No System for Cultivation? Then I’ll Make My Own!

[First of all, the key point is that the system is hand-made]. It is not a wild system or a fishing system. It is a relatively independent system with complete functions. Other functions of the semi-finished system can be explained by the database, but how do the rewards come from? The disciple was very confused about the Qi Gathering Pill when he was given a mission. The protagonist said that he didn't have such a low-end gadget, and he didn't have the materials for it. How did he come up with this half-finished system? Assuming that this semi-finished system can create things out of thin air, then the protagonist as the system manufacturer should also know this skill after analyzing the runes of laws, so that he can install this function in the semi-finished system. Now the bug has come, and the protagonist said that he has no materials and can't make it. So how did this system get the elixir? At present, the system positioning is purely auxiliary. It is a semi-finished product that was born purely to meet the protagonist's idea of ​​​​traveling and matching the system. How can it be something beyond the protagonist's ability?

It doesn't look good. Reading a novel is like listening to other people's ramblings. There is a problem with the writing. 😰

Quite abstract, food and grass, just to relieve boredom.

It's pretty good. I'm in a good mood. After reading a few chapters, I started to feel irritable. I have to say that you, the author, really have your wits about you.

After reading more than seventy chapters, I still don't understand. What is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? There is no daily life or other content, so it's a bit empty.

It was clearly written about a top boss, but it didn't feel like a boss at all, so no one read it.

There are so many chapters and there are still less than 100 comments. Either it is really bad or it has been banned.

Author, I read two chapters and I'll take your pulse. They all call me a miracle doctor. It's not a bad idea if you take a look at my suggestions. 1. The sentences on the side are not refined enough First of all, you can take two chapters and shorten the sentences yourself, and the expression should be precise and not wordy; then change the long sentences into short paragraphs, which are more suitable for Internet articles; finally, you can add some Internet language or classic sentence patterns according to your choice. Although you will scold a lot, you will also read a lot. 2. The character description is not vivid enough The water word count area is also the template area. The characters and dialogues you write are too plain. You can change them according to the character descriptions of the masters. 3. The plot does not feel exciting You have to guide readers to feel "enjoyed". Contrast, contrast, prominence, and exaggeration can all be used, but the reader must be involved. But those who change themselves always feel self-satisfied and don't know where to change and where not to change. I'm telling you, it's a quick trick. Just try to modify other articles written by Pu Gaizi. Just pull them down and try to modify them yourself. It will feel better if you modify them.

This introduction is really ridiculous. At first glance, it looks like a novel written by a novice.

The idea is very good, but I don't know why it's a little uncomfortable to read. I feel like I need to polish the text? 🙂