The Final Giant God

I'm really afraid that the protagonist's organs will be awakened by others. The protagonist with all kinds of incredible abilities can only bite wild dogs on the roadside and lose.

I originally planned to start an automatic subscription, but after reading the testimonials, I knew that this book was going to be unfinished, and I didn't want to continue reading it, even though it was pretty good now. The author has no idea what is attractive about his book, and he has gone in an unpopular direction and never looked back. I estimate that there will be two to three thousand subscriptions in these two months, and then one thousand subscriptions in another two months. After that, it will be unfinished with about 500,000 to 800,000 words. First of all, there is the issue of positioning. This book gives the impression that it is an interstellar policeman who constantly earns passive expertise and attributes his power to himself, and then constantly fights against other aliens and goes to other planets to get better expertise, similar to "Super Mechanic". As a result, the author is positioned on only one planet, similar to protecting the earth. . . Those who retreated from the trap are right. It is too weak now, there is no crisis at all, it is extremely procrastinating, and it does not even have a big goal. For example, overthrow the world government and make the world a better place, so find some stronger NPCs. For another example, if the big boss in the next version is going to destroy the planet, there are already signs of this cultist showing signs. You need to hinder them in advance, save the persecuted NPCs, and then accept him as an assistant. Now it's like a travel article. You have to read it here and there. You have to write about a legendary brave man to be attractive. If there is a book that tells how this brave man washes his face and brushes his teeth when he gets up every day, walks with his left and right feet first, and saves one person today, two people tomorrow and three people the day after tomorrow, then this book must be a history textbook, not a novel!                                                                                                                       The problem of food and clothing has been solved, and the second is to get the internal organs, these two have been published on the shelves. And when I saw this congressman's description, I knew that something bad was going to happen with this beautiful congressman again. I want to increase my strength. Strength is the foundation of everything.                                                                                                                                                                           but may 1.4 Billion Heirs to the Kingdom could be read by me read the book. The purpose is clear at a glance, and the main line is to improve yourself. The old woman saving her granddaughter's robot gives the impression that the protagonist is taking advantage of the injustice and making two dollars by the way. If the problem is to describe the foreshadowing of the robot, but it is not described enough and the character is not developed, it can be said that the number of words is just water, and it is meaningless in the Legend of the Brave. Some authors say that the protagonist has powerful power and can do things as he pleases, so he seems to be grinding away (roughly meaning). But have you ever thought about writing this because you want your readers to see a little kid teasing ants? This does not mean that writing a diary is completely unnecessary. This book's success in the beginning was entirely due to my patience with new books and my good drawing. According to the author's outline of the book's acceptance speech, it completely deviated from the original drawing. Coupled with this procrastinating travel writing style, it became a bad book after a few months.

Draw cards and draw out a bunch of real players. In the end, the protagonist is just an NPC. This world and the lives and emotions of the indigenous people in this world are just a joke. It's a pity that I can only say goodbye.

The world view is a cyber world, and the ability system is the star abyss. The protagonist has Ultraman's 5 seconds🌚, and even has cyber's super scientific research ability (brought by the system) Others don't know the identity of the protagonist for the time being (Ultraman doesn't know either) Why is there such an innocent lady in the cyber world view? Don't worry, I'm blindly guessing that there is something wrong with the family.

I'm running away, I'm here to see the Cyber ​​Titan. What do you mean by "player"? I originally thought that the following would be the dependent farming style to develop its own power. Players are so funny.

Game planning king? 🙂It's such a big name😰

The dog plans to be reborn as the protagonist, but the idea is wrong. No matter how he writes it, he is still the protagonist.

I thought he would die together with the Avengers later, but it ended like this. He was said to be guilty, and then the protagonist let him go. It seemed like he was just a piece of shit.

You told me earlier that you wanted to write about the fourth natural disaster. You have to throw away the settings now.

It's a player stream. Couldn't you explain it earlier?