A Hundred Lifetimes in Search of Immortality

The protagonist should create his own martial arts, the Sunflower Book, and in the future, his innate qualities will be improved, and his yin and yang will be transformed into a girl, hehe.

X thousand years later, N generation Yingzi sat on the grave of Li Qing, touched the tombstone and said leisurely: Little Lizi, if your name is not Gou, I am a real dog. You see, you are extremely busy every day, whether you are cultivating or busy working on your future cultivation, while I, Yingzi, sit back and enjoy the fruits of my life, never showing my face, so I am only responsible for your work.

I don't know what novels the book friends who commented usually read, but as a 10-year-old bookworm, I think the concept of this book is very interesting. I saw the traditional cultivation of immortality, and later came up with my own theory. The most interesting thing about "A Hundred Worlds of Immortality" is the character of the protagonist. Many book friends cannot understand the character of the protagonist who is as good as water, and water can benefit all things without competing for it, so they abandoned the book. Although it is not as good as Jin Yong of martial arts, the author should have read "Dragon" and "The Condor Heroes", and there is a hint of narrative. Personally, I don't think this means that the writing is not good, it can only mean that you don't like this style. I only learned about this book after watching a video recommendation. After reading the 2.1 Million words of the entire book online, I had endless aftertaste. I had something to say, so I came to the starting point. But I saw that the criticism was general and one-sided. The great road is fifty, the sky is forty-nine, and one of the people escapes. A very classic Taoist theme, do you book friends really understand it? Fromsinging to the quietness in heaven and earth, cherishing me alone tothe years are rushing like water, and my name is the past and present, recalling the flowing moon. The writing is very good and summarizes Li Qing's inner feelings before and after the insight. Can you book friends see the sentiment in it? If you don't establish your mind for heaven and earth, you don't inherit the sage's teachings, you don't establish your destiny for the people, you don't create peace for all generations. Just be casual, follow your heart, be not surprised by favors and disgrace, watch the flowers bloom and fall, have no intention of leaving or leaving, and watch the clouds roll and relax. This is the Taoist heart established by Li QingDongxu Realm in the book. Then he followed his heart like this. To put it bluntly, this book has a clear conscience and no faults. The pitfalls have been filled in but book lovers can't stand this style. It's like watching too much of "The Sky", watching too much of Chen Dong's passionate and exciting novels, but not getting used to the slow-burning "Lord of the Mystery". It's like I've read too many traditional novels and fantasy, and I can't stand the crazy "The Weird Immortal". I am making an objective evaluation, my account is my own, not a junkie The books are all good, it is true, the fault is only those who read the books

The practice system of this book is really problematic. Where is the greatness? ——There is no bottleneck in the realm, and monks are all one-punch supermen.       ，，，，， This book tells you that when your realm has come to an end and you want to break through, you can immediately break through to the next realm (there is no need to "charge the realm" and you will not fail). And the accumulation of foundation can be completed by high-level monks for you.       ，，？ Ask your master to put you in the virtual world for a while to relax your realm. Let your master find an opportunity for you to achieve the Supreme Dharma. Let your master help you with the teachings. Ask your master to give you ten identical world seeds to cast the foundation of the Tao.                                                                                                                                          Sit in the source pool for a while and be full of the truth .       ，，       ，       ，，        ？ Of course it's a breakthrough. Your master has fully developed your foundation, so you just need to make a breakthrough. Don't worry! There are no bottlenecks, no talk about xinxing, no talk about probabilities, no details involved, and there will be no failure. Soon, you can reach the height of your master, because there are no bottlenecks.        ，，，，，，， What if there is an "immortal" in this book? ——Then there can be countless immortals. What if there is an "Emperor of Desolate Heaven" in this book? ——Then all his relatives and friends can be Emperor Huangtian.

You still deleted my post. I have already made a very objective evaluation. Jin Dan was a fairy grass before, but it can only be regarded as a good grass in Dongxu. After changing the world, it is just bad money. People who have read it can refute me if they disagree. Only people from sha ruan deleted my post.

