From the Star Abyss

Compared to The Super Mechanic, the writing style is a bit obscure and lacks fluency. Sometimes I feel a little stuck while reading, which is very unpleasant. Maybe the author wanted to show off his literary skills, but he didn't do it well. Instead, he made jokes like Kong Yiji, such as the levels of Greek letters, inserting physical data during battles, etc. The subject matter is good, but the author overestimates his literary skills. It is better to write small white points that read smoothly, and it is really not advisable to forcefully pretend to be cool.

In order to save the precious reading time of those who fall into the trap, as well as the "poisonous points" raised by unprofessional "Shen Nong", I have summarized the existing reviews and listed the situations in this book that may involve poisonous points for some readers. I believe that most readers are tired from their daily work, study, and don't want to waste time on works that they are not interested in. However, it is not good for some people to take quotes out of context and criticize or even personally attack them when they see something that is not to their liking. We must be civilized and polite, and maintain the external image of our online writing enthusiasts. (1): About the subject matter This book is called "From the Star Abyss", also known as "Superpower" and "Sword of the Star Abyss". It mainly imitates and draws on the two classic masterpieces in the game area, "Super Mechanic" and "Amber Sword". As for the title and some settings of the book - it is a direct tribute to the Japanese anime "From the Abyss" and does not involve the content of the original work. This book is not a fanfic. It's just that I like this work very much and hope to recommend it to more people. (2): About the content Everyone should have noticed that my tags include the words Fourth Natural Disaster, NPC, and Game Alien. This is also the main plot of this book: as an NPC in the game Alien, circulating between the indigenous people and players. Considering that some readers dislike the presence of players in the game world, which may affect the plot and water injection, it is marked here as a poisonous point. (3): About the author Hello everyone, I am Deep Crimson, the author of "From the Star Abyss" and "The Eternal Speaker". As you can see, I have experience in completing a million-word work, but I am still a newbie. In many places, I am far inferior to veteran authors such as Qi Peijia, Xibeimao, and Feiyan. Crimson is a liberal arts student, with an undergraduate degree in law. Therefore, I have not studied advanced mathematics or college physics. I know a little Russian. I have played Zhihu before, so my knowledge is broad but not refined. There may be errors in data and theory. Please forgive me and correct me. Daily updates are basically guaranteed to be 4K, but the actual situation is mostly 6K, with an average of 5K8 updates per day. (4): About the character The protagonist Li Ozi - in his previous life, he was set to be a game anchor + the ultimate domination profession [Star Master] with unique skills. Since the capital that basically depends on survival is the mastery and understanding of [Starfall Master], I have deep feelings and obsession with this profession. Possible controversies and poisonous points: 1. "Mindset" - the protagonist still has the mentality of a player in the early stage of time travel. He is indifferent to his own life and the lives of others. He can shoot himself casually and play Russian roulette without any pressure - so much so that some readers think that the protagonist is inhumane. Note that this is the early stage, because starting from Chapter 39, the protagonist's mentality begins to change, and it begins to change after Chapter 72. 2. The so-called "double standards" - some readers pointed out: the protagonist often bombed planets in his previous life (the behavior of P agency war criminals). He can say that he will do anything for profit, but he has his own bottom line. For the protagonist, as long as any behavior does not involve the bottom line, there is no sense of guilt. 3. "Goal in life" - one of Li Ozi's goals after time travel is "It is our duty to re-create the glory of the Star Lord". Some readers think this is a poisonous point, and even said such words as "the protagonist must be selfish". In fact, combined with the setting, there are many reasons why the protagonist does this. Without spoilers, I will give you a simple explanation: A. Objective reasons-interests: The world view of "Star Abyss" involves individuals suffering a "curse" when diving and ascending to the Star Abyss, so personal heroism does not work in the universe. Only when the base of the [Star Falling Division] group is large enough can they consolidate their power and influence. B. Subjective reasons——Emotional factors: Li Ozi himself is the unique skill brother of [Star Falling Master]. To put it bluntly, without Star Falling Master, he might not be able to afford food in his previous life and his career would not be able to start. Star Falling Master is an opportunity and noble person for the protagonist. And after many years of operation, the protagonist has a good impression of this professional bar. C. Combining it with the actual situation of the individual: Li Aozi himself is a leader in the industry of star descendants. His understanding and experience of the profession are always ahead of the players of various versions. Therefore, he is able to rely on his experience and ability to pass on technology to players while always maintaining his aloof status. Readers who have read rebirth articles should understand this feeling very well: no matter how strong others are, the reborn can always be ahead of others. To sum up, the subjective and objective reasons: Li Aozi had direct interest demands, indirect emotional factors and at the same time recognized his actual situation, so he decided to let more and more Xingjiangshi industry become more and more popular. TBC…

