The Little God and the Giant Cockroach

Is he such a great person? Give me one

I drop big

Why doesn't anyone send philo beetles?🐷

If it's someone else, I don't think it's okay, but if it's Mr. Alarm Clock, I think it's okay to have a look ​. *◇☆*. *★◎○＠. * . ◇＠★◎◇★. * . ☆◎. *☆◎. *゜゜ ＼￣￣／ ＼／ ∧_∧＼／ ( ∀)∞ / つ つ△ ~(ノ ＵＵ

Great! I suddenly thought about the alarm clock recently I took a look and a new book was released! Wow, I'm so touched.

I suspect that the author surrendered after being driven crazy by cockroaches and wrote this book.

Every time when there is a book shortage, I feel sincerely comforted to see that this book is still being updated, because I know that there is a fairy grass growing and not dying.

During the holidays, I cleared out all the books I kept. I don't remember how I saw this. I must have turned the page when I saw the content of the story was so weird. Then I found that the author's writing style was good and the story was clear and coherent, so I continued reading. Until it was put on the shelves, I found that the update speed was very slow, so I picked it up. Although it was free of charge in the end. But the author's writing style is very good, and his level is still higher than that of some highly praised masters. Write down some thoughts after reading it. The author also said in the postscript that he started to catch up with the ending when he arrived in Landu. The daily life in Landu was really boring. Let's write them in the order of postscript. The actual author himself is aware of the problem. Level 3 authors are not praised by anyone, and their exposure is problematic. Only wrote 2 books? The writing style is better than that of some great writers I have seen, and the story and foreshadowing are fine. The outline was later changed, and the story ends satisfactorily. As far as the author's level is concerned, it is already above the starting point and passing line. So the problem lies in the choice of subject matter and audience. This one is about cockroaches. Unlovable by nature. The writing style is also more of a light novel type, the man behind the scenes, mainly writing about daily life. According to the postscript, I changed the direction twice but was still not satisfied. I personally feel that the growth of Di Angel in the second direction will have a larger audience at the beginning. If you keep writing, it may be better in the later stages than now. Tokusatsu films represent Kamen Rider and Watch Fire, but the fanfic is so miserable that most people actually don't like it. But nowadays, the direction of daily comedy is actually very difficult. Individual laughter points are different, and it is difficult to satisfy most people. The line between the white cat and the eldest brother in this book is quite interesting. But it was still peaceful. Although he knew that the formation master must endure it, Pao Lan was still being provoked for so long without any reaction, which was too frustrating. Then beating the parasitic god to death is just the same, there is no climax. If you can understand the character and story line, you really need to write it this way. But readers don't like it, it's too boring, and there's no sense of immersion from a non-human perspective. So this should be avoided when outlining. I think it might be better to write Angel Di's line because he is weak and can easily arrange the climax. Lan was in a hurry to finish it, but he still wrote half of the book, which shows that the skeleton of the outline is very substantial. The calculation, the girl god's handle has been considered long ago, and the plan to destroy the world has been completed. But the short story outside the skeleton is boring. Behind-the-scenes novels are similar to invincible novels. When you look at One Punch Man, if your eyes are always on him, there will be one punch after another. Boring as hell. But the perspective is on the supporting characters, and it feels good to have contrast. And one punch is not just about crushing combat power, but also the efforts of other people, so the story is much better. In summary, the author's writing style ranks high in the starting point, the book has no poisonous points, and the characterization can be anything. Find the right direction in terms of story outline. Also don't listen to comments and make random changes. Temporary changes can easily cause the story to collapse. There is nothing I can do about the exposure, I can only wait for some results to see if the director recommends it or not. In short, come on, author, improve some small flaws and you will become a master.

Although I haven't watched it yet, I already feel like a cockroach spreads its wings and flies towards your face.

So what is the author's role in pretending to be? Oh, it's a pity not to write about transvestites. There are already few of them, and there are even fewer good ones... I think it is necessary to recommend a few books to help the author regain his original intention! Cherry Girl, Full Power Otome, Cherry on the Ripples... Let the author return to the embrace of a certain evil god!