Alice in the Land of Steam

Written in the middle of this book To be honest, I was already prepared that the next volume would be the last volume. The boys and girls completed their tour and climbed to the Heavenly High Palace to uncover the mystery. But now it seems that the answer may not be what I expected. A little happy and a little scared. I'm glad that the journey is still going on, and the queens who boarded the ship later still have time to spend with a lot of us. The so-called witch association, which seems a bit unknown to me, also leaves a lot of space to shape, and the riddles about Tumi, the goddess and Tiandis must have a more interesting answer in my opinion. I'm afraid that this beautiful daily life will one day fall apart. When that day comes, I don't know how I will feel after my millions of words of experience so far. Let's talk about this book from the beginning. I happened to see someone's critical comments on the text of this book when I was browsing Tieba. I think it is indeed reasonable, so I will quote it here and combine it with my personal opinion: Delicate and exquisite description, The description of the scenery, the emotions, and the places the boys and girls walked through makes the readers feel as if they have actually participated in this tour together while reading, and they have truly seen the confusion, fear, growth, and determination of these girls with different personalities during the journey. But at the same time, such delicate description dilutes the plot and makes it seem dull and discrete, making many grand scenes seem more or less like fairy tales... Light. The original poster also gave several better examples of the same writing style, such as "Amber Sword" - the most harmonious description possible; "Craft's Notes on Anomalies" - more detailed and abstract descriptions; "Tao and Carbon-Based Monkey Breeding Rules" - more magnificent and fantasy descriptions. I have read or finished all of these books, but in fact, I would like to say that this is not a technical advantage, but a difference in choice. In my opinion, the main role of writing in online articles is to provide a sense of atmosphere, determine the main tone of the world you describe, and facilitate readers' imagination. In the descriptions in this book, especially those thoughts on life, courage, religion, and love, I feel a sense of alienation, a sadness that cannot be found but is always lingering around me. (This feeling is even stronger after watching "The Brave") Well, after stripping away Alice, this story is still the core of the story where young girls have to embark on a journey to grow together, understand, and sacrifice. It feels quite ancient. However, Alice or the author deliberately dispelled this sense of sadness, which greatly improved the reading experience of this book (please say thank you to Alice and her bad jokes). Another atmosphere brought about by the description is one of urgency..., Or a sense of "the end of the world". In a world that has gone astray, young girls and boys, after seeing everything on the road, make wishes to the gods and pray for a mechanical god to set everything in order. This is also the reason why I use the word "tour". It really gives me a nostalgic sense of déjà vu. Alice fell into the rabbit hole, but she had to wake up, right? At this point in the journey, even if you had the desire to write a beautiful fairy tale at the beginning, but suddenly become mechanical at the end, is this a bit sorry for everything you have experienced on the journey and all the growth and determination of the protagonists? So even if we have to break today's dream-like daily life of laughter, even if we make irreversible and heart-wrenching choices, we must let the story move forward freely. The hero has not yet been completed, the journey is still in progress, and the days with clear skies have not yet come to an end. I wish the story could stay at this moment. But that's not possible. The United Realism Cult (their name is quite fitting) is waiting in front of them. Ringer, a priest who upholds realism but also tenderly believes in girls with ideals, this is where your charm lies; Alice, a player who is alienated from this world, your spell to resolve sadness will soon be invalid. The people you will lose are no longer nameless NPCs, but those who quarrel, fight, and live in front of you. Want to make a choice? (One thing to say, it would be great if Alice was really the kind of talented player who can turn things around at critical moments and achieve a perfect ending. Unfortunately, every time Alice turns things around, she relies on others, which makes people extra worried about what will happen next. Will this book really have a perfect ending? Hello) In short, in the middle of this article, I would like to express a small reflection, some happiness, fear, and... Expectation as always.

