Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei Returns from Sekiro

The Current Situation of the Dragon Clan: The fanfic is better than the original work It can be called a tauren in the novel world After reading the original work, I just felt very tired, and I wanted to read it but didn't dare to read it Sure enough, the fanfic is still comfortable. Currently, the only Dragon Clan fanfics that give me a good impression are this one and the C-level hybrid one. However, C-level updates are too slow. I hope the author of this one will work hard. I am satisfied with two updates a day, but I hope the writing will not collapse. PS: I will definitely support you after it is released.

I am also a writer, but I am not writing books at the starting point. Whether from the perspective of an online writer or a reader, this book you wrote is the best Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever read on any novel website! Not one of them! Although the pace is a little slow, the writing style is quite comfortable, and even some bland plots are still attractive to watch. Some suggestions from the perspective of a writer: 1. The market for online articles is huge, and the reader groups are also diverse, among which novice readers are the most numerous. It can be seen that I wrote this book out of some emotion or feeling in my heart. Some readers who are too novice are not your target group. Just delete some of their meaningless comments. 2. If you want to make more money, you should indeed write fast-paced short stories, but you will lose the loyal readers who have been screened out. Moreover, with your current writing style, the change may not be thankless. 3. If you want to work part-time, stabilize the current base of readers and study on the basis of adhering to the current writing style. It may not be a bad idea to wait until the quality of the book is stable and there are more loyal readers before trying to transform. Finally, I would like to say that I am far inferior to you in terms of talent and potential, but when I saw you saying that you only posted articles on forums before, I couldn't help but want to contribute a little experience as an online article writer in the hope that you would avoid making detours. After all, I really really like the Dragon Clan fanfic you wrote, and I very much hope that you can write higher-quality books in the future! This is the ardent expectation from Lao Bai's picky readers! Come on, come on, come on!

A brief review of this book After tasting it myself, this book is indeed a fairy grass. 1. The depiction of Lu Mingfei's changing character is natural and vivid, making people believe that this poor boy who fell into the quagmire has the courage to run in the rain. Weeds survive in the quagmire, and every time they absorb sunlight, they drift with the surroundings. Such a chaotic life! After going through wind and rain, I feel a little sad that I can grow up proudly on my own without the shade of trees and the company of flowers. 2. Some of the plots in the book are innovative and interesting. For example, the road painting encounter that happened several years earlier turned into a short umbrella story, which made people feel warm. It was like one day when it was raining. You went to pick up an umbrella to avoid the rain. You found a beautiful, wet miko girl squatting on the side, covering her body and shaking. You felt pity for her, so you held an umbrella with her to protect her from the rain. You try to ask the miko to go home, but the miko doesn't move, as if she's crazy. You gritted your teeth and felt that you couldn't ignore her, so you stayed with her as if you had lost your mind until her family came to find you. Two strangers became connected because of a reckless heavy rain. Even though they could not understand each other, they still cuddled with each other in the rain... 3. The development of this Black Swan Harbor copy is something I have never heard of. It is like a random event that suddenly pops up when running a group. It can be seen that the author should try a three-line narrative, a new Herzog, a new road Mingfei, and a new Renata. The latter Mingfei line first merges with Renata, and finally merges with the Herzog line. To be honest, I am really looking forward to the next story. Disagreements 1. Regarding the senior sister: I have always had a good impression of this character. After all, judging from the original work, Nono takes good care of Lu Mingfei and is willing to care about his mental health and protect him (the Three Gorges Incident). Most such elder sisters are good. As for Green Tea, I don't feel it. How could Nono's psychological profiling ability be proof that she was hanging on to Lu Mingfei? She never showed any sign of liking Lu Mingfei from the beginning to the end. Lu Mingfei also knew it, and he just secretly (even though everyone knew it) had a crush on his senior sister. What happened to the mutual agreement between you and me? 2. For the uncle's family: That is the real family. It is an objective fact that Lu Mingfei has been showing off before. Lu Mingze is his aunt's biological son. It is normal to have preferences. Besides, the uncle has always been very good to Lu Mingfei. In Long San, they mistakenly thought that something happened to Lu Mingfei. Wouldn't they also go on TV to ask the government for help? Real family members are the ones who are willing to help you when something happens to you. I don't understand why some people have such strong opinions on this? My uncle's family is an ordinary family, right? 3. For the author: The author himself should not pay too much attention to those negative reviews. There are always people who don't like them. Just think of it as screening readers. Just like the guy next door who wrote about the emperor's death angel, it is very important to determine his own audience. As for whether the queen is a harem? Who cares, just write it smoothly. It depends on whether the harem is read in the brain. This question is not very important. There is also the one about a free day. It is indeed a bit stiff and the plot logic is weird. I know that the author was in a state of mind at the time. I will ignore it for now, but I still hope to fix it. Finally, cheers to the author↖(^ω^)↗

