Eternal Life in the Great Qian

It's not good-looking. There's a nun at the beginning. This nun is just like the eldest lady in the TV series. You're a nun. You're making love all day long. You're angry or something. It's a bloody romantic drama. With this writing style, the current masters are becoming more and more awesome.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 271. At first I found it interesting. Although many people attack the role of the female supporting actor Ning Zhenzhen. But I think it's good to have a personality. Good. I don't know if the author was affected. The scenes are deliberately reduced. The IQs of all supporting characters in the entire article are online in the early stages. They don't seem to be able to think at the end. There are many techniques that no one can crack except magical powers. Forcibly add a halo to the protagonist. I can understand this. After all, magical powers don't cost money. However, what is known is that. Currently, even the first level cannot kill the protagonist. But the protagonist is between the first and second grades. It can't kill Yipin either. Using Shenzu Tong, you can instantly return to the Snow Mountain Sect. He has magical powers and can conjure magic, and he is indestructible. It can be said that unless a large number of first-class players attack together, it is possible to kill the protagonist. However, the protagonist still has a immobilizing spell. It can be said that you are basically invincible and will not die. The female supporting character, Young Master Li, is described as extremely smart but has never accomplished anything. Everything is a relic. The author has previously written that the protagonist does not interfere in the affairs between the princes. He slapped himself in the face several times and kept interfering. All the princes couldn't believe that the protagonist was cured through a woman and benefited themselves, so they obeyed the protagonist's words. I can tolerate this too. The specific Taoist masters of each demon sect are also completely brainless. The only role is for the protagonist to give a way. They go. Then he was seriously injured and dying. The protagonist saves. Speaking of this, I remembered what I mentioned before that you can't save the dead. Later, every time, his heart was broken into pieces and he died and then was resurrected. I can tolerate this too. But I really can't stand that from now on, his supporting character has no personality at all. No IQ. I don't comment on the quality of the book. You can watch it or not. All I can say is that food is useless. It's a pity to abandon it. An opening chapter can make a good book. Later. I gave up anyway. Well written, it deserves a reward from me. Tsk. It's a pity this book

In one sentence, women are thankless. If a woman whines in front of you, what can you do? I can only slap her and scold her a few times. But if it's a man, you can just break his legs, blind or cripple him. Obviously the latter is more satisfying, so unless you can't avoid it, don't write about women. If you really want to write about it, then trouble, add a little plug-in to this woman. We don't want to see vase-like women with pendants on their thighs. We hope they have an effect on the protagonist. For example, if the protagonist kills people, she digs holes, and if the protagonist wants to make money, she will give him money. In short, she must be somewhat useful to the protagonist, and it doesn't have to be about strength. The women in The Naming Technique of the Night either provide information or provide power like Li Changqing. Su Yu is basically invincible in the later stages of Tribulation of All Races, but the heroine can also provide research results, but there seems to be basically no heroine in Eagle's book. Determined to kill, not afraid of trouble or looking for trouble, proficient in Buddhism, not a dog licker, not a holy mother, respected and worshiped by others. If you reverse one of these conditions, you will lose a large number of readers. Think about it for yourself, how many readers you have gained by doing the reverse. The White Robe Controller is my favorite book, so take care of yourself.

The author writes the character of the protagonist inconsistently. Earlier, he wrote that I just want to live forever, see the quiet valley and have a peaceful mind, and become a great man who lives in seclusion and purifies the world. After the change, the protagonist is as impatient as a businessman who is eager for quick success or a young man who has just come out of the world. The first part describes how the protagonist is calm and how he hopes and cherishes his long life, and the second part is all kinds of saucy operations. It is completely unlike the author's own mentality of surviving life and death. The author has ruined the protagonist's character based on his experience.

Is the author definitely writing about Buddhism? I read the first dozen chapters, and then there was a monk and a nun. What did you write? It's also affectionate and affectionate. If I hadn't known that it was about nuns and monks, I would have thought it was about something else, a novel about cultivating immortals. There is a female green tea lotus, and a male who currently seems to be licking a dog. There are so many monthly tickets. I really wonder if they are fake?

After watching it for so long, let me tell you what I think. The title looks like a classic fairy tale, but even now I don't see any trace of the fairy. When it comes to martial arts, it's not just about martial arts, it's about showing off to solve crimes in the capital. The topic is written in a variety of ways. There is no obvious main plot, so it's okay to read each chapter, but when I look back, I can't remember what the pig's feet did.

I don't really like being the protagonist who licks dogs. I already do it in life. I don't want to do it again in novels.

1. I feel that the author has not experienced women much, and every book has an aura of being a bitch. To be honest, when your career is successful and you have endless money, let me ask you, is it easy to change one hundred thousand dollars a week? When you have experienced hundreds of women and heard too many stories about family misfortune, marital disharmony, admiration for GG, and all kinds of love stories, when you have sex with all kinds of women and it is as simple as peeing, will you still lick it? Licking is for temporary needs, such as Sichong. Licking is just a rustic love story. He just spends a small amount of money and time to experience different toilets. When he gets tired of it, he will change the toilet. Do you think he will really invest a lot of resources into it? 2. The author has never truly experienced the life of a superior person, nor has he truly mastered social resources. What is power is the right to decide people and resources. In ancient times, it was just a golden saying. One word can determine life or death, let alone women. I have read the author's books for many years, but I couldn't put them down after just a few pages. The portrayal of human nature is not profound. It feels like I want to write but can't write well, and I feel like I am forcing myself to write. Some authors just don't write if they can't write. Human nature has two sides, black and white, both Buddha nature and demonic nature. With a sharp blade in hand, the murderous intention arises. When you have extraordinary power, you will naturally regard all living beings as ants. In modern society, if you look at those war-torn areas, you will know that if you only hold weapons, that is, foreign objects, you will be lawless. If he had extraordinary power, the world would be in chaos. I am not saying this to ask the protagonist to destroy the world. But as a strong man, a king, he should have his dignity, and the strong should not be insulted. So the author has never had a king's heart, but he writes about a king, so he can't stand it. The idea is not clear! ! !

After testing the poison, the pig's feet were completely unlike those of a monk. He would kneel and lick a woman, and use his lifespan to save her after just a few meetings. He also kept saying that they were friends, and the other monks couldn't say anything about her. Really, every woman has a description of her appearance and how beautiful they are, which makes the author feel vulgar.

It's okay to write about other things. I wrote about a monk who couldn't live without a woman or couldn't write it. The woman appeared in just five chapters. The key is that the protagonist's talent is full of dog-licking points! Once, there was a matter related to their orthodoxy, and the protagonist was very angry when he helped her. Later, the girl said that she would not ask her for help, and the good guy immediately used Shou Yuan to save her? The key point is that these two women are quite greedy!