A Grain of Kunlun

This chapter shocked me. I thought just now that Jiang Ru died like this, her merits were complete and just right, but then Zhao Shu fed her the fruit with her mouth? ! It's normal to simply feed her fruit. It's not surprising that Zhao Mixing made such a choice, but in the end, she had to forcefully arrange to feed her by mouth. The strong taste was too much.

Some people have really been brainwashed by the white text. This book tells the story of a cultivator. The text is about cultivating the Tao. Asking outside is about cultivating the mind. How can life be smooth sailing? How can life not be miserable? It's normal to have ups and downs. I feel aggrieved for the author. There are so many human affairs and accidents and truths in it. Why don't you think more about every word in it?

This author is a good author, and he writes the book very seriously, but it is a little too detailed. What is this talisman, the effect of the material, the method, and the development of the situation, three-step explanation, and five-step analysis. It's good, but the setting is a little too long, which makes it uninteresting. I hope to be able to narrate some substantive and three-dimensional stories in a coherent manner, and focus more on the characters and stories. For example, the protagonist's buddy appeared for the first time, and there was not even a description of his appearance. As a result, I have never been able to remember his name 😅 Personal opinion

The gift of devotion. Qidian Chinese website. In the Xianxia channel, you are fantasizing about cultivating immortals. A grain of millet is hidden in Kunlun, and a millet pearl hangs in the sky. I met a fairy in my dream, and my cyanotic hair condensed into mysterious light. Infuriating energy and spiritual roots, hundreds of bones produce strange fragrance. Enter the Nine Palaces to save the gods, and there are many wonderful methods. Look up at everything and draw dragon seals with your pen. Randomly updated. Code words are boundless. The Great Sage and the Great Compassion. Great compassion and great wishes. Shifanghuahao. For the benefit of readers. In billions of calamities. The blade is infinite. Looking for sounds and feelings. It is difficult to determine the deity without color.

Hidden Text of the Divine Tiger

To be honest, in the middle of reading this book, I had the urge to give up the book. Mainly because Luo Xixian and his wife and the fox demon Jiang Ru gave me a very bad impression, but after persisting, I felt that there was no need to particularly dislike these characters. On the contrary, I was a little moved to see Zhao Shu's growth along the way. Zhao Shu is a practitioner who grew up without parents and was completely taught by a teacher. Later it seems that it was out of the desire to protect the protagonist. In fact, the teacher has been suppressing the protagonist's character, asking him to be cautious, abide by the sect's rules, respect teachers and elders, be diligent at all times, etc. On the one hand, he shapes the character of Zhao Shu. It created the early protagonist's life style and character. On the one hand, when the protagonist gradually emerged among the crowd and gained attention from many parties, especially Liang Guoshi's favor, the repressed part of the protagonist's character began to be slowly channeled out, especially when the protagonist's hope that Liang Guoshi's human world be realized and his vision of unifying the troubled world reached its peak. But when Liang Guoshi's plan for the human world failed, and the protagonist's two teachers and mother were killed in battle, he himself fell into guilt, regret, despair, and even had the idea of ​​self-determination. Later, he was arranged to hide in a fairy coffin to avoid pursuing soldiers. In the blink of an eye, 10 years passed, and he rejoined the world by chance (in fact, it was inevitable) from the outside world. In fact, you can clearly feel that the protagonists in this period have changed and grown a lot compared to before. They have even begun to have the demeanor of a teacher who preaches, teaches, and solves doubts. They no longer put their ideals of benefiting the world on the illusory world of human beings, but truly go to the world of practice to pursue their own pursuits. Reading this novel, you can feel that the protagonist is a real person with flesh and blood, constantly changing and growing, rather than a "fake" person with a perfect character, which is already commendable. Finally, I hope that the author can write better and better and become more and more popular. I will keep chasing this book, come on!

