I Was Supposed to Be a Martial Arts School Servant, but I Was Born with a Dao Seed!
说好武馆杂役，但你天生道种！
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- Completed
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- 553k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
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Chapter 11 features a Ming Jin (明劲) character! Their monthly income is over ten taels of silver! And then you start with a martial arts school disciple with An Jin (暗劲)! To swindle a menial disciple out of three taels of silver! They even collude with other members of the school! Just to cheat the protagonist out of three taels of silver! That's incredibly pathetic and a huge waste of points! Even the gang leader is only at An Jin! This setup is awful! The writing is so rough.
The Fire Spirit Grass was said to be used by immortals, yet it took four of them for the protagonist to progress from the Lesser Completion to the Perfection of the Transformation Realm. That's a pathetic effect, even feeding a dog wouldn't be enough. The protagonist, at the Perfection Realm, could only lift a mere thousand-pound stone. This is the most pathetic description of the Transformation Realm I've ever seen; it's utterly ridiculous.
This is boring. What's the background of this martial arts school? The protagonist can defeat this guy in one move. What's the point of him pretending to be weak and trying to please everyone?
Well, the author's writing is somewhat decent. It's just that the plot design is... Well, let's just say it's hard to describe. To put it bluntly, it feels like the author lacks any real experience. Templates are good, but you have to understand that those are things that others have already written to death, and everyone's tired of them.
Is nobody reading this book? 🙂 Let me take a look.
Can you answer one of my questions?
Whether it's the main character or a supporting character, have they ever lied to anyone throughout all these chapters? Not the kind of obviously fake stuff like in Indian dramas, but more like a mix of truth and fiction? Did the protagonist, lacking cultivation techniques, go and capture the person to interrogate them about the techniques? Does everyone learn by reading a book, assuming everyone can read?
Since the protagonist is born with a Dao seed, he can learn anything at a glance. Perhaps we could write a section where he learns enemy techniques through combat to highlight his strength?
Some people asked why it wasn't changed.
Chapter 34: I had already broken through to the minor success level in the inn. Then, in Chapter 40, I broke through again. Moreover, I was already at minor success level 5 before. Chapter 40 said that I had increased my progress by more than 30 points, but my progress was only minor success level 15.
Very good, very good, young author, I have high hopes for you!
Speechless
Is this turning into a cultivation novel? Is this some kind of preemptive warning?