Is this book good? Okay, I can't say that the writing is good, but at least I can see that it doesn't hold anything back. The style of a unit drama combined with a hodgepodge of random jokes ensures that the plot is guaranteed. The main line is clear and compact, never dragging. The characters are what keeps me watching. However, it was the villain's background that caused a big surprise. To prevent spoilers, I won't go into details. Basically, the daughter of God brought a bunch of modern ideas from the earth, killed her own sisters, exterminated other races, and launched a colonial war against the Eastern Continent for the sake of mankind. It was okay. As a villain, it's not normal to do bad things. What's funny is that the author went crazy and patched up the villains, and began to portray them as ideal warriors who strive for human survival, human glory, and for the bottom class of mankind to live a good life. This reminds me of a joke. "I am seeking justice" "You commit genocide" "That's because they bullied weak humans in the past" "You launch a colonial war against humans" "I promote the development of science and technology for the people" "You launch a colonial war" "I fight against corruption and ensure the fairness of the law to bring a better life to the people" "You launch a colonial war" It's like a thorn... No, a steel pipe, inserted into your lungs, making you want to follow the author's train of thought, even if you regard the villain as a forerunner who is not understood by the protagonist. Every time you see the protagonist group, you will think of them as a group of dirty genocides, sister-slayers, and unforgivable colonialists. Even so, he dared to show himself as an ideal warrior who was not understood by others. Of course, you can also put it another way. The colonial war was to let the people of the Eastern Continent also feel the "glorious glory of the ideal." As for the number of deaths and the plundered land and wealth, these are just the pains on the road to ideals. Doesn't it look familiar? You can call it the common prosperity of the Eastern Continent (laughing) In summary, if you can ignore this, this book is still very good-looking, especially the character. I really like Alice. The character description is very full and interesting. Reading the book reviews, it seems that many people don't like her. I think this is Alice. As she said, she is a player and she always behaves like a player. For people who have fun, fun is the most important thing. Also, stack up your armor. I don't mean to go overboard, this is indeed my feeling after reading this book. Also, this is a trumpet account and I paid for it.

Personally, for the sake of reading experience, I prefer to wait for the update to be completed one volume at a time. Then I felt a lot of difficulty reading the last two volumes. Generally speaking, we attribute this to the "water" of the novel itself. Of course, when we generally say "water", it generally means that I don't like reading such plots, so instead of complaining, I would like to talk about why I don't like or feel tired of such plots. When I first started reading this book, I thought it was probably a classic boy meet girl world series road story, and it is indeed the case. Ringer adventures and encounters girls along the way to help them untie their knots and overcome the past... But also at the beginning, I felt a vague sense of fragmentation, and as the reading process gradually deepened, I temporarily called this sense of fragmentation world series vs group portraits. We can see this from the setting of the power system. If you read it from beginning to end, you will find that the potion system has no significance to the story headed by Ringer. After all, the duel between the girl queens is about the world of infinite love. The numerical confrontation in the traditional upgrade flow obviously deviates from the center of the story. Therefore, the potion system was designed purely to set a set of standards for character combat power in the context of the world view, and to describe how the new magic system can crush the old potion system. This leads to a very strange phenomenon, that is, you can see the combat strength standard of the demigod countess as the protagonist group, but you cannot feel the real sense of the power of the young queens (even if they are incomplete) who are one of the pinnacles of the world view. These powers are more like the superpowers of the characters themselves that cannot anchor the boundaries, rather than a positioning in the power system of the world view. Another reason for this phenomenon is the perspective. Ringer and his team are rushing from one city to another on the Cloud Whale Sky Island. Taking the volume "The Dawns Here Are Quiet" as an example, you will find that the interaction between the young queens and the world is indirect, and Ringer's intermediary is needed to provide intelligence to the resistance and teach the resistance children. Zijun, etc., The story of this worldly girl queen requires the protagonists to maintain their detachment from the mortal world, but the author's pursuit of describing this complex and perfect world also requires him to constantly describe the cities and people living in this world. Such description of group portraits from a detached perspective will inevitably give people a sense of alienation. The fantasy element of girls' sovereignty is only used as a tool to promote daily life, emotions and the main plot, rather than the girls' own attributes to interact with the world. This is why I felt that the volume "The Dawns Here Are Quiet" was a lot difficult to read at first, because the main line of the novel has officially shifted from collecting the girl queens to influencing the world with the girl queens. This kind of opposition between the world system and the group portraits is complete. It broke out. The author described the world in so many details, including the ocean pollution in Rorona's hometown, the badminton festival in Xino's hometown, and even a corner of the history of feather elves and light elves... I think it creates a complete world view and the background of reading. The sense of immersion is very helpful, but there are too many of them, and they are only used as backgrounds without a theme and will not participate in the subsequent plot. Shaping in order to shape the background has made me feel that I am putting the cart before the horse. Just like the volume that just ended, I don't care at all about the history of feather elves and the former owners of the fairy sword. I no longer want to read these things that happened in this fantasy world, because soon our little badminton will go with her two sisters. What's the use of telling me now? Let her remember it before she dies? Let her gain some insights once again, say some words about love, and then naturally die with another witch? So I have to say that when we want to do everything, we often can't do anything well. When we choose such a transcendent perspective, it may no longer be suitable for complex group portrait descriptions, such as the story about the Disease Witch. It's hard for me to even say what was going on in my heart when I watched it. Sorry, who are you? I just feel that I have watched another episode that has happened in this world, has nothing to do with our protagonist group, and is purely for character creation. Yes, dear, you have such an experience in your past. Unfortunately, I can't feel any trauma from it. I'm afraid I can't empathize with what the witch was thinking before she died. After all, no matter how sincere the feelings are, they will always be diluted by time, let alone such complicated, lengthy, and repetitive lyrics. Going back to the volume "The Dawns Here Are Quiet", we spent so much time describing a group portrait of the Resistance Army, describing how the children struggled in life, death, separation, and love. But this volume ended, and everything returned to the original state with Xiaoxia's gentle touch. So why did we write this group portrait? I think after the group portrait has gone through the shaping of the characters, shouldn't the next step be to enjoy the time? See how these characters grow, how they change the world, or how they are changed by the world. There is no saying that a group portrait is created for the sake of shaping. This is too wrong. As for the exit of the kings of order, as I said before, characters are created for use. How can any character be created just for her exit? We see the motivation behind these girls who have been created with extremely complicated words. After going through so many stories, are they just trying to get some feelings of love here and then exit? The plot of this story has already been diluted by the text. If everything so far can be boiled down to a boy meeting girls one by one and sending them off one by one, and finally getting a happy or bad end that they deserve, then I can only say that it is really just a fairy tale. Finally, I'm sorry that I don't want to teach the author to write a book, and, okay, I'm just complaining. I will still read this story until the end. The advantages of this book are still there, so I won't repeat them one by one. I just think that the plot of this story may not be so boring.

