Azure Scroll of Miro

You wrote Across the Worlds, and your book is absolutely popular. It's not that it can't be done, and it's too fast, a bit like Infinite Flow. The main reason is that it's too complicated and makes you feel dizzy when you look at it. The character of the protagonist is quite to your liking.

The world view of this book is also very grand. The land of Hanxia is isolated and polluted (located in the east of the world) by the emperor (the incarnation of the earth or the earth is the incarnation of the emperor). The three islands in the south are not friendly neighbors (there is also a great god who controls the time sequence with the emperor). In a realm, both enemies and friends), the northern countries often think of invading invaders (I wrote a Jianmu Taoist who doesn't know whose vest wants to control the underworld), and there is the Guixu Sea in the west that separates the Western Continent (there is a Holy Seat that feels like Jesus swallowed the sun god). In the land of Hanxia, ​​there are also various illusory realms or small broken worlds, and there are also broken worlds outside the entire big world. The protagonist came from Taixu Illusion in his previous life and was the emperor's back-up man. His development path is suspected to be the same as Hanxia's human way, the emperor (the earth way), and the protagonist's palm (the way of heaven) to form the three talents of heaven, earth and man. Moreover, the style of writing is also very fairy. It is extremely rare to find true fairy writing. It has a fairy spirit and is not the kind of novice who only cares about leveling up.

If you have finished writing the Jade Emperors of the Three Qing Dynasties, then let's write about Nuwa hahh

1. The protagonist has an awkward personality. He often does something he has clearly decided to do, but ends up giving up on compromise due to various reasons. 2. The protagonist's IQ fluctuates from high to low. He clearly has the experience of sitting on the throne of the Emperor of Heaven in the fantasy world, but in Hanxia, ​​he did not believe that the enemy would dare to attack him several times, and placed his hope that the enemy would not dare to attack him. 3. The supporting characters are awkward. Regardless of the protagonist or villain, it is probably to increase the conflict. They are always unable to do what they want to do for various reasons. 4. The content is too procrastinating. It is normal to write twenty or thirty chapters in one holiday, but after reading it, I felt that it was so long-winded that I didn't have much impression. It felt like it talked a lot but seemed to say nothing at all. 5. There are a bunch of setting introductions that look a bit fairy-like, but they all have no outstanding points. The more you read, the more confused you become. In general, it is obviously a good story, but the content it tells makes people tired and unable to stand it. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. Don't listen to what the family says

I have finished writing The Three Purities, and I really want to write about the Jade Emperor

The writing of this book is average, the relationship between the characters is too naive, and it is very embarrassing for you to read. Can't the title be more natural? When you meet a Taoist priest, call him Taoist friend, Taoist brother, or directly by his Taoist name When you meet a monk, call him master, mage, eminent monk, or even monk directly When you meet a god, you can call him Zunshen, or directly call him by his name When you meet a man, call him brother, Xiongtai, or Calling cousins When you meet a woman, you can call me miss, girl, fairy, or Mrs. Too formal.

This book doesn't add so many messy things. It says that the results of traditional cultivation of immortals will definitely be doubled. I don't understand it.

I have probably read dozens of chapters, but I still want to complain about the chapter about Elder Qian. Many people criticized the author in this chapter's book reviews, and I think they were right. Because the author simply stated the incident as Elder Qian was fighting evil cultivators to protect the place and unintentionally caused the death of the girl as a sacrifice. As a result, his mood was shaken. Later, because the girl's body was stolen, he could not improve his cultivation. To put it bluntly, your statement like this will only make people think that Elder Qian is weak-minded, and then Qian is a monastic genius. It would be strange not to be scolded. Of course, you patched it up in your book review and said it wasn't finished. Indeed, if you add that the girl is a relative and friend of Elder Qian, and then died to save Qian, there will be no problem with this matter. But your patch must be applied in the previous article. Just like on the Internet, if you want to say that a man does not honor his parents and insults them, then this man will only be scolded. You must state that this man was abused since he was a child and his parents failed to fulfill their responsibilities. Then he ran away from home and struggled on his own. His parents only came to him when he grew up. Only in this way can someone speak up for men. What you wrote is as if you were only posting the first half, so it would be strange if you didn't make a fuss.

Goldfinger is so strong but the writing is so useless, empty and bulky, not fulfilling.

This book feels much worse than the previous three books. Originally, except for the first book, the protagonists are all kind-hearted people with very upright views, but there is absolutely no Madonna plot that goes beyond ordinary people. But this book gives people the feeling of being a bit holy (not derogatory). Although I admire it, it is a bit too much to put it in an online article. It is like another author Chu Bai who likes to write characters with three views and uprightness, but after writing more books, the protagonist is not as kind as a human being.