This Actor Has a Big Problem

At the beginning, this book seemed to be very creative and eye-catching, but to be honest, the second copy was written like a running account. E-sports is not like e-sports, and there are no cool words and cool operations. It felt bland and unremarkable, making people unable to understand what the protagonist is going to do. In addition, the author is slow to update, once a day, and this second copy is even more confusing. I hope the author can make adjustments, otherwise I feel like I'm going to give up the book because I haven't even finished the second copy!

Interesting ideas, out-of-control writing, disintegrating rhythm, and book-eating settings. If you can plan the outline from scratch and clarify the plot, it can be regarded as a good book.

Really, the first copy is very good. After reading the first copy, I wanted to continue reading. When it comes to the second dungeon, I won't talk about the length of the plot. The author has his own considerations, and then the most classic one comes. In the second dungeon, the protagonist can't stand what Lan Tian does, and he can't stand that he can fight so well with his talent and superpowers. As a result, in Chapter 36, when he returns to reality, the agent asks the protagonist if he wants to go to those acting classes to learn. The protagonist backhandedly said, "No need, just wait to find an actor." The dungeon directly accepts their abilities. I was stupid when I saw this. Isn't this a poisonous point? Are you doing contrast or ntr here to write novels? Abandoned

The subject matter is quite interesting, but the writing is quite ordinary. The first dungeon was novel and interesting, but the rest were basically repetitive routines, which was too boring. After reading four or five dungeons, I really had no interest in reading any more.

It looks better than I imagined, the writing is smooth, and the story structure is good so far. Actually, I read it with some preconceptions at the beginning. After all, there are too many novels about being reborn as a star. I didn't expect an unexpected entry point. I hope the more I write, the better. Another: I feel like some people do not want to click in because of the repetitiveness I mentioned, but I don't have any good suggestions.

This cover is too revealing, Xiao Heizi, I advise you to lychee

I just realized on the cover that the author is a little bitch.

To be honest, the plot is very interesting, but the writing is not very good. Take that e-sports drama as an example: A lot of words were spent complaining about how NC and distortion the plot itself is, and then there is no emphasis on describing the changes caused by the protagonist; Finally, after waiting until the simulated plot is over, the protagonist can return to reality and pretend to be cool, but in the end, he directly explains the process of reality change and then ends it hastily. It's over; Whether it's the repercussions of the protagonist's changed plot or the e-sports level obtained through plug-ins, there is no detailed description. They just brush it off and then find the next TV series; In general, the author's writing has the feeling of "I have gone through the plot in my mind, it is very exciting, I just write something to fool myself."

I must be crazy. In the first two pictures, he was still a trainee, but in the third picture, he turned into a doctor. It's all a mess. Everyone who reads this is a ruthless person, and the more than 400 comments are probably just brushes. The starting point is really not good, this kind of book is still excellent.

This cover? Xiao Heizi, right? From now on, don't eat the eggs my brother lays. There are really no civet cats.

This cover is a bit too beautiful

When I saw your cover, I knew you were a little black guy with your chicken feet exposed.

Logic Cat

Can the author write "Duanmu Yan" to give this world's special photography a bit of a thrilling God of War shock? The previous armor protagonist in the novel was set to be confused like Kai Yi and Kai Er, and then the protagonist played a Duan Muyan type character. Then the armor rescue team in the novel had an armor similar to Shura, which the protagonist could penetrate. I especially want to see what a righteous and evil person like Duan Muyan would do if he wore Shura.

What does cover mean? Xiao Heizi doesn't have branches, so it's fried fish with flavor, right?

The biggest problem with your book is that the main character doesn't want to act. When you say that the protagonist's acting is to do whatever he wants, the more unrestrained your protagonist is, the more disgusting it will be when you get a very good drama effect in the end. It feels like you are a student and you can check Baidu when you get the plug-in exam. Even if you don't use this plug-in to answer the questions well in the exam, you are still scribbling on the exam paper. After the results came out, you were ranked first in the school. That's probably what it feels like.

Bring your cover with you to court

This cover, Xiao Heizi, dare to hack me🐔Brother

I don't want to watch this copy of Tomb Raider, I don't know why🐶

The cover comes in. Why does this bronze mask look so much like my home?

I bought 20 chapters, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The writing is good, but you are targeting the city, and ended up with an infinite stream. I came here to see the real-life plot. The copy is getting longer and longer, and I have to repeat it again when I return to reality. The final result is explained in three or two sentences, and there is a sense of separation between the copy and reality. I have withdrawn, please come on.

No, what the hell is the protagonist looking down on Lan Tian and not learning acting just because he has cheats? ? ?

This book is really a bit difficult to describe. The creativity and characters are quite lovable, but the detailed design of the novel is a headache. Too many places are dealt with in one go, which always interrupts the experience halfway through. . . Just like this comment, when it's time to expand on it, it's gone.

When I saw the cover, I jumped in. After reading the comments section, I immediately retreated.

It turns out that the first dungeon, Treating a Cat, was a scene from Deep Love in the Rain

I want a finer one

The first dungeon was quite interesting and had a bit of a fun-loving feel. However, it turned out to be a bunch of defense. Each time, a bunch of boring plots were made to slow down the pacing before entering the next dungeon. There was also a superfluous setting that had psychological implications that could affect the dungeon, and all the fun-loving flavor was gone. This author is not suitable for writing a book, and I can't figure out what is fun.

Fathers, please find a book where the main character's skill is to punch hundreds of punches in an instant. It's a bit like JoJo. His hands are on fire and he collects souls to synthesize skills. The second skill is to plant a flag to increase the power of teammates and so on. Later, he accepted a loli apprentice. Please.

When will the new book be released and what will it be?

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Investment with confidence] A director graduate from his previous life, accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning, sold a miserable job in variety shows, professional cheating, blackmailing people with group performances, and live broadcast begging Detect ghosts and scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make scary videos to scare people, make funny skits, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect them into movie materials, and come back to scare the audience crazy on the big screen in reality