Reborn on the Path to Immortality

Give him a spiritual root, and he can ignore the spiritual root talent and time and let Xiguang go from the second level spiritual method to the fifth level spiritual method in his lifetime. Give him a King Miao, and he can be turned into a technological zombie with unlimited growth in talent. Give him a trace of the residual soul, and he can let the King of Eternal Night use a trace of the residual soul to use the fourth level of spiritual magic. Give him a natal weapon, and he can make Si Yueyi's golden elixir swallow the Yuanying. Give him a great achievement weapon, and he can make Xiguang take out the prefecture-level great achievement weapon, City God's Three Rings. Give him another chance, and he can prevent the protagonist from cultivating the Nascent Soul in his fifth life. Give him another chance to solve the crisis of becoming a god. He can only give the protagonist a Xuan-level great achievement weapon. Give him a chance, he can make the protagonist repeatedly practice Qi and build the foundation. Give the protagonist a chance, and he can make the protagonist spend his whole life cheating and honing only a few skills. Give the supporting character a chance, and he can make the supporting character walk through the generations of the family and realize infinite iterations of spiritual methods. The famous MacArthur once said that the way of reincarnation is like this. As long as the protagonist is good, the supporting role can be done as you like. As long as the protagonist doesn't collapse, the whole book doesn't collapse.

One thing I really don't understand is why the author thinks that family is the most reasonable organizational system? Not to mention the party system that has been proven in practice, at least a sect is better than a closed family, right? And what's outrageous is that in the previous life, he said that the family system was good, but in the next life, he used a blood curse to destroy a branch of the family. Don't you think it's a slap in the face? And the protagonist's family also gave birth too quickly. How long did it take? Can you give birth to a person who builds a city? There is also the Bloodline Lock, which can be pressed on by anyone at will, and they will be loyal to the protagonist. Isn't this excessive? If you catch someone, you can lock them with blood. There is such a thing as a bloodline lock (the key is that this thing can be made by a mortal, it is not unique to the protagonist Goldfinger), how deformed is the social system?

It doesn't matter if your grades are not good I heard: Don't compete for the first place in running water, but compete for eloquence

I have been saving it for more than a month, and I will continue reading it today. I've been subscribing but haven't watched it. I will continue to subscribe because I think the author is really serious in writing, the writing style is also very good, and the setting is very rigorous and thoughtful. Continue to talk about the shortcomings, and hope that the author can continue to improve. There are still too many settings! It still feels like reading a manual! While reading the book, I spent a lot of time thinking about recalling the settings and sorting out the settings. I was so tired! It's like I wanted to relax my brain and read a novel, but it ended up making my brain even more tired. To be honest, I saw the end of the third generation, and there are still many settings and special terms that I still can't remember or understand. I hope the author will work harder and make the setting as simple as possible, so that readers will not feel tired while reading. In this way, I think the results will be much better. Your logic is so clear and rigorous, and your writing style is very good. Your grades can definitely be better. Please look for more deficiencies. (I feel like you just write "high" every time you write. You want to put all your thoughts into it, step by step, and you won't become a big fat man in one sitting)

In fact, the author's writing style is particularly suitable for Western fantasy. Wizards are the real researchers. They study life after life, and each breakthrough increases their strength. Wizards with labels such as "otaku", "scientist", "crazy and bloody", "indifferent to everything" and "pursuit of truth" are more like the protagonists in the article. Research in fairy tales is too inconsistent in the end. Cultivation of immortality pays attention to "philosophy" and "realm". The emphasis on "the unity of man and nature" is too idealistic. Moreover, immortal cultivators often live for thousands of years and have the accumulation of countless generations. Logically speaking, it is like a copper wall and an iron wall. As a result, the protagonist seems to be very "childish". Research has revealed that the protagonist's cheat is not a "book of reincarnation", but "the power of my search". Just thinking about it will find the truth of the world. Just researching will reveal the entire hierarchy of the world of cultivating immortals. It's so terrifying.

I haven't really liked it since Destiny.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 230. I could have accepted it with more grit in the previous settings, but suddenly I got a research institute to design armor and become an armored warrior? Why did you travel across the world? It's such a pity. There were few settings in the beginning and it still felt like a classic cultivating immortality. The feeling of reincarnation from waste to genius was also very good. I was wondering before why there were so few monthly tickets for a well-written book. I gave you all the tickets I had. Now it seems that there is a reason.

The turning point of the story occurs in the third reincarnation. First, the plot begins to accelerate crazily, the combat power increases, and the concept of destiny and the battle for the road that may eventually lead to immortality begin to be introduced. However, the problem also occurs here. After this, the plot of the story and the characters are directly portrayed. Everything is not only black and white as it should be, but also equivalent to directly abandoning the emotional side of human nature. There is only rational analysis, directly erasing the emotional mobilization and climax that the novel needs most. Is this still a novel? Although the follow-up author also worked very hard to continue it, the emotions were disconnected and the cohesion of the story dropped significantly. Then, for the rationality of the so-called son of destiny in the story, the fourth reincarnation of the father and daughter killed each other. It was called "For Destiny". I stopped reading it after that. I don't know how to continue it, but there is no doubt that it is not a masterpiece, and it is difficult to maintain a high-quality work. I have already ordered it all because I think it is unlikely to be poisoned midway through the novel, but I still made a mistake. I don't know whether it is because I am stubborn or as you said, seven years of writing has solidified or even ossified your thinking mode. Once the ideas exceed the predetermined range, the writing level plummets. But in the future, I will have a long memory. I can only read the first half of your novel, and problems will begin in the middle. It is a typical writing method where strategies cannot be combined with tactics. It's a pity. If we can't really make a breakthrough in the outline, then my false prophecy will become your true portrayal. I hope the next work will be better.

What does the author mean by rhythm?       ，，， If you don't skip it, re-editing will take up too much time. If too much of the rhythm is taken up, the rhythm will be slow. The pace is too slow, and I don't want to skip over rewriting the plot. Instead, I feel that reincarnation slows down the pace, so I simply don't write about reincarnation.       ，，…       Doesn't this book mean that the stronger the talent, the faster the cultivation? Doesn't reincarnation add talent? Even if you commit a crime, you will not miss any part of the process of rebuilding. The more reincarnations there are, the shorter the process of rebuilding will be. Do you have to drag out a hundred chapters with rubbish talents to let the protagonist repeatedly break through the golden elixir? The truth is to sharpen the knife and chop wood. You want the protagonist to become a billionaire, but you only let him move bricks...

When will you practice qi and fight against immortals? Are you excited?