Dragon Raja: Back to Seventeen

Regarding the romance and character development in this book If we really consider the female lead The main characters depicted are Su Xiaoqiang, Erii, and Xia Mi. Su Xiaoqiang is well-developed, has a likable personality, doesn't exhibit any idiotic behavior, and remains the charming young lady she always was, but it's basically a one-sided love affair (which is a pity).

Fast forward to romantic comedies, love triangles, "The Untold Secret Between Me, the Arrogant White Dragon Sister, and the Silent Gentle Shrine Maiden Sister," "Attack on Zero," "The Gangster's Daughter Wants Me to Confess?", "Shocking! A Chinese Woman with the Surname Ai Gave Birth to Nine Children in One Pregnancy, and What Are Their Names?"

This is probably the first time I've posted about this book. I glanced at the comments section, and many people think that Xia Mi and Lu shouldn't have been written in this book if the original story is impossible. But I ask you, is the original story itself reasonable?

It's a great read; this is the most plot-driven novel I've ever read. It not only untangled and connected the previously messy plot of Jiangnan's work but also filled in plot holes, and the storyline is logical. Mingfei can't completely side with either the Camarilla (Gattuso) or Kassel (Angers), since the Camarilla want to become the new dragon race, while Kassel wants to exterminate the dragons.

It's still Lu Mingfei's harem that's appealing; those fanfiction writers who create their own characters and harems are truly disgusting.

Some readers have commented that the pace is fast, so it's alright. The main thing is to finish dealing with the Norton storyline in the early stages to accumulate strength. Well, it's mainly about filling in the gaps; progress will be relatively faster that way. Only by getting Norton and Jormungandr involved can Lu Mingfei fill the gaps.

After finishing this book, I realized that in the original work, Xia Mi and Su Xi were, to some extent, the ones who silently sacrificed for Chu Zihang. However, Chu Zihang only had revenge and his unlucky boyfriend in his eyes. Even the unlucky boyfriend could kill the Dragon King for his senior brother. Their relationship was truly mutual.

In my opinion, Lu Mingfei and Xia Mi being together in this book would be better than the original Chu Xia (not that Lu Mingfei won't be with Erii, but it would be better to have them both in the harem). The reason some people criticize the Lu Xia/Xia pairing is, I think, because the original Chu Xia left a deeper impression, subconsciously leading people to believe that Xia Mi must be with Chu…

We've now progressed to the latest plot development involving the old thief; he's been there, doing what's right for you, for over a year now. Judging from the missing plot points, the additions and supplements to the original work in this fanfiction are quite reasonable.

Furthermore, if the peak of the second-generation species is Xia Mi's limit, then she wouldn't even be worthy of being on the battlefield when fighting the Black King.