Today I heard that the author's writing is a hobby, and I feel relieved I can't make particularly in-depth comments, but in my opinion, the quality and care of the author's writing, especially the integrity of the structure and the flexibility of the use of settings, are relatively excellent in online articles. In contrast, many authors do not "have it, but are not eager to disclose it" settings, and often spread the article too wide to make it difficult to recover the foreshadowing, wasting the dramatic tension, and finally leading to a nondescript ending. At the character level, whether it is "Fang Wai Zhi Yi" or "Kunlun Yimao", they can break away from the conventions of online novels and follow the internal logical development of their own plots and settings, which is also commendable. Some readers have complained about this and have made lengthy comments. Although I don't want to argue with them over this kind of carrot and cabbage thing, but sometimes I have to worry that if I don't speak out, the author will be biased and change his style. Since the author is not writing for a living, he must be able to continue to maintain his independent thinking and his own style. At the same time, he also looks forward to more and more outstanding works from the author in the future.

Are you picking up worn-out shoes again? If you really write the fox as the heroine, that would be really fucked up

Now it seems that the person surnamed Luo cannot be called the trumpet Hongxueke. The protagonist actually looks like a trumpet Liang Guoshi - a young Liang Guoshi who has not yet become a chess player. In terms of Zhang Yangjin, the two of them are quite similar. As a teacher, Zhang Ruijing is really not good at preaching and imparting knowledge. He is even worse than the vague villain Liang Guoshi. In the previous book, the light and dark lines between the "body-snatcher" Xuan Weizi and the "original body" Eszhuo can be said to run through the entire text. "Fang Wai Zhi Yi" is a contrast between Xuan Weizi and Aisizhuo - Xuanweizi, who was defeated and reincarnated, has the enlightenment of being in harmony with the light, and has obtained the immortal way; Aiszhuo, who is a scheming figure, has become the enemy of the whole world and has fallen into troubled times. The comparison between the two parties illustrates the author's understanding of Taoism and body-building. It is worth mentioning that the same is true for Nazarui, who is exactly the same as Eszhuo and Xuan Weizi in the previous life. I guess this is because the author set the tone of the whole story about the entanglement between Xuan Weizi and Astra at the beginning of the book, and did not want the real Astra to appear earlier, so he created a similar template of Nazarui and Xuan Weizi to compete against each other. If Eszhuo can be understood as Xuanweizi's shadow and Xuanweizi's past, then Salui is Aiszhuo's counterpart in the present world. Guoshi Liang in this book is just like Eszhuo, Nazarui, and Xuan Weizi in the previous book. He has the same magic power that reaches the sky and has demonstrated immortality for several times. He has the same pride and arrogance and arbitrarily rules the world. In the end, he will also end up with the same embarrassing end - Liang Guoshi will definitely not be able to ask for it! It all depends on the author's thoughts as to whether he will be like Nasalui, who will lose his soul and never be reincarnated, or whether he will fall into the world of mortals like Eszhuo, or whether he will be enlightened and reborn like Xuan Weizi. Talking back to the protagonist of this book, Zhao Shu, he was originally supposed to be a character like Eszhuo and Xuan Weizi, but unfortunately his temper was suppressed by his teacher. This can be seen from his relaxed temper after leaving the teacher in Xingluo County. However, the teacher cannot suppress Zhao Mi for the rest of his life, and he still has the guidance of the national master. If this continues, he will inevitably become Xuan Weizi, second to Liang Guoshi - if he does not meet the female fairy Lingxiao. Of course, it is no coincidence that Zhao Shui is the protagonist after all. He has the immortal fate of Lingxiao and is able to "change his destiny against the will of heaven." According to the author's thinking, the beginning of this article points out that going to Chongxuan Pavilion to obtain the True Essence Lock destined Zhao Shu to have an entanglement with the Imperial Master. Let me make an analogy with Fang Waizhiyi, then the Imperial Master to Zhao Shu is what Eszhuo is to Xuan Weizi. However, Zhao Shu is different from Xuan Weizi after all. In his previous life, Xuan Weizi was an earthly immortal master who incarnated as Wu Wu. Zhao Shu is now just a newly condensed Xuan Pearl. He cannot experience the world and see through the world like Xuan Weizi. Compared with Xuan Weizi, his thoughts are definitely closer to those of ordinary people in the secular world, and will undoubtedly bring more twists and turns to his practice. I hope the author can bring a different story from Xuan Weizi.

Not many people have read this book. The main reason is that it's like the protagonist of The Walking Dead who is aimless.