Hogwarts: The Strongest Auror

The fighting power of the Sanctuary members that followed was utterly ridiculous. They had the Demon-Slaying Sword, the Anti-Magic Powder, and the Ironclad Curse was a joke. By that logic, Dumbledore could have killed them all easily, and anyone could have escaped. This so-called Archmage was a laughingstock.

The power levels are severely inconsistent; the more inflated they are at the beginning, the more drastically they fall apart later. Even in art forms like movies and anime, this is a major flaw. That's all I have to say.

The plot is different from other Ha Wen novels I've read before, offering a fresh experience. The writing style is also quite solid and there's nothing to criticize. The only drawback is that the Eastern elements are too obvious, making it feel out of place in a Western fantasy setting.

The ability to understand Chinese is quite appealing. There are Chinese communities abroad, and I often eat there whenever I have time, even though only a small portion of the food is truly authentic.

I feel like this archmage is incredibly weak, constantly restricted, and his combat power doesn't increase much. Is there some problem with the setting? He can't kill various enemies, and non-archmage characters can easily injure him, plus there's a ton of political intrigue. Is this a political drama/political intrigue story?

What kind of rubbish is this? Anyone can go to Hogwarts, tear the school down in front of Dumbledore and a bunch of professors, and steal the Sorting Hat? That's fucking ridiculous!!!

The story initially emphasizes the protagonist's power, culminating in his ascension to the rank of Archmage. The only two opponents he struggles to defeat in the early stages are Dumbledore and the Ice Wizard. Dumbledore's strength is undeniable, and according to the author's description in this chapter, the Ice Wizard is likely the final boss, making his increased power understandable.

Having read around chapter 70, I feel this book is pretty much ruined. The starting point was too high; the "golden finger" function was practically fully developed. Later on, the only thing left to do was increase the quantity of content. Without that satisfying element, the author had to focus on the plot, dragging out the pace, but that's what caused the problem! It's fallen apart. This might be okay in other novels, but in fan fiction, it's a disaster!

There's a bug here. According to the author, self-created magic should directly reach the Grandmaster level, which is equivalent to a Sage Mage. Snape created the Divine Shadowless Blade while still in school; he should have been a Sage Mage long ago.

It's too slow; even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.