It is evaluated as a poor imitation of The Super Mechanic Just look at how many people read it and how many readers it loses. The essence is that the Super Mechanic stitches together monsters. The key is that the stitches are very stiff.

The introduction is so loud that you have to bet your life when the crisis comes. Isn't this kind of game rebirth just to have the overall situation under control? As a result, half of the female characters were dead before it was released, and another one was dead after it was released. The protagonist was hateful and unwilling to accept it. The main theme is just a drifter. The world view is good, but the plot is difficult to explain.

Q: Will there be players coming to this book? A: First of all, a clear answer: there will be players coming, which is one of the core plots of this book. But——The various mechanisms and performance of players will be different from what everyone thinks. Currently due to space limitations, it is not convenient for me to fully explain it here. I will only mention a few key points. You can decide for yourself whether you want to read it or not. A: About Resurrection——Restricted Resurrection The player's resurrection mechanism is also the most outrageous and enviable existence of the Fourth Natural Disaster. It can be said that for players, killing them will only make the players stronger. Here is the death setting of "Star Abyss": after the player's health value returns to zero, he will not die immediately, but will be judged based on the [Physique] attribute. If the judgment is passed, he will enter the [Near Death] state. Friends who have played Battlefield 1, Battlefield 5, Square, Apex, and Chivalry 2 will be familiar with this state. After entering [Near Death], players cannot use skills, and whether they can move will be determined based on the damage to their body parts (players with broken limbs will definitely not be able to move, and players whose heads and throats were hit will not be able to speak) [Near Death] state can last up to 1 minute. During this period, if there is no way to receive treatment/increase health/leave the combat state and area, death will be confirmed. Next, let's formally talk about[Resurrection] Resurrection is a relatively complicated process. In fact, according to the game settings: the characters used by the players are not virtual, but come to the NPC characters with a transcendent consciousness. After that, by completing the awakening mission (novice guide), it will be transformed into a player template and used. Players have three chances of resurrection every day, and the setting is as follows: Each player actually signed a life-long membership with the Leian membership-based medical machine, so nano-mechanical cells that monitor life status in real time are implanted in the body. After the player enters the state of death, the repair of the nanocells implanted in the body is completed, but each player character only enjoys three resurrection opportunities. Every time you die, 20% of the experience required for the current upgrade will be deducted. If the current experience is zero or the level limit has been reached, the current level experience will be cleared as a death penalty. Death will drop unbound equipment. This means that if you die three times in a day, the player will be restricted and will only be allowed to log in to player forums, mini-games, auto chess, Magic: The Gathering, tower defense, etc. You can also communicate with guild members and online friends to pass the cooldown time. After three deaths, the player's account will be cooled down for 24 hours (about 30 days in the game). After the cooldown is over, when the player logs in again, the login game interface will be displayed as Redeployment. Yes, strictly speaking, players only have three chances to resurrect in the game. After redeployment, the player actually comes to another NPC character with professional skills, expertise templates and bound weapons and equipment. Redeployed characters will have the following effects: 1. The previous mission progress (except the main line) is cleared and needs to be repeated, which is equivalent to a reset. 2. NPCs whose favorability is lower than 500 points will no longer remember you. If they meet again, they will communicate with you again and calculate their favorability. 3. If the player is redeployed to the territory of another country (a very low probability event), the player's appearance will undergo some changes, but the previously accumulated camp contribution will not change unless you choose to give up the identity of the nationality organization. 4. You will gain new character relationships, and you will also lose all character relationships below 500 points of favorability. For example: When the player Wang Wu came for the first time, he chose a family with two younger sisters, and his favorability was lower than 500. After redeployment, Wang Wu became the son of the old Li family next door, and he would lose the cognitive relationship with his two previous sisters. 5. Players who are redeployed can also choose to change to the last appearance. For people around them, the character's appearance will gradually change and adapt, and they will not be surprised or surprised. 6. When NPCs with a favorability of 500 or above see the redeployed character, they will look at each other and tease you. For example: "I thought you were dead. You have been incognito for a while, so you don't have a doctor, right?" "Lai Anding Medicine is really awesome. I will become a member later." "How did you survive? No matter, everyone has their own secrets - you seem to have a new identity? It doesn't matter, I don't care about this."

