I Can't Afford College, So I Have to Slay Dragons

Generally speaking, the current plot is that the heroine has decided to kill the little goddess, and the other party members are unhappy about it; the little goddess is possessed by the villain, and the party about the little goddess is unhappy about it; the dragon-slaying school story has become a youth love story, and the dragon-slaying party is unhappy about it; the doomsday chapter spoils the tragic story, and the GE party is unhappy about it; the plot is dull and the perspective deviates from the protagonist, and the party members are happy about it There are riddles everywhere, and the brainless people are unhappy; the riddles are contradictory, and the reasoning brains are unhappy; in the previous paragraph, she was ambiguous with Eriyi and then turned around to attack the heroine of Xiaotian, which makes the pure love party unhappy; all kinds of stock speculation in the early stage are now determined to kill the little goddess, and the stock speculators are unhappy; Eriyi is not the heroine, and the original fans are extremely unhappy. The updates were too slow and everyone was extremely unhappy.

Oh, hello, friends I am Inuyama Ga, the head of the Inuyama family of the Sheqi Hachi Family A friend just asked me, what happened to Mr. Inuyama? I said what's going on? He sent me a few screenshots, and when I saw them, I was like, Wow It was Zuotian, and there were two young people More than seventeen years old, one boy and one girl They said, well, one of them said it was me in Kassel Practicing, I hit a bottleneck in an instant Teacher Inuyama, can you teach me the Sheqi (Sentimental) Kung Fu, oh, help me break through my bottleneck I said yes I said it's not easy to use when you practice Shijin in Kassel Unconvinced Oh, I said kid You use two hands to grab one of my fingers He can't catch it He said yours is useless, I said mine is useful This is an instant, and an instant is about speed Only fast but not broken A Vietnamese monkey weighing more than 20 kilograms can't even catch a finger like mine Ah, Tao said he wanted to try it with me I said yes Oh, as soon as I said that, he stood up quickly, so fast! Then he stepped on the table and pressed the back of my hand I guarded it all, guarded it After guarding it, it was natural to point it all the way raised the teacup with his left hand, but did not make this cut I smiled prepared to take the knife back Because at this time, according to the traditional kung fu point all the way, he Already lost If this knife is powerful, it will cut him in half with one blow I pressed the knife handle and did not pull it out. He also admitted that I drew the knife five inches He didn't know that I could pull out the knife. He admitted that I drew the knife I stopped fighting when I put the knife away. He suddenly attacked and grabbed my wrist with his right hand, ah I'm big I didn't dodge His right hand hurt my wrist, but it's okay He also said that after more than two minutes, he also said that after more than two minutes I couldn't move my hands at that time and put down the teacup Then two minutes, more than two minutes later, it was fine I said young man, you don't have martial ethics, you don't understand He I said sorry, sorry, Mr. Inuyama, I don't understand the rules He said he was beaten randomly, but he was not beaten randomly He stepped on the table, buckled his wrists, pressed his wrists, and was well-trained. Later he said that he had practiced in the Children's Palace for three or four years It seems that he came prepared These two, young people do not talk about martial arts Come on, lie! Come on, sneak attack! I am eighty-seven years old, an old comrade Is this okay? This is not good. I advise this young man to be a rat tail juice Reflect on yourself and don't make such a clever move again in the future What a clever person! Put harmony as the most important thing Be ethical Don't engage in quarrels Thank you, friends!

I don't know what effect Brother Shui wants to achieve, but the high quality of music must be modest. The tragedy of a person with low self-esteem burning himself to the end, or the grand funeral in front of the throne where the bones and blood of a loved one are sacrificed to pave the way... Such a glorious and splendid epic? These are very impressive when imagined in the mind, but the actual perception is far less realistic than the simplest two people holding hands to rebel against the world. I understand Brother Shui's idea of ​​making Xiao Tian's female character truly plump, but in the eyes of most readers, including me, whether it is the sad hope burning the world in the eyes, or the figure walking alone in the wind and sand in the dream, these are very epic, emotional and Jiangnan-flavored things... Most people will just use the word "lick" to lightly pass it over, and then spray you. The girl's fragile pride and sorrow, inferiority and nobility, the charm and choices that Brother Shui wants her to show are, in our eyes, nothing more than another cliche sad plot in another eight o'clock sad drama. Is that so? So far, the character design of Little Goddess can be directly used in an opera. From the girl who dared to love and hate at the beginning, to the girl who later had a self-esteem as fragile as glass and an inferiority complex that she wanted to hide but couldn't, that sad loner who could use an ordinary person's body to carry the end of the world... Very brilliant, very noble, and of course, most importantly, very reasonable. But I believe that for most people... The subsequent deepening of the female character of Xiaotian actually has a far less profound impact on us than the carefree and thoughtful Six-Door Heroine with a golden ring sword on her shoulder when we first met her. I don't want to criticize anything. In fact, the portrayal of the little goddess is already very powerful in my opinion, but the problem is that she is the heroine-at least for now. When I first saw the little goddess, the impression in my mind was basically that of a lady who dreams of traveling around the world carrying a large golden ring sword. But now when I see her, there are only three words that come to my mind. The Hanged Man. Actually, it's pretty good. The growth path of the little goddess is clear, the motivation is reasonable, and the image is three-dimensional. It's much better than Jiangnan's way of writing about Nono but being reluctant to write about the specific sublimity and sorrow in Nono. However, the problem is that Qidian readers don't accept this set of ideas. Most of them only read the first impression. Nono's character design has collapsed like this, but many people still have a good impression of her because of her beautiful impression of the red-haired witch when they first met her. As for the Little Goddess, even with the current careful shaping, most readers may still have an impression of her as something like "but not to be licked". It's not that this generation of readers is not good, but the things in the creation of the little goddess are too lofty, glorious and profound, and are incompatible with the ordinary girl born in this coastal city. In other words, readers cannot feel the charm that directly touches the soul at the first time, but every old bookworm who hangs out in the starting point has the excellent plot summary ability to summarize the ups and downs of dozens of chapters into "cannot be licked"... If the heroine is Eri Yi or something like that, it will not be possible With this problem, Eri Yi is originally the Hanged Man, and she has the label of "splendid withering". If Su Xiaoqiang's plot is placed on Eri Yi, I don't feel much violation. And due to the inherent impression and the powerful epic writing ability of Brother Shui, I think the shock level will only be greater than that of the old thief. (As long as you don't send it in the end) Even Chu Zihang has the attributes of the Hanged Man, so even if the writer holds hands and goes up the mountain of swords and down the sea of ​​​​fire to meet the Dragon King and dedicate himself to brotherhood, it may be quite touching. The two of them were born with the label of the Hanged Man, and are suitable to use a big knife on an epic battlefield to pierce their lives and the readers' hearts together. But what does Su Xiaoqiang have? Her label is not the Hanged Man but the little goddess. Cutting her with a knife will not make readers have much empathy, but will make old bookworms smell the smell of the eight o'clock pm stall. Even if Brother Shui tried his best to write so many personal highlights of Su Xiaoqiang... How many people have read it carefully? It's not that this generation of readers is not good, it's that the attraction is not enough and the sense of empathy is not strong. The most uncomfortable thing is the label of Xiaotiannu as an ordinary person and her body. The thick epic accumulated little by little should give people a strong sense of contrast and the sadness of a mortal body carrying everything, but inexplicably I just can't feel it... I can't feel it like oil and water are incompatible. Maybe the sense of contrast is so strong that the two things have been completely separated. What Balabala said so much is actually to say... There is no need to be too deliberate in pursuing a sense of epicness and destiny in the little goddess, and there is no need to be too deliberate in inserting a heart-breaking story into a story that should be soul-stirring and breathtaking. The little goddess is a little goddess, and her capital is not the Hanged Man. So many shapings, but the effect is not as good as the sassy ladylike rich heroine feeling when we first met... It doesn't make much sense to say this now, but watching Brother Shui use long paragraphs of gorgeous words to build a character for Su Xiaoqiang. Something doesn't feel right when I come to a tower with a solid foundation but somehow looks like a castle in the air... What really touches the soul is not the light burning the world in the eyes or the lone figure walking in the wind and sand, but the eraser with the names of two people written on it. Duck, a carefully recorded diary, and the final check of one billion after the death... However, if there are elements that directly touch the soul, just a little bit, like Xia Mi watching Chu Zihang sleep in front of the bed , Nuonuo is carrying a baseball bat and tearing up the sickle with his hands, and the small diary painted in pear clothes is a classic scene... Then all the efforts made by Brother Shui will not be in vain, and the tower of loftiness and sorrow can stand in the hearts of readers. People will not discuss whether Eriyi "licked" Lu Mingfei, or whether Jiangnan wrote a vulgar story about sacrificing a beautiful girl... They remember the rubber duck and the diary, so few people care about the things about Eriyi that should be criticized. I hope that Brother Shui's efforts will not be in vain, and that he will not become an imitator of "Southern Flavor" and a slave to words, so that the little goddess can truly come alive in the minds of readers... I hope this will ultimately be a story of resistance that stirs the heart and soul, rather than Jiangnan-style bitterness...

Oh~Pull out your hair (Ange's early work)

Isn't this writing better than Jiangnan? At least better than 5😁😁😁

The weather was exceptionally sunny, and the blue sky seemed to make people feel much more relaxed. People were coming and going in the coffee shop, and the sun shone through the glass on the girl's long golden hair. She held her chin with one hand and stared at the phone with her delicate face, showing a little impatience.         "，？"，，，，，，， But thinking of her junior brother's handsome face and strong figure, Mandy instantly felt that the fire in her heart was extinguished. She smiled like a madman, wiped the liquid from the corner of her mouth, and her thoughts became active again. How should she greet her junior brother later?           ？ You can also fall into his arms smoothly,... Well, no, it's too cliche.                                                                                                               being more dignified? She straightened up and crossed her legs gracefully, trying to look skillful. Well, it was almost there, just a little bit off. Mandy picked up the coffee she had already ordered and took a sip. However, the scalding hot coffee in the next second made her almost spit it out. The waiter on the side happened to see this scene with surprised eyes.             ，…，，，， "Ding Bell" The door of the coffee shop was pushed open, and Mandy turned around subconsciously. A girl in a pleated skirt walked up to her with a small bag, opened a chair and sat down generously, and then nodded to her. "Mandy Gonzalez? I heard Lin Nian talk about you, Su Xiaoqiang." She stretched out her hand familiarly, "Hello, I am his senior sister." Mandy held her hand and tried to puff up her chest.              "Lin Nian often talks about you to me. By the way, he might be late... Maybe he bought me a gift? After all, you can't be empty-handed on a date with your girlfriend." Noticing the provocative gaze of the other party, Mandy quickly realized that the battle had begun.        "Oh, really? That's really a blessing. Oh, as his senior sister, I'm under a lot of pressure. After all, he has been coveting senior sister's body... He is attached to senior sister. Who knows if one day he will have a sudden idea... But maybe he went to buy me some cakes? Isn't it normal for junior brothers to care about senior sister?" Mandy covered her mouth and chuckled. Everyone could hear a bit of pampering and helplessness in her coquettish tone.           "Really? Then I have to ask you to take more care of him. As a girlfriend, I can't worry about it." Just as the two peacocks were competing for beauty, the door was pushed open again. First, what came into view was a waterfall of long dark red hair, and then a timid face. Seeing the other party, Mandy instantly felt a sense of protectiveness and motherly love. The girl walked to the table, bowed slightly, and then sat down. He raised a piece of paper: "Eriyi, please give me some advice when we meet for the first time." "Master of the Shangshan Family? Why are you here?" Mandy leaned forward enthusiastically. After all, she was an old acquaintance. She looked like a golden retriever that made people feel like they would lick her in the next second. "Lin Nian asked me to meet here. He said he would go shopping with me." As if thinking of something happy, Huiliyi showed a sweet smile.                ，，，，                                                                                                                                        Why did the broken door ring again? Just as he complained in secret, a familiar figure sat down next to Mandy. Lin Xian, who was well dressed and with a bit of intellectual beauty, as if he were a model stepping off the catwalk, nodded slightly, "Everyone has been waiting for a long time. Lin Nian will be here soon. I am his sister."  After looking around at a few people, Mandy, Su Xiaoqiang, old acquaintances, wait... That little red-haired girl... I understand, turn around and deal with him. Lin Xian smiled and said casually: "Lin Nian has been a little busy recently. As a sister, I am also helpless. After all, I not only have to take care of him, but also beware of him making some shady friends..."  Who are you talking about? Believe it or not, I have been violently beaten three times to let you know what true non-three-no-four means. I don't know if it's an illusion. I always feel that those words are accentuated by Lin Xian. However, thinking that the consequence of this may be that someone catches her, Mandy is discouraged again. "Ding Bell" Finally, Shanshan arrived late, but seeing the scene in front of him, Lin Nian couldn't help but have an idea: If I open the ninth level moment, I should, maybe, probably... Run away, right?

In fact, those who focus on the emotional drama in this book simply don't understand. What most readers care about is not that Su has no bloodline, but that all the plots involving her in the book are very feeble. The only fulcrum for her existence and ability to become the heroine is "Lin Nian likes her." Therefore, in the plot, she has also lost her independence and has completely become an accessory of the male protagonist. The so-called secret deal with the emperor to sacrifice oneself to help Lin Nian made me laugh. It's already 2022, do we still need to rely on such low-level self-impression to prove the rationality of the heroine? Even if you really want to write like this, I suggest you go out and learn from the Baguio in "Zhu Xian". Isn't it 10,000 times fuller than the current Su Xiaoqiang? Why do readers like Hui Liyi and Lin Xian? Is it because they have blood and are more suitable for the protagonists? In fact, it is entirely because these characters are well-drawn, have complete and reasonable behavioral logic, and have a memorable image! There is a famous scene where Hui Liyi plays games in a building and fucks Kazama Ruri with a pencil in her backhand. There is a cunning kiss in the Disney park. There is the heartache of her sister sitting alone in the park, silently away from Lin Nian. There is a pair of pirated Nike shoes that makes Lin Nian reluctant to throw them away - what does Su Xiaoqiang have, a broken coin that can change faces in an instant? So, who is the heroine has never been important, the emotional line design is important, just as blood has never been the key, characterization is!

Firstly, I am no longer in charge of the business. I don't care about creating a group, and all the old book friends know it. So what happened and why, I don't know, and I don't want to understand. I don't take any side, right or wrong, because I don't want to understand at all, because it is very troublesome Secondly, all the posts about the book club group have been deleted, because they look annoying. Thirdly, if there are any conflicting suggestions for the parties involved, tear them apart and convince them with virtue and reason. My position is that I don't want to get involved at all, because this matter itself has nothing to do with this book. Fourth, I will write again when I think of it

Not vomiting, not happy. Although moving works do not necessarily require sacrifice, the sublimation or precipitation caused by sacrifice to a certain extent can greatly affect the quality of the work. It is understandable that readers do not want the characters to sacrifice, but trying to influence the author and making the author afraid to write will directly lead to the collapse of the work. You can read the plot of Nono in One Day of Freedom. The setting of Nian Nian's sister-control has defeated everyone, but the description of Nono has been ignored. Hey, guess what's the reason? The plot of the 3A exam was going well, and suddenly a plot of the end of the exam was inserted, and then the dream returned to me at night. Don't you feel anything wrong with the abrupt transition? I talk about Brother Shui all day long, even though he is really watery. But it reflects that some people are impetuous and do not respect novels at all, and just want to find a dragon with themselves as the protagonist in fan fiction. I just want to make up for my regrets about the Dragon Clan, no matter whether ignoring my own requirements will lead to bugs. Now the reader begins to control Senior Sister Mandy again. I just want to see a writer who uses his talent freely, instead of being manipulated by readers as a puppet with the four characters "Jiangnan Substitute" written on it.

I have almost read the 1000th chapter. The writing is impeccable and full of flesh and blood. It is one of my favorite novels this year. Unfortunately, the emotional scenes are as muddy as a paste. Lin Nian's lover is also used as a bargaining chip for the emperor's transaction. I feel very restricted. Moreover, the gap in combat power between the two is too big, their identities and backgrounds are too different, and the endings of the past and the future should not be related, which made me very, very confused when watching the emotional drama! For Lin Nian, he had just finished slaying the dragon and had to deal with his mother-in-law's aggression. He had to take care of another girl with the love that his sister had carried him out of Black Swan Harbor in a snowstorm for more than ten years like a hot spring. Is it a kind of estrangement for the twins on the throne who are half of each other? Like Fate's spinning thread, after several silk threads are tightly tangled together, a plastic thread is forced to join. It would be better to say that when interacting with Su Xiaoqiang, Lin Nian's image was quite broken. The atmosphere of the interaction between the two was full of a mechanical and manipulated sense of disobedience. They always had to use other people's reactions or some embarrassing actions to reflect how much they loved each other. In fact, it looked quite pale. I got to know the cliché heroes saving beauty and good looks, and fell in love with the 1/4 battle of the soul under the love brain and conspiracy. When I think of Su Xiaoqiang, the thing that impressed me most is tossing a coin... But when I think of other people, I feel that they have more identities and reasons to participate in the story with Lin Nian, because the story of the Dragon Clan should be more about revenge, the overwhelming hatred that will not give up until every piece of flesh is bitten off, and the story of firing cannons at all the ghosts of the past in order to defend the land. If it is a sister, they are like the twins on other thrones. When they wake up, they run towards him in the first year, saying that they hate taking their brother out to play, but the race that most values ​​power and strength cannot bear to swallow him. They write that they hug tightly in a world that only has each other, and are each other's weakness and sword; if it is a senior sister, it is the sincerity and wishful thinking of someone who is full of lies. Knowing that his identity is mismatched, he uses nonsense words to cover up his fall. He knows that the end will be doomed and is still willing to betray part of the contract. Even if his junior brother really wants to draw a sword against him, the golden retriever will still feel that knowing Lin Nian is a rare oasis in the boring and scary life journey; if it is Eri, it is the story of two little monsters, two products that should not be born in this world, igniting the world in the winter of blood mourning. Keeping warm, a little dinosaur and a little doll stay together in a small room, and it seems that there is no need to be afraid; even if you are with Lu Mingfei, it is the story of Shao Zai and Big Brother. The two are not mixed together because of nonsense and interstellar co-production (), but it is the story of two paupers. The paupers have too little, so giving everything for each other is not a multiple-choice question at all, but a speed competition in whack-a-mole to see how to pay well. Among the glamorous students of Shilan Middle School, the poorer student who stood out more chose the poor boy who offered nutrition express for himself. From then on, he promised that you would die behind me, so in Norton's dormitory, the sword penetrated the bones and I came. In the embarrassing scene, a helicopter fell from the sky, and The lion in the guise of a bad boy has chosen his own territory, so there is no need to hesitate to sacrifice 1/4 of his life for his eldest brother. It is easy to feel the fate of all abandoned clans near him and roar to the sky. There is nothing that tall Lin Nian cannot solve. These people were either born in darkness and have been walking until now, or they were born with the boundless power to challenge the world. They were born for a heavier mission. As for Su Xiaoqiang, she was born with too much. As long as she followed the plastic thread, she would have found a bright and prosperous road. She had loving parents, a solid family background, and a good appearance. She was born with smooth and ordinary happiness that mixed-race people rarely experience in their lives. What she can bring to the gambling table is too little and too insignificant. Even though she has given everything she has, should she really do this? If you exchange health, wealth, beauty and memory for a spindle that is originally unclear, you will end up with a moth flying into the flame. It even becomes a burden, and becomes the easiest point of attack again and again on the battlefield when facing the dragon clan, depriving the person who is close to the god from the throne, and being a little tail on his way to slay the dragon. It does not play a stronger role than the executive department and the school work department. His own plight becomes the reason for the explosion of the seed, making the boy swing the knife again and again to save him, and losing the God-given gift he was born with. Is this really a lover? This is just a lamb offered to the throne on the road to becoming a god. Her parents should howl for her. In a group of desperadoes who have both power and power, what can a girl's sincerity do? She could wait for Lin Nian to drop his magic weapon from heaven, wait for Lin Nian to rip off the pizza, wait for Lin Nian to blow dry his hair, wait for Lin Nian. Just waiting and praying. If it is a harem story, Su can certainly be one of the heroines, and she would love to hear about it. The more the merrier, but if it is a single heroine, the character design is so thin that it makes people feel like a mortal secretly spying on a world that does not belong to her. I really like this book, but when I read about the Little Heavenly Girl's intervention in the Dragon Clan's battlefield and her interactions with Lin Nian, I felt slightly uncomfortable. If the heroine was Su, I would skip the emotional drama and finish the book to bring everything to an end. Finally, thank you to Brother Shui for writing this book. Thank you to Lin Nian, Lin Xian, Mandy and Lu Mingfei. Your stories have given me a pleasant reading time.