The author has been writing this book for several years and has written millions of words. He is a very perseverant person. Although the score of this book is not good, its details are very well created, the atmosphere is very good, and it has a fantasy flavor. I think this flavor belongs to Wan Jun's book. It constructs a Victorian era, with religion, mysticism, and extraordinary society. The background setting is also very good, and there are no brainless characters. The shortcomings are that it feels a bit long-winded and the pace is slow. It clearly starts with religious rectification and the banning of the male-dominated church, which is considered a difficult start. However, it can be seen that although the official banned the male-dominated church, they are very nice and polite to the male protagonist. There is no special conflict in the plot ahead. The female protagonist is a modern time traveler who falls into the male protagonist's church. In fact, the heroine is very cute, and she doesn't have any love scenes with the male protagonist. Many of the characters are quite interesting. I feel that the author can consider writing some daily love stories in the future, and write the relationship between the characters as the main line.

Among the online articles I have read recently, it is considered to be a relatively top-notch one. Although it is not as good as some masterpieces, but combined with personal preferences, it can be regarded as a masterpiece in my mind. However, I rarely read books at Qidian, and I know very little about currently popular works, so my evaluation will be biased. I first learned about this book because it was recommended by a friend. After reading it, I couldn't stop reading it. I stayed up for a few nights and finished reading it. Now I am struggling to catch up on updates every day. Because I personally think it is so well written, I couldn't help but share my thoughts. First of all, the plot. The plot is a very classic boy meets girls and traditional western fantasy (this should be it, please correct me). At the beginning of the novel, I thought it would develop like the Lord of Mysteries, join the officialdom, and then develop like ordinary people who have never understood the extraordinary and gradually penetrate into the extraordinary world. I didn't expect that in the end, I would become a guerrilla (wrong). The first volume, a preliminary depiction of the worldview, encounters the first girl's sovereignty - Destiny. At the beginning of the whole text, the extraordinary world basically begins with the ceremony in the middle and later stages of this volume. This volume can be regarded as laying down a core point of the entire novel, namely fatalism, that is, fate. Some people may like fatalism, and some may not. Those who like it will feel a sense of mystery and ritual. Those who don't like it may think that man can conquer nature or have a feeling of frustration that everything has been arranged. I think this volume mainly provides a preliminary depiction of the worldview and the creation of characters. Impressions of the world: the industrial age, steam. However, Alice in this volume may be more objectionable, and Alice's (mis)positioning as a comedian will become more obvious in the future. And at first I thought the author was inspired by bs, but I didn't expect it to be Kamen Rider. The second volume further expands the extraordinary world (and also begins to introduce the witch guild), and conquers the second girl's throne - the secret. It is also my favorite volume. The interweaving of the legend and the present, the intertwining of Ovela's past and present, the intertwining of the tree lady's past and present, the intertwining of Ovela and the tree lady, the oath and following and companionship spanning hundreds of years, greatly strengthened the sense of fate foreshadowed in the previous volume. The collection of multiple lines is also extremely natural, and the interweaving of emotions is even more exciting. Hotel Transylvania is also very fairy tale-like, and every member of Hotel Transylvania comes alive. The only shortcoming is that in the game part, although the plot is indeed touching, it is too routine, and you can basically guess what the development will be. But I have to say that after getting over the tediousness of this part, the reading experience is also excellent. It can be regarded as a content that feels good after getting through it (wrong). There is also a clue character in this volume, Rochelle, who organically connects the second volume with the third volume. (I feel that this person has a strong sense of existence even after death, which shows the success of the shaping (it may also be because he often whipped the corpse (incorrectly))) In the third volume, Green and others initially appeared on the world stage and conquered the third girl's throne-freedom. Iyeta & Whale Sky Base join the team to enhance mobility and provide convenience for subsequent journeys. This volume is still a two-line narrative. On one side, Rochelle is seducing the gods, and on the other side, Ringer and others are looking for treasure. This volume feels like the progress is relatively fast. I found the location of Iyetta very smoothly, and I also relied on words to conquer it. Green's "flying with the earth" is really unimaginable. I was stunned when he said this, but it is also very fantasy. My personal feeling is that in the middle period, David