Dragon Raja: Back to Seventeen

About the emotional drama and character creation of this book It really counts as the heroine The main descriptions are Su Xiaoqiang, Eli Yi and Xia Mi The description of Su Xiaoqiang is enough, the character is also likeable, there is no intellectual behavior, she is still the charming little goddess, but it is basically unrequited love (a pity) Eli Yi still has the same problem as the original book The character design is too thin (this is a problem inherent in the original work that cannot be saved, it is just like a blank sheet of paper, with no depth to explore), the sweetness is very sweet, but the favorability rises too quickly, and there is no real sense. It was offline for a long time in the middle period, and the sense of existence is missing Xia Mi is the most three-dimensional one in the book. If you don't read the original work but read this book, the interaction between Lu Xia There are more Dongbi Chu Xia, Lu Hui and even Lu Chu combined And there is a very obvious acquaintance process, from the earliest murderous intention, to vigilance, to mutual trust after fighting side by side, then to enemies cheating each other, and then to Lu Mingfei's confession after resurrecting, the emotional line is the most complete in the book Ella (White King): Character Bi Hui Li Yi is still thin, basically just Hui Li Yi 2.0, No discussion here Nono: Except for her scenes in Odin and Haven in the later period, she has no role at all other times, and her impression on me is not even as good as a clone who appeared in a few chapters Nono (clone): Although she only appeared in a few chapters, she successfully made me remember the sunflower in the ice and snow.

Fast forward to romantic comedies, Shura Field, "The Secrets I Have to Tell Between My Iceberg Tsundere White Dragon Sister and My Mouthless Gentle Miko Sister", "Attack Zero", "The Underworld Lady Wants Me to Confess?" ", "Shocked, a Chinese woman surnamed Ai gave birth to nine children. What is the child's name? ", "Rebirth, and then picked up the White King", "The Return of Sakura in God's Own Life", "The Restart of the Dragon Clan", Lu Mingfei also wants to open a harem! ", "When you are reborn in the new world, you should have a good harem! 😏

This is my first post about this book. After reading the comment section, many people think that this book should not be written if the original work by Xia Mi and Lu is impossible. But the question is, is the original work reasonable by him? A princess who lived for thousands of years, and then suddenly fell in love with a reptile who lived for more than ten years because of a few years of observation? The same is true for the so-called "well-matched". There are topics for people, but there is no topic for people and ants. This is one. Second, the development background of this book is rebirth, so the plot cannot be static. Since Lu Mingfei knows Xia Mi's ending, he will definitely find a way to change it. The same is true for this book. He has no thoughts about Xia Mi, but he will inevitably come into contact with Xia Mi in the process. However, monsters and monsters will attract people. According to the so-called setting, Lu Mingfei, the biggest monster, will be more attracted to Xia Mi. And with Chu's character, Xia Mi should be able to chat with Lu Mingfei. Otherwise, it would satisfy the so-called reader YY. A rich girl likes a poor scholar. It is impossible to think about it. Discussions are welcome, but I haven't read many books. If you come directly as an intern, don't come here. I will have the management ban you.

It's very good to watch. This is the most drama-like movie I've ever watched. It not only clarifies the confusing plot of Jiangnan, but also fills in the pitfalls. The plot is also reasonable. Mingfei can neither completely surrender to the Camarilla (Gattuso) nor Kassel (Angers). After all, the Camarilla wants to become the new dragon clan, while Kassel wants to kill all the dragon clan. Mingfei is a weapon for both parties. The author very cleverly established a third party with Lu Mingfei as the mainstay, and brought the Dragon King in by the way. It is speculated that Fenrir and Jörmungandr will also enter later, and then reasonably attack the other two Dragon Kings. There has never been a detailed description of the North American and Chinese mixed-race family. The original work only described Henkel as a bit more powerful without any specific description. The description of the doomsday sect also stopped at Dragon Five. Jiangnan, the history of the dragon family related to Odin, seems not to have been mentioned at all. The author is willing to You must think about it carefully, I hope the author will slowly develop the plot, and readers will not be in a hurry, as long as there are no supervisors, and the plot will be exciting if the power relationship is involved, and the author's writing is also very good. Norton's story about nido and the prince is very exciting. Come on＾0＾~

It's Lu Mingfei's harem, it's really disgusting for those fans to make up their own characters and start a harem.

