Astartes of the Bear School

The scene at the beginning of the novel when he first rescued the child and rushed into the camp was actually very funny, but then his combat power immediately soared, and he directly killed more than 200 people head-on, becoming a hunter. This part was actually quite exciting. Then the protagonist first went to Sekiro to learn ninjutsu and Isshin-ryu, and then went to Bloodline to use his spiritual vision ability to kill a god. I returned to the wizarding world and underwent interstellar surgery*3. Instead of becoming stronger, all my intelligence and strength were sealed by the author. I went to a refugee camp and hung up for 30 chapters, and the two readers watched an indigenous performance together. In order to reflect the strength of the group, the author believes that any group of several people with a crossbow can control the battle situation better than the protagonist with future intelligence + spiritual vision. It will never miss the target. Even if twenty people hit one, the shooting route will not be blocked by teammates. It is worse than turning on self-aim. As for the description of the war that follows, the protagonist is a future warrior who can compete with Sekiro Ninja in speed and endurance. He is afraid of a scout team that relies on whistle blowing for communication. Actually, I quite liked the first part of this book. I don't know why. In the first chapter, I boasted about how smart and powerful the protagonist is. Starting from the refugee plot, he turned into a loser.

I've been following it for a long time, and I feel that the author's writing is very confusing. Normally speaking, the wizarding world is the main world of the protagonist. The protagonist's power mainly comes from genetic enhancement. The main line should be to use the materials or power obtained from the world where the celestial spheres meet to conquer the main world. If he is an ordinary demon hunter, then I can understand that his progress in the overworld is very slow, but the protagonist is actually a Primaris Astartes. As a Primaris warrior, it is stupid to scheming in some irrelevant places, including the protagonist who believes that every time he returns and disappears, it is very important information. Someone who is interested may use this information to target the protagonist. The protagonist also carefully conceals his whereabouts. Why not kill a few of the beneficiaries of his own intelligence to scare the chickens and monkeys? Besides, I have been in the Witch Academy for so long. Not to mention the leadership of the academy, I don't even have much say, including the siege of the Ash Knights' station. I can obviously deal with the enemies by myself and even kill the leaders behind them, but I still find reasons to let the Knights solve it by themselves I understand that the author likes to play games, and is willing to write about his favorite games. Yes, but some worlds can be written, and some worlds have no effect at all, such as the world of blood, which basically does not bring effective improvement to the protagonist. It has been visited twice, wasting a lot of space, and it is still biased towards the later Nioh world (I have not watched it here). But I also know that this is a game world that is about the same intensity as the early Sekiro. What is the use of such a world? I read other book reviews and even fought back and forth with the minions, which has no effect other than the low word count and disgusting readers An Astartes has been writing for so long, how many guides have there been to the Wizarding Overworld? After traveling through so many different worlds, has your strength improved significantly? Please understand, you are writing about an Astartes with the status of a demon hunter, an absolute leader, not a lord who has to fight against feudal lords for more than ten chapters An Astartes is an absolute force, not just a monster, you can come and go. Equally equal, fight a swordsman for more than ten chapters The difference between games or novels and reality is that for all efforts, there will be rewards, and efforts and results are absolutely equivalent. Readers think that the protagonist has paid so much, but the relative efforts received are not equivalent at all. This is why everyone feels awkward or even disgusted

Can you please make it clear that even if the book is finished, the depressing and inexplicable plot arrangements of the past ten chapters (not that the plot arrangements are not in line with "common sense", but that they do not conform to the consistent foreshadowing and tone of the plot) are enough to make people feel poisonous. This book has not always been about abuse. Even the so-called "empathy with the unruly people" and "the mentor who killed the benefactor" in the early days have obvious foreshadowing and explanations, but now? What's more, these three or four days are still the catch-up period, raising the readers' anger and expectations again and again. The results are still waiting, still foreshadowing, and still detailing. Are you suffering from a literary youth syndrome, or do you think that readers can also appreciate your "good intentions" because you have already experienced the feeling of pleasure later? To put it bluntly, there is a problem with the rhythm now, and the readers are not buying it. If you think this is right, then continue to do it, but this book has already screened out many readers at the beginning. This is because the tone of the book is different from their black and white feelings and they only read cool articles. But do you still want to continue to screen because of your own intentional operations? Are you already financially free, have you bought a car or a house, or do you have children, a car, a house, marriage, and children without getting rich in gold coins?