gave people the impression that he endured humiliation and endured heavy burdens, just to complete the family mission, and to achieve his goals by any means, but he turned out to be a clown in the end, making him laugh. So the big head should be in the whale vs. God section. The end of this volume is also when Ringo begins to discover a very important gap between him and Alice, and it feels like this will become a key point in the last few volumes. Finally, I feel that the flying whale is really impressive. It reminds me of DNF's Sky Curtain Behemoth, especially when it depicts the whale swimming in the sea of ​​clouds under the moonlight, it is really beautiful. Volume 4, the secrets of the world are revealed, a complete introduction to the worldview, and the conquering of the fourth girl's throne - eternity. Leticia and Neville (who are responsible for the combat power of the Cavalry Team) join the team. But we can also start to find from this volume (including the previous volume) that the author likes to throw away the background in large sections when revealing secrets. Every time, I feel like there is a violent feeling of stuffing a lot of knowledge into my mind (mistake). One of the biggest problems that I personally feel is that after the Chaos Lady Queen regained consciousness after punishing humans, she once again easily trusted others (the leader). It felt too childish, but it may also be a foreshadowing. It depends on how the author turns around. The current leader feels like a very insidious, bad woman who is good at deceiving people. Volume 5, expands the ocean aspect and conquers the fifth girl's Queen-Creation. It feels more like a transition roll, and the key is indeed the swimsuit return (shen return) at the back. In order to survive, the alien race had to induce humans to destroy the environment. In fact, if you think about it deeply, you can feel a kind of sadness. The progress of this volume is relatively smooth and the pace is relatively fast. The main reason is that Rorona is too smart and has high emotional intelligence. After ascending to the sky, the big whale began to descend into the sea. It felt like it was omnipotent (even though it was the magic cast by the mirror elves). Now the whale returned to the ocean, which had a unique flavor. Then there is the swimsuit return, which is sweet and funny, and because of Green's character, the swimsuit has a contrasting sense of being serious and funny. (Tiantiantian) The sixth volume is currently being updated and being read. The author likes dual-line narratives very much. This first appeared in the first volume. After the second volume, it is basically a dual-line narrative technique. This is a test of the author's skill. The two narrative lines, one bright and one dark, are constantly intertwined and finally converge at one point, which is the climax of each volume. But there are advantages and disadvantages. The consequence of the author's dual-line narrative is that there are not enough conflicts before the two lines converge, making the plot a bit dull. In addition, the author is accustomed to describing the background, characters, environment and other things in detail (but at the same time, I like this aspect of the author, and I think this is very important). The rhythm is a bit slow, but it can also be seen that the author is trying to enrich the plot content by describing some interesting daily life. What's interesting is that the entire novel can also be regarded as a two-line narrative, one light and one dark. The overt line is that Ringer collects the girl's power, while the hidden line is to gradually reveal the world view. The author also likes to echo back and forth. It may be because he has a relatively detailed outline, and the foreshadowing he laid can be well recovered. Many things that have appeared in the previous article will also be well echoed later, making the plot structure complete and the emotions constantly highlighted. The more obvious ones are the second volume, Plant and Tree Disasters, Drama and Legends, etc. Then it was written in a certain chapter (forgot which chapter it was mentioned in), giving confusion to fate, darkness to mystery, shackles to freedom, reincarnation to eternity, and disease to creation. Such a contradictory design has an inexplicable tension, like a sense of fate or something else. I can't think of a good description at the moment. Finally, summarize the advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the plot is detailed and tight, the characters are vividly drawn, the details are rich, and it has a strong sense of fairy tale and fantasy. Although the detailed description of history, architecture, and humanities makes the pace of the writing a little slow, it greatly enhances the sense of reality, which I greatly appreciate. The disadvantage is that it is relatively slow to develop and is not suitable for the current fast-food rhythm. The author likes to throw out the world view and background in large paragraphs. This book is of a more selective type. It's fun to read in one sitting, but hard to read later. Originally I wanted to expand the city content in each volume and talk about the characters, but the space is limited, so I will just talk about this much for now. These contents were written in one night. They are relatively hasty and may be a little scattered. Please bear with me. Finally, the author should update it quickly, it's not enough!

