Astartes of the Bear School

That's outrageous. At first, after reading a lot of comments, I thought that the demon hunter Lao Den was some kind of moral model, and at worst he was just like a master craftsman. Then took a look. The protagonist was obtained by him using the law of accident. At that time, the protagonist had just passed through. Using modern thinking, it is probably like, you have just traveled through time, and an old man said that you will be my apprentice from today on. Then he will starve you for three days and give you nine meals, and give you a sword that will make you bear a debt of 10 gold coins. Let you be cannon fodder. On the way, two people used you as an excuse to find Lao Deng. Stubble was killed by him, and then the protagonist killed Lao Deng, and then a lot of people said to the protagonist, Mother, that the protagonist should not kill the master, good guy, there is no way that someone would just seamlessly connect with him just after time travel, and then from then on, he would be a cannon fodder for Lao Deng, and then he would not be able to eat enough every day, and he would be saddled with more and more debts. What is even more frightening is that Lao Deng can still live for a hundred years. The most outrageous thing is that if Lao Deng treats the protagonist better, he should at least eat enough. This life of riding a horse is not as good as a life of bonded labor. How can you still be moved by the feeling of master and disciple? Moreover, the protagonist was accidentally given to Lao Deng as cargo, and he was not an apprentice of his own initiative. Why, it is outrageous that he could not resist even after being captured and made into a slave.

After the trial of green grass is the grace of renewal. It is the grace of freedom to let the protagonist escape from the slave life (the protagonist is stripped naked by farmers and used as a slave). Providing supplies to Jianmianjia and horses is a blessing of protection. Then teaching the Dharma Seal is the gift of teaching. Then the protagonist chopped off the master in order to gain the Virgin's heart? What a white-eyed wolf. If you were a protagonist with a "me-only" personality, it would be normal to kill your master and silence your pursuers, but the reason why the protagonist killed his master was actually because he killed two peasants (yes, the kind of peasants in the game The Witcher who spit and insult you). The protagonist of Our Lady is really unbearable. 🤔

It's normal for the killing of the mentor to be controversial at the beginning, because it was handled poorly. There is no need for readers who support or do not support each other to attack each other personally, it is simply because they were not written well. It is nothing more than the golden x-chapter idea commonly used in online novels. The opening creates a conflict and highlights the protagonist's character at the same time. There is no problem with the character who has the heart of a bodhisattva and uses thunderbolt methods. Even this character is lovable. The problem is the hypocrisy of the protagonist. This hypocrisy does not refer to the characters in the book, but to the readers. Why? Writing a million words on the Internet is considered a small amount. In such a large space, especially when the perspective is on the protagonist most of the time, it is very important for readers to get close to and like the protagonist. Readers who see a true villain or a hypocrite may not like such people in the real world. Why don't they dislike such protagonists? Because they are "sincere" to readers, and they do not play tricks on readers or pretend to readers. The problem with the killing of the mentor at the beginning of the book is that as an outsider and a person with a God's perspective and familiar with online discussions, the reader knows at a glance what the protagonist is going to do, and must break with the mentor who treats the protagonist as a tool. However, in order to find a high-sounding reason for the protagonist's own behavior, a moral high ground, an excuse to avenge the two farmers is forcibly inserted. Superfluous, why is it superfluous? Firstly, after describing the background of the discrimination against the demon hunters and the strange vision and bullying of the medieval villagers, the two farmers were forcibly inserted to find mentors to be the protagonists. After a few strokes, you said that the two of them specialized in upholding justice, so much so that it can make people cry with gratitude. The emotionless setting of the Bear School, which is emphasized in a large space, is somewhat contradictory when it comes to conflicting with the public and simply killing people. The plot seems blunt, which deepens the above point. But the most superfluous thing is the performance of the protagonist. There are many reasons for the protagonist to kill the mentor, and his "anger" can also be expressed for many reasons, which is more understood by readers. You can say that modern people's self-esteem cannot accept being treated like tools and slaves, or you can say that you don't like the three views of demon hunters, but you chose the most blunt and least convincing reason above - I took such a big threat and put in so much effort to kill the mentor to avenge the two farmers. The subsequent "revelation of true feelings" looked very ridiculous under the clear eyes of readers. The characters were created with too much force, and the performance was not directed at the characters in the book, but in front of the readers, which seemed very funny and annoying. It's the same sentence, it's okay for the protagonist to be anything, be it a villain or a hypocrite, it's okay to have a bodhisattva heart, and it's okay to use thunderbolt methods, but don't use lame excuses to play tricks on the readers. The readers know that they must kill the mentor, but the excuses they use are very abrupt and false, and the reasons for anger are hard for people to substitute. It's easy to be annoying to build a golden body with a moral stick just to deal with the readers, which is why the controversy is so big.

