Longevity Begins with Learning

This kind of book is not for beginners Only old book lovers can appreciate the three-dimensional feeling

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel weird. Depicts a border town where officials are colluding and regard human life as nothing. The protagonist has just traveled through time and inherited the position of his deceased father. He became a member of the grassroots, studying and practicing martial arts. Trying to survive in the world, the protagonist originally thought he was traveling through time, but turned out to be a martial arts hero, and later found out that he might be a fairy warrior. As your strength increases, you will slowly uncover the truth about the world. There is no problem with this setting. There are a few things that feel strange: First, the author describes that the world's food production is quite high, and there is probably an old man named Yuan. Moreover, the level of science and technology is close to that of the Song and Ming dynasties, and the resources are sufficient but only honor and disgrace. There is no reason for the dissemination of knowledge to be so difficult. The second is, when there is no shortage of food. Why should those who are absent from work as corvees be given bran-pharyngeal vegetables? Food prices are so cheap. Qin Shihuang paid for the construction of the Great Wall. Third, what I don't understand the most is, how many people are there in a border town? Thirty thousand? Fifty thousand? Thirty today, fifty tomorrow. One hundred the day after tomorrow. The protagonist has been online to chapter 70, so there are hundreds of people, right? How many percent of the population will be lost in two months? 😰Why are you talking about a riot in 60 years? You should die early. Could it be that this person is just like leeks, and there are still some after they are harvested several times a season. It doesn't take ten months to conceive and it doesn't take long to grow up? 😁

The author's writing style is pretty good and could be used entirely for the word count. Write one chapter about the occurrence of the incident, and another chapter about the psychological activities after the incident. If you want a major event, just write it like this. As a result, everything that happens is a major event and you need to write it down. My mom saw 90 chapters, and at least 30 of them were about the inner drama of the protagonist. And it is slow to develop, which means that it does not mean that you write too much or that it is slow. You must have a story to improve the reading experience, shape the image of supporting characters, explore the secrets of the world, and expand the world view. In the end, this book was not good. I wrote a lot of it, but it turned out that it was all about the psychological activities of the protagonist, and the story did not advance at all. As for Chapter 95, I think it's okay to compress it by more than half. There is so much water in front, I really can't believe what the water is like in the back

After reading more than 60 chapters, I feel that the pace is too fast. In the early stage, I didn't even learn martial arts well before I came into contact with the extraordinary. And I killed people and climbed up as much as I wanted. Why hesitate? It felt like being a bitch and having to build an arch. The most important thing is that a small character doubts and feels that nothing is normal. If you have returned to ancient history, it would be normal, but as you said before, you are going to a different world. Since you already know that it is a different world, why do you still doubt that things in another world are abnormal?

The trial in the Celestial Palace under the sea in the early stage is okay, but if anyone watches it later and just spend money to find trouble, not only will the plot be delayed, the writing will be incomprehensible, and the plot will be very disgusting. The whole book is rated 3 out of 10

Yes, come on, I have a piece of food and grass. I have the potential to become a god. I have voted for it.

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This book is not the type of book that relies on stacking attributes and top-notch foundation-building elixirs to create excitement. First of all, the golden finger is understanding, so the fun part of this book is solving puzzles, reasoning, and doing experiments. In the fog, deductively reason out the next step based on existing conditions. The protagonist is not absolutely safe, and may become a dish in someone else's pot. After struggling in the boss's pot, the principles in my heart were constantly tested and weighed, and finally became clear to me. This is the cool part! Joining an organization called the Immortality Sect is neither infinite loyalty nor total rebellion. Each supporting character starts from his own interests and is intertwined into a huge organization. Based on this background, the character glow of the supporting characters has a starting point. Being away for half his life, he is still a young man when he returns! Come on, author.