Let's briefly talk about some of the interesting and destructive points of this book for new readers: Why you should read it: 1. The fourth natural disaster story (?), The development trend refers to the Super God Mechanic, the protagonist was originally a star descendant who manipulated gravity among the stars, "traveled" into the "game", and regained his glory; 2. The setting is huge, the writing is excellent, especially the writing, which can even be said to be average among many authors in Qidian, in terms of the description of cold weapon combat and grand scenes. The author's drawings are particularly delicate; 3. With reasonable imagination, it can be seen that the author has done a lot of homework. The part where the protagonist has just developed the gravitational power and fights with the hostile forces is really reasonable and exciting, and extremely enjoyable Why not read it: 1. No female protagonist or single female protagonist, not a harem novel, with a high probability of wholesale knives (it is not a poisonous point for me, the author's female characters in the last book are almost dead) 2. There are many foreshadowings. Nowadays, many readers have abandoned the game because of the protagonist's strange motivation to become stronger (becoming a Starfall Master mentor and developing a war group), empathic natives, personality changes and sudden and inexplicable descriptions in the text. In fact, these are all foreshadowing, related to the protagonist's life experience, but it is still easy to dissuade impatient readers. Friends who are interested can read the author's previous book "Eternal Speaker" 3. The writing style is cold and cold. Readers who have read the previous book know that sometimes they even feel uncomfortable because of the tension between the lines, the thorough perspective, and the ugliness of human nature. 4. Number of updates, emmmm PS: The author's style is more solid. This book is an attempt to be closer to online writing after the first one. I noticed that this book still deliberately sacrifices some cool points for the sake of integrity. I would like to ask the author, is the ending of this book HE or BE? In addition to Red, will the previous book have a deeper intersection with this one? When will it be released, and how much will it explode🤔🤔?

To be honest, I hope the author can be more confident and don't need to ride on the popularity of The Super Mechanic. This book is much higher than The Super Mechanic, and even has the flavor of the old days. The author's epic sense and ability to intersect multiple lines are very strong, and his ability to mobilize emotions is also excellent. Compared to The Super Mechanic who started to crazily fill in the starry sky, your starry sky plot is still very good. However, there are definitely shortcomings. Success is also set, and failure is also set. The existence of society is the biggest problem in this book, or in other words, the author did not handle it well. Especially in the Ziluo Star episode, Xia Beiluo obviously still has a strong self-thinking after being corrupted by society, instead of becoming a cell of society, which is why Snail is so angry and confused. This is purely a matter of skill. In terms of setting, society is unforgivable, but in fact, the writing has mixed reviews. I hope that the next book can be written better based on the experience accumulated in this book. There is also the attitude towards the characters. The author is a bit dissatisfied with his integrity. The scene description and emotional mobilization of Nomi and Qiu Ran in the early stage of the sword are not like treating them as tools at all. However, I still have to mention "No, they are tools" in the comment area, including the subsequent portrayal of Yawen. It is obvious that a lot of thought has been spent. Author, you actually love the characters you write (what a tsundere brat author, readers need to criticize them with comments) You'll be spoiled for choice!) The idea of multiple endings is a great attempt, and I'm also looking forward to the perfect "angel" ending. But according to Leo's character, the white wolf ending will be the true ending, but the author clearly talks about Leo's being a mercenary villain while making him a hero in every story. The author is really disdainful 😏. In fact, he is also the kind of ultimate middle-aged rescue protagonist.) I still hope that the author's next book can be written better. There is no need to force writing in plain text. The author deserves better readers, and the readers also deserve better stories.

