The Dimension Eroder

This novel is purely about imagination. Because of the author's style, I have never been happy. Since many people know the plot and related settings, dimensionality reduction, erosion, etc., I have been unhappy. The protagonist's power system is also a bit bloated. Each world feels like a different set. I hope the author can take care of the protagonist Bai Lang. The abilities and equipment are also in the east and west. It's too messy. In today's online novel market, it's really not popular, so I ended up looking at the ideas. The ideas are well written, but some characters are written too much, and the language organization is not very good. After these are removed, the content will be reduced by at least 30%. Anyway, this novel is mainly recommended for readers. If you want to enjoy it, there probably won't be much left.

The book is very imaginative and has many settings, but the biggest shortcoming of this book is that there are too many settings. 80% Of the whole book is filled with settings and bad jokes, and only 20% is the plot. Basically, most of each chapter is added settings, ability introduction, bad jokes, and only a small part of plot development and dialogue. The settings in the front are bright and attractive to read, but each copy in the back is full of settings over and over again, which is very boring. This book has a strong setting ability and is full of imagination and creativity, but a book cannot only have a good setting. Basic writing skills such as character description, plot design, and character dialogue are all insufficient. It is recommended not to read it. After reading it, you will only find that it is a waste of time and a eunuch!

Author, as an ordinary reader who has ordered your book (complete order from Victor Laoxian) on both Qidian and QQ Reading, let me give you my impressions of this book. The world traveled through is unfamiliar and not very attractive; the protagonist's ability setting is not interesting and complicated enough, and there is no pleasure in upgrading; the death-seeking operation is not cool enough, and various calculations do not seem to have any benefits. The protagonist is so busy that I don't know what he is going to do? The meme game is not as good as Victor's, there is no sense of expectation and refreshment, and there is no sense of superiority as a time traveler. To be honest, it is far less attractive to me than the old fairy Victor. Now I just keep watching, maybe one day I will give up and stop chasing. For Victor's book, I read the pirated copy several times and then ordered all the original copies. As for this book, if it weren't for Victor and the supportive author, I wouldn't have subscribed to it like this if it were someone else's. Purely my thoughts, not to threaten the author or anything, but I feel like I am on the verge of abandoning the book and tell the author something.

It's not that it doesn't look good, it's just that it's not what I want to see and it doesn't get my point. As far as the writing classification route is concerned, originality is not originality, and fans are not fans. When it comes to originality, it has a bit of a fan nature. When it comes to fandom, there are too many original things. The two cannot rely on each other. I want to see something original, with your fan background in the show. I want to read fanfics. You have so many original things, and they are all modified, so I can't hope to see fanfics. The protagonist problem is even more uncomfortable. Let's be honest, it looks pretty slutty. Let's just say it's a wave, but it's not so high that it can fly. Neither be stubborn nor wasteful. This is really uncomfortable.

Recently, the great benefactor of the paradise, the savior of the evil, the inheritor of the golden spirit, the promoter of witchcraft medicine, the master of breeding Fu Guiwan and the pink rabbit, the trainer of the Carp King, the founder of the spiritual jump method, the nemesis of the coward, the immortal of scales, the master of the secret treasure, the captain of the Xianyu, the happy mourner, the spicy gourmet, the founder of the Greedy Sect - Bailang came to Chuanhuo Paradise Master Bai is here, good days are coming, and fairness is here! Ji Du: "The Healing Cult is so magnificent!" Silly Fufu: "That's right!" (Aunt laughs) Fuguiwan: "A man was born between heaven and earth, how can he live in depression for a long time? Set a small goal first." Carp King:... (His empty eyes have already seen through everything, bearing the evil of this style) Pink-haired rabbit: "Shanzai, Shanzai! My Buddha's porcelain cup!"

After writing about Hogwarts, I felt a little bit unreadable. Now I feel a little numb after reading more than 1,200 chapters. I don't know why I don't feel as good as before.

Those who can see the third chapter are also talents, self-discovery of the oppression of reality. It can be seen that these online novels will eventually develop into Shuangwen. After all, if you are submissive in reality, why can't you be invincible in fantasy? 90% Of the world's wealth is controlled by 1% of people, and few of these 1% of people read novels. If the author writes a novel, he needs to pay attention to the wealth of the 99% of people. Instead of writing those brain-burning, poisonous, heart-attack novels. {The 1% of people who control 90% of the world's wealth buy books and novels just to show off their literary and artistic flair. Rather than chasing stars. And their pursuit of stars will only take away your stars. }

Angel, I will always support you. From silver to time travel to corrosion, every time I see you open your mind and laugh, I really want you to keep going!

The writing is so messy, I just write in Chinese, I feel tired after adding some English, and the writing feels messy. I feel like I don't know what you want to express, and it doesn't feel good at all. It feels a bit like a flowing novel. The subject matter is good, but the writing is a bit stretched. I can't stand it after reading more than 100 chapters.

After hoarding it for a month, I came back and read it. I read it and saw the main text 😅 I just entered the main text. I read the main text before updating Chapter 20. I asked for leave three times to update the main text. 😰 It's OK, it's OK, it's in line with Aquaman's writing style, I've been stocking up for a while. Speaking of which, I'm not going to open a new book just because I'm hoarding it, 🙂 If I open a new book, fellow Taoists, kick (remind) me 🙂

Everything is fine, but the update is too slow I hope the author can work hard＾0＾~

Explosive liver, explosive kidney, please update soon 😠

Righteousness, ↖,,,,,

A new way to play the ship, the sacred tree builds a door🚪 Then in addition to filling in the 13 eyes, there are also matching titles. I can think of two, One is the existing "Truth of Departures" The other is to brush a "Mr. Door" (is this considered dimension erosion?)

