The Sect Master's Martial Uncle Can't Possibly Be a Mortal

How did you manage to have only forty-odd posts out of over a thousand chapters? Where are you?

Black Oriole

The reasons I can't stand it are: First, if others cultivate for decades to reach the later stages, and you rely on ordinary resources to reach the later stages in a few months, that's just illogical! Second, if someone can master their skills just by relying on their master's guidance and doesn't need time to accumulate experience, then everyone who does is a genius, and that just feels awkward!

Personally, I think the biggest flaw is that in order to curry favor with a certain person (who tipped the reader "Beihe"), the character was suddenly added to the book. The character was already poorly portrayed, and it felt quite abrupt. The more you read, the more awkward it becomes whenever the character is mentioned. Once you get into the story, the image falls apart.

The protagonist, Qiao Jia, and Long Xing are the highlights, along with the spirit beast, the honey badger. Things were going well at first, but then the number of disciples kept increasing—princess, prince, city lord—it became too weak. The spirit beasts were also numerous. The main quest was just recruiting disciples and spirit beasts.

It's all the same old trick now: beat the weaklings, and the strongman comes along. It's really weak. Honestly, if even the Heavenly Venerable can intervene, doesn't that mean even the Invincible Old Man can intervene?

Li Jiaojiao

Dear author, this is really well-written, so enjoyable, and excellent. The plot flows so smoothly. So satisfying! (The original is definitely better. This is the second novel I've read on this app. Great review! I'm giving it a top rating.) I'll definitely give you more recommendation votes in the future.

The flaws are so-so, the plot is rather old-fashioned, and the pacing is too fast—it starts showing off before there's any build-up, and it ends before you can even get into the action. It's a book by a new author, good for practicing.

I hate that phrase "when soldiers come, we'll block them; when water comes, we'll dam it." They could have nipped it in the bud, but they insisted on waiting until the last minute. And wasn't the massive invasion of the Twin Universes just Ye Feng's insistence on going on a cosmic adventure? Even being trapped by the Dao Lord was just another example of him going on a cosmic adventure.