Alice in the Land of Steam

I don't ask you to update Sugar every day. I'm not a fan of industrial sweeteners. But, what does the dead heroine mean? Where are your moral compass? You only have a few heroines, right? If you continue like this, one of you will die in this volume, two will die in two volumes, eight heroines will die in eight volumes, and you will end up alone. As a reader, I might have to unsubscribe you, really.

This book gave me a feeling of ancient fantasy. Did the author travel through time ten years ago?

1. The positioning is unclear. As a daily novel, it is top-notch, but this is a story related to battle, and the author's description of the battle is basically at the level of a running account. This book is more like a road novel, meeting people and seeing things along the way. However, this book has a main line. According to the current description, it is the little girl looking for her mother. The enemy is very vicious, but the author's way of writing it is, just find the mother. The protagonist is more like a camera. On the road, you don't see any inner activity or growth. As for the combat text, no change has been found in the protagonist's combat effectiveness since the second chapter. Emotional description. The author said this is a harem novel, a 3 million-word harem novel without love. He deserves to be thrown into the street.

I really want to break my head and I can't figure out how Tidis, with such an NT concept, let the Seven Chaos follow with all his heart to stir up trouble, exterminate living creatures, and kill his loved ones, and at the same time, he still thinks that this is the way it should be? It's even better to just say that Tiantis just wants to kill and kill. The Seven Kings of Chaos live up to the name of Chaos and also want to cause some destruction and kill and kill. There is no reason but pure evil and they just want to kill something. But after thinking about the witches who appeared, oh, I understand, they are just like the ignorant people in the old days. They seem to be no different from people today. They are all human beings, and their natures are mostly kind. However, they can do evil as a matter of course under the brainwashing remarks of outsiders. No matter what kind of evil they can do, even if it is Even if their loved ones are standing in front of them, they can cut them to pieces without changing their expressions, crushing their bones and scattering ashes. When it's done, they can bury the person and cry for them. Although I killed you, it was because you blocked me from doing the "right thing". Regardless of me killing you, we are still close relatives. Regardless of the terrible things I did, I am still a kind person. Those things are all right. It is just a trivial sacrifice. No, that is not a sacrifice, that is why they deserve to die. So witches can naturally call themselves sisters after they kill their own sisters and meet their reincarnated sisters. After killing countless innocent lives, Night can still say to the nun that you are just an innocent victim, so I won't kill you. Finally, after killing countless innocent aliens, most of them children, they can still act like, I am not a bad guy and I don't want to be hated by children. I hope the author can arrange an ending worthy of them. If they can still be safe or even clean after doing these things, it can only be said that it is a fairy tale read by the characters in a fairy tale book.

In fact, I didn't read many chapters, but I felt very good about it at school! A lot of details were not worked out + my design talent is really pitiful, but the painting is ugly and I'm sorry! I'm too lazy to color, I'm already connected, so just let me. Jpg

