My Secretary Is a Fox Demon

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This title always gives me the feeling of a third-rate vulgar novel. If Hamburg hadn't written it, I would never have been interested in clicking on the novel's homepage to read the introduction. If possible, try to change the title of the book.

Ganfanniu () Painter: Shififimi ()

An interesting animated picture 😁 The picture comes from a book friend of the previous book Blood Tribe in Hamburg~

Here we come, here we plant a picture and look forward to harvesting a bunch of pictures

Xiao Zhu Zhu (Artist: Fifteen Meters)

1. The biggest problem of this book is that the title is about a secretary heroine, but the presence of the heroine in the middle and later stages is very low, and the heroine does not bring personality or character help to the hero. The distribution of dog food is extremely ordinary. Only the part where the heroine's adoptive mother first comes is interesting. The image of the heroine is too thin. The author can go and see how "The Earth Master" describes the female protagonists. Officer Xie and Qi Ruoxue describe the female protagonists very well. This is a way of writing that not only practices the concept of fuzzy hierarchy, but also depicts the atmosphere of urban life. 2. There are too many bugs. For example, the senior sister was still with the police in the front, and the police disappeared after the male protagonist had a fight, without any explanation. It can be seen that in the later stage, I wanted to end it quickly and wrote extremely absent-mindedly. 3. The ending is a pretense job. The logic of the male protagonist pretending to be like this is a lie, and the male protagonist's character is about to collapse. Originally an upright and frank male protagonist with great emotional intelligence, he turned into a sneaky and mysterious villain. The last part is really painful to watch. Several true gentlemen also wrote it for the sake of writing. Apart from a name and a hasty ending, these true gentlemen have nothing. . . 4. The very important recognition between the heroine and the hero in the middle period is too ordinary, and it can be seen that the author is not good at writing sweet articles. The male and female protagonists have no soul resonance except for the connection between the magic weapon and the physique. The writing of the male and female protagonists' intentions is very poor. Take the "Dishi" I mentioned before as an example. The male protagonist and Officer Xie were suspicious of each other at first, then became curious, and because they belonged to different camps, and finally fell in love and saved each other, the relationship between the male and female protagonists was much more three-dimensional. Please keep up the good work, author. . . At least the outline is straightened out. . .

Maybe the snow fox is more beautiful

Finally finished reading. I have to say that it is indeed worse than the vampires. Not only did the middle and ending progress too fast and hastily, but the portrayal of the protagonists was also lacking. The most vivid protagonists of Fox Demon only have three people. Yaomei and Little Crow, who appeared frequently in the later stage, are more interesting. Unlike the five-person protagonists of Blood Tribe, they are all distinct and interesting. I still remember them clearly. But it's not satisfactory. What attracts me most about Hamburg's works is the sufficiently delicate characterization, followed by the relatively rigorous system logic. I hope I can continue to develop and create good characters like Lao Xia and Ganfanniu. Talk, when is the next book? It seems like almost four months?

Cang Yue has released a new book, where is your new book?😡😡😡