I almost died laughing

I suddenly had an idea "Lu Mingfei returned from Warhammer" Lu Mingfei's soul traveled through Warhammer 40K and was enslaved by Orks in a world occupied by orcs. After going through pain, he was finally rescued by the Weeper of the Holy Blood Group, but because the Weeper was single, he could not save all the human slaves. Witnessed countless human slaves being killed by orcs, and a Lamenter warrior named Gallo who died tragically in battle to save him. He narrowly escaped holding the warrior's last relic, a skull amulet symbolizing human purity. We also witnessed the weepers who fought to the death with the orcs and shed blood because they did not want to abandon the human slaves. We also witnessed the human slaves who did not want these noble warriors to be buried with them and collectively knelt down and begged them to take their children and evacuate the slaughterhouse quickly. After experiencing all this, the Weepers managed to escape from the planet. This series of events completely changed him. In painful regret, he began to ask for self-abuse to train himself. "You are all a bunch of big fools to save a waste like me from dying..." All the way to Mingfei In an accident, he was fatefully spotted by the leader of the Weeper Chapter, and he fought against reconsideration and secretly recruited Lu Mingfei in private The Space Marine who was transformed into a Lamenter was renamed Garro Katos, replacing the name and identity of the Lamenter warrior who died in the battle to save him, as well as his glory (because Lamenters cannot replenish their troop supply during the Atonement Crusade). "Why choose me... A loser like me" - Jialuo Katos (Lu) "Perhaps because of fate or because of your eyes, I saw the shadow of Jialuo in your eyes. I want to try to let you inherit his gene seeds and let our brothers return in another way." The Chapter Master of the Weepers, one thing he had never revealed to anyone, perhaps because of the Emperor's divine inspiration or the talent inherited from their Primarch, was that he saw part of this child's future. Although the future was unclear, there was one image that impressed him. He would become one of them, their blood brother. After undergoing rigorous training, he followed the Weeper on the Atonement Expedition. Due to the Weeper's cursed luck, he participated in countless brutal bloody battles and quickly grew up, becoming the best melee master in the war group. After serving for more than a hundred years, he has become an outstanding warrior who has experienced hundreds of battles. He has become a champion warrior who fought out of the mountains of corpses and seas of blood, and became the champion of the Weeper Chapter. Together with his brothers, he experienced the torture of blood thirst and black rage, but he never lost himself with his lofty faith and firm will. In order to ensure the evacuation of tens of billions of humans, the Lamenters and a Hive Fleet launched a brutal and desperate ground and space battle. In the end, in order to protect their brothers and human refugees, they left behind with a tactical team. They faced a high-level Hive Tyrant and its elite Hive Guards. In the brutal killing, they watched their brothers who had fought alongside them for hundreds of years fall one after another. In their rage, they actively embraced the Black Fury and repeated the experience over and over again in the psychic hallucinations of the Black Fury. Experiencing the scene of their genetic ancestor dying in battle, on his deathbed and before he was completely lost in the dark fury, he asked himself whether this life was worth it. Holding his most precious treasure, the skull amulet, he once again strengthened his faith in the memories of his brothers and comrades in the past, because all their comrades were proud of him, the youngest brother among them. "To protect the cherished things" As he was dying, accompanied by the war cry of the wailer, his eyes suddenly filled with a layer of golden spiritual light from small to large. In the chat, his brothers who had fought side by side with the Black Templars mentioned that there was such an otherworldly existence in the Black Templars, the "Emperor's Champion". With the blessing of golden spiritual energy, he returned to form the Emperor's Chosen, dragging his seriously injured and dying body, and died of exhaustion with all the enemies in front of him. When he fell, under his feet was an endless mountain of corpses piled up by Tyranid corpses, including a Hive Tyrant and even a Hive Titan who died at his hands. He completed his mission perfectly, holding the skull amulet soaked in Tyranid blood and reaching into the gloomy sky. Countless dark dots and huge shadows appeared in the sky, which were the boundless shadows of the Great Devourer. "Priest... Chief, battle... Leader, brothers... I have completed my... Mission..." After saying this, his superhuman body completely collapsed and could no longer be supported. The skull amulet in his hand fell in front of his eyes, and he closed his eyes weakly. As he lay dying, he began to chant the prayer taught to him by the Chapter Chaplain. At the last moment when consciousness completely disappeared, a soft golden light flashed past, and he seemed to see a golden figure staring at him... When Lu Mingfei thought he was completely dead, he opened his eyes again. But he found that he had returned to his former hometown, and at this time he was just in the third grade of junior high school…

This is what I summarized based on the original Dragon Clan novel, Dragon Clan fan fiction (I had no choice but to slay dragons because I had no money to go to college), and Baidu Encyclopedia. The empty parts are the words and spirits that have not appeared at all, so the author can play freely. Some parts can be freely borrowed and modified. Some of them can clearly see the evolution of upper and lower classes, some are second evolution, and some are third evolution. A few of them were named after me reading the Classic of Mountains and Seas. Finally, I wish you to write better and better, and realize your dream of the Dragon Clan~

Also, I don't think there's a need to be in such a hurry to end it. Hey, I also want to see the beautiful life of Lu Mingfei and Hui Liyi in school. I feel like there is a lot to write about. There is no need to rush to finish all the Dragon Kings. I think most of the most impressive things about the dragon clan are not that they are always slaying dragons.

I've read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics, and this one is really good. I hope I'm not an eunuch, it'll definitely be popular.

Everyone, please don't quarrel. If you have any suggestions, you can post them below this post. I will read them. Any posts you see arguing outside will be deleted. Also, please don't make excessive remarks. If you see them, they will be deleted. Thank you. It is everyone's responsibility to purify the harmonious book review area.

I have never played Sekiro, but what I didn't expect was that the author's writing style could be so good that it gave me a feeling as if I had been in that world for a long time and returned to reality. The entire order has been handed in, and the rewards have been given. The author doesn't need to worry about the words of those anti-fans, and just follow his own ideas and keep going!