My Doppelganger's Drama

The poisonous point is that the clone has its own thinking, but the protagonist is mentally ill, so this poisonous point is eliminated.

Author, stop being ridiculous. The fun part of your book is the chaos spoof and the God of Wanyi Network's spiritual world. Other characters can crush the other characters with overwhelming abilities, but in terms of mental control, I personally don't accept people who can challenge the protagonist's strengths, and you should also plan to keep her around for a long time.

Although I know that Chroma and her other personalities are for the purpose of writing rival scenes, and in order to be able to fight against each other, their abilities are exaggerated. In the drama, the big bosses don't dare to connect with the original spirit anymore, but now a mask can easily infect and assimilate Wan Yi's clone. The plot isn't bad, but I don't know why I can't stand it. Although I'm still fully booked, I'll skip any future stories about chromatography.

A very good novel. In essence, it is a main world where you can travel through small worlds to gain abilities. The protagonist himself is a tortured and mentally disturbed person with the ability to clone. Goldfinger is a theater that can produce clones with special abilities. The plot arrangement is quite appropriate. The highlight is the protagonist's clone ability and the characteristics of the clone's complaints about the main body. It just seems like the protagonist doesn't have any lofty goals at the moment (I've read chapters 5 and 6). Overall, recommended

It feels good. If according to certain standards, it is a good book. Don't worry, let's talk about the shortcomings first. The overall worldview structure is a bit familiar, with a little shadow of other predecessors. Maybe I got some inspiration from other people's books. However, apart from the main boundary flow and time travel, Apart from the setting of a gathering of readers, everything is basically blank. The author takes it for granted that this society is constituted and what social forces should be in this society. In other words, the author has not established a clear social system, especially a social system under extraordinary factors. I am afraid that at present, Look, the author writes a bit based on his feelings - of course, I am a bit too harsh in this regard - from this aspect, the book has some flaws in this regard, but it is far from a failure - this is also because it does not say too much, leaving a lot of room for imagination, so I can't talk about it. On the other hand, there are some shortcomings. On the other hand, the author's writing power is not enough. Some places that should be heavy are not heavy, but this place that should be inked is just one sentence. Sometimes it makes me a little embarrassed. Of course, the places that should not be inked are indeed concise, which is quite good. In terms of advantages (knock on the blackboard, here comes the advantage), the author's portrayal of the supporting characters is simple and in place, and he uses a lot of pen and ink on the protagonist. In addition, the protagonist himself is crazy and fun-loving. If you look at it from a comedy perspective, it is very comfortable to watch. Of course, I have a strong tolerance for comedy and madness. Therefore, as long as there are no major problems with the world view, my evaluation of this work They all feel good. Another author seems to have done a good job in short stories. A few short chapters stand up the two characters in the play, but again, there is still a gap between standing up and three-dimensional. I think the author should have started his career in short stories. If not, it's fine. If so, it's better not to write the main plot in the form of short stories, because the biggest difference between a novel and a short story is the description of the characters. The writing is different. The short story is more inclined to the end of an event and uses the climax of the event to guide the reader. The long story will have different events grouped together. The series of these major events will be the transformation of one or more characters, which is what the terminology often calls the character arc. In fact, the author's work is a coincidence. The protagonist himself is crazy. To a certain extent, the doppelgänger and the person in the play can Partially represents the protagonist, using the characters and avatars as the protagonist's changes, and filling the gaps between major and minor events with theater scenes. This does make up for the shortcomings, but to be honest, doing so will cause a certain fragmentation of the story and will raise the reading threshold to a certain extent The above is my personal humble opinion. After all, I have not seen much, and there are not many useful things. I hope it will be of some use to the author's writing.

The memories of the clones can be synchronized, so there is a lot of work. You can fly up by simply pursuing technology. You will be a super, super, super, super, super genius at the beginning.