I quite like the humor + jokes + unlimited streaming. However, the second half of this book has a strong atmosphere. It is difficult for non-experienced anime fans to get into it, and some of the jokes are incomprehensible, which makes the novel's audience a bit narrow. It almost excludes readers like me. Although I tried hard to watch, it was difficult to get into the rhythm.

It looked pretty good, I recommend it.

It made me confused

Book

Let me introduce to new friends. The author's imagination is so big that "Silver Wheel", "Magical Race Crossover" and "Dimension Corroder" are really more imaginative than the other. The power system and world background he wrote in the book can make several authors write. The descriptions of the characters in the new works are also impressive, such as Cesar the Soft Rice of Silver, Medusa the Silver Snake Fist, Carmilla and her Dinosaur Leather Mecha, Victor the Elder in Magic, White Lotus and the Black-skinned Elf incarnated as gods. It can be seen that the author is really serious about writing every chapter. There is no plagiarism, and it is all original ideas. After the second Ninja Village copy of this book, I can't keep up with the author's ideas. But I will still support the author. This post is to follow Trolls say, "I don't like to read other books. Don't use insults to dampen the author's enthusiasm. Advantages: Big imagination. Disadvantages: Too much imagination. I can't stop thinking about it. Slow down appropriately. Many readers can't keep up with the author's imagination 😄

Although the real fish knife found on site b is slightly shorter, the fish pattern can still be seen.

Open a vest or a new book to help kick things off, thank you

Is it really okay to use dual-open mode? I'm a bit worried 😠

I sell various systems and would like to hear from you.

In the ability column, there are five bloodlines, but you don't need to fill in props, just figure it out Remember to add the color.

Looking at the later stages now, I feel a sense of sadness: Bailang has prepared enough foundation, hoping to make waves at the fourth and fifth levels, and reach the sky in one step; Silly Fufu is still so cute, looking forward to medical skills and looking forward to angels; The elf girl doesn't know in which world she is thinking about her brother Lang; Feng Ying may be secretly doing the whole thing; But there is no future, their days are fixed on the day when the watch breaks, there is no future anymore, and all expectations are in vain. I heard that a new book on toilet paper has been released, and it is difficult to continue this book. At least Old Immortal Victor could foresee the ending. Strictly speaking, this book is only in the early and middle stages. Bailang is only at level 3. It is set that the middle and high-level power is at least level 7, and the blind nun is probably level 7-9. It took so long to lay the groundwork and prepared so many trump cards, but suddenly they were gone, and they were cut off as soon as they were told. Don't you have any love for toilet paper?

As shown

Shouldn't this be his true nature?

With so much difference in content, you still dare to finish the book and want to start a new book?

At present, I am chasing the city of evil spirits. The more I write, the more I write. It is tedious, a lot of nonsense, and a small plot. If you don't advance the plot and pile up several chapters of setting at the beginning, don't you think you've written it well? I followed the story from Silver Wheel to the Time Travel of Magical Races, and then to this book. I really feel that the self-excitement of toilet paper has become more and more serious, and my spirituality has become more and more drained. I am still talking about being in a good state. After reading the whole article, I don't know what to say. Spending money to read this kind of chapter even makes me feel like I am wiping my butt with money.

Bailang's personal column statistics (only concerned about changes in the ability column, data headaches (◞‸◟)) Occupation: Master of Secret Treasures (the second transfer is being completed...) Sub-occupation: Buddha Evil. Big Mushroom [Future Buddha Buddha Enemy] Life Menu 2/8 Lineage: Demihuman Talent: 1. Death Recast 2. Evil Spirit Capital Ability Column: ① Black Thorns (1. Forbidden Demon 2. Soul Resistance 3. Soul Stone) ② Rabbit King Bodhisattva (1. Fluctuation of Killing Intent 2. Wandering Martial Arts Skill Pool) ③ Great Wailing Kingdom Master (Ability Column Increase) ④ Our Lady of Mercy (Twisted Healing/No Responsibility Therapy) ⑤ Great Holy Bowl Demon Elephant (1. Ability Column Increase 2. Sub-Professional Manifestation [Future Buddha]) ⑥? Ability Column 1: Thorns LV5 Special Effects: ①Physical Retaliation Damage 25% ②Special Damage -25% ③Psychic Resistance Ability Column 2: Qi and Blood LV6 (Henglian LV7) Special Effects: ①Elemental Resistance ②Blood Demon Yuan Fei ③Armed Color Qi and Blood ④River of Qi and Blood/Into a Soldier ⑤Qi and Blood Oven ⑥First Chain Ability Column 3: Ghost Species LV5 (Ripple LV5, Thunder Sound LV5) Special Effects: ① Fluctuation ② Speed ③ Wail ④ Seeing and Hearing Color Dominance (The World Listens to My Voice) Ability Column 4: Blood Therapy LV6 Special Effects: ①Old Driver's Centrifugal Arm ②Life Continuation/Umbilical Cord ③First Chain Ability Column 5: Armed Colored Diamond Barrier Method LV2 (Dragon Elephant LV6) Special Effects: ①Dragon Elephant's Mountain-Moving Power ②Dragon Elephant's Indestructible Body Ability Column 6: Bagua Seal LV5 Special Effects: ①Four Elephant Seal ②Bagua Seal/Jinchuuriki ③Forbidden. One hundred and twenty-eight fundamental seals-Motherly Love Demon Sealing Wave