Written in the middle of this book To be honest, I was already prepared that the next volume would be the last volume. The boys and girls completed their tour and climbed to the Heavenly High Palace to uncover the mystery. But now it seems that the answer may not be what I expected. A little happy and a little scared. I'm glad that the journey is still going on, and the queens who boarded the ship later still have time to spend with a lot of us. The so-called witch association, which seems a bit unknown to me, also leaves a lot of space to shape, and the riddles about Tumi, the goddess and Tiandis must have a more interesting answer in my opinion. I'm afraid that this beautiful daily life will one day fall apart. When that day comes, I don't know how I will feel after my millions of words of experience so far. Let's talk about this book from the beginning. I happened to see someone's critical comments on the text of this book when I was browsing Tieba. I think it is indeed reasonable, so I will quote it here and combine it with my personal opinion: Delicate and exquisite description, The description of the scenery, the emotions, and the places the boys and girls walked through makes the readers feel as if they have actually participated in this tour together while reading, and they have truly seen the confusion, fear, growth, and determination of these girls with different personalities during the journey. But at the same time, such delicate description dilutes the plot and makes it seem dull and discrete, making many grand scenes seem more or less like fairy tales... Light. The original poster also gave several better examples of the same writing style, such as "Amber Sword" - the most harmonious description possible; "Craft's Notes on Anomalies" - more detailed and abstract descriptions; "Tao and Carbon-Based Monkey Breeding Rules" - more magnificent and fantasy descriptions. I have read or finished all of these books, but in fact, I would like to say that this is not a technical advantage, but a difference in choice. In my opinion, the main role of writing in online articles is to provide a sense of atmosphere, determine the main tone of the world you describe, and facilitate readers' imagination. In the descriptions in this book, especially those thoughts on life, courage, religion, and love, I feel a sense of alienation, a sadness that cannot be found but is always lingering around me. (This feeling is even stronger after watching "The Brave") Well, after stripping away Alice, this story is still the core of the story where young girls have to embark on a journey to grow together, understand, and sacrifice. It feels quite ancient. However, Alice or the author deliberately dispelled this sense of sadness, which greatly improved the reading experience of this book (please say thank you to Alice and her bad jokes). Another atmosphere brought about by the description is one of urgency..., Or a sense of "the end of the world". In a world that has gone astray, young girls and boys, after seeing everything on the road, make wishes to the gods and pray for a mechanical god to set everything in order. This is also the reason why I use the word "tour". It really gives me a nostalgic sense of déjà vu. Alice fell into the rabbit hole, but she had to wake up, right? At this point in the journey, even if you had the desire to write a beautiful fairy tale at the beginning, but suddenly become mechanical at the end, is this a bit sorry for everything you have experienced on the journey and all the growth and determination of the protagonists? So even if we have to break today's dream-like daily life of laughter, even if we make irreversible and heart-wrenching choices, we must let the story move forward freely. The hero has not yet been completed, the journey is still in progress, and the days with clear skies have not yet come to an end. I wish the story could stay at this moment. But that's not possible. The United Realism Cult (their name is quite fitting) is waiting in front of them. Ringer, a priest who upholds realism but also tenderly believes in girls with ideals, this is where your charm lies; Alice, a player who is alienated from this world, your spell to resolve sadness will soon be invalid. The people you will lose are no longer nameless NPCs, but those who quarrel, fight, and live in front of you. Want to make a choice? (One thing to say, it would be great if Alice was really the kind of talented player who can turn things around at critical moments and achieve a perfect ending. Unfortunately, every time Alice turns things around, she relies on others, which makes people extra worried about what will happen next. Will this book really have a perfect ending? Hello) In short, in the middle of this article, I would like to express a small reflection, some happiness, fear, and... Expectation as always.

Looking at it so far, the main feeling is that it is difficult to collapse, in all aspects 1. The villain's reasons are simply untenable It is true that not every villain has to have a very reasonable reason to become a villain, but does the reason of the witch treat the readers as mentally retarded? How can it be equated with everyone being able to shine and be hot if everyone dies easily? In reality, doesn't everyone shine because of this premise? I don't expect that questions that humans can't think of a perfect answer to yet can be answered in novels, but at least don't insult the reader's IQ, okay? Abandoning your greatest advantage to learn from the Earth, are you planning to become a dog instead of a tiger? 2. The disgusting "kindness" of the villain In the final analysis, he has a big fist, and he is obviously transforming the planet with his own selfish desires. Why can he say it so high-sounding? Lie until you believe it? Magic is not allowed to exist, but my existence is stronger than magic for who knows how many dimensions. More importantly, the young queen will not die, so what do you plan to do in the end? You told me that they will turn purple sand when the magic power disappears, and then immediately turn purple sand every time they are alive. Who do you think would believe it? The most annoying thing is that when the witch faces the girl on the protagonist's side, she says, "Oh, I really have no choice but to shark you all. I have sharked you all three times but I still can't kill you. I can only curse you to a life worse than death. You just lost your life and suffered inhuman torture. I will feel sad in my heart." This kind of attitude of trying to save the whole family is really infuriating. Now I need to list the tortures suffered by the girl on the protagonist's side: 1. Saint Xalia: She is obviously the king of destiny, but she does not have the right to choose independently, and can only drift with the flow in confusion (perhaps this is the lightest one) 2. Olvera: She has not been able to sleep for 700 years (it seems to be, I can't remember the time), and her country and family were destroyed due to the curse. What is the concept of not being able to sleep for 700 years? The author may not know at all, but just said that she has been very sleepy. As the chapter in the corresponding part of the book said, the former Soviet Union had done experiments. 7 Days is enough for humans to do anything just to sleep, 700 years, haha. 3. Ietta: Due to the curse, he destroyed his shelter 700 years ago and was trapped in a place as big as a pigeon cage for 700 years. Please think of the lockdown during the epidemic. People will go crazy in 7 days. This is still based on the Internet, 700 years, haha. 4. Leticia: You have to die once a month and your memory is reset. Real death is very painful. Anyone who tries Zisha will never try Zisha again after failure. What is the concept of dying once a month? The establishment of personality is based on memory, and memory reset means that she will always have a lifespan of one month. 5. Rorona: Every once in a while, you will experience different diseases. Everyone has been sick. Everyone knows how uncomfortable it is to get sick. Some diseases can make life worse than death, such as pneumoconiosis or bone marrow cancer. What is the concept of not being sick for a day? 6. Gloria: Every once in a while, her identity will be randomized. This may be better for adults (but it is still unbearable), but for children, it is the collapse of the world. Yesterday they were drinking milk at home, today they are begging on the street, and tomorrow they are digging underground. I guess not many people can stand it? My description in the previous paragraph cannot match the actual misfortune they suffered. Each of the witches I met had the same attitude as the previous paragraph. They even said that we are all good sisters, but unfortunately we have different ideas, so I want to shark you three times and make your life worse than death. Do you want to show your "kindness" from the side? For the first time, I felt that Sword Demon was right, "I have to kill them a thousand times, but it's not enough!" 3. The male protagonist has no growth, just like Lu Mingfei He had a Sima face at the beginning of the book, and he still has a Sima face now. Is it due to facial nerve necrosis? After so many things, I still feel that I can stay out of it and return to my previous peaceful life by making a wish. Almost everyone on the protagonist side has grown up, but only the male protagonist is still stupid. He has no use of B, no awareness, and no strength. He can't talk or practice, and he has finished using Sequence 9, right? When trouble comes, he relies on the girl's power, or on the countess, and he relies on fighting for money. What's the use of the protagonist? There are obviously many problematic aspects, but they don't seek to prove them. It is obvious that the mysterious royal power is the biggest drawback, but they don't use it. To be honest, Alice alone can push the plot, and she would have died if it weren't for Alice. I always feel that there are still a lot of unwritten ideas, but I am too lazy to write any more, and I am too lazy to read any more. Overall, the book is still flawless and has some advantages, but it is not enough to cover up these underlying problems.

