I Become a Sword Immortal in the Age of Declining Dharma

The author's lack of consideration: 1. Readers must be brought into the side of cultivators, so in the Age of Ending Dharma, if cultivators are personally humiliated, it will greatly hurt the readers' feelings. At the same time, combined with the characteristics of modern Chinese people who do not accept submission and have clear ideas, the encounters of cultivators must be quite aggrieved and will definitely explode their mentality. Therefore, there is no market for articles about abuse of masters. This is why. 2. The author has not carefully considered the plot. It's too natural, too naive, and it doesn't take human nature into consideration! Logically speaking, if the protagonist predicts what will happen in the future, the optimal solution is to send the future situation anonymously and send it everywhere. So, the choice of the cultivation world at this time is very simple. It is better to believe that it is there and directly destroy a fragile feudal dynasty into a weaker tribe or village or replace it and establish a dynasty of cultivators. It's not difficult at all and it's bound to happen. 3. The author uses game thinking to understand and construct the world, and has lost the authenticity of the world he created. The execution power and economic strength of the feudal dynasty are simply unable to deal with any "60 Minutes Superman", and they cannot even prevent the other party's beheading action. After every beheading, there is a high probability that the dynasty itself will collapse without the need for external force. 4. The virtual world needs to be logically self-consistent. Advantages: The author's writing style is good, well written, and easy to read.

Mortals can build a dynasty, but why can't those who cultivate immortals build it? With such huge energy, knowledge and various sect heritages, it is not easy to build a dynasty. Even in the Age of Dharma End, there are many ways to support the population and develop mortal forces. The leaders of those cultivating immortals of the big forces have not accumulated countless struggles and experience in various fields. No one is better than mortals in terms of business skills and worldliness. Mortals fight only by relying on interest ties, family inheritance and power and population. There are no big forces cultivating immortals. How come those cultivators who have lived for thousands or hundreds of years have no ideas and plans to develop and control mortal forces, and completely treat mortals as As a consumable, without any reasoning or plan for the future, I just know that it is a brainless and completely suicidal way to do it until the mortals gain power. This is too unreasonable, so I feel that there are logical loopholes in the mortals' fight against the immortal cultivating forces. There is a problem with the completely suicidal fighting method of the immortal cultivating sect from the beginning, which can make the mortal forces lose power. Control, leaving no escape route at all, it is completely a collective suicidal struggle to consume each other. There is no self-protection or compromise between the big forces of cultivating immortals. There is no reasoning or plan for the future. They just do it in a brainless way, and then usher in the rise and counterattack of the mortal forces. This is too plot-killing.

Cultivation, what is the purpose of practice? In the world of cultivating immortals, practice is to survive in the world and raise your head to the sky. Even if your closest relatives and loved ones have left you for thousands of years of loneliness, your heart will always be like a sword that penetrates all difficulties and pursues the unknown. In practice, in reality, the seven emotions and six desires can be controlled freely and moderately, thoughts are clear, living in the world, knowing the human heart, understanding the principles, feeling the changes of the four seasons, ten years as a day, enjoying the way of nature, sitting in this world, without any regrets.

Don't let this go. In the introduction, the Immortal Power turns into a blind fortune teller, the Demonic Giant makes a living by eating rats in prison, the Immortal Sect becomes the mascot of the imperial court, the Eagle Claw, and the protagonist's predecessor was killed by a wild dog in a mass grave in the end. Isn't this enough setting? If a mere mortal defeated an immortal cultivator, it would be consistent with the introduction. However, there are huge loopholes in logic and flaws. The defeat of a mortal cultivator by itself is a poisonous point. If cultivators secretly support mortals, it is a fraud. Unless the powerful immortals and demonic giants you are talking about refer to those low-level immortal cultivators. If you say that cultivators support mortals and then are killed by mortals, it will be even more serious. It is extremely poisonous. Also, the author seems to have a strong vision of the ancient mortal court? Forget about killing the immortal cultivators, hundreds of thousands of troops can come out to attack the mountain-protecting formation. Does the author know how many resources are needed to do this? All in all, logical flaws and introduction fraud must account for one of them. If you try to achieve both, the result will be that neither of them can be achieved. There is a problem with the basic settings.

It makes me laugh. Even if there is no spiritual energy, there are still decades to go. Immortal cultivators can control a large number of puppet dynasties in minutes. Before they lose spiritual energy, they can use earth and wood magic to attack a large immortal sect on a city wall of 100 meters. Outside the mountain gate, a mountain is moved to a new place, deep in the mountains and old forests, the road cannot be reached, and a large army attacks? Do you want a genius to marry into the dynasty? I don't know how to spit out an old trough

After reading three chapters, I feel that it is really ridiculous. Immortal cultivators are all-rounders. Even if their spiritual energy is gone and there are not many spiritual stones, it will not take many spiritual stones to assassinate an emperor easily. No matter how hard it is to support a powerful person, you can always do it. This is impossible. Love is directly reduced to letting dogs for the court. I am convinced. You are not cultivating immortals, but are in the world of low martial arts. If the spiritual energy is gone and the sword energy can't reach three thousand miles, then you don't need thirty miles, you can always have ten miles. Why can't you kill a high-ranking member of the imperial court to intimidate you? You will be like a tortoise being ridden on your head. You can't fight if you don't have enough spiritual stones, but you can't run away. In the middle of the night, send a foundation-building practitioner to burn food and grass for up to a week to see if they get away.

