Beginning with an Ancient Daoist Scripture

This was originally a pretty good book, but the author's forced use of different names for the main character is unbearable. The main character is called Zhou Changqing, which wouldn't be a problem in itself, but could the author please be consistent? Sometimes it's Changqing, sometimes Zhou Changqing. I initially thought it was just a few chapters, but it seems to be a continuous occurrence…

I just saw a comment saying, "Cultivation is cultivation, why do you need a female lead?" Ha! What do you read in a novel? A captivating story and vivid characters. Why can't there be romance? Are all the female leads in *Squid Girl* useless? Brotherhood, family, and romance are essential for vivid characters.

Is the cultivation in this book so one-sided? Only cultivating the soul, when isn't cultivation supposed to involve cultivating the three treasures of essence, energy, and spirit simultaneously? Only cultivating the nature, not the life force, is the first ailment of cultivation.

This book has excellent writing and a great imagination, but unfortunately the author switched to a plot about national political systems halfway through! To put it simply, there were many intelligent people in ancient times. Some systems are fundamentally beyond human control.

I subscribed, so I'm writing down my thoughts. Before subscribing, my mindset towards this book changed three times. At the beginning, I almost gave up because some descriptions were quite awkward. Later, when I felt it wasn't worth reading anymore, I read until the free chapters were finished because many transitions were abrupt, and sometimes the next chapter felt disjointed, requiring me to…

I just remembered why I stopped reading it: because the book always focused on how handsome the main character was.

The book is not bad, the only thing I didn't like was that it was too bland. It's a pity to throw it away, but it's also tasteless. The protagonist's main plot is to become stronger by using a cheat-like ability to travel through time, slay demons and monsters to change the future and create chaos in the world.

It's well-written, so why are the grades so bad?

After reading chapter 19, I felt that the author's plot was really strange, and there was no logic in it. For example, imagine a murderer with a submachine gun. You're very skilled and can kill 7 or 8 people with your bare hands, but you'll still die from a gunshot wound.

The origins of the Thirty-Six Heavenly Dipper Techniques and Seventy-Two Earthly Fiend Techniques in the "Complete Mirror of Immortals Through the Ages" are attributed to the Grand Master Yu Chen (Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun). Ruyi conceived and gave birth to an imperial prince. The Heavenly Book Reveals Mysteries The two immortals said, "We are foolish and have no heir.