Reborn: Rising in Hong Kong

In the first two to three hundred chapters, I thought it was a masterpiece, but as a result, the enemies continued to outsmart me and the content became more and more clumsy. You describe the enemy as a fool. How satisfying does it feel to defeat him? You are on the same level as a fool. Would you be happy if you played with the second idiot in the village? People are stupid to begin with.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading around 800 words. The beginning was okay, but then it started to become increasingly idiotic and repetitive. The enemies are never-ending; as soon as you defeat the young ones, the old ones appear. It seems like everyone has to step on the protagonist's foot for their life to be perfect, and the protagonist always gets trampled into the ground before he…

Someone with connections in both the legitimate and criminal worlds is somehow fearless. He could have acted with impunity, but instead, he always swallows his pride, insists on showing off and humiliating others, then lets things fizzle out – a weak and ineffective endeavor. Ugh, so frustrating.

I'm actually quite fed up. He clearly has hundreds of thousands in his pocket, acting all high and mighty in public. With the money he'd spend on a meal, he could take his sister and Bao'er out for a better life. Forget buying a house, wouldn't it be better to just rent a place and improve their meals? Instead, he insists on staying in this run-down place with nowhere to go.

Author, you've consistently focused on the police officers; the four chief detectives are only superficially powerful. The truly powerful figures are the large business associations and wealthy businessmen. There are also those with the title of Justice of the Peace, commonly known as members of the Colonial Security Committee, who directly communicate with the Governor of Hong Kong and have the…

If this author doesn't flop, who will? They use the same formula over and over again! They drag out a single plot for dozens of episodes (thinking they're setting up the story), who would want to watch that anymore?

The more I write, the more confused I get. I'm treating my readers like three-year-olds.

The plot is too weak, lacking a main storyline and jumping around aimlessly. It follows the same formula from beginning to end: getting beaten up, then fighting back, and finally the other party is unharmed.

My friend, I know you want to make money, but making money requires a good reputation, and you're ruining it right now! I'm a long-time reader of yours; I read your books back when I was in school. You might be starting a new writing account, and this reputation is already destroyed!

I finished reading your book in one day. Author, please maintain this update pace. Here's a 10,000 coin reward for now. If you don't pad the later chapters, I might consider adding you to the Silver rank.