I saw some book friends saying that the progress is fast, so that's okay. The main thing is to deal with the Norton line in the early stage in order to accumulate strength. Well, the main thing is to fill in the holes, and the advancement will be relatively faster. Only by bringing in Norton and Jörmungandr can Lu Mingfei be able to fill the hole. Fill in Odin's pit, fill in Nono and Eri's pit, fill in the pits of King of the Sky and King of Ocean, etc. Of course, these pitfalls are just the author's guesses, and there is no guarantee that everyone will agree with them. And if I write slowly, I don't even dare to think about how long it will take to write.

After reading this book, I realized that in the original work, Xia Mi and Su Qian were both silently paying for Chu Zihang to a certain extent. However, Chu Zihang only had revenge and bad boy in his eyes, and bad boy could also kill the Dragon King for his senior brother. They were going in both directions. But the more I think about it, the more I realize that except for Ye Ya, no relationship in the original work is truly two-way. The writing of Chu Zihang and Su Qian in this book is actually very good, the details are well controlled, and the hidden love plot also gave me a feeling of being natural. Compared with other fanfics, where Chu Zihang is forced to detect the other person's feelings under the influence of Shao Zai or other external forces, the look and feel of the story together is much better. Lu Mingfei in this book is actually great. He has full mobility in his new life. At first glance, he changes directly from a bad boy to Long Aotian, but the power obtained is relatively reasonable. In addition, the reborn Lu Mingfei gives his loved ones and those who love him a chance to make a new choice. It's a pity that the daily interludes are a bit short, the set is too busy, and the bad boy is actually very busy this time. However, it makes sense that Lu Mingfei likes to maliciously complain about Xia Mi. After all, there is not much time and way for him to relax, and humiliating Mi is a very popular way. Xia Mi in this book also stood out to me. She is second only to Lu Mingfei on the set. She is so purposeful and all her actions have their own meaning. She has companions and old friends, and people who can talk to her. If she still wants to betray Chu Zihang, who has known her for several years and has a short lifespan, for the so-called mark of Odin, then her life of tens of thousands of years will be in vain. If this book forces Chu and Xia into a couple in the end, or creates a threesome between Chu and Su and Xia, and if there is no cheating to extend Chu Zihang's life, the final outcome will only be about longevity. Eri Yi's transformation is very sudden, and the transition chapter is too short, just like taking the elixir of intelligence +50 in one night. After all, in the original work, she was a script tool arranged by everyone (including Jiang Nan). In this book, Shabaitian is said to be very popular, and there are many people/dragons who love her and care about her, but the person she really cares about is Shao Zai. The fact that White King Ella can join the gang is outrageous. She is more like a big silly Baitian, the true Dragon King version. It gives me the feeling that a fairy who has lost his memory and emotions comes to the mortal world to experience calamity. Caesar did not have a ticket to fight, so he became a soy sauce character in the true sense, but that is normal. If no one cheats on him, he will just be an A-level blank slate. If he has no connection with the protagonist group, he will not be able to make it to the set. The biggest role of Nonono is to help Shai Zai understand that the love caused by gratitude is never love. You once stood up for me, which was a promise that you considered yourself the boss; I am going through fire and water for you now, which is the answer of looking back on the past.

