Eternal Speaker

I think everyone seems to take it for granted that a 13-year-old child is threatened by evil forces and can fight back. This may be because other authors have written it much better than me, because after all, I drew the material from real cases. The prototype of Reid's opening chapter comes from 2021. A 19-year-old student from a vocational high school in Hunan was forced to do an internship in a factory. His fingers were entangled in the machinery, resulting in disability. The palm was pressed by the machine for an hour before it stopped, causing the best treatment period to be missed and the palm to be cut off. The final result was that the school and the factory were playing football against each other. Red was almost the same age before he traveled through time, and he was a college student with no work experience, and his test level was average, so I felt that this way of writing would be in line with the character setting and the background of the times. As for whether the poison points vary from person to person, if I write that Red is extremely smart, glib, and solves the problem by diverting trouble to the east, then it will conflict with the previous plot of "I am worried about failing the exam, so I buy talisman water." By then, I am afraid it will become a more serious poison point. Because a college student with a high IQ can pass the exam without relying on talismans even if he doesn't have any golden fingers. This is obviously even more illogical.

I just finished reading the free chapter, and my evaluation is: Wenqing is too sick. I wanted to write a story about a small character and a big epic, but it turned out to be too pretentious; I wanted to write about the protagonist's gradual transformation, but the twist was too sudden; I wanted to write about the greatness of the people in the supporting role, but the result was that the protagonist himself was a scumbag (not a derogatory term). Summary: Don't write if you don't know how to write Personal complaint: The author's favorite saying is: If you like to read, don't leave. If you really think this way, don't express it. You can just enjoy it by yourself. Now that you have sent it out, you still send it out at the starting point. There are two situations: making money and wanting to be read or appreciated by others. (I can't think of any other situations) Since it's for these two purposes, why can't others comment even a word? Can't you accept any criticism?

In fact, if you look closely, you will find that the entire timeline from Chapter 1 to Chapter 100 does not exceed 10 days. In these 10 days, the protagonist experienced many events and became a professional. He defeated the black-hearted factory, greatly improved his strength, joined the church, defeated the false god in the dream, and came face to face with the profession of emperor. It seems that I have experienced a lot, but in fact it is all empty, just like duckweed without roots. Why do you say this. First, the protagonist has not even fully settled on his career plan. Two, the protagonist is devouring the inheritance of the overseer. It seems that he is rich, but in fact he has not changed at all. He is still wearing rags and pretending to be noble. Third, I am a collector by profession, and I have a lot of experience, but when it comes to collections, the author deliberately hides it. Even the treasures taken from those heroes were treated coldly, intentionally or unintentionally. To put it simply, I personally feel that the protagonist is half a puppet. It is a plot that appears suddenly, forcing the protagonist to move forward, rather than the protagonist pushing and guiding the plot forward. But it can also be seen from the comments. There are more than 200 chapters and more than 200 reviews, but as a newcomer, it is definitely good.

I think it's pretty good-looking. The setting is a bit similar to "Lord of Mysteries", but a bit different from "Lord of Mysteries". First of all, the world where the protagonist lives is an era similar to Victoria. The protagonist Red has a clone from a hundred years ago at the beginning. When Red sleeps, he can possess the clone from a hundred years ago. I don't think it's a coincidence. There should be a reason behind it. Just like Klein's acquisition of the Origin Treasure, it's not a coincidence.       The protagonist Reid obtains [Professor] through a clone, which is similar to the "divineer" potion that Klein swallowed (because the novel is somewhat similar to Mystery, so I use it as an example). The [Professor] in the novel is similar to the sequence path in Mystery. For example, the protagonist takes [Collection] Home] route, and other routes including [Scholar], [Emperor], [Clockmaker], [Bell Ringer], etc., And promotion is also divided into ten stages like Mystery, because promotion in the novel is related to the concentration of ether blood in the body. The higher the concentration, the faster the promotion. But unlike in Mystery, where you need to act according to the names of each sequence stage of Sequence 9~0, in the novel, after the protagonist takes the [Collector] route, the protagonist only needs to play the qualities or characteristics of [Collector]. For example, the characteristics of [Collector] are wealth, greed, curiosity, and entertainment, then the protagonist must show wealth, greed, curiosity, and entertainment in life. This can increase the concentration of ether in the blood in the body, which is similar to how mystery acting speeds up the digestion of characteristics. However, the ether concentration in the blood in the body has a threshold and will go crazy and out of control if the concentration exceeds 89%. If you want to enter a higher stage, you must inject the blood of the magical creatures related to the [Collector] route into the body. This is also similar to taking potions for each stage of secret promotion. Because in order to avoid an out-of-control and crazy ending, each [Professor] is promoted to evolve himself, because the apex of each [Professor] comes from different original legendary creatures, such as [Clockmaker] and [Bell Ringer]. The apex of the two routes comes from the original legendary creature "Sand Beast of Time", which is similar to that in Mystery Tianzun is the culmination of the three paths of the Gou San Family, and the power of the "Sand Beast of Time" is divided into ten types of magical creatures. [Professional] must absorb the blood of ten magical creatures when reaching the threshold at each stage. Anyway, in the end, it is for [Professor] to evolve into the original legendary creature to completely get rid of the shadow of out-of-control madness. The abilities of various [professionals] are too conceptual. For example, the protagonist [Collector] has the ability to "collect". In addition to rights and religion, everything can be "collected". I was stunned when I saw the protagonist collecting other people's "handsome faces", "life spans" and other things. It is too similar to the pawns in "Pawn Shop No. 8" That I have watched. The protagonist's [Collector] profession will gain new abilities at each stage of the concentration of ether in the body's blood. For example, if the concentration of ether in the blood reaches 10%, it will gain an ability, reaching 2 0% and gain another ability, and then the ether concentration in the blood reaches the threshold of 89%, and the blood of the high-level magical animals of the corresponding route is injected into the body, so that the body can be promoted to the second stage, and then the ether concentration is increased to obtain new abilities, and then after reaching the blood concentration threshold of the second stage, the blood of the new third-stage magical animals is taken in to advance to the third stage, and so on for a total of ten stages. The blood of ten magical animals is transfused, one magical animal's blood at each stage.

