Reborn: Rising in Hong Kong

In the first two to three hundred chapters, I thought it was a masterpiece, but as a result, the enemies continued to outsmart me and the content became more and more clumsy. You describe the enemy as a fool. How satisfying does it feel to defeat him? You are on the same level as a fool. Would you be happy if you played with the second idiot in the village? People are stupid to begin with.

When I saw about 800, I couldn't stand it any longer. It was okay at the beginning, and then I started to keep lowering my wits and repeating the routine. The enemy will never finish it. After beating the younger ones, the old ones will come. It seems that everyone has to step on the protagonist for life to be perfect, but the protagonist has to be stepped on to the ground every time before he fights back The funniest thing is that the protagonist has high intelligence and emotional intelligence. However, in chapter 800, there is no one trustworthy 🙂🙂 No matter how many benefits they receive from the protagonist or how much kindness they receive, everyone wants to betray him. Only then will life be perfect, right? This is probably the writing technique from ten years ago 🤭🤭

No one is afraid of a man who takes both black and white. He could have gone on a rampage, but he swallows his temper and insists on pretending to be a slap in the face. Then things turn out to be a big deal. It ends in an anticlimax. Oh, I'm so unhappy.

I'm actually quite convinced. With hundreds of thousands of dollars in hand and only five or six people living outside, I can take my sister and Bao'er out to improve their lives with just a meal. Not to mention buying a house, wouldn't it be better to spend some money on renting a house and improving the food? If I have to stay in a broken house with nowhere to stay, even if You gave your sister 2,000 yuan. If you don't tell her your reality, will she dare to spend it? In the end, there will still be no improvement at all, right? You even claim that my sister is very important to me and I value feelings. A protagonist who values feelings is like a fortune teller outside, but is he so stupid at home? Can you ask why you don't move? Tell people that you live in a shabby house to look good? People will definitely appreciate you for this? My sister said that her family is very important, but in fact, when she has money, she does not immediately spend a little money to improve her family. I am speechless, so I let her continue to work in factories and hotels. I am speechless (I subscribed to a chapter specifically to complain about you, I am so bored)

Author, you always write about police officers, and the four detectives are only very powerful on the surface. The really powerful ones are the big chambers of commerce and the big moneymakers. There are also those who hold the title of Justice of the Peace, commonly known as members of the Colonial Security Committee, who talk directly to the Governor of Hong Kong. Have the right to mobilize the military. Lei Luo also relied on the Chaozhou Chamber of Commerce to become a detective in his early days. After the handover of Hong Kong, the rights of those Justices of the Peace gradually disappeared. At that time, all judicial power in Hong Kong was in the hands of the Justices of the Peace. This is also how it is written to get ahead and become a god. The writing is so true.

If this author doesn't hit the street, who will? Use the same routine over and over again! It took dozens of episodes to complete a plot (and thought it was foreshadowing), who would watch it again?

The more I write, the more confused I become. Treat book friends as three-year-olds.

The plot is too weak, there is no main plot, East is a hammer, West is a hammer, it is a routine from beginning to end, you are beaten, then beat back, and finally the other person is okay

Tie Zi, I know you want to make money, but the prerequisite for making money is your sign. You are destroying your sign now! ! ! I am your old reader. I have read your books before when I was studying. You may have to start a new one in the future. This brand has been ruined! ! !

I finished reading your book in one day. The author maintains this update rate. Offer ten thousand coins first. If there is no water in the later stage, you can consider buying silver