It's time to end the battle and build up a force. The regent of Cintra then used Ciri's claim to eat all Nilfgaard. Don't run around alone. It's ridiculous that a space warrior can't unify a low-level planet in a year and start building a starship. There are more than 600 chapters and the main plot has basically not progressed. Is it possible that the author plans to write 20,000 chapters? According to the author's current pace, it will most likely be unfinished.

I originally wanted to watch it for two days but couldn't. I really like the kind of protagonist with high self-principles and high moral sense, Modo Modo. In fact, it is really rare to have this kind of moral sense that is not changed by the environment. It is not like doing as the Romans do when the general environment is rotten. The main thing is that the protagonist has the ability to stick to his own sense of morality, which is great, I like it very much.

In recent chapters, it is obvious that the author has really written the plot of The Witcher 3 game. The protagonist is pushed to the center of the situation by his choices along the way, the remnants of Cintra, the uprising of the Scoia'tael and the mob, the power of the warlocks' attention, the conspiracy surrounding the ancient blood of Ciri, the conspiracy of the kings, the ambition of Nilfgaard, all the links add firewood to Cintra, pushing the protagonist step by step in front of the fire, waiting for the opera of fate to be staged in Cintra. Looking forward to seeing a high-level plot climax. It would be better if there were more chapters to tighten up the plot.

It is currently a good Witcher fanfic. At the beginning, the protagonist seeks revenge on two farmers who were killed for fighting a injustice for him, and seeks revenge on his demon hunter 'teacher' who is nominally but only uses the protagonist as a tool. I think this is well written and shows a person with basic moral values. Imagine you have just arrived in a strange place and been captured as a slave, but someone stands up for you. Regardless of whether it is useful or not, I think most people will be grateful to those who stand up for them. Of course, it is not ruled out that some things that have been successfully domesticated will do the opposite When I saw someone talking about poison in the comment area, I couldn't figure it out at the time. The protagonist was not a holy mother. Even excluding the two farmers, just being treated as a slave was enough to kill the demon hunter. But after thinking about it seriously, they may think that for the sake of two people, it might be of no use to the protagonist. It is a very stupid thing for a farmer to take revenge on a master demon hunter who can bring some extraordinary power to the protagonist (provided that he is used as a slave). Yes, for domesticated social people, there is nothing wrong with being a dog as long as it benefits, but the protagonist is a young man, so revenge is very reasonable.

I came back specifically to write a book review for the author. Don't read the nonsense in the comment area. When Qidian first recommended this book to me, I didn't fall for it just because I read some of the messy reviews in the comment area. The second time Qidian recommended it to me, I clicked in with the mentality of giving it a try, and found that the author's writing style is really good. Including the shaping of the world view, the description of battle details, and the advancement of the storyline. It can be said to be an excellent quality grain and grass article.

It's good-looking, but I think a normal person in that kind of environment, even if he doesn't act as aggressively as the protagonist, should still behave a little differently from "locals". The kind of person who agrees after traveling through time for five minutes is somewhat outrageous. And the author's writing style is good. It's nonsense to say that he is not a literary person. I think the story is good, and the writing is quite epic, not like a child playing house. Come on!

A very clever author. Although he writes about demon hunters and warhammers, he still has the chivalrous spirit of "three cups of Turanuo, the five mountains are lighter", and he is also the chivalrous spirit of the pre-Qin period. Life and death are very small, but morality is very great. I can only say that it tastes right. I have read too much about Gou Dao and too much about greasy middle-aged Gou Ying Gou's profit calculations. It is indeed very comfortable to read this young man's hero, the sky is high and the sky is high. It's an update. The author has worked hard and the number of words seems to be quite a lot, but it just disappears in a flash. I can't be satisfied.