The docile giant shell dragon: The poison of the holy shield is alive.

What fusion monster? That's called mindless and unhappy

It would be nice if the protagonist was written off in the ending. People like the protagonist, with blood and filth dripping from every pore, really don't deserve to live. I think even if you read online novels, you still need to have a basic concept of good and evil. After all, there are indeed many people like the protagonist in reality who exploit all the weak, not for survival, but for enjoyment.

Considering that the secret society in "From the Star Abyss" next door has appeared, this post will continue to be updated ᕕ( ᐛ ; Prime Minister [Emperor] Destructive profession; Core ability [Taxation]; Expansion ability [Majesty of the Emperor] [Divinity granted by the emperor] [Returning government to the people] [Army of the world]; Bloodline ability [Disaster of Wolves] [Brilliant Thunder Teeth] [Howling Mountains and Rivers] [Maze of Illusions] [Polar Age] [Yellow Plague of Pain] [Spitting Corpses] [Secret Order of Death] [Endless] Battlefield]; Hidden Ability: The higher the blood concentration of ether, the stronger the physical strength; the price is the joy of sacrifice; no quality; from the Lord of Dominance, 'Dark Titan' Gelbroth Wisdom Speaker [Scholar] construction profession; core ability [research]; expansion ability [unidimensional decomposition] [accurate reshaping] [power of collapse] [immediate flight] Ascend]; bloodline ability [Blood Seal Call] [Mechanical Soul Resonance] [Saint Identification] [Desecrated Demonic Eye] [Moon Cycle] [Destruction Moment] [Scientific Theorem]; The price is fertility; Quality: Transcendence; From the Lord of Knowledge, 'God of Insight' discerning eye Greedy Speaker [Collector] (called [Terminator] after awakening) A self-contained school (playing profession); core ability [Collection] ([Monopoly]), expansion ability [Treasure Vision] [True Face Revealed] [Grand Exhibition] [Cultural Relics Restoration] (after awakening, it is [Mergers and Acquisitions] [Unlimited Investment] [Hyperdimensional Market] [Ultimate Exploitation]; after reforging, they are collectively called [Exhibition Hall]/[Exclusive Release]); Bloodline ability [Crystal Palace] [Eternal Stone Forest] [Earth Temple] [Sky Garden] [Star Fortress] [Emerald Dream] [Silver Castle] [Golden Kingdom] [Glory World] [Chaos Storm]; The prerequisite for awakening is resurrection from the dead; the price is the sacrifice of the right leg; qualities: curiosity, greed, wealth, entertainment, eternity; comes from the land of greed. Lord 'Gem Dragon King' Leviathandar Thirteenth Councilor: [Blacksmith] Construction-type profession; expand ability [Refining] [Lord of Gold and Iron] [Self-forge] [Armed Empire]; Hidden ability to increase strength; the price is sacrifice of sensibility; From the goat with eighteen eyes (?) [Astrologer] Playing type Occupation; Ability [Spiritual Precognition] [Stars Turning Years] [Stars are Brilliant] [Bishop] Playful occupation; Core ability [Baptism]; Expansion ability [Quiet and Dustless] [Apocalypse Oracle] [Goodwill Comfort] [Repentance in Place]; Hidden Ability Any behavior has a more powerful lethal effect on the soul [Tailor] Build Design occupation; ability [Threading the needle] [Farmer] construction occupation; unknown ability [Gourmet] destructive occupation; core ability [taste]; expansion ability [popular] [gentleman is good at cooking] [refrigerated fresh food] [hands-on] (referred to as [dining] after re-forging); from the living nebula [Barber] (also known as 'Vampire') is a playful profession; core ability [Shaping]; expansion ability [Bloodletting Therapy] [Dry Red Beauty] [Trend Mentor] [King of Charm]; Hidden ability to maintain the blood-sucking frequency can theoretically lead to eternal life; the price is an uncontrollable blood-sucking impulse and photophobia; from the Blood Demon Lord Brady Will [Doctor] Playful occupation; Core ability [Miracle comes]; Expansion ability [Patient diagnosis] [Death resistance] [Miracle rescue] [Never give up]; Hidden ability The higher