Immortality: Cultivating the Dao for My Next Life

It feels good, but your writing of Chapter 1 is too boring. You can just go straight to the story and occasionally explain the background. You can skip it altogether. A direct story that enhances the sense of immersion is the core of Chapter 1. You can explain it after Chapter 2, instead of Chapter 1, where you will be rejuvenated directly after the first picture. Then press to escape, then hide and practice, and then tell the previous story while practicing, just a short paragraph is enough, no need to be so long.

This is not called reincarnation. This is called return.

What I like most about the superior food and grass is that it doesn't have too much leveling or too much deus ex machina. There is a golden finger that is almost the same. As soon as I regained my youth, I returned to my sect to be taken care of by my brothers and sisters. Various adventures came to my door. This article is relatively restrained. When the protagonist learns a craft, he should learn it in a down-to-earth manner without inserting too many irrelevant plots in between. If necessary, skip the time. But one thing that is not reflected is the sense of vicissitudes of life between immortals and ordinary people. The aging of old friends and even the death of masters are a bit dull.

It's not bad, it's good to write at this pace The process of getting the wife is also reasonable Eat when you need to eat or not play, it's ambiguous and praised by readers But if you eat, you should eat, this kind of emotional Taoist couple, there will be a big hidden danger That is, the protagonist now has a Taoist partner, and the Taoist couple has successfully built the foundation If the protagonist builds the foundation If you fail, it will be funny if you become your son and nephew in the next life If you succeed in building the foundation, then at this pace, it is possible to write one or two hundred chapters. If you don't give the protagonist a cheat, the protagonist will never become an immortal in one life If you don't give the Taoist couple a cheat, the two or three hundred pages of ink on the day of the Taoist couple's death will turn into a big knife and cut into the readers' hearts. I don't know if the author can bear the backlash.

Very smooth, not bad, not like a newcomer, like the reincarnation of an old guy 🙂

Come on update! The author is great

I hope plug-ins like the Book of Eternity won't be written like infinite nesting dolls.

This introduction looks like the book written by Taoist Master who cultivated immortality in his later years. I don't know if the content is of the same type.

After so much preparation and writing two chapters for Killing the Fourth Level of Qi Refining, I don't even dare to think about how much trouble there will be behind it.

Write slowly, don't rush, keep working hard 😊