Rebel!

There is no problem with your writing skills. It is enough to reach the level of a first-class author. But what is currently presented is that of a third-rate author. There are several reasons. 1. The first two books had little success, and I lost some money later. I wanted to write my own stuff and educate the audience. This is your biggest failure. Just like the current film industry, I always think that I am high-end and the audience is vulgar, and I want to write something elegant to educate the audience. Then you will definitely be educated by your parents. 2. The biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist is a local. You are still being stubborn. The current results in this book are your truest portrayal. Now is not 20 years ago, when writing about local protagonists there is no sense of immersion at all. It doesn't really matter if he doesn't kill his brother. This is a minor point. 3. There is another striking point, that is, the world is not ignored. I chose to take the Hong Kong underworld in the 1980s and 1990s as the entry point. There is a huge problem, that is, the audience will be introduced to the gangsters of the 1980s and 1990s in Hong Kong, and then you will bring it to mainland China. How is it described? Even if Hong Kong's income and living standards were high at that time, it was still only a population of 20 to 30 million. Even if there are relatively many resources, if there is one genius among 10,000 people, there will only be hundreds or even thousands of geniuses. The mainland had at least 7.889 Billion people at that time, which was enough to kill you. And the magnetic field crystals you mentioned actually came from outside the country. So how can the intensity of your local dancers' training be compared to the power that controls the magnetic field crystals? 3. Since you want to write an open-style Yakuza style, although you have not added points, you have turned the points into genius attributes. That doesn't matter, but what you're writing so far is still not satisfying enough. 4. Your writing skills can definitely reach the level of a first-class author. But if you still want to write your own stuff and educate the audience in the next book after finishing this one, then you will only end up being a second- or third-rate author. That's all. Don't try to educate the reader. Readers will vote for you with their feet. If you can have a public awareness, your next book should be able to achieve monthly sales of over 10,000.

The author, the protagonist was very well written in the early stage, but I feel that the author has gone too far, especially in the last few chapters. There is no need to write the protagonist into such a villain who does not treat people as human beings, right? The title of this book is The Fanatic, but there is an increasing tendency to make the protagonist a villain as well? Being too evil may not necessarily be a good thing. I can't stand it anymore. Someone kills a whole family and extorts hundreds of millions of assets because of a trivial matter. I want to know how you want to write next? Killing people on sight? It's getting further and further away from the artistic conception of this book, and it's a bit off track. You can be crazy, but you can't be evil.

Does the author have any misunderstanding about Gao Wu? He is known as Gao Wu who is lively in the city life. . .

The first two books are good because they are reasonable. Liangsheng and Weige have crazy capital. First of all, there is a system to ensure personal strength in the beginning, and subsequent development is also guaranteed. No matter how big a person you are, I will take my life anyway. At worst, I will fight to death for you to run away. If I change places, I will still hang out. I won't cheat you if I don't. The two of them start out like a newborn tiger and a dragon. Even if they are young, when they grow up, they will grow up to roar like tigers and soar into the sky, so it is understandable that they are crazy and have bad personalities. The protagonist of this book is a native with no plug-ins. At some point, a piece of trash will come out that a master can easily crush to death. His grinning teeth look ridiculous, as annoying as a teddy bear. In Gaowu World, if you want to be as good as a Hong Kong variety show, it will be awkward. Because the highest rule in the world of high martial arts is to respect strength.

The worst order is better than disorder. The protagonist is a person who is purely disorderly and fist-oriented. It's amazing that this book has not been blocked. To be honest, it was quite enjoyable to watch. It was fun to take revenge, kill anyone who didn't like it, and kick a dog if you were in a bad mood. But if you were an ordinary person, it would be a complete disaster if the protagonist took over. The so-called establishment of a new world is to create a dark forest society above the fist. Class solidification will be formed quickly. The son who boxing will still box. Ordinary people have no way to learn boxing. There is no second generation of rich people, no second generation of officials, only the second generation of boxing. The only difference between the protagonist and Qin Shihuang is that his power belongs to himself, and there is no need for the King of Qin to circle the pillars to assassinate someone. Correspondingly, people at the bottom will be even more desperate.

Old readers who read the author's books like your style. Many people find it difficult to accept your change of style. They don't understand why you have to throw away your strengths when writing a book.

From Hong Kong Shower Sheng to Chinatown Viagra, I have truly seen what cool writing is and what a gangster brother is. These two books are also the most refreshing, thorough, exciting, exciting, and fascinating novels I have read on Qidian in recent years. I hope that the author's level and achievements will be improved to the next level.

Don't you think it's strange? There are cars, boats, and planes, but no guns. Isn't it strange? You just rely on personal force. I know that you have high personal force, and I am rich and powerful. Do you just want to mess with me, and don't allow me to mess with you? Haha

Green onion, the ecological niche you gave up will be filled by others: Rebirth 1878: America's number one gangster. Stronger than you, fiercer than you. The heroes of the world are really like the crucian carp crossing the river!

I saw chapter 370 on qq. The protagonist has become as powerful as a god. His brother was killed because he liked gambling and couldn't change it. They have lived together in the same room since childhood and they are still brothers. It is difficult for cold-blooded people to kill their own brothers. In reality, the author hates his relatives so much that he almost becomes twisted in his heart before venting them out in writing. What kind of family is the author born in? Who is he from that place?