The Sword and All Living Beings

Personally, I feel that the biggest problem is the mismatch between the introduction and the content. It doesn't mean that you can't write this kind of slow-burning book, but you have to show it in the introduction. Nine out of ten people who read your introduction thought that the book should be labeled "easy, pseudo-invincible". As a result, in the first few chapters, the protagonist gave the impression that he was crying, tough-talking, and cowardly. People who come to your introduction will definitely not like your plot. People who like your plot may have been dissuaded by your introduction.

It's the guardian envoy with the fire-like cape❤️

There are many settings in this book, and the introduction is relatively fragmented. Basically, I only talk about it after the plot. I briefly summarize some of the settings mentioned so far. Please correct me if there are any mistakes 1. Warrior Warrior → Warrior (can be named a righteous man) → Knight (can be named a hero) Above the knight, a sect is established and called a grandmaster; practice Xuan Gong, refine Gang Qi, and complete martial arts Fully called Sanren 2. Swordsman Light swordsman, heavy swordsman: use magic weapon, no sword Sword user: use power sword, combat effectiveness should be linked to the realm of the sword itself Swordsman: there is a sword, but the sword heart is not enlightened Swordsman: art realm, only swordsmanship Swordsman: law realm, with swordsmanship and swordsmanship Sword fairy: power realm, sword power, swordsmanship, and swordsmanship. Have supernatural powers? Sword Master: The latest level that appears, seems to be particularly awesome (? 3. Sword Master Talisman Sword Master: Makes arrays, magic weapons, magic weapons, spiritual treasures Sword Forger: Makes swords into swords Currently, the rising target of Talisman Sword Master is only Sword Forger, but there should be more than that, which may be related to the historical background 4. Magic weapon Two classifications a. According to the content: light magic weapon (only magic, not increasing strength), heavy magic weapon (only strengthening strength, not including magic), true magic weapon (with magic, increasing strength) b. According to the formation method: yuan magic weapon (formed by a swordsman splitting with a sword), fu magic weapon (made by a fu sword master) These two classification methods should be able to Extended to Magical Weapons 5. Demonic Cave Wind-type Demonic Cave - Phantom Fire-type Demonic Cave - Metamorphosis Earth-type Demonic Cave - Creation Empty-type Demonic Cave - Space Dislocation From the example given by Mr. The result The Demon, the Demon Cave, and the Phantom: If the Demon comes, there must be the Demon Cave. The Phantom is the servant of the Demon, but it seems that there may not necessarily be the Demon in the Demon Cave? (Empty type) 6. Jianzhi It is only mentioned once by Zeng Liang.

After reading the comments, many new readers said that it was confusing at the beginning and could not understand. Regarding this issue, we cannot just read a few chapters and make subjective assumptions. Li Ren writes relatively slowly, and everyone gets into a good mood after about twenty chapters. At present, the pace of online writing is fast food. Maybe many book friends only read the so-called "three golden chapters", and some book friends even leave after reading only one chapter. There is no way, after all, we don't have that much energy to sift through so many books to find the ones that suit our tastes. Therefore, books with novel themes and eye-catching beginnings tend to do well at first. However, many of these books start high and then go low, and even books are cut off halfway. Sorry, I wrote so many words just because I wanted to say it. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. Everyone knows that Li Ren is an old author who only came back to write a book this year. Don't worry about the plot and writing, it's just that the writing is slow. Those of you who haven't read it yet can be patient and get better at the end, and the aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley. ps: You can go to the profile and join the group to play, write refills for the characters every day, contribute important events, or post articles. Thank you all for your love for the book Jian Zhongsheng and for your support of Li Ren. Acknowledgments🌹🌹

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It's okay, but there are some plots that need to be put aside 🙂, such as the protagonist's sword intention, light. He can move at the speed of light, and the author emphasizes this repeatedly. I don't understand this. Sword Immortal will not talk about moving at the speed of light, just in case someone prohibits movement. Is there any swordsman who can beat you? Moreover, if you kill people at the speed of light, someone can actually see you move your hands. You are too skillful. I won't say which is faster, death or the speed of light. Why can't death kill celestial bodies? Your celestial body will not die? The speed of light is 300,000 kilometers per second. The earth's equator circumference is only 40,000 kilometers, which means you can circle the earth more than seven times in one second. You can kill the turtle's Yaxian stand-in in just one second. Your world is seven times the circumference of the earth? You can write as if it were light, but the speed of light in the photo is so powerful 🙂 and then there is something else that disappears, blood relationship, these concepts are outrageous. The swordsman disappeared, and the swordsman only had a vague impression. And when you do it, the opponent can't sense it. I also want to know who can stop him from killing someone? I can only say that some concepts are outrageous. It has nothing to do with your own strength, it all depends on which awesome skill the sword has.

Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this article after the tie-up (only my personal opinion). Let's talk about the advantages first The biggest advantage of this article is that the characters are very good. The author's character creation is very easy. He can portray a vivid, full and lovable character in just a few words. Some people say that the pace of this work is too slow and it is easy to abandon the article at the beginning. To be honest, I When I read the first few chapters, I felt that I almost gave up on it, but when I saw that Zhao Zhao was willing to stand up for others even though he was afraid, I fell in love with this innocent and cute little boy who is brave and ideal, and was willing to continue reading. (Except for the recent emperor, I really want to vomit when I look at it. I can just mention the character I hate the most in the whole article.) I also like the rhythm of upgrading in this article. It is like eating and drinking. It is not too vigorous, but over time, it will naturally reach the level it should be, and the strength is always sufficient. It is a very relaxed and healthy upgrade route. There are also some authors who show off their sage in front of others. They always have to pretend to be cool. Some pretend to be too stiff and deliberate, and some want to pretend lightly. In fact, the traces are very serious. However, the protagonist of this article always pretends to be cool, and he pretends to be natural. No matter whether he is pretending to be big or small, there is no need to feel the embarrassment of using too much force. Finally, the CP is really awesome. When I first watched it, I just wanted to arrange and combine everyone to have an amazing party! The next is the shortcomings The first one is too lazy to write for details. Please refer to the article on December 29, 23, which said that certain plots should be thrown out of the mind. Then there are inevitably some obvious bugs in the plot + holes left unfilled, and the exit of many characters is too anticlimactic. For example, the secret realm where the swordsman guards the gate mentioned earlier, and the sneaky brother of Xiaoguang King, have not been mentioned. The latter I just assume that he gave up his revenge plan when he saw that Zhao Zhao was too strong. There were also some characters that I liked very much and were on the character card. I thought they would have a lot of roles, but I didn't expect that everyone would only have a little bit. Only Mr. Xing, Senior Brother, and Dangerous Sex had more roles. Shoujing Highlights went offline for 200 chapters and then came online again and finally found out that this person was not found. Senior Sister Zhu Ying's scenes only lasted for hundreds of chapters. This article is really not suitable for further reading. The author likes to describe a lot of things and then the two sides start bickering. Sometimes when you enter a chapter with full expectations, you will find that the dialogue from beginning to end has a helpless feeling that the whole chapter is watered down. Also, it took hundreds of chapters for this work to be titled "Sword Beings", and it seemed to be finished in a hurry. I hope this is just my fantasy, and the author will slap me in the face with another two million words. The last thing I want to talk about is that it is neither an advantage nor a disadvantage. It is that the description is too detailed, which is good in the first place, but sometimes it is not detailed enough and it gives people the impression that the author is scheming and is trying to limit the number of words. It's rare to have a long review. I hope this work will be completed smoothly and the author will get better and better.

Happy Winter Solstice! Have you ever had the urge to eat a bowl of glutinous rice balls after reading Jiji Zhaozhao's Tangyuan greeting picture~

Dear readers, we are now collecting interesting sword settings. If you are willing to set up a swordsman, you are also welcome. Li Ren will occasionally choose some as supporting roles or even supporting roles (well, it is actually crowdfunding). The sword settings are as follows: Sword: Yanggu Swordsman: Minghao (Sword Immortal) Swordsmanship: Sword Intent: Purple Qi comes from the east, revives, shines Supernatural power: Ten Days Lingtian >Sword Elephant: The Rising Sun (Becomes a Power) Sword Heart: Heart and Sword Unity , Xiaguang Ruicai Swordsmanship: Golden Silk Sword, Crying, Dancing, Thousands of Golden Lanterns, Raising the Clouds, Seeing Good Luck... Send the score: Yanggu, also known as Tanggu We are all smart readers of Qidian, so we must all understand it. Let me just say a few points: Sword meaning is a concept, and sword image is a specific thing with a specific image. It can be real or legendary, but it must be something that the ancients could imagine. Sword power is higher than swordsmanship and is higher than swordsmanship. The higher you go, the more powerful you are, and the more obscure your name is. If the swordsman is a swordsman, then there is only swordsmanship and no sword power. If you are a swordsman, there is only swordsmanship Swordsmanship is subordinate to swordsmanship. The best swordsmanship is swordsmanship. The high-end version is best to have a corresponding relationship, but not a one-to-one correspondence. After all, there is less swordsmanship and more swordsmanship. If there is a good sword, Li Ren may have some deletions. Please don't mind. Well, everyone is welcome to brainstorm. Li Ren is waiting to enjoy the results (escape~)

A belated Father's Day greeting picture🙏🏻 With Tang Zhao and Bi Yan by his side, Xing Ji is really a winner in life! I must be so happy to receive Tang Zhao's gift The way Tang Zhao looks at Xing Ji's reaction with anticipation is so cute! (: poke your head into your head) Wow, so warm