This book is not very good at the beginning, but it gets better as it goes on. The advantages are: 1. The overall concept is very good, and the overall plot has ups and downs. It is good that the author does not set the pace for the readers, but writes according to his own ideas. Many novels are written in order to cater to the readers in the later stage and they are incomprehensible, just like go away without abandoning the readers; 2. The overall idea is relatively rigorous, there is no Virgin, but the little widow Zhang Caiyun is really good, why not include it? 3. The description of the fight is good, and you won't have to shout embarrassingly before using a big move; The disadvantages are: 1. The first part is very slow and easy to persuade to quit; 2 The second part feels that the world begins to revolve around the protagonist. The author looks at the protagonist in Mortal Cultivation and the latter is also running around. If it is too smooth, there will be nothing to watch. I hope the author will write better and better.

You all said it's not good, but I've caught up with the latest one. I don't know if it's good or not. There's no problem with the writing, and it won't be a drama. I really like the main plot of cultivating immortals. The ones about practicing weapons really have the feeling of the wizarding world. I really like it. The wizarding writing is great and rigorous and scientific.

This crappy book cost me 36% of my money. I read it in one sitting... I don't know how to put it... It's not as good as I thought it would be, but it's not that bad... But I finished reading it...

How can I put it, it's too depressing, the protagonist will always get into all kinds of big troubles, either being plotted or on the way to being plotted. When practicing Qi, he will be targeted by Ji Zhu immediately. As soon as he builds Qi, there will be Jin Dan who wants to fuck him. After finally reaching Jin Dan, a bunch of Nascent Souls are trying to get him. Wherever he goes, there will be beacon smoke everywhere, and the sky will collapse, like an ant that is inexplicably doused by boiling water falling from the sky. If the latter is not enough, the entire Heavenly Beast is also invincible and completely invincible. Just a breath of breath will trap the protagonist for decades, using the whole world to fight, and then finally reaches the Nascent Soul. Oh, this piece of shit starts to invade the entire world of cultivation again, quietly replacing most of the top leaders, and begins Invasion of the world rules, you said you arranged a plot, it is so outrageous, who can watch it? It is like you have just left the novice village, every soldier around you is the final boss, and the final boss is actually God, you are just an ant in the virtual world, how comfortable is this? This book is not as exciting as a refreshing novel, nor is it as profound as a literary work. The protagonist is not a positive character. He is indecisive and hesitant, especially the part where he changes his name to Shenglinggen. He spends a lot of resources, refines a pill to nourish the fetus, arranges for pregnant women, kills people, protects the Tao, teaches the Dharma, and makes a lot of mistakes. In the end, he says that he is greedy and cannot control it, which makes him laugh. It's like the protagonist becomes a disabled person, hundreds of chapters! Hundreds of chapters have not yet been completed! Who the hell can stand it? How about practicing Cun Zhi here? Moreover, everything is written in such detail. It is all useless plot. How many chapters have been wasted? Just reading one of your books cost almost 7,000 points, which is more than 70 yuan! If you keep writing like this, it will be like the second generation of Fishman, useless!

The protagonist is a time traveler and is not a native, so he keeps bringing Xu Yuan with him. This person is completely useless and is of no use to the protagonist. He is just a blood-sucking insect. Xu Yuan forgets it and insists on taking his wife and children to suck the blood of the protagonist. The protagonist does not know that the muscle is wrong and keeps raising various resources to throw at Xu Yuan's family as if they don't have money. There are still a group of people talking about brotherhood! Tell me, whose brotherhood has one side sucking the other side's blood without any limit like this?

Speaking of Xu Yuan, who was brought from the mortal world, he accepted the favor of the protagonist from being a mortal to a martial arts master, and then he was brought to the fairy world. This was basically the contribution of the protagonist. Just being a friend was enough. Then he got married and brought up a family. The protagonist also had various secrets and top magic weapons. Then he was disobedient and went to the front line. He was either captured and used to blackmail the protagonist, or he died and then asked for the master. The revenge of the protagonist is very disgusting. If the author spent some ink on the brotherly relationship between the protagonist and Xu Yuan, it would be acceptable in the later writing, but it is completely impossible to feel how much the protagonist has feelings for him and how important he is. Wasn't he just a tool at the beginning? There was help in the mortal world. There is also a helper in the fairy world. The mortal world is okay. After a few chapters, he disappeared, and later he showed up with his own child.