I have read the latest chapter intermittently, and also read the previous work "The Brave Girl", so I opened a new account on Qidian. No matter which one is a very good work, what impressed me most about the previous work was the author's description of the large-scale battles. It was very bold, the writing was also very good, and the plot development was reasonable but unexpected. This work has a very different style, with a slower style. Overall, it is a readable work, but the ups and downs are always concentrated at the end of the volume. However, some chapters in the middle are thought-provoking and interesting to review. It is a rather provocative work. But I personally feel that there are a few interesting points now: First, the issue of Ringer's combat effectiveness. Personally, I am a relic of ancient upgrades, and I prefer the protagonist to constantly upgrade this set. I also have this tendency when watching it, but this one never feels this inconsistent. This is a relatively successful point. The sequence is almost meaningless in the face of absolute power. Therefore, as of the latest chapter, there is no expectation and sense of urgency for the upgrade sequence, but this also faces a problem. Due to the development of the story, starting from the Rochelle chapter, it is basically difficult to start a large-scale battle. It is difficult to reproduce the climax of Ieta's chapter. The power gap is too big and the big scenes cannot be carried out, which makes the last two volumes a bit dull. I look forward to the author's follow-up development. The second is the problem around the middle period. Although it is a steam harem, the progress is a little slow. Konatsu occupies the c position and it is difficult to develop. However, it has improved since the recent chapters and the swimsuit chapter. It is recommended that the author increase his efforts (. Overall, I am looking forward to the subsequent development and ending. Good luck, author.

The combat power system in this book only has one sentence: The Queen's Queen has been reduced to ants, but due to order, the Queen's Queen was too seriously injured. Now the combat capability is described. If there are any errors, please correct them. 1. The queen of the non-combatant girl, representative, Konatsu, Olvera 2. Sequence 7, Miss Vampire, an existence that mortals cannot resist. 3. The little queen, the little vampire, created, 4. The elite troops of Sequence 6 surrounded the mermaid girl. 300 Can be equivalent to one demigod. 6. Sequence 4 to 3 demigod levels can basically only be killed by witches. Representative figures. Chapter 1 Vampire bosd. Blood Prince. Simply using human power will result in massive losses. If you want to run away, you are basically free in front of the troops. 7. The weak girl has full power and is free to be independent. A blow that can lift a huge mountain and wipe out the God of Heaven in Sequence Four with one blow. The same level as the fantasy god, Sequence 1. He has the ability to destroy a country and can change the outcome of a war. A city can be easily crushed in front of him. Represents the spring goddess. 8. The residual queen's power. Free whale form, able to kill fantasy life. The King of Victory instantly killed the magical beast Mirachi. When you are free and not autistic, you can easily blow up seven mountains and fly thousands of miles. 9. The Wounded Girl Queen, the representative figure of the Seven Witches, has a fear record of killing sequence 3 with one shot, double kill sequence 2 within five minutes, killing two fantasy masters with one shot. Note. The cooling time of ten minutes is a bit long. 10. Standard Girl Queen, Tianbobo, Alice. Being able to kill dozens of Sequence One racial gods has immeasurable combat power.