the blood concentration of ether, the stronger the vitality and the higher the accuracy of movements; the price is that you cannot lie; quality: life-saving and healing; from the elemental lord of Highgarden·' Fountain of Miracles' Dam Gareth [Writer] Construction-oriented profession; Core ability [Material collection]; Expansion ability [Published works] [Revised and reprinted] [Improvisation]; Bloodline ability [My World]; Hidden abilities All abilities only consume the 'fee' generated by creation; Quality: Imagination; From the future pigeon [Play Home] Play occupation; Core ability [Game start] [Engineer] Construction occupation; Core ability [Construction]; Expansion ability [Miracle Project]; Quality: chic (?) [Soldier] Destruction occupation; Core ability [War]; Expansion ability [Army mode] [Navy mode] [Air force mode] Space Mode; Bloodline AbilityDecisive WeaponHigh Energy Explosion; The price is permanent closure of inspiration and loss of imagination; From Highgarden Elemental Lord Gurgatharos TeacherPlaying profession; Core ability [Teaching]; Expansion ability [Teaching by words and deeds] [Leading by example] [Guidance] [Last lesson] ; Hidden ability: The body is always in the best condition at all times Seventy-two Jury: [Mathematician] Destructive profession; Core ability [Whole Dimensional Visualization], expansion ability [Digital Replacement] [Arcane Secret Method]; Hidden ability The higher the blood concentration of ether, the stronger the power; The price is to sacrifice the left eye; Quality: Practical [Sailor] ability [conquer the ocean] [Ocean wrist] [boating on the lonely sea]; blood ability [frozen glaciers] [merchant] core ability [barter]; expansion ability [realization of value] [heavy purchase] [discount dumping] [gardener] playful occupation; ability [green thumb] [rhythm of growth] [ Lush branches and leaves] [fruitful]; from plants [Botanist] construction occupation; core ability [herbal research]; expansion ability [photosynthesis] [benign mutation]; hidden ability The higher the blood concentration of ether, the stronger the [photosynthesis] effect; from dragon creatures [Priest] destructive occupation; nuclear Mental ability [Sacrifice]; Expansion ability [Endless Life] [Near Light] [Half-step Shadow] [Otherworldly]; Quality: Tranquility; Comes from Goat [Knight] Destructive profession; Core ability [Full Arms]; Quality: Sacrifice; Later separated into [White Knight] and [Black Knight]; Comes from the Lord of Qionglan Deep Water, Abyss Cang Long Yabais [White Knight] Destructive profession; core ability [fully armed]; expansion ability [grinding teeth] [shark hunting and diving] [endless madness] [bloodthirsty soul] (collectively known as [pale armor] after reforging); bloodline ability [white crystal evil ghost] [celestial riding] [power of lava] [moonlight messenger] [astral jump] Leap] [Destruction Slash]; Hidden ability can pass on the profession to others; The price is to take out the spine; Quality: Sacrifice; From Jaws [Black Knight] Core ability [fully armed]; Extended ability [Never retreat] [Thousands of tempers] [Wall of despair] [Refuse to obliterate] (collectively referred to as [Shield] after reforging); Bloodline ability [Absolute Rigid Body]; Quality: Sacrifice; From Killer Whale [Killer] Ability Unknown; Quality: Happiness [Bell Ringer] Ability [Tolling of the Bell] [Time of the Waning Moon]; From the 'Sand Beast of Time' [Lawyer] Playful occupation; Core ability [Accusation]; Expansion ability [Loophole in the rules] [Chaos defense] ] [Proof of Innocence] [Between Dissociation]; Hidden Ability Spells Come with 'Chaos', 'Confinement' and 'Slowness' [Assassin] Ability [Kill with One Hit] [Executor] (also known as [Executioner]) Destruction-type profession; Core ability [Execution]; Expansion ability [Mottled Blood Shadow] [Perpetual Destruction] [Enforcement] [ Final Conviction]; Hidden Ability Reaction and action agility are enhanced with the increase in the number of lives killed; From 'Magic Machinery': Autonomous Terminator Six Hundred and Sixty-six Citizens: [Thief] Core Ability [Theft]; Expansion