Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei Returns from Elden Ring

Wow, finally another book about a true warrior, Lu Mingfei. Awesome! Those Lu Mingfeis who returned from their tribulations were either indecisive or just lazy kids. You are a hero from another world, a warrior/hunter/mage. What happened to the weight of your soul and memories left behind from those years of adventure? Other Lu Mingfei is proving the Dao of the Great Luo.

It's not about how satisfying it has to be; the key is the struggle, the struggle is the essence! If Lu Mingfei had ever risked everything and fought back with all his might before facing a choice or loss, even if it meant running over Deathpool with his bicycle and getting chopped into pieces, I would still acknowledge his growth and admit that he is a lion!

Regarding the opening, let me state a fact: the Supreme Will didn't actually adhere to the Golden Law in any particular way. After all, the three gods chosen by the Finger were the Pure Gold, the Darkmoon, and even the Law of Corruption, the great enemy of the Golden Law. It didn't matter to Him what law He was enforcing; the only ones who cared were Radagan and Pidgeot.

Eight Great Runes = Eight Dragon King Runes, Seven Divine Towers = Four Thrones, Golden Tree = World Tree, Nidhogg = Beast of Elden/Plundon's Golden Law = World Tree Law/Black King Law, Elden's Ring = Dragon Bone Cross (all manifestations of power), Dragonblood Creatures = Forge Hundred Forms, Forge Knights = Odin's Spirit/Dragon Servant

Quite good. Lu Mingfei, after transmigrating back, finally won't be writing "bitter smiles" or "scratching his head" anymore. I've read several books where it feels like the decades I spent in another world after transmigrating back are wasted.

This is truly amazing! This is the Lu Mingfei who truly embodies a king; in other novels of this type, Lu Mingfei still seems like that loser. We've reached chapter 63 now, which has essentially merged the Dragon King's power with the magic ring, completely shocking Norton. Awesome! Just a suggestion: the writing feels a bit rushed right now, with too much substantial content.

The idea is good, but the plot is terrible. First, it lacks plausibility; second, it lacks motivation; and third, the transitions are too abrupt. For example, the transitions are jarring. There's no warning whatsoever. One moment the protagonist is standing with a sword, the next they're waking up from their arm.

Earlier, Old Tang was recounting his past, which moved me deeply. Then, in the next scene, Lu Mingfei casually said "oh" with a blank expression, and then got tricked and killed. So, I ask you, do you even know what you're writing? 😓 The "cold-faced killer god is invincible" trope wasn't popular for ten years, dude. And what did you even say you were going to do?

The DLC storyline involves betrayal, and so far, the Supreme Will seems to be at least a neutral character, unlike in the base game where it appeared to be utterly evil.

You put on a really high-class act, but this is what the King of Elden is like? He got beaten so badly he couldn't even fight back. Even my healer is stronger than you.