I'll take advantage of the limited time to see the end of the third copy and give a brief review. Advantages: The writing is excellent and the setting is detailed; I was immediately immersed in it at the beginning. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of thought and seriously wanted to write this novel well. It is a rare excellent light novel Disadvantages: Personally The frequency of deus ex machina is too high. Every battle that occurs feels like it is not the protagonist group who is strong enough to win, but the author helps to cheat. As a result, there is no sense of tension at all when life is hanging by a thread because you know that something will happen suddenly to help the protagonist group turn defeat into victory? (About this meaning) And about the character creation. I originally liked the character of Alice. She is cute and lovable, and she is very player-friendly. However, after too many descriptions of the character's characteristics, I found her offensive and annoying (maybe it is for personal reasons that I felt uncomfortable reading) That's about it. My personal rating is 7.5/10. It has flaws but is an excellent novel with excellent writing and detailed settings. I will pick it up again if I have the opportunity!

I finally saved up forty chapters, but I ran out of water. There's no problem with this style (starting with Peleke in Prison 2), you just have to stack up, right? The most disgusting thing is that this style seriously weakens the advancement of the plot. I "understand" it once or twice is enough. I know what you say. Writing this in such a long space is really constipating. In the end, he actually changed the numbers one by one, making him invincible. If you still come here like this, as someone who spent real money, I really need to be scolded.

I stayed up late to read this book ... There are really many shortcomings... For online articles There are also advantages... But not many I am more picky about the audience's tolerance... The biggest shortcoming is that the plot is protracted The dialogue and image description between the characters are in place, but the main plot has been foreshadowed from the beginning It is mainly the kind of foreshadowing that anyone with a discerning eye can think of, and the plot development is really delayed and makes people anxious.

The writing is quite good and I read it in one sitting. As a person who has lived without money for five years, I feel the urge to click and subscribe.

I don't ask you to update Sugar every day. I'm not a fan of industrial sweeteners. But, what does the dead heroine mean? Where are your moral compass? You only have a few heroines, right? If you continue like this, one of you will die in this volume, two will die in two volumes, eight heroines will die in eight volumes, and you will end up alone. As a reader, I might have to unsubscribe you, really.

This book gave me a feeling of ancient fantasy. Did the author travel through time ten years ago?

1. The positioning is unclear. As a daily novel, it is top-notch, but this is a story related to battle, and the author's description of the battle is basically at the level of a running account. This book is more like a road novel, meeting people and seeing things along the way. However, this book has a main line. According to the current description, it is the little girl looking for her mother. The enemy is very vicious, but the author's way of writing it is, just find the mother. The protagonist is more like a camera. On the road, you don't see any inner activity or growth. As for the combat text, no change has been found in the protagonist's combat effectiveness since the second chapter. Emotional description. The author said this is a harem novel, a 3 million-word harem novel without love. He deserves to be thrown into the street.

I really want to break my head and I can't figure out how Tidis, with such an NT concept, let the Seven Chaos follow with all his heart to stir up trouble, exterminate living creatures, and kill his loved ones, and at the same time, he still thinks that this is the way it should be? It's even better to just say that Tiantis just wants to kill and kill. The Seven Kings of Chaos live up to the name of Chaos and also want to cause some destruction and kill and kill. There is no reason but pure evil and they just want to kill something. But after thinking about the witches who appeared, oh, I understand, they are just like the ignorant people in the old days. They seem to be no different from people today. They are all human beings, and their natures are mostly kind. However, they can do evil as a matter of course under the brainwashing remarks of outsiders. No matter what kind of evil they can do, even if it is Even if their loved ones are standing in front of them, they can cut them to pieces without changing their expressions, crushing their bones and scattering ashes. When it's done, they can bury the person and cry for them. Although I killed you, it was because you blocked me from doing the "right thing". Regardless of me killing you, we are still close relatives. Regardless of the terrible things I did, I am still a kind person. Those things are all right. It is just a trivial sacrifice. No, that is not a sacrifice, that is why they deserve to die. So witches can naturally call themselves sisters after they kill their own sisters and meet their reincarnated sisters. After killing countless innocent lives, Night can still say to the nun that you are just an innocent victim, so I won't kill you. Finally, after killing countless innocent aliens, most of them children, they can still act like, I am not a bad guy and I don't want to be hated by children. I hope the author can arrange an ending worthy of them. If they can still be safe or even clean after doing these things, it can only be said that it is a fairy tale read by the characters in a fairy tale book.