The story is good, but there should be some deviation in understanding the practitioners. It is impossible for a practitioner to enter the Age of Dharma Ending just because he has no energy. Otherwise, what to do if we invade other worlds, and what is the reason for entering the Age of Ending Dharma. It must have been sealed by a strong person and changed the rules of the world. .

After looking at the first few pictures, it is difficult to understand 1. Immortal cultivators do not have the word "immortal" engraved on their faces. Your feudal dynasty is not modern. In modern times, there are fugitives who cannot be found by the government. In ancient times, it is not easy for me, a casual cultivator, to find a place to pretend to be a mortal. I rely on a few magical skills to live a better life than ordinary people? No matter how serious the conflict between immortals and mortals is, what can you do? Even if you are not an immortal, can you find a place to hide? 2. Immortals are not fools. Even if the super sect is ready to be a turtle and wait for the spiritual energy to recover, they will not put their eggs in one basket. Do I have to conflict with the mortal forces that support me? 3. Why should the high-level immortal sects fight with each other? Wouldn't it be better for us to join forces to support the forces in the world? We can even support multiple forces to play balance. The Pope can play balance and dominate for a while with his faith, but we true immortals can't? 4. Immortals are not monolithic, but you, the mortal Wang Chao, are monolithic? Aren't the emperor's sons all of the same mind? 5. Why can't it be a mortal emperor who is the Emperor of Zhou, and our immortal sect is Qin, Chu, Zhao, Qi, Wei, Yan and Han. 6. We don't need to destroy the human dynasty several times, we only need to be able to destroy it twice. The first time will show the world that we can do it, and the second time will never be needed. Even if the mortal dynasty fights to unify the world, our attitude must also be considered. 7. It is not even necessary to destroy human dynasties, as long as it can destroy mortal rulers, the Immortal Sect has the right to be on an equal footing with the emperor. Even your succession to the throne must consider the opinions of the Immortal Sect, otherwise I can change someone to be the emperor.

I haven't read it yet, I just want to ask, your immortal cultivator doesn't cultivate the body. No matter how powerful the boss is, his physical fitness is the same as that of ordinary people. Isn't it true that even if you don't practice, your physical fitness can be improved every time you level up?

First, many people complain that immortal cultivators lose their aura and become useless. In fact, this is not the case. The author actually has many side explanations, such as internal friction. Immortal cultivators are not actually defeated by mortals. According to the world view constructed by the author, the way of heaven in this world should have will. There is also a section in Chapters 60-65 that describes what the protagonist saw when he watched the surviving deeds of the fourth generation of ancestors. According to the rumor, an ancient immortal swore to heaven to slay demons, defend the Way, and protect the common people in order to obtain the opportunity to practice immortality against heaven. This is essentially a transaction with heaven. The heaven-defying here should refer to a path that should not be allowed. The price for not being erased in the transaction is to protect the common people. However, the immortal cultivators in the book all regard human life as nothing, even if The relatively kind-hearted immortal cultivators can still feel at ease with the mortals who are accidentally injured in the fight, and when they make up for their mistakes, they feel that they have done a great favor and should be thanked. Therefore, it should be regarded as a violation of the agreement, so it should be regarded as being punished by heaven. In the age of the end of the law, the immortal cultivators have gone against the general trend, so the immortal cultivators should be defeated by heaven and not by themselves. They lost to mortals because they were useless Secondly, I also saw some people complaining about why the immortal cultivators did not control the mortal dynasty. My guess (personal guess, don't complain if you don't like it) is for the sake of orthodoxy. In the end of the Dharma era, large sects have three choices before them One is to remain in seclusion until the resources are exhausted and gradually die out. The second is to control the dynasty to gain a living space The third is to contact the mortal rulers and gain the initiative in order to hope for a glimmer of hope in the future Why not choose one or two of these three options? My guess is that some high-level immortal cultivators know some secrets and want to create a gradual transformation of the immortal cultivators. The situation of being suppressed by mortals in order to conceal the truth or pay the price. If you choose the second option, it will lead to a large consumption and dispersion of resources. However, top-level immortal cultivators want to win a glimmer of hope in the future but do not want to sacrifice themselves, so they need to concentrate a large amount of resources (especially immortal cultivation resources). Therefore, option three has become inevitable and the sacrifice will be huge. Some middle- and lower-level immortal cultivators keep their own resources concentrated and reduce losses, hiding the truth from the sky and ensuring that their vested interests will not lose too much The third is about finding new paths. I think they are divided into two categories: one is small and medium-sized sects (in comparison at all levels, the real top sects must have What is hidden from the world cannot be fully seen at the level of the protagonist, so the small and medium-sized sects may be what he knows and the big sects he thinks are not contradictory) they have found a way but it is incomplete or too late, while the top sects, like the second point of view, have a way but do not expose it in order to hide it, or it can only alleviate the inevitable contradiction. Of course, there must be truly powerful people who can find new ways to survive, so there should be monks who are similar to or have the same purpose as the protagonist in the later part of the book, but without the protagonist's prejudgment, if there are no such people, then it is indeed the author's problem The fourth is the introduction. My personal opinion is that the powerful people and magic giants in the introduction may be the losers of the game At the same time, everyone is welcome to publish their own opinions. The requirement is not to write too radical words, and everyone can discuss rationally.