The Path to Immortality Begins with the Embroidered Uniform Guard

I really can't get it right. I don't even know what the author is doing over and over again. Who has the word count? The world was once again peaceful for Chongzhen, and then Chongzhen died, and the world was in turmoil again, and the little emperor was trying to bring peace to him, and then the Queen Mother forced the protagonist to take the throne, and then the world was in turmoil again, and the protagonist was trying to level the world for himself, are you tired of chasing it? I don't care about the classification of the heavens, I just read it as a historical text, but why do I keep repeating it? Slipped away

It is impossible for Jinyiwei selection to kill each other. Don't forget where Zhu Yuanzhang was born. His birth would have made it impossible to set such cannibalistic selection criteria.

When Hong Kong directors and screenwriters make movies with historical attributes, it feels like they have never read the book. Whatever I shoot, I feel like I'm going shopping with Young and Dangerous!

What you want to see is cultivation and immortality, but you end up fighting lowly in court.

The first part is pretty good, but the latter part gets worse and worse. The first is that there are so many chapters, but they have not touched on immortality at all, and have nothing to do with the title. It is more like a historical fiction and a low-level struggle for hegemony. If you want to write about immortality, I personally think that the factors of immortality need to be ambush in advance. The only thing related to immortality in the article is just a slight mention in the exercises. There are so many chapters, and the clues to immortality have not yet come out. Judging from the latest chapters, there are external troubles outside and internal worries inside. How many chapters are needed to solve these? Two hundred? Or four hundred? I wrote hundreds of chapters just before proclaiming myself emperor. When will we get to immortality next? The second is that after there are too many characters later, the description cannot be grasped. From swearing to protect the Ming Dynasty with Chongzhen to establishing the country of Daheng, the description is not only cumbersome, but also the character of the character, such as the Queen Mother Zhou, changes too quickly. If you make up your mind to use the Queen Mother Zhou as a reason to rebel, then you will not be able to rebel from the beginning. To describe the general knowledge of Empress Dowager Zhou, when Chongzhen died, she told Empress Dowager Zhou that she would listen to Duke Qin and let him be the prince's teacher, etc. This part does not have the intention of Empress Dowager Zhou being suspicious and the protagonist will rebel in the future. Then suddenly Empress Dowager Zhou wants to kill Duke Qin. The turning point in this part is too sudden. Which parts should be emphasized and which ones can be brushed off. Personally, I think it was handled very poorly and laid a lot of groundwork for the rebellion. However, the real climax part is solved in one chapter, which ends in an anticlimactic manner. It may be that I want to give the protagonist a legitimate reason for the rebellion. However, this way of writing does not fit with the previous story line, and secondly, it does not fit with the previous description of the protagonist. Third, the protagonist is now emperor and has a child. How to write about immortality? Is it personal immortality or the establishment of an immortal dynasty? I just read the latest chapter. The meaning of the article is that it is inevitable for sons to kill each other. In this way, the protagonist is now completely the same character as the former ruthless emperor, without many of the protagonist's own characteristics. I have also read a lot of novels about immortality. If those novels start from the court, then they will definitely not become emperor, and they will definitely not have children too early, because the process of immortality in the future will be difficult to write, including some novels about emperors at the beginning, and children will not be born very early. I don't know how the author planned the outline, but I think it is necessary to sort it out. There are a lot of confusing and unclear logics in the article, but it needs to be said. I stayed up late to read the first half, and skipped to read the second half. It's a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless, and it's tasteless. (Personal opinion, don't try to bully me, bully means you are right. Use your bully to disgust others, don't disgust me.)

Author, in fact, your book is quite good as an alternate history, but it has nothing to do with immortality. I recommend changing the name. . . I would like to give you a suggestion called "The End of the Ming Dynasty that saved the world".

New book friends, I would like to remind you that everyone is saying that the author's writing is off topic, but few people say that his writing is not good. Even if this book is off topic, the writing is definitely better than most of the books in the daily recommendations.

The new book is about to start, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you.

I can't stand it anymore from the first few chapters. What is Jinyiwei? It is the emperor's personal army. What does the emperor's personal army need most? It's loyalty! What did you experience? It's a training base for ruthless killers! The Ming Dynasty has never trained Jin Yiwei like this! You have been making things up from the beginning, and they are illogical, unreasonable, and unhistorical!

I have been reading for so long, and this is the first time that I have written a pure historical novel about traveling through time and cultivating immortality. The key point is that the writing is pretty good!