Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei, the Martial Saint

I suddenly had a thought: "Lu Mingfei from Warhammer Returns" Lu Mingfei is transported to a Warhammer 40K world and enslaved by the Orks. After enduring immense suffering, he is eventually rescued by the Bloodborne Order, the Lamenters. However, the Lamenters are outnumbered and unable to save all the human slaves.

I haven't read Jiangnan Laozei's *Dragon Raja*, mainly because that book is several years old and I'm not really interested in reading it now. So I looked for some fanfiction instead. This book doesn't seem to have any major flaws, but I just felt it was incredibly padded. The whole thing is full of riddles—well, maybe not riddles, more like artsy types?

Immortal cultivation, ninja, now the Martial Saint series, I really want to see what the Lu Mingfei series is like.

Volume 1 is finally over. Author, please stop imitating Jiang Nan's writing style and making it so melodramatic! That's where Jiang Nan's badness lies. The younger generation liked this kind of literary style, but now that the younger generation has grown up, Jiang Nan doesn't know how to make Lu Mingfei grow up. So we always feel that Lu Mingfei is just slacking off and not growing.

Here's a brief evaluation, not meant to be negative, just my opinion. I've finished watching all the free parts, and it feels a bit awful. I think there are a few problems. First, there's absolutely no main plot. Over a hundred chapters are practically nonexistent, just a few sentences summarizing it: Lu Mingfei transmigrated from a high-martial arts world, started practicing martial arts, took…

I haven't read Dragon Raja in a long time, but when I suddenly came across this Dragon Raja fanfiction, it touched me, so I came to support it. Many readers of *Dragon Raja* might feel as unlucky as the characters in the book, and then get caught up in the story.

After reading dozens of chapters, all I can say is that the author should really stick to original content. Dragon Raja fanfiction is really unsuitable. This is basically a Martial Arts Master character who transmigrates and possesses Lu Mingfei's body. He's completely different from the Lu Mingfei in Dragon Raja.

Something's wrong with this book. Nine out of ten parts of it is wrong. Newbie writing books; heavily influenced by "literary youth syndrome" This often leaves people wondering what you're writing or what you're trying to say. The plot, which was developing normally, was suddenly interrupted by a long, pretentious, and pointless monologue from an overly sentimental intellectual.

The beginning was truly amazing, and the familiar writing style was captivating, but why did it become more and more unpleasant as I read on? The book's pacing is deliberately drawn out. Everyone has their own literary youth, and occasional groans can attract readers. The problem is that you've gone too far with these groans. It's groaning every chapter.

Keep it up! If the updates are slow, I'll really have to let the book "grow" (i. E., Wait until it dies out). To be honest, your current update frequency is quite high compared to other books I'm following. The quality is also excellent. In short, I want to pay for a premium service, is that okay?