The Path to Immortality Begins with Quanzhen

Fine. If you read too much, you will hit a wall and pretend to be cowardly. This book is quite interesting to read slowly over low heat. Slowly and gradually, Pig's Feet slowly became a master from a shopkeeper, taking charge of a party. Say something normal, the sentences are smooth, coherent, and reasonable. The only two small flaws It is too slow. In the current environment, people's hearts are floating, and there are many fewer people who can read quietly. The plot gradually progresses, and the pig's feet become bigger and stronger step by step. This was originally an advantage, but in the past few years, it has almost become a disadvantage. Bland, how do you say this? For example, Naruto, Death, etc., Three chapters with a small climax, ten chapters with a story, can you understand? For this one, simmer over low heat. 90 points

Why not get the Nine Yin Manual. The most powerful and easiest martial art in the world of the divine eagle is the Jiuyin Manual. The world has been confirmed. It is at the foot of Zhongnan Mountain. I have been to the Quanzhen Sect countless times and I must be familiar with the area around the Quanzhen Sect. Why don't you get the Nine Yin Manual? Isn't the Nine Yin Manual better than the junk martial arts of the Quanzhen Sect? Wang Chongyang found that he could not defeat Lin Chaoying with his innate skills, and could only defeat Lin Chaoying with the Nine Yin Manual. The Nine Yin Manual is engraved in the secret room. No one can find it, but you can find it with a little patience.

I like this book very much. The protagonist's experience is steady and steady. He practices spiritual practice when he should and acts chivalrously when he should. There is also a lot of original content. In terms of martial arts, it also has the flavor of Jin Yong's original work. But looking at this book, it is classified in the science fiction, time and space travel area. The title of the book is that immortality begins with Quanzhen, and it will definitely go to other worlds in the future. I have read many fan works, including a large number of people who switch from martial arts to cultivating immortals. It is inevitable that there will be several problems. 1. Once the zone is changed, the boundary division begins to be chaotic. 2. The steady and steady style becomes more difficult to write as you go forward. 3. Some characters and martial arts in the world of high martial arts may not be as good as those in the world of low martial arts in terms of wisdom, character, and intentions. 4. After traveling through the world, in order to prevent the protagonist's previous efforts from seeming in vain, he is always allowed to quickly recover his strength. They often fall into the reincarnation of fighting with top masters and then competing for dominance in the martial arts world, without the previous down-to-earth and natural character development narrative. These are common problems. After all, we have seen them too many times. I sincerely hope that this article will not encounter them.

Unless the main character hacks his son to death, I won't watch it. It's very toxic and everyone won't like it. Even though the protagonist doesn't have much time to spend with his son, it's just that he doesn't spend much time with his son, not that he doesn't accompany him. As a result, he doesn't even want to call him dad after not seeing him for several years. He doesn't bother practicing martial arts and dances around every day. Later, he runs away from home and becomes a demon. He kills so many people and is actually hacked to death by the protagonist with a sword. Alas. What did you write? It shouldn't be about a son. In addition, the protagonist keeps sighing that it's my fault, it's my fault. It's very unbearable. He thinks it's Duan Zhengchun, and the sword cultivator's firmness is gone.

After seeing Xu Ning killing so many innocent people because his girlfriend faked her death and became a demon, the protagonist didn't say anything. He just said, "I didn't educate him well." It was gone, gone, gone... Really, if you didn't educate him well, give me a good education! Even if he declares to others that his son's sins are his own, he still chooses to bear his son's sins. How is this different from today's trashy romance TV series? "If the world is destroyed, it will be destroyed. If she is gone, she is really gone..." Speechless. If this is the author's world view, I just want to say that it's great that the author is not in a high position, otherwise we, ordinary people, would have no choice but to die. Forget it, when the author engages in a mafia-style material "cultivating immortality" concept of mortals cultivating immortals, this is what should happen, and he slipped away.

I can't stand it anymore, just because you coveted Huang Rong's body, and then used it up irresponsibly. You gave birth to a son and you didn't educate or raise him. Now you know your son's condition, and you don't have the tools to cure your son's inner demons, but you still don't care and continue your own spiritual path. Then when you come back, your son becomes a demon and massacres ordinary people. Then you blame yourself, blaming yourself for wanting to become stronger. You didn't expect this. Then, my son is fine, you are fine too, but what about so many people who were killed inexplicably? Did they provoke you? Just go into seclusion and wander around in other worlds for ten or more years. Then why did you provoke Huang Rong? Just because it was Huang Rong, I wanted to have a good time, and then I didn't care after I was done. Why would you marry a wife and have children if you take the ruthless path? Since you don't want to worry about it, why don't you stop pretending to show your warm side?

How should I put it? The author feels that he has reached a dead end. The main world and the mortal world could have been very exciting, but they were watered down and the map was changed to force the author down. . . There are also two poisonous points, Huang Rong and her son. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Generally speaking, the author's writing skills are above average. I rated this book as "tasteless". There is no meat in it, but it tastes good when it is removed. Nowadays, I just jump to read it. I really can't find any other good time travel novels in the recent book shortage. I don't know what to say, but the author should avoid these poisonous points in the next book. Your grades could have been better. Please listen to your opinions on how to improve. If there is improvement, I plan to pursue your next book about time travel. Of course, if your Quanzhen can change and become more exciting later on, I will continue to support it, but the patience of readers is really limited, not to mention this is an online article 😥

I hope that in reality the author is not an official, or there is no official in his family. Otherwise, will the common people still have a way to survive? Your father is Li Gang, garbage.

It's not enough, the author should try to make more

Let me tell you The first 200 chapters of this book are okay, and I can barely read it after 300 chapters. After Xu Tianya's son becomes a demon, I can completely abandon the book. I have gone through four copies so far First Mortal, Second Parallel Modern, Third Immortal Sword, and Fourth Journey to the West. How can I put it? Of the four copies, only the first and second can be read, but there is no plot participation. It feels like an assembly line. It's not as enjoyable as reading the original novel for you. Of course, the transformation of the world can still be barely seen in the main world of the Condor Shooting, but here's the point. Ever since Xu Tianya's son became a demon, the plot has become a mess. I didn't explain it to anyone in the world. The son of a pig's trotters has the privilege of slaughtering cities and villages. What the hell is written in the fairy sword? Kneel down and lick the pig's trotters. What the hell is Journey to the West? Really, it disgusts me to death. The best thing about this book is The World of the Condor. I really don't recommend reading it after 200 pictures. I regret it now. I have ordered the following chapters. I hope everyone will remember it.