but the height from the waterline to the deck is 10 meters. This "narrow and high" shape is like a city wall standing in the sea, and the ship will capsize in the slightest wind and waves. The data is contradictory: a displacement of 2,800 tons must be crammed into such a small hull. (Square coefficient > 1), or a draft of more than 9 meters is required, resulting in a height of nearly 20 meters for the entire ship! 50m long × 8m wide × 19m high? Tell me, is this a fucking boat? It's all conjecture! A normal 2,800-ton ship should have a length of 85-95 meters and a width of 14-16 meters. Okay 8, just pretend that you are in the magical world, then the ship you build will probably look like this. Do you think it has any aesthetic appeal?

One thing to say, this kind of lord article without personal power is okay. It may be because the author writes well. I hope the author will continue to do so🙂