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That's outrageous. At first, after reading a lot of comments, I thought that the demon hunter Lao Den was some kind of moral model, and at worst he was just like a master craftsman. Then took a look. The protagonist was obtained by him using the law of accident. At that time, the protagonist had just passed through. Using modern thinking, it is probably like, you have just traveled through time, and an old man said that you will be my apprentice from today on. Then he will starve you for three days and give you nine meals, and give you a sword that will make you bear a debt of 10 gold coins. Let you be cannon fodder. On the way, two people used you as an excuse to find Lao Deng. Stubble was killed by him, and then the protagonist killed Lao Deng, and then a lot of people said to the protagonist, Mother, that the protagonist should not kill the master, good guy, there is no way that someone would just seamlessly connect with him just after time travel, and then from then on, he would be a cannon fodder for Lao Deng, and then he would not be able to eat enough every day, and he would be saddled with more and more debts. What is even more frightening is that Lao Deng can still live for a hundred years. The most outrageous thing is that if Lao Deng treats the protagonist better, he should at least eat enough. This life of riding a horse is not as good as a life of bonded labor. How can you still be moved by the feeling of master and disciple? Moreover, the protagonist was accidentally given to Lao Deng as cargo, and he was not an apprentice of his own initiative. Why, it is outrageous that he could not resist even after being captured and made into a slave.

After the trial of green grass is the grace of renewal. It is the grace of freedom to let the protagonist escape from the slave life (the protagonist is stripped naked by farmers and used as a slave). Providing supplies to Jianmianjia and horses is a blessing of protection. Then teaching the Dharma Seal is the gift of teaching. Then the protagonist chopped off the master in order to gain the Virgin's heart? What a white-eyed wolf. If you were a protagonist with a "me-only" personality, it would be normal to kill your master and silence your pursuers, but the reason why the protagonist killed his master was actually because he killed two peasants (yes, the kind of peasants in the game The Witcher who spit and insult you). The protagonist of Our Lady is really unbearable. 🤔

It's normal for the killing of the mentor to be controversial at the beginning, because it was handled poorly. There is no need for readers who support or do not support each other to attack each other personally, it is simply because they were not written well. It is nothing more than the golden x-chapter idea commonly used in online novels. The opening creates a conflict and highlights the protagonist's character at the same time. There is no problem with the character who has the heart of a bodhisattva and uses thunderbolt methods. Even this character is lovable. The problem is the hypocrisy of the protagonist. This hypocrisy does not refer to the characters in the book, but to the readers. Why? Writing a million words on the Internet is considered a small amount. In such a large space, especially when the perspective is on the protagonist most of the time, it is very important for readers to get close to and like the protagonist. Readers who see a true villain or a hypocrite may not like such people in the real world. Why don't they dislike such protagonists? Because they are "sincere" to readers, and they do not play tricks on readers or pretend to readers. The problem with the killing of the mentor at the beginning of the book is that as an outsider and a person with a God's perspective and familiar with online discussions, the reader knows at a glance what the protagonist is going to do, and must break with the mentor who treats the protagonist as a tool. However, in order to find a high-sounding reason for the protagonist's own behavior, a moral high ground, an excuse to avenge the two farmers is forcibly inserted. Superfluous, why is it superfluous? Firstly, after describing the background of the discrimination against the demon hunters and the strange vision and bullying of the medieval villagers, the two farmers were forcibly inserted to find mentors to be the protagonists. After a few strokes, you said that the two of them specialized in upholding justice, so much so that it can make people cry with gratitude. The emotionless setting of the Bear School, which is emphasized in a large space, is somewhat contradictory when it comes to conflicting with the public and simply killing people. The plot seems blunt, which deepens the above point. But the most superfluous thing is the performance of the protagonist. There are many reasons for the protagonist to kill the mentor, and his "anger" can also be expressed for many reasons, which is more understood by readers. You can say that modern people's self-esteem cannot accept being treated like tools and slaves, or you can say that you don't like the three views of demon hunters, but you chose the most blunt and least convincing reason above - I took such a big threat and put in so much effort to kill the mentor to avenge the two farmers. The subsequent "revelation of true feelings" looked very ridiculous under the clear eyes of readers. The characters were created with too much force, and the performance was not directed at the characters in the book, but in front of the readers, which seemed very funny and annoying. It's the same sentence, it's okay for the protagonist to be anything, be it a villain or a hypocrite, it's okay to have a bodhisattva heart, and it's okay to use thunderbolt methods, but don't use lame excuses to play tricks on the readers. The readers know that they must kill the mentor, but the excuses they use are very abrupt and false, and the reasons for anger are hard for people to substitute. It's easy to be annoying to build a golden body with a moral stick just to deal with the readers, which is why the controversy is so big.