This author is poisonous. When the golden elixir reaches the elixir stage, the protagonist is a top-grade golden elixir. If the protagonist does not improve his spiritual root, he cannot become a Yuanying? The protagonist's cultivation level is deliberately stuck in the late stage of the golden elixir. In order to improve the spiritual root, the protagonist's plug-in also has a trick 😤

I don't understand. Is Xu Yuan the protagonist's father or son? He takes such good care of him.

After reading Chapter 25, I would like to point out the shortcomings - it's not that exciting, and it doesn't matter what the priority is. Don't look down on cool writing. To put it bluntly, The Count of Monte Cristo is also a cool writing. The four major classics, except Dream of Red Mansions, are actually all cool writing. The cool points are generally growth, acquisition, transcendence, and revenge. Taking out those popular passages in classic novels, they are basically of the above types. Shuangwen itself is not low, what is low is web writing that gives up logic for the sake of fun. This book is enough for the 25 chapters I have read, but it is really not exciting at all, and it doesn't even have the ability to suppress the desire to advance. The protagonist has become a member of the corrupt civil service system of an agricultural civilization, and has no problem surviving; he has a plug-in to speed up learning, and there is no development direction for the time being; he has no specific goals, and there are no obvious external enemies or conspiracies surrounding the protagonist. This is the main situation of the protagonist. There is no love or hatred, and neither internal nor external driving force is sufficient. Not only is there no sense of pleasure in reading, but there is no sense of expectation. Especially in the paragraph before Chapter 25, the protagonist begins to investigate the history of corvee labor and mining in the county where he is located, and the author analyzes the local economic system that is close to slavery at length. This kind of content will basically only appear under the branches of history, political struggle, and investigation. The motivation that drives the protagonist to investigate is usually the political opponent. Before that, the author must have designed a sufficiently ambitious goal or an annoying villain to serve as the protagonist's motivation. I really don't understand why this book talks about such boring content for so long without even setting up the main character's driving force clearly? Of course, it may be that my threshold is too high. The combination of time travel + indirect plug-in + agricultural civilization itself is no longer attractive to me. But I still have to say - Wen seems to be happy to see the mountain. You must have an interesting character or plot, otherwise what is the difference between it and a running account?

First, the overall experience is interesting. Second, the protagonist seems smart, but in fact he is stupid to death, so stupid that he is mentally retarded. Third, in more than 600 photos, I saw the protagonist killing innocent people indiscriminately. I felt that the protagonist had no bottom line and was worse than a beast.

I don't know what the author is thinking. In the first few chapters, the protagonist feels sad about the bullies being bullied and sympathizes with the oppressed people. In the following chapters, just for meritorious service and promotion, he kills villagers who cannot survive and are forced to resist at will! When I first read those comments, I saw that they were scolding me quite harshly. I thought it was a bit too much, but now it seems that they are scolding me lightly! Can anyone be an author now? Or are you talking about articles written by AI?

Chapter 400 is the golden elixir, and chapter 800 is the Nascent Soul. It's long and smelly. The protagonist is very smart during this period. The various accidents are too blunt. You can jump to a hundred chapters to catch up. The word count is pure.