No, Astartes, more than thirty surgeries, they have nothing to do with beauty. Why do we have to add an Astartes, a tough guy with an average of more than two meters per capita? To be honest, except for the original body, everything else has nothing to do with beauty in my opinion.

A witcher implanted with a gene seed (and the seed also contains the fighting skills and knowledge of generations of predecessors), wearing plate armor, with infinite strength, and possessing a magic potion, and then was scared away by a 200-man medieval guard? What the hell is this? Afraid of imbalance in combat power, why do you want to connect the witcher with 40k? Is this comparable? Many of these selection ceremonies are much more dangerous than these 200 medieval guards!

When I read the comment section, I thought it was some shit, but it's actually surprisingly good. The mentor's cold-blooded ruthlessness has been foreshadowed for several chapters. Is there anything poisonous about the two farmers' reasoning? Because it is not only this incident that makes the protagonist betray, he is used as a tool and bait, and he is not enough to eat and is squeezed at the same time. It's just one more condition to take action. What's more, the farmer's incident made the master realize that the protagonist was in heaven but unexpectedly landed in hell (comparing modern and medieval times). I think the plot progressed quite well.

The scene at the beginning of the novel when he first rescued the child and rushed into the camp was actually very funny, but then his combat power immediately soared, and he directly killed more than 200 people head-on, becoming a hunter. This part was actually quite exciting. Then the protagonist first went to Sekiro to learn ninjutsu and Isshin-ryu, and then went to Bloodline to use his spiritual vision ability to kill a god. I returned to the wizarding world and underwent interstellar surgery*3. Instead of becoming stronger, all my intelligence and strength were sealed by the author. I went to a refugee camp and hung up for 30 chapters, and the two readers watched an indigenous performance together. In order to reflect the strength of the group, the author believes that any group of several people with a crossbow can control the battle situation better than the protagonist with future intelligence + spiritual vision. It will never miss the target. Even if twenty people hit one, the shooting route will not be blocked by teammates. It is worse than turning on self-aim. As for the description of the war that follows, the protagonist is a future warrior who can compete with Sekiro Ninja in speed and endurance. He is afraid of a scout team that relies on whistle blowing for communication. Actually, I quite liked the first part of this book. I don't know why. In the first chapter, I boasted about how smart and powerful the protagonist is. Starting from the refugee plot, he turned into a loser.

This novel is the same as the previous one. As I write it, I start to eat the book and start to fall into the author's self-movement. After entering the chapter of war refugees, he deliberately tied his hands and decided that the other party was pursuing a group of soldiers without any information. He participated in the anti-invasion war with enthusiasm. Then his brain was inexplicably silent. The emperor's genetic experience was cleared for ten thousand years. Because of his thousands of years of experience + his own army's internal affairs expertise + his knowledge and experience in modern society), personal force (several surgeries that have the greatest impact on force value have been completed), he is absolutely No. 1 In the entire camp in all aspects. Not to mention that you must take away the command and management rights. At the very least, you cannot follow orders during marches and management meetings.

The legendary demon hunter of the Bear School, accompanied by an Elu cat, is a traveler who is proficient in martial arts in various worlds. In the future, he will be called the Panda School🐶

The protagonist is very similar to the female protagonists in recent female protagonist dramas who have bad views. It's so hard to make excuses for yourself.