No, Astartes, more than thirty surgeries, they have nothing to do with beauty. Why do we have to add an Astartes, a tough guy with an average of more than two meters per capita? To be honest, except for the original body, everything else has nothing to do with beauty in my opinion.

A witcher implanted with a gene seed (and the seed also contains the fighting skills and knowledge of generations of predecessors), wearing plate armor, with infinite strength, and possessing a magic potion, and then was scared away by a 200-man medieval guard? What the hell is this? Afraid of imbalance in combat power, why do you want to connect the witcher with 40k? Is this comparable? Many of these selection ceremonies are much more dangerous than these 200 medieval guards!

When I read the comment section, I thought it was some shit, but it's actually surprisingly good. The mentor's cold-blooded ruthlessness has been foreshadowed for several chapters. Is there anything poisonous about the two farmers' reasoning? Because it is not only this incident that makes the protagonist betray, he is used as a tool and bait, and he is not enough to eat and is squeezed at the same time. It's just one more condition to take action. What's more, the farmer's incident made the master realize that the protagonist was in heaven but unexpectedly landed in hell (comparing modern and medieval times). I think the plot progressed quite well.

This novel is the same as the previous one. As I write it, I start to eat the book and start to fall into the author's self-movement. After entering the chapter of war refugees, he deliberately tied his hands and decided that the other party was pursuing a group of soldiers without any information. He participated in the anti-invasion war with enthusiasm. Then his brain was inexplicably silent. The emperor's genetic experience was cleared for ten thousand years. Because of his thousands of years of experience + his own army's internal affairs expertise + his knowledge and experience in modern society), personal force (several surgeries that have the greatest impact on force value have been completed), he is absolutely No. 1 In the entire camp in all aspects. Not to mention that you must take away the command and management rights. At the very least, you cannot follow orders during marches and management meetings.

The legendary demon hunter of the Bear School, accompanied by an Elu cat, is a traveler who is proficient in martial arts in various worlds. In the future, he will be called the Panda School🐶

The protagonist is very similar to the female protagonists in recent female protagonist dramas who have bad views. It's so hard to make excuses for yourself.

Do we have to continue the setting of the Polish Jackass? Witchers are professional butchers who engage in genocide. In a magical world where everyone's equality is empty talk, do any ordinary people really dare to go up to the extraordinary to make a show of their faces?

Combat strength: It is naturally full under the arrangement of the author, but it suffers from ed Organizational strength: almost zero, handed over to a palace steward Combat readiness and logistics: failed, apart from going out to bully the scouts, nothing was done to improve the survival rate of the refugees Self-estimate: zero, from After the surgery, I went to the border to fight without any physical assessment. Halfway through the battle, I realized that my configuration was too high and the energy consumption could not be suppressed Enemy situation estimation and servant army management: zero, almost completely led by the nose Core tasks: 1 Rescue friends completed (passive completion), 2. Rescue refugees (difficulty has shifted significantly), 3. Revenge completed (all abilities are online) Evaluation on the application of own skills and tactics: A warrior full of glory (laughing), there is really only glory left. Apart from harvesting at the location chosen by the refugee leader (the author), these fifty chapters do not have any matching settings. Certain behaviors appear, The emperor's inspiring leadership is manifested as sharpening a gun before the battle, The spiritual will of the hunter becomes the reason for failure, The knowledge of the demon hunter can only be used to seal the road and open the way, The swordsmanship of the warrior is fully displayed, but ed, Biological brain? I'm really unfamiliar, and I haven't spoken for thirty chapters The complex relationships between the five people and six groups in the Sorceress Academy have not been used at all The subjective initiative of the refugee group has not been mobilized My own super high influence and action power have all been given up

It's really annoying for an Astartes to sympathize with the Eldar. Especially sympathy for the Scoia'tael! Even ordinary witchers will witness the atrocities committed by the Scoia'tael. Demon hunters are still human beings no matter how mutated they are. The duty is to protect human beings. If you hurt humans, you are a monster in the eyes of the witcher.