In fact, I didn't read many chapters, but I felt very good about it at school! A lot of details were not worked out + my design talent is really pitiful, but the painting is ugly and I'm sorry! I'm too lazy to color, I'm already connected, so just let me. Jpg

Looking at it so far, the main feeling is that it is difficult to collapse, in all aspects 1. The villain's reasons are simply untenable It is true that not every villain has to have a very reasonable reason to become a villain, but does the reason of the witch treat the readers as mentally retarded? How can it be equated with everyone being able to shine and be hot if everyone dies easily? In reality, doesn't everyone shine because of this premise? I don't expect that questions that humans can't think of a perfect answer to yet can be answered in novels, but at least don't insult the reader's IQ, okay? Abandoning your greatest advantage to learn from the Earth, are you planning to become a dog instead of a tiger? 2. The disgusting "kindness" of the villain In the final analysis, he has a big fist, and he is obviously transforming the planet with his own selfish desires. Why can he say it so high-sounding? Lie until you believe it? Magic is not allowed to exist, but my existence is stronger than magic for who knows how many dimensions. More importantly, the young queen will not die, so what do you plan to do in the end? You told me that they will turn purple sand when the magic power disappears, and then immediately turn purple sand every time they are alive. Who do you think would believe it? The most annoying thing is that when the witch faces the girl on the protagonist's side, she says, "Oh, I really have no choice but to shark you all. I have sharked you all three times but I still can't kill you. I can only curse you to a life worse than death. You just lost your life and suffered inhuman torture. I will feel sad in my heart." This kind of attitude of trying to save the whole family is really infuriating. Now I need to list the tortures suffered by the girl on the protagonist's side: 1. Saint Xalia: She is obviously the king of destiny, but she does not have the right to choose independently, and can only drift with the flow in confusion (perhaps this is the lightest one) 2. Olvera: She has not been able to sleep for 700 years (it seems to be, I can't remember the time), and her country and family were destroyed due to the curse. What is the concept of not being able to sleep for 700 years? The author may not know at all, but just said that she has been very sleepy. As the chapter in the corresponding part of the book said, the former Soviet Union had done experiments. 7 Days is enough for humans to do anything just to sleep, 700 years, haha. 3. Ietta: Due to the curse, he destroyed his shelter 700 years ago and was trapped in a place as big as a pigeon cage for 700 years. Please think of the lockdown during the epidemic. People will go crazy in 7 days. This is still based on the Internet, 700 years, haha. 4. Leticia: You have to die once a month and your memory is reset. Real death is very painful. Anyone who tries Zisha will never try Zisha again after failure. What is the concept of dying once a month? The establishment of personality is based on memory, and memory reset means that she will always have a lifespan of one month. 5. Rorona: Every once in a while, you will experience different diseases. Everyone has been sick. Everyone knows how uncomfortable it is to get sick. Some diseases can make life worse than death, such as pneumoconiosis or bone marrow cancer. What is the concept of not being sick for a day? 6. Gloria: Every once in a while, her identity will be randomized. This may be better for adults (but it is still unbearable), but for children, it is the collapse of the world. Yesterday they were drinking milk at home, today they are begging on the street, and tomorrow they are digging underground. I guess not many people can stand it? My description in the previous paragraph cannot match the actual misfortune they suffered. Each of the witches I met had the same attitude as the previous paragraph. They even said that we are all good sisters, but unfortunately we have different ideas, so I want to shark you three times and make your life worse than death. Do you want to show your "kindness" from the side? For the first time, I felt that Sword Demon was right, "I have to kill them a thousand times, but it's not enough!" 3. The male protagonist has no growth, just like Lu Mingfei He had a Sima face at the beginning of the book, and he still has a Sima face now. Is it due to facial nerve necrosis? After so many things, I still feel that I can stay out of it and return to my previous peaceful life by making a wish. Almost everyone on the protagonist side has grown up, but only the male protagonist is still stupid. He has no use of B, no awareness, and no strength. He can't talk or practice, and he has finished using Sequence 9, right? When trouble comes, he relies on the girl's power, or on the countess, and he relies on fighting for money. What's the use of the protagonist? There are obviously many problematic aspects, but they don't seek to prove them. It is obvious that the mysterious royal power is the biggest drawback, but they don't use it. To be honest, Alice alone can push the plot, and she would have died if it weren't for Alice. I always feel that there are still a lot of unwritten ideas, but I am too lazy to write any more, and I am too lazy to read any more. Overall, the book is still flawless and has some advantages, but it is not enough to cover up these underlying problems.