In my own opinion, Lu Xia in this book will be better together than Chu Xia in the original one (this is not to say that Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi will no longer be together, but it will be better to have a harem together). The reason why some people complain about Lu Xia's evil party is that the original Chu Xia left a deep impression on people, and they subconsciously thought that Xia Mi must be with Chu Zihang. But as far as this book is concerned, Lu Xia has much more emotional interactions than Chu Xia, and Lu Xia's feelings are not those that suddenly appear, but are slowly accumulated and sublimated through the little things the two have experienced together. Besides, I saw someone explain that Fei shouldn't steal his senior brother's girlfriend. I don't think it's a robbery. What's written in the book is that Mingfei regards Xia Mi as his junior sister, and that Xia Mi's feelings for Mingfei are slowly changing. That's why I think it would be more appropriate for Lu Xia to be together in this book. Of course, this is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, you can downvote and comment, no need to start a fight or scold me in private messages (dog head saves life)

At present, we have advanced to the latest plot of the old thief. He has been there for more than a year. Judging from the broken plot, this fan's completion of the original work is very reasonable. So let's speculate on the plot of Jiangnan's original work, and then use this to speculate on the plot development of the fan author. Many people in Gangnam's Dragon Clan believe that it is based on EVA, which is Neon Genesis Evangelion. The final outcome of the old EVA was internal strife between the two sides. Shinji became a god to complete the story, and the soul is no longer lonely. But the conflict in the latest plot of Dan Wei Jun Gu is indeed caused by a hidden dragon or a hybrid species. It may be that the Gattuso family colluded with a certain dragon clan, seriously injured Angers, and looked for Nono and Lu Mingfei everywhere with the intention of swallowing them to complete the story. Regardless of what Lu Lincheng and Qiao Weni think, the doomsday faction's idea may be to separate Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze, regardless of life or death, and then see if they can survive until the end of the world. Fingel planned to fish in troubled waters and broadcast the Antarctic coordinates. The latest plot is that a bunch of dragons and hybrids are coming to kill them. According to the EVA plot, I think Shinji corresponds to Lu Mingfei, Nono is the Black King's Eye, corresponding to Ayanami Rei, and Lu Mingze, no matter what it is, corresponds to Nagisa Kaoru. Seele originally wanted to use Rei Ayanami, the container of Lilith and humans, to become a god. Correspondingly, the Gattuso family wanted to use Nono, who had the eyes of the Black King, to cultivate a pure-blood emperor. According to the rhythm of the original work, either Nono went berserk and ate Lu Mingfei to complete the story, or Lu Mingfei ate Nono to complete the "complete". Zhu Xun corresponds to Lu Mingze, who was born from Adam, possessing the fruit of life and the power of wisdom. Corresponding to the dragon clan, he has both power and power. It may be a more advanced life form than the dragon clan, and maybe it is really the world tree. And Lu Mingfei is the artificial twin of the World Tree. Then Jiangnan's original ending may have been like this. (Compared with EVA) "Brother, the promised time has come" "Why, Lu Mingze, didn't you say that after I use up all my life, my soul will belong to you? What do you mean?!" Lu Mingfei couldn't help but transform into a dragon, and slowly walked towards Lu Mingze. "Yes, your soul belongs to me, brother, this time you must... Realize the happiness that only belongs to you." In the center of the Antarctic Nibelung, a monster is chewing something. . . . After that, there was a chaotic fight. Li Wuyue, Odin and a bunch of careerists came over. Nono went berserk, fought with Nono, and slaughtered all the dragons and careerists. Lu Mingfei really became the emperor (completed corresponding to Shinji becoming a god.), His parents died, many people died, Chu Zihang and Caesar didn't know if they would survive. After that, Lu Mingfei slaughtered the careerists in the secret party and truly took control of Kassel College. Corresponding to a flash of inspiration on a certain Weibo in Jiangnan, he kept all the secrets and continued to cultivate this group of hybrids. Wherever there were careerists, he would let the new generation of hybrids slaughter them.

And if the peak of the second-generation species is Xia Mi's limit, then she won't even be worthy of the battlefield when fighting the Black King.