What I personally think is outrageous is that the protagonist has some of the Emperor's battle memories. It uses the body of a demon hunter as the starting point, some of the Emperor's skills as the basis, transformation surgery as the process, and the purpose of becoming an Astartes or even a primarch. However, the emphasis on Sekiro's skills is too high...

It's difficult, the protagonist is indecisive, and the Astartes' decisiveness is a waste of time.

It's better to use the seeds as soon as possible. Nine out of ten of you should have come here because of the title of the book. Don't wait until the fifty and hundred chapters to become the Astartes. Then I really can't stand it🤖

I would like to ask how many follow-up readings the author has dropped recently

The author's complete understanding of war and combat is not enough to support him in describing the battlefield acumen of a 40k veteran who has been fighting for 10,000 years. But when the refugee group broke through the border, a heavily armored and high-destruction assault unit that performed beheading tactics, even if the commander could not be seen, as long as it attacked in the direction of the commander, no one would let the army formation disperse to carry out the killing mission. This is not only a question of the commander being afraid of death, but also because there cannot be no command in the army, and lower-level soldiers will instinctively protect the upper-level command. I suggest the author read other war novels, and recommend the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms

If you are unclear, just bring it to Lu Mingfei.

The Emperor's Son / Height 2.5 Meters (2.6 Meters in armor) / Primaris (Magic Modification) + Transplanted 6 Monster Hunting Organs ≈ Weapons/Equipment: "Sword of the Lake Lady, Turbid Current Jhin, Demonic Wolf Dagger, Moonlight Great Sword, Black Knife, Cannon Fire Extinguisher, *Lamp Smaug Suit, Ankh (Card) Sandra), Godfrey's portrait amulet, Marika's golden braided hair, the Sun Princess's ring, golden seeds, Marika's playful veil, Lothric flag, soul furnace, red dew drops of holy blood bottle, "≈Female companion💋🫦"Wizard: Lady of the Lake, Margarita , Triss, Tisaya, Ciri ≈ Dark Souls: Gwynevere, Gwendelin (?), Youershika (?), Cyris ≈ Blood Origin: Maria ≈ Assassin's Creed: Cassandra ≈ Nioh: Hidechiyo, Wuming ≈ Ring of Magic: Melina, Torina (?), Mar Lenia (?), Marika (?), Lani (?) ≈ Game of Thrones: Daenerys ≈ Destiny's Child: "Arya Stark (Daughter of the Direwolf)" ≈ Now can travel through the world: "Dark Souls, Bloodborne, Monster Hunter, The Lord of the Rings, Assassin's Creed, Nioh, Ring, Quan "Travel" ≈ Characters accompanying the time travel: "Flannel Ball, Kirin, Alexios, Abe Seimei, Bilbo" ≈ Subordinates: "Ember Knights (all demon hunters), Warriors of the Flame World Dynasty" ≈ Abilities: "Mentos (university permission to unlock the brain), water walking Swordsmanship (Wizard: 🐻Bear School Swordsmanship + Sekiro: 🌾 Ashina Kendo + Monster Hunting: 🐉Hunting Technique + Dark Soul: 🌑Soul Power + Blood Source: 🩸Air Blade Technique + Nioh: 🗡️The Best of Martial Arts + Magic Ring: 🌊Water Bird Swordsmanship) ≈🔥 (First Fire, Spell Fire, Smaug Dragon Fire , Yanfei Dragon Fire, Black Flame, Blood Flame, Spiritual Fire, Mersemer's Fire) *Miracle (Thunder Sword) *Combat Skills (Remnants of Fire) *Prayers (One Hundred Forms of the Furnace, Flame), *Special Skills (Return of Thunder and Lightning, Ninety-nine Weapons) *🪬Spiritual Vision + Eagle Eye＊💠Guardian Spirit➕Five Directions and Five Elements Power (earth unicorn, water basalt, fire king)≈🔅body light: "Lake Goddess, Sun Princess, Light of the Twin Trees" Guardian Spirit + Five Directions and Five Elements: Qilin, Xuanwu, Fire King