Either there is a heaven-defying golden finger that directly gives skills, resources, and insights, or he has a valuable treasure and is worried about being discovered by high-level cultivators and kills people to seize the treasure, or his qualifications are too poor and the sect does not like him, or he has a grudge against the sect or the sect's senior officials... What other reasons are there for not joining the sect? The protagonist only has a golden finger that is in a state of enlightenment (the panel is currently only used for enlightenment), and his qualifications are not good. He has no skills, no background, no teachers, no heaven-defying treasures, and no friends who can help him. He practices the most common Fire Art in the Qi refining period, and uses the two elixirs of Bigu and Vein Opening for alchemy. While condemning the sect family's various blockades on training resources, he thinks that he can easily join the Nascent Soul Sect with alchemy, but he just doesn't want to join (in the early stage, even the disciples of the Changsheng Sect refused to join after being introduced). I am as cautious as a mouse even when buying some alchemy ingredients, and would rather risk my life on the black market... In the future, if the author does not provide benefits, how can the protagonist obtain the elixir recipes, follow-up exercises, and foundation pills so easily? The protagonist starts from inspection, and is a member of the establishment. He is always grateful to have an establishment, and laments the hardships of those outside the establishment. How can he be so stubborn in the world of cultivation, unwilling to join even if he is free, and the sect will restrict the freedom of disciples? Where did the idea come from?

Suddenly I thought of this golden finger. I can learn meditation skills. Once I practice it, I will be in the state of unity of body and mind all the time. Isn't the spiritual radiance finger rising so fast?

Give up, I can't bear it anymore! The biggest flaw of this book is not the so-called slow-burning, but the fact that the protagonist has too many mental activities, and basically all of them are random thoughts, and the number of words is very low. Things that can be explained clearly in one sentence have to be written in many sentences, and they are written repeatedly. It seems that the protagonist does not look like a time traveler, but looks like an aboriginal, and a bit mentally retarded! If the author shortened the more than 200 chapters to 100 chapters, this book would basically be a masterpiece.

It feels like your knowledge has been monopolized to this extent. Except for the protagonist who is cheating, the rest of the casual cultivators can't survive at all! It takes so much trouble to learn a fireball, how desperate other people must be!

Step by step is quite steady. There are many novels with titles like Gou or Steady, but I always feel that the protagonist is very wandering, entangled in various incidents, and involved in various things that do not belong to his own realm. He relies entirely on the protagonist's aura to survive. This is different. He only does things that he can touch, and encounters things that are beyond his ability. Love will run away, the details of the skills are also well written, it looks normal, and it is updated steadily. It is absolutely popular. There are not many popular novels of this type, and there are quite a few who are trying to trick others into selling things like immortality flow, Gou Dao, etc. I just like this kind of novels that grow steadily and the protagonist can control the development of events by himself.

Make a record in the skill panel! The numbers are all written randomly, and the more I practice, the more I regress. It's a hundred chapters, and I've already practiced a lot of exercises. At two o'clock a day, I went from more than thirty to more than fifty, when I was on sick leave, I went from more than fifty to more than forty, and after I realized that I was cultivating, it became a few points less. I didn't write this for the sake of being a eunuch!

It's rare to come across a good book, so I silently subscribe to them one by one. The author writes slowly to ensure quality.

This book focuses on immortality in the early stage, then begins to incorporate Western fantasy settings in the middle stage, and then adds Cthulhu in the later stage. It is nothing. The article is terrible, and the main character is extremely stupid. Obviously the title of the book is learning, and everyone knows that the more knowledge a person learns, the smarter he becomes, but the protagonist in this book is always stupid. For example, many times I know I have a problem and I have to go ahead, but I can't handle it myself and don't tell others. I just pretend that I just have doubts and don't tell others. What do you think of others? You are the only one who knows how to investigate, right? No one else can? In the end, as expected, something big happened, and the protagonist began to pretend to be a coward and run away again, and the blood pressure of those watching soared.

When I read Chapter 27, it was very well written. The protagonist didn't waste any time and was slowly improving step by step. But the chapter reviews are too impetuous, and they all despise the male protagonist and don't want to be a prostitute or cultivate immortality.

It's a good book. There are traces of the protagonist's growth. It's not the kind of mindless crushing from the beginning. The pace is slow, but the story is more three-dimensional.