1.9 The first brush is over. Before the second brush, I thought of reviewing it first, so I fixed this. My memory is not good, welcome to add 😌 1. Gun Demon·Modern Brother Type: Brother First Appearance: 7 Titles Obtained: 20 Description: Wan Yi's No. 1 Brother; Specialized in Qualitative Transformation of Firearms; Wan Yi's No. 1 Field; Graphic and Text Life Coach Suspected CP: Magic Mother Feng Xinyuan (216-234) Description: A magical girl who became a mother, married fashion, tragic past, the first ruthless knife in this book 2. Arachnosexual Lucas Type: Leather Man First Appearance: 62 Skinned: 63 *Important Turn: Joining the Spider Cult (191) Description: The remnants of the Third Research Institute; Cellini's naive and somewhat capable tool man disciple of Old Biden, who also wants to rectify his name; the number one disciple of the Spider Cult, tampering with his own bishop Suspected cp (original identity): Senior sister Karenina (487-) Description: Lao Deng's second disciple; member of the second research institute; a devastated poor man who took the original Lucas as his sustenance, and ended up being ripped into a leather case Suspected cp: Jumping Spider Bishop (191-) Description: Bishop of the Spider God, a big jumping spider, cute, I want to ○, can I call you Qiuqiu? It seems that the domain was cursed by his own god and turned into a spider 3. Grudge·Grudge Brother Type: Brother First Appearance: 72 Obtained Title: 88 Description: Died tragically at the Grudge Boundary, making the dog feel the pain; manager of Wanyi Monument, the place where death Wanyi's clone returns (secondary use) 4. Mao Mao·Mr. Mask Although Mao Mao does not seem to be Wan Yi, he has a lot of roles, and Wan Yi vomited after eating it, so I will mention it for now 5. Lin Que The first clone I wanted to pout, but later there was no role 6. Fantastic Beasts • Curse Specialist • Director Type: Brother First Appearance: 114 Title Obtained: 131 Description: Billionaire company executive; animal lover; Curse Specialist; the only (probably) important clone that disappeared, the second cruel knife in this book (not that there are no other knives, mainly these two are the most cruel), damn Rezabi 7. Want to Fuck•Succubus•Little Princess Type: Leather Man First Appearance: 156 Skinned: 160 Description: My original name is Male Succubus; Manager; I am a male *Description: Want to Fuck the Little Princess, I will do it every time I appear. Since I have written so many words, dog body, can you let me poke the Little Princess? Just once? 8. The boss of the Wanbi department • Green Goblin Type: Brother First appearance: 157 Title obtained: 157 Description: The leader of the Wanbi department (can't think of anything else!) 9. Nightmare·Wuyiwang Type: Brother First appearance: 172 (moth) Title obtained: 189 Description: DM who kills the script with pictures and text; five-in-one insect; acting director of the troupe carnival; Jie Jie Jie 10. Hundred-Eyed Cult·Multi-Eyed Brother Type: Brother First Appearance: 195 Title Obtained: 244 Description: Just after Lucas joined the Spider God Cult, he left the factory; giving the Eye of All Things a whole point of Wan Yi shock; Ricardo's big boy Suspected CP: Meta (wrong) 11. Troll • Noisy Monster Type: Brother? First appearance: 222 Title obtained: 222 Description: Wanyi Pai pressure monster; fighting while spraying; monster in the underground arena 12. Philosophy·Philosophy Brother Category: Brother First appearance: 480 Title: 481 Description: An ordinary life; death without a chance to be spectacular; bombing; Phantom Group; American coffee Suspected CP: Chu Xin (Xinpu) (482-) Description: A genealogist who focuses on art; the daughter of a friend of Big Robben 13. Like/Fox Wanyi Category: Non-staff First appearance: 499/534 Description: Entering the abyss boundary with live broadcast just after crossing; Master Fox Wanyi; double row of hostages and kidnappers Description: Eats everything, further increasing Wanyi's utilization rate 14. Crazy Dave Dune Type: Leather Man First Appearance: 506 Skinned: 578 Description: Wanted by the Fallen Brotherhood; Plant Man; Garden 15. Writer Brother·Playwright Type: Brother First appearance: 781 Description: The pen-grabber; the first clone For the sake of me writing so many words, dog body, please hurry up and continue "I Will Be a clone in the city"!

I'm not an expert in this area, but I still want to express my opinion. After I carefully looked at this book and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to comment. As I said at the beginning, I am not an expert in this area.

Trying to touch the troupe leader wildly. . . . All I can think about is the somewhat long black hair 0(?) And the dark circles under my eyes. . . . . Too bad and OOC to apologize, I'm sorry> People<I apologized super fast (the language is fragmented)

The ceiling of the clone flow in my heart is that I can no longer look down on other clone flows. Although I have many thoughts, I still hope that the original body will not be sent in the ending)