Ability [Dexterity] [Flash]; Hidden Ability The higher the blood concentration of ether, the more explosive power Stronger, faster movements; from crow [Wanderer] playful profession; core ability [travel backpack]; expansion ability [aimless] [shadow pairing] [Weather Forecaster] ability [emergency notification]; from something with feathers on four hands [sailor] ability [from the deep sea]; from blue-ringed octopus Similar creature [Vigilante] Ability [Alert Law Order] [Heart of Machinery] [Order of Order]; Quality: Rigorous; Comes from 'Magic Machinery': Autonomous Terminator [Police] Destructive profession; Ability [Pursuit Mode] [Trace Search] [Investigation]; Comes from Horse; Quality: Firm [Reporter] Ability Power [Capture Moment]; from Tiger [Dancer] Ability [Blooming Proudly] [Knightsman] Core Ability [Martial Arts]; Expansion Ability [Dragon Comes into the World]; The price is to sacrifice his eyes; From dragon creatures [Scammer] (also known as [Deceiver]) a playful profession; Ability [Bluff] [Tactics] Fraud] [Severe voice and sound]; Quality: teasing; from fox [Psychic medium] [Pharmacist] [Mechanic Priest] Unknown ability Unknown: [Clockmaker] ability [Preparation time], from the 'sand beast of time' [Judge] ability [The hall is silent] [Evidence presented in court] [Clear observation] [ Fair Judgment] [Court Order]; The price is to sacrifice the fingers of the right hand [Prophet] Core ability to link the soul [Gambler] A playful profession; core ability to exchange things for things ([Gamble]?) [Brave]/[Saint] Pre-awakening ability [Soul Smell]; Core ability [Liberation]; Bloodline ability [Hunting] Dragon Arms]; The prerequisite for awakening is resurrection from the dead; The price is spontaneous combustion when activating the ability; Quality: Frankness; From San Valentino [Explorer] Destructive profession; Core ability [Strong Luck]; Expansion ability [Survival of the Fittest] [Challenging the Wilderness] [Remaining Life] [Evolution Endpoint]; The price is that it cannot be exclusive; Quality: Freedom ; From 'Tian Cheng Fulu' [Veterinarian] Ability turned into an animal; From dragon creature [Secretary] (also known as [Recorder]) playing profession; Expansion ability [Biography] [Historical Archives]; Bloodline ability [Cannot be buried] [Current Trends]; Hidden Ability Women can inherit the professional talents of both parents For future generations [Fisherman] core ability [fishing and hunting]; expansion ability [storm prediction]; quality: integrity [pianist] ability [chords sing in unison]; from spider [thief] playful occupation; unknown ability [chef] construction occupation; unknown ability [ice sculptor] constructive Occupation; Ability Unknown [Politician][Debater][Messenger][Poet][Warrior][Priest][Warder][Commander][Weaver][Sage][Miracle Master][Hermit][Flower][Magician][Lumberjack][Apprentice] Unknown ability All professionals are children of the hidden society Gaia. To be continued...

The problem is that the author has lost a leg. How many chapters will it take to reply? Can the author hold on until then? I feel very suspenseful, I bow to the author here, two bows, three bows, go to the soil, bury in the pavilion... Let's all go!

It feels like a lot is missing. Although I can accept some things such as Lyle and Amaro and the secret arrival at the end, there is nothing said about what happened to Red in the end and what he will do next, which is very uncomfortable. After all, Red is the protagonist. Even if he really decides to be the enemy of Secret, dying in the end is an outcome, but now it is just said that he is gone, without saying a word. The most important people in Red's life, Brother Yamer, and the curator's father were directly wiped out. One of the direct factors that caused all this, the Outland Society, also ran away, and so on. Many of them are unfilled holes. I have followed up step by step until now. I really just want an ending, because I respect every world I write, but what is left now is just an unfinished story, with hastily dug holes everywhere. Looking at all this, I just feel lonely and empty