Is this book good? Okay, I can't say that the writing is good, but at least I can see that it doesn't hold anything back. The style of a unit drama combined with a hodgepodge of random jokes ensures that the plot is guaranteed. The main line is clear and compact, never dragging. The characters are what keeps me watching. However, it was the villain's background that caused a big surprise. To prevent spoilers, I won't go into details. Basically, the daughter of God brought a bunch of modern ideas from the earth, killed her own sisters, exterminated other races, and launched a colonial war against the Eastern Continent for the sake of mankind. It was okay. As a villain, it's not normal to do bad things. What's funny is that the author went crazy and patched up the villains, and began to portray them as ideal warriors who strive for human survival, human glory, and for the bottom class of mankind to live a good life. This reminds me of a joke. "I am seeking justice" "You commit genocide" "That's because they bullied weak humans in the past" "You launch a colonial war against humans" "I promote the development of science and technology for the people" "You launch a colonial war" "I fight against corruption and ensure the fairness of the law to bring a better life to the people" "You launch a colonial war" It's like a thorn... No, a steel pipe, inserted into your lungs, making you want to follow the author's train of thought, even if you regard the villain as a forerunner who is not understood by the protagonist. Every time you see the protagonist group, you will think of them as a group of dirty genocides, sister-slayers, and unforgivable colonialists. Even so, he dared to show himself as an ideal warrior who was not understood by others. Of course, you can also put it another way. The colonial war was to let the people of the Eastern Continent also feel the "glorious glory of the ideal." As for the number of deaths and the plundered land and wealth, these are just the pains on the road to ideals. Doesn't it look familiar? You can call it the common prosperity of the Eastern Continent (laughing) In summary, if you can ignore this, this book is still very good-looking, especially the character. I really like Alice. The character description is very full and interesting. Reading the book reviews, it seems that many people don't like her. I think this is Alice. As she said, she is a player and she always behaves like a player. For people who have fun, fun is the most important thing. Also, stack up your armor. I don't mean to go overboard, this is indeed my feeling after reading this book. Also, this is a trumpet account and I paid for it.

If the author doesn't resurrect Saint Shalia within a hundred chapters, I don't mind destroying the entire starting point😠😠😠

It's interesting, the author This kind of unconventional non-protagonist perspective It's hard to see books with a simple life atmosphere and a real sense of participation now When I think about it, it's difficult to write a book with such a limited perspective. The protagonist doesn't have a God's perspective, so I can't read it To the essence of things We must design the changing perspective of the protagonist from the bottom to the top. With two small oil bottles, we must carefully design non-repetitive coincidences in order to let the two idiots do something good At present, it seems that there is no obvious villain? How the conflict is designed and how the plot unfolds are really exciting. No more words, hold on, author, This kind of epic fantasy love rush, I always feel that you have transformed the anime into a novel, which is quite interesting, come on. Of course, I haven't watched much yet. I'm just expressing my feelings here. I hope I won't be slapped in the face.