If the author doesn't resurrect Saint Shalia within a hundred chapters, I don't mind destroying the entire starting point😠😠😠

It's interesting, the author This kind of unconventional non-protagonist perspective It's hard to see books with a simple life atmosphere and a real sense of participation now When I think about it, it's difficult to write a book with such a limited perspective. The protagonist doesn't have a God's perspective, so I can't read it To the essence of things We must design the changing perspective of the protagonist from the bottom to the top. With two small oil bottles, we must carefully design non-repetitive coincidences in order to let the two idiots do something good At present, it seems that there is no obvious villain? How the conflict is designed and how the plot unfolds are really exciting. No more words, hold on, author, This kind of epic fantasy love rush, I always feel that you have transformed the anime into a novel, which is quite interesting, come on. Of course, I haven't watched much yet. I'm just expressing my feelings here. I hope I won't be slapped in the face.

You can't do this, it will alienate people's efforts. 3.0 Is to win the dog. Ringer's blood is so handsome. Like Rogal Dorn, he is as solid as a rock. Now the old thirteen and the angel merge into one, the perfect master of mankind. The so-called sage is the warrior. The criminal is the MVP. He directly steals the goddess's home. Young people don't respect martial arts. The whole northwest of Shanxi is reduced to a pot of porridge because of him. He hasn't conquered Ping'an County yet. The royal girl from the Chaos side has been coming to Xiku all day long. Oh no, it's really good for food. It's the same as the new epic Ichiso Dogichi Mygo anime. I want to see Ringo's harem of beautiful girls. I hope Ringo will become a lying-win dog. This kind of life is healthy.

In one Kun year, there are more than 4 million volumes of words. Xiaoxia is great, no need to say more😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Ringer, I didn't ask you to do it seven times a night, I'm not a devil. But, what does it mean to only do it with Xiaoxia? What happened to your idea of ​​equality? Are you already 21 years old? If this continues, I will be 42 years old when I have sex with the second king, and 147 years old when I have sex with the prisoner, and finally the bowl of water will be equal. As a reader of Steam Love, I really have to control you. Real.

The description of the kingship on the Chaos side is so good that it makes the protagonist group look hypocritical. I objected for a long time, but didn't come up with a specific plan. If you can't do it, why don't you do it? I hope you can get it right in the end, and don't get fooled by the ending and just make dumplings.

There are other unique features in the world landscape that we have chosen that this writer could not even imagine Lu Jianhai can use it directly by copying it from Baidu Encyclopedia, which is also a vivid reflection of the confidence of a great writer Among them, "Lujian" versus "Earth" is absolutely absolute through the ages. Is such a master really a chance for human beings? Although the description of the area is like a ditch, the delicacy and beauty are even more apparent upon careful consideration. The description of the grand landscape is really heroic. The rainbow shining through the sun is more than a thousand times larger than the small lake in front of my hometown However, when you just made a bold landscape setting because of the collapse You are wrong again In fact You Bengchu are still a mathematical master in the field of manifolds with non-integer dimensions. The original proposer of the infinite measurement theory of coastline length had an idea after watching Steam Love Therefore, our field of manifold mathematics has flourished However, Beng Chu did not receive any awards. The shameless scientific community stole Beng Chu's credit, which made us readers of Steam Love sigh with regret...

It seems that I was right to quit the game after looking for Xino. In the next few volumes, I will just look at the top lane pictures. Gee, it feels like putting these girls on the guillotine one by one.

Can you please stop writing about your Chaos Kingship? At the moment, all I see are naughty women. They speak with awe-inspiring righteousness, and look like oh, I'm good to others, and I don't know who killed more people on my hands. I just watched their plot, and I feel sick. What kind of self-motivated personality kills sisters, curses sisters, and then has a sisterly love.

According to the description in Chapter 2, it is drawn with reference to the shapes of many characters. I hope you all like it

Sometimes, some stupid novel critics can make Bengchu laugh So they can get the qualification to enter the Bengchu Empire Gua, Bengchu, my cross-dressing is so wonderful, how could you! ! !

Have you finished writing? Isn't this our Miss Ovela? Where is your job now?

"I'm sorry that I can't stay with you forever, because there is always a time limit for people to get along with each other. If you are too greedy for warmth and exceed the time limit given by fate, you may cause trouble to other people. Olvera, you are a good child, and you want to make other people feel trouble " I was so scared that Olvera's driftwood was really a reincarnated sage. He could predict God's will and directly predict Miss Olvera's future Now it seems that the meaning is to die as soon as it's your turn to die and don't cause trouble to the sisters After all, how can the sisters eat after Ovela survives? How can Tiandis' plan be realized? How did Metien turn into a complete golden apple? How should God's will continue to operate? Sisters will be very troubled, right? Don't make it impossible to write the plot of the novel Just right, Miss Olvera's driftwood has taken care of everything.