I saw it again while browsing the bookshelf today, but I didn't expect it wasn't finished yet... I still feel a little bit overwhelmed. The background setting and ability setting are quite interesting, but the data in the back is sparse and the abilities are not introduced in detail (that's why I came here). The protagonist's career advancement is not introduced in detail either. The plot The plot is also very confusing, which makes people feel very confused. They don't know what they are writing, and they spend a lot of ink describing the supporting characters (I want to see the protagonist more). Moreover, the plot progresses too fast, giving people the feeling that it can't be completed at the speed of light, and there are still a lot of holes left unfilled. Back to the dead female character, I personally hate it when you spend a lot of ink describing a character and then write her to death. The point of creating this character is to let her die, right? What can I say, I originally read it with the intention of reading cool articles, and the more I read, the more disgusting I became. I jumped at the chance to subscribe later, especially the one (I forgot about that one), the one where Tialan said that she could be a surrogate mother, it really made me sick to my stomach. After all these years of reading, I am still disgusted by your pretended to be cool articles. That's all I can express my thanks. I think I read your book very early. When I saw the interstellar chapter, I thought it was too confusing and I gave up on it. I read it again during this period, but I didn't expect it to get worse and worse. It's really good to have ideas, but I don't think it's suitable for online writing.

Emotional sublimation relies on swordsmen, and plot advancement also relies on swordsmen. If you don't die, you won't be able to write.

I should be considered an old reader. I have been following this book since it only has 660,000 words. I can't stand it anymore even after reading Chapter 373 of Layer Abyss. I think the shortcomings of this book are: 1. From time to time, it will kill the female characters, such as Arwen and Alexia, both of whom I like very much. I can't accept that the role of the female character has been stabbed like this, and there will definitely be more female characters stabbed in the future. I don't want to be stabbed anymore 2. The writing is average, and there are many details that are not explained clearly. The writing is often very hidden and requires careful consideration, and some places are not clearly written. 3. The supporting roles have too few roles. For example, Alexia has no role except Gurant. Yawen is even worse. Her role is fragmented, and so are other characters. 4. The plot is fragmented. There are many plots that are written halfway through and another plot is written. It takes dozens of chapters before the original plot is mentioned again. Moreover, the fighting scenes are too simple. It feels that the author wants to write it well, but cannot write it well. Moreover, some plots are quite abstract. For example, after the void infection, a plot was suddenly inserted. It was so inexplicable that it took more than 20 chapters to understand it. I liked this book very much at the beginning. I was very satisfied with the first few hundred chapters. For a period of time, I even watched the update time of this book every day to read it. But since the book was removed from the membership, I feel that the quality, writing style, character description, and character portrayal of this book are getting worse and worse. Until now, I finally can't follow this book. I am not posting this comment to ridicule how poorly written this book is. I am just sighing that maybe if the plot after entering the abyss is changed, I can continue reading. After reading The Great Mechanic, I fell into a slump in science fiction writing. I thought I had found a good book, and I would definitely vote for this book every time I had a monthly ticket. I voted for the recommendation on time every day, but I didn't expect this to be the result in the end... Hey, maybe if I had to write it myself, I would write worse, but I feel that this book should not be what it is now, it should be written better... Forget it, I won't say so much, I will still vote for the recommendation every day. Xingyuan, see you later.