It's really written. . . I've read 80% of the book and handed it over dozens of times. I'm about to give up the book. The more you go to the back, the more Akashi you get. The front is pretty good. Look for a few flaws. 1 The more you go to the back, the more sloppy the writing becomes. There are frequent typos and a lot of wrong sentences. You can even write "The little fat man eats fairy legs". I don't know if the author put 10% of his efforts into it or if it was just a hastily made thing. I laughed out loud when I saw this. The original text had been changed when I read it, and I learned this from the book reviews. The same is true for many typos, but even after corrections, it is obvious from the text that the author did not care about it 2 The character line is getting more and more messy. There are only a few interesting characters, and most of them are industrial products produced by the assembly line of dog-legged and erroneous script templates. It is difficult to say that an organization like Lieyue has a long-term foreshadowing. When multiple plot lines and character lines meet, it is inexplicably unable to write a climax. Some readers said that this would fall into a cliche. I wonder if your online writing must be enjoyable before you can seek a high degree of novelty? What's more, the current way of dealing with it is not even as cliché. For a long time, Li Qing was the sun and the hunting moon was the moon. The meaning of staying day and night means that no one can meet each other. If you go on the stage, I will leave, and if I go on the stage, you will retreat. At this time, you can also use the cautious character of Li Sin as an excuse. Then everyone would be supreme when they met in Infernal Realm later, so long-term readers were looking forward to some sparks between the characters. As a result, Wang Gu wrote a few sentences and Qiao An seemed to have written a hasty sentence, and there was no ups and downs at all. Don't say that we may be able to meet and achieve success in the ending. I can't see it and I don't want to see it. That's the problem 3 This is history within history. Not to mention how many times you have used this routine, it can be considered a reasonable use of the routine. The problem is that a character like Ming Youzun, who has been foreshadowed in the middle and early stages, is captured and used as a slave as soon as he enters some immortal legacy. Are you kidding me? Are you kidding me? Are you kidding me? Yin Shen acts as the miner supreme and acts as a black slave. Everyone upgrades to the new map to seek punishment. They all enter the circus. The tiger jumps through the fire hoop and the eagle turns into a clown with a red nose and plays with throwing balls. All the foreshadowing has become a joke. Me and the dozens of dollars I paid have also become a joke. The author, you are a reclusive master of humor. Li Qing just stood there and watched. I wanted to rush in and give him a few slaps to see if he could still be a dog. Conclusion These three points are what I casually wrote in twenty minutes. There are more small and big problems hidden in the article that I don't want to go into details. I would like to warn all potential readers, don't fall into the trap, don't fall into the trap, don't fall into the trap! I usually don't read online articles, but now I'm fed a lot of food when I read it. I really appreciate the author and the major interest groups for their preferential treatment and deliberate efforts to draw me in to fill in the lines.

Now that I see it, I think this book has one very important point, that is, there are few battle scenes, and you can basically kill them instantly if you can fight. The central point is Gou. Even if he doesn't fight much and has little experience, the protagonist is at a higher level than others every time he fights and has a high error tolerance rate. Unlike some people who say Gou Daoliu, in fact, the weak can defeat the strong in various ways and he is invincible at the same level.

I hope it won't be like other novels of the same type that sell dogs on their own. If Pepsi is reborn continuously in the same world, then the past life should leave savings for future generations, lay a guarantee somewhere or create different forces. Apart from anything else, with the ability to learn constantly and the knowledge for the first time, build a country to help you find immortality. It's definitely better than doing it alone.

Please read it, especially Monday and Tuesday.

Yin-Yang Realm, Star Realm, Taixuan Realm, Thirty-six Heavens, the strongest one in Yin-Yang Realm is Dongxu, the protagonist has never seen Dongxu before he cultivates to Dongxu, and runs away when he meets Dongxu; the strongest one in Star Realm is Venerable, the author restricts Venerable to the same place, when the protagonist has enough cultivation, Venerable He was destroyed by Wang Gu as soon as he appeared; Tai Xuan was the strongest, so the author built a forest of mist to house all the supremes; the strongest in the thirty-sixth heaven were the Immortal Immortal and Ancestor, the author forced the Ancestor to sleep, and restricted the Immortal Immortal to the upper fourth heaven. The protagonist slowly developed, and when he was developed enough, he forced the Ancestor to wake up. The above is the standard way of killing monsters, upgrading and changing maps, written by Xiaobai Liu.