Lu Mingfei: Become the Dungeon King Who Bets His Life

Evaluation: It is another high-quality Dragon Tribe fanfic book, with a very Jiangnan flavor. Are all of you who write about dragons written in this way? All the good writing goes to Lu Mingfei...

Those who imitate Jiangnan will eventually become Jiangnan. It is a great sorrow and a great honor.

The writing is good. One of your strengths is that your style is like Jiangnan, but your shortcomings are also like Jiangnan. Jiangnan writes publication literature. He writes a large paragraph at a time. He can spend a lot of pen and ink on various descriptions just for the sublimation of the climax. The reader's reading is coherent, and the emotions can be fermented in the mind to reach the climax at once. But what you write is an online article. As a literary genre with rigid daily requirements, the reader's Emotions can easily be shattered by such intermittent updates, and you won't feel happy when you reach the climax. Jiangnan's style will also seem long-winded when read in an online article. After all, there are too many unnecessary descriptions, and it will appear watery in the limited updates every day. In the end, some people must start to read the book to read it all at once. In other words, they will stop reading. As I said at the beginning, your advantages and disadvantages are all like Jiangnan, and it depends on you whether you want to change your style in the future. More updates can alleviate this problem, but after all, some readers will not be able to stand the problem that the writing style is too wordy, especially when they start spending money after it is put on the shelves, this problem will undoubtedly become more acute and unavoidable. Come on, little author

There are experts too! Control yourself the old way! Lu Mingfei, the god of slot digging concept and game master

This book was so good that I even recommended it to people around me. It was really praised before it was put on the shelf. But is the main line too fast? Before I entered Kassel, the bond between the main characters was clear because of the dungeon, and their strength reached the next generation level. In the final analysis, the essence of dragon romance novels is that it is difficult to write a protagonist who has the strongest combat power when it comes to fighting. How about establishing a new villain in the setting and making it easier to write? For example, the old white king consciousness and the old black king consciousness that were not clean before, or other dragon types. Come on, author, I really like you.

The book is good, but I still feel like I can't escape the fate of being unable to follow up. Good writing will be cursed by writing. The story progresses too slowly and there are too many narrations. I enjoyed it at first but got a little bored later on.

How should I put it? I wrote my own style before it was put on the shelves. It's normal to start to be confused after it was put on the shelves, but I just need to write more. Lu Mingfei's growth has also disappeared. He grew up at first, but more and more he went back and became a dead child again 😐 Lu Mingfei, who obviously enjoyed fighting, stopped fighting and fell in love. He was pretending to be a pig and eating pig feed 😒 It's obviously a dungeon stream but it writes about reality. The advancement of the real-life plot is like something on Baidu Netdisk. The dungeon has become boring, the characters have become boring, and the storyline is like a steamed bun stuffed with steamed buns 😅 There is a feeling that I am writing a novel. For the sake of the word count, I originally wanted to save more and read it together, but after reading two books, I didn't want to read it. In terms of wasting time, reading this novel is a bit too much of a waste of time 🙄

When all the red cherry blossoms have fallen, I can't see you, and my pear clothes are stained with tears

I have read about 70% of it intermittently. The book is really good and the writing tastes good. This is a relatively good article in Dragon Clan, but there is actually a problem that I discovered when I read the book from my perspective, and it is quite serious for me. The problem is that, whether it is reality in the article or a copy, there is a very serious sense of separation between each short plot. It is very serious. How serious is it? I cannot achieve flow-type immersive reading at all. Between each short plot, I have to break away from the immersive reading environment and read the end of the previous chapter repeatedly. Only by imagining the beginning of a new chapter can we have a better transition. Even so, there is still a sense of fragmentation. This is why I wrote a book review when I saw 70% of the book. Because this sense of fragmentation really affects reading. Many times because of this feeling, there will be a feeling of pleasure but not pleasure when I feel good, which is very uncomfortable. Finally, you really need to understand the dragon story relatively well to read this book, and the reading threshold is a bit high.

I thought it was killing, killing, killing, but the result is that the child is still weak, and the original flavor is still the same. The Jiangnan Road erosion belongs to