I Was Supposed to Be a Martial Arts School Servant, but I Was Born with a Dao Seed!

Chapter 11 A Ming Jin! The monthly income is more than ten taels of silver! As a result, you started with An Jin, an inner disciple of a martial arts school! In order to defraud a handyman disciple of three taels of silver! United door position! Just to deceive the protagonist, three taels of silver! Is it too much to lose points? The leader of a gang is also An Jin! Your setting is too crotch-stretching! The writing is too rough

The fire spirit grass is said to be something used by immortals, but it only took four plants for the protagonist to go from a small level of strength to a perfect one. This effect is too shabby to feed a dog. The protagonist can only lift a thousand kilograms of stone after the protagonist has perfected the strength. This is the most useless description of the strength I have ever seen. It's crazy.

That's boring. What's the background of this martial arts school? What's the use of pretending to be a pig all the time to please the protagonist, who can do it in seconds?

Well, the author's writing style is still a little bit off. It's this plot design that's hard to describe in one word. To put it bluntly, I feel that the author has no experience at all. The template is a good thing, but you must know that it has been written badly by others, and everyone is tired of reading it. Then the reading level of readers is constantly improving, and the requirements for authors are also higher. Of course, some people may say that as long as the writing is good, even if the routine is a bit older, everyone will be willing to read it, but this requires very high standards for the author's writing style, and it is difficult for ordinary authors to reach this level.

Is no one reading this book? 🙂 Let me take a look

Has the protagonist or supporting role, with so many chapters, deceived people, not the Indian kind that is fake at first sight, the kind that is 30% true and 70% false? Has the protagonist been caught and asked about the skills if he lacks the skills? Is it true that everyone learns it by reading a book, and everyone is literate by default?

It is said that the protagonist is born with Tao skills at a glance. You should be able to write about fighting the enemy and learning the enemy's skills to highlight the protagonist's strength.

In chapter 34, the inn has already reached a small breakthrough. In chapter 40, it has been broken through again, and it was already a small breakthrough of 5 before. In 40, it was said that the progress has increased by more than 30, but the progress has been reduced to a small 15.

Not bad, I think highly of you as a young author.

Is this written to become an article about cultivating immortals? Put aside vaccinations?