This Actor Has a Big Problem

This cover is too revealing, Xiao Heizi, I advise you to lychee

I just realized on the cover that the author is a little bitch.

To be honest, the plot is very interesting, but the writing is not very good. Take that e-sports drama as an example: A lot of words were spent complaining about how NC and distortion the plot itself is, and then there is no emphasis on describing the changes caused by the protagonist; Finally, after waiting until the simulated plot is over, the protagonist can return to reality and pretend to be cool, but in the end, he directly explains the process of reality change and then ends it hastily. It's over; Whether it's the repercussions of the protagonist's changed plot or the e-sports level obtained through plug-ins, there is no detailed description. They just brush it off and then find the next TV series; In general, the author's writing has the feeling of "I have gone through the plot in my mind, it is very exciting, I just write something to fool myself."

I must be crazy. In the first two pictures, he was still a trainee, but in the third picture, he turned into a doctor. It's all a mess. Everyone who reads this is a ruthless person, and the more than 400 comments are probably just brushes. The starting point is really not good, this kind of book is still excellent.

This cover? Xiao Heizi, right? From now on, don't eat the eggs my brother lays. There are really no civet cats.

This cover is a bit too beautiful

When I saw your cover, I knew you were a little black guy with your chicken feet exposed.

Logic Cat

Can the author write "Duanmu Yan" to give this world's special photography a bit of a thrilling God of War shock? The previous armor protagonist in the novel was set to be confused like Kai Yi and Kai Er, and then the protagonist played a Duan Muyan type character. Then the armor rescue team in the novel had an armor similar to Shura, which the protagonist could penetrate. I especially want to see what a righteous and evil person like Duan Muyan would do if he wore Shura.

At the beginning, this book seemed to be very creative and eye-catching, but to be honest, the second copy was written like a running account. E-sports is not like e-sports, and there are no cool words and cool operations. It felt bland and unremarkable, making people unable to understand what the protagonist is going to do. In addition, the author is slow to update, once a day, and this second copy is even more confusing. I hope the author can make adjustments, otherwise I feel like I'm going to give up the book because I haven't even finished the second copy!