Lu Mingfei, Become the Elden Lord!

8.5/10 The writing is okay. Among all the Dharma Ring fan fiction, at least I can understand it. The plot is very small and there are no bad points at the moment. Melina is not OOC (many fan fiction portrays women as free women and they are very speechless). I don't know if it is a harem. Summary: Among the fans of the Magic Ring of Ox Demon and Snake God, it is considered a good grass. Lu Mingfei is also considered qualified among the fans. You can wait and see. First throw in eight cards to test the water.

I have been promoted to a deacon, please improve it, and when you update it, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you are at the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark. Updates may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Have you ever thought of Lu Mingfei? Some things are written randomly and taken for granted

The advantage is that it has enough dragon clan and enough magic ring. The bad taste is quite good, and it can also remind people of the online scene in the gameplay loop and make people smile knowingly. The disadvantage is exactly the same. Both parts basically do not clarify the antecedents, which is equivalent to assuming that the readers have seen Dragon Clan and have played Ring of Magic. Where can I find someone who can play the game, watch Dragons, and watch fandoms!

No, bro, give me the blue-skinned four-handed monster I'm missing😡😡😡

The prison road was very comfortable to watch when I was in the magic circle. Once the dragon clan felt that it was so fragmented, it was a bit indescribable.

Do you know that I am going to read this book, and when I read the latest chapter, the chapter title ends with the last word, which is very scary?

What kind of crappy book has it started charging for after it's put on the shelf? An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care about reading the book he wrote, just throw it out of the bookshelf and never see it again! 😡😡😡

There was no entanglement with Chen Wenwen or Su Xiaoqiang (many books put her as the heroine, which is really unnecessary), and even abandoned Nono, which was well received.

So far, I have come across the best Dharma Ring novel, bar none. Shuangshu's Sword Master has too many original plots with a unique style. Although the fighting is good, the pure player perspective is not brought into it (the same is true for his Sekiro book). Last year's main story of King of Salvation was almost finished, and I don't know what it was written. It has a beginning and an end. This book, with Lu Mingfei as the protagonist, describes the feeling of growing up step by step from a declining boy. Coupled with some reasonable settings by the author, it presents the texture of a Western fantasy novel, not a game novel. The book is not popular, mainly because of the title and the focus of the content. This book cannot be read as a pure dragon clan fan, nor as a pure magic ring fan, because the length is similar, there is no focus, and the pace is very slow. The magic ring part is only in the Lake District now, and the progress of the dragon clan is very little compared to other fans. Looking at the old name on the cover, which is "The Ring and the Traveler", and the guest protagonists from other works in it, we can feel that the author has begun to have the idea of ​​​​writing the protagonist to travel through fate and other worlds from zero. To be honest, before I changed the title of the book, I didn't know what I was going to write about it. Now that I